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书面表达考纲要求 根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词左右的短文 情景包括目的 对象 时间 地点 方位 关系 内容 数据等 提供的情景形式如图画 图表 提纲 信函等 1 根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法 选用适当的词汇 2 使用一定的句型 词汇 清楚 连贯地表达自己的意思 新变化 去年考纲新增1 根据汉语提示2 根据对所给漫画的理解 今年考试说明对看图作文的 图 做出更加明确的界定和要求 图 不局限于某一类型的图 如漫画 广告 也可包括其他图画 照片 图表等情景材料 考生可根据情景图示的寓意内容或情节线索 自己组织文字 进行描述 叙述 比较或表达思想观点 作文应覆盖提示的要点 但应避免仅根据提示文字做简单翻译 题材 包括社会热点及与中学生的学习和生活密切相关的话题 范围广泛 形式 半开放式主要文体 议论文 应用文 记叙文 说明文结论 今年高考的书面表达对学生的写作水平提出了更高的要求 试题仍然涉及要考生发表自己的观点和建议 并更加注重考察学生的语言组织能力 逻辑思维能力和实际应用英语进行交际的能力 我们不能只满足于要点全面 语法正确 还要重视文章的合理结构 逻辑性 上下文的连贯 亮点词句的合理使用 解题技巧 1 审题 要求 内容 确定要点 文体 时态 立意等 2 提纲 beginning body ending topicsentenceofeachpart ifany concludingsentenceofeachpart ifany 3 草稿 各部分具体内容 覆盖要点 围绕主题 注意衔接过渡 恰当使用亮点词句 4 复查 语法错误 标点 逻辑 字数等 大局 5 抄写 字迹工整 卷面清洁 剖析近3年江苏省高考书面表达题 08 实现有效的沟通 建立良好的人际关系 不仅要善于言表 更要学会倾听 请你根据下表中所提供的信息 写一篇题为 BeingaGoodListener 的英文演讲稿 注意 11 对所给要点 逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 22 词数150左右 开头和结尾已经写好 不计入总词数 3 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名 Goodafternoon everyone Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis BeingaGoodListener Goodlisteningcanalwaysshowrespect promoteunderstanding andimproveinterpersonalrelationship Manypeoplesuggestthatparentsshouldlistenmoretotheirchildren sotheywillunderstandthembetter andfinditeasytonarrowthegenerationgap teachersshouldlistenmoretotheirstudents thentheycanmeettheirneedsbetter andplacethemselvesinagoodrelationshipwiththeirstudents studentsshouldlistenmoretotheirclassmates thustheywillhelpandlearnfromeachother andafriendshipislikelytobeformed 为何倾听 谁来倾听 WhatIwanttostressisthateachofusshouldlistenmoretoothers Showyourrespectandneverstopotherstilltheyfinishtheirtalk showyouareinterestedbyasupportivesilenceoraknowingsmile beopen mindedtodifferentopinionseventhoughyoudon tlikethem Inaword goodlisteningcanreallyenableustogetclosertoeachother Thankyouforyourlistening 151words 怎样倾听 09 鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一 它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作 但是 过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响 请你以鼠标为切入点 根据下表所提示的信息 用英语写一篇短文 要求 1 对所给要点逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 词数150左右 开头已经写好 不计人总词数 3 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名 Themouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithacomputer 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minterestedinEnglishandhopetobeaninterpreterinthefuture Naturallyit sveryimportantformetolearnEnglishwell Aseveryoneknows vocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage justlikebricksinabuilding Iusuallymemorize20newwordsadayandputthemintousewheneverpossible Afterclass IoftenlistentoEnglishprogramsonTVandontheradio Besides I velearnedalotfromtheInternetandothersources 目的 方法 课外自学的途径 NowI dliketomakesomesuggestionsonEnglishteachingandlearninginourschool Firstly weshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestousewhatwehavelearnedinordertohaveabettergraspofit Secondly Ihopeourteacherscanrecommendmoreinterestingbooksandmagazinesandgiveusmorefreetimetoreadthem Finally IsuggestwehavemoreEnglishactivities suchasEnglishcontestsandfestivals Thankyouforlistening 对学校英语教学的建议 书面表达 本学期为了改善校风 我校颁布了十条禁令 其中的一条 禁止男女生不文明交往 其实就是禁止男女生谈恋爱 引起了同学们的热议 有的支持 有的反对 请你写篇短文 叙述正反双方的观点 并发表自己的看法 要求 适当添加内容使双方观点更连贯并具有说服力 注意 1 词数 150左右 文章的开头已给出 不计入总字数 2 可能用到的词汇 谈恋爱haveloveaffairs 搂抱hug vt 人性化的humanadj Toimproveschoolethos 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dbetternothaveloveaffairs SoIsupportit 156words 目前 我校几乎所有英语老师都特别强调背词汇 这遭到了部分同学的埋怨 他们认为这样做对于提高英语成绩无助 因为词汇并非高考英语试卷测试项目 而且费时多 占用了学习其他科目的时间 假设你是高二 5 班李华 你不同意上述观点 认为背词汇是学好英语的必要前提 请你用英语写一篇题为 MyattitudetovocabularymemorizinginEnglishlearning 的演讲稿 赞成这一做法并给出理由 要求 演讲稿应注意写法并包括以上所有信息 有适当发挥 字数150左右 参考词汇 强调emphasizevt emphasisn 埋怨plaintn 高考英语试卷NMETpaper项目item前提precondition Goodafternoon everyone I mLiHuafromClass5 SeniorGrade2 Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis myattitudetovocabularymemorizinginEnglishlearning NownearlyeveryEnglishteacherinourschoollaysspecialemphasisonvocabularymemorizinginEnglishlearning whichleadstomuchcomplaintofsomestudents TheythinkitdoesnogoodtoimprovingEnglishgradesbecausevocabularyisnotatestitemintheNMETpaper Besides itcostsalotoftime whichcanbespentlearningothersubjects ButIdon tagreewiththem Inmyopinion vocabularymemorizingiswellworththetimeitcosts It sthefoundationoflearningEnglishwell TheEnglishlistening speaking readingandwritingareallbasedonvocabulary Asasayinggoes youcan tbuildahousewellwithoutfoundation Inthesameway youcan tlearnEnglishwellwithoutvocabulary BuildingupyourvocabularyisthenecessarypreconditionoflearningEnglishwell SoI mfirmlyinfavorofvocabularymemorizinginEnglishlearning That sallformyspeech Thankyou 158words 限时25分钟训练 25分钟限时训练1 为了帮助后进生取得进步 最近你们在部分尖子生和后进生之间作了个调查 有了出乎意料的发现 请你简单描述调查结果 根据这一发现分析后进生学习不佳的课内外原因并提出解决问题的办法 字数在150左右 文章开头已经给出 不计字数 Recentlywe veconductedasurveybetweensometopstudentsandsomewhoarepoorinacademicperformance Recentlywe veconductedasurveybetweensometopstudentsandsomewhoarepoorinacademicperformance Anunexpectedfindingisworthpayingattentionto comparedtothetopstudents thosepoorinacademicperformancespendrelativelymoretimelearningandlesstimesleeping Thenwhydotheylagbehindintheirstudies Thereasonprobablyliesinthefollowingtwoaspects Firstly forlackofsleepatnight theyfeelsleepyinclassandcan tmasterwhatthey velearned Then theymustspendlongertimefinishinghomework which 出乎意料的发现 简单描述调查结果 分析后进生学习不佳的课内外原因 2020 3 18 23 可编辑 inturnleadstotheirstayinguptoolateandbeinglessenergeticinclassthenextday Soinmyopinion toimprovetheiracademicperformance theymustensureenoughsleepatnightandenoughenergyinclass Asasayinggoes 10minutesinclassisworthanhourout Inthiswaytheycannotonlyhavelessonsattentively butalsosavetimefortheirhomeworkandrevision Inaword thekeytosolvingtheirproblemistoimprovelearningefficiency 157words 提出解决问题的办法 25分钟限时训练2 高考即将来临 假如你们班今天下午开了个班会 大家在会上畅谈理想 将来考什么大学 干什么工作 你有所感触 晚上写下了这篇日记 要求 例举2类同学的理想谈谈你自己的理想并给出理由 至少2条 为了实现理想你今后的打算字数150左右 开头已给出 不计入字数 Thursday April24fineWiththeNMETdrawingnear wehadaclassmeetingthisafternoon talkingaboutourdreamuniversitiesandwhatwewanttobeinthefuture Somestudentshopetoenterbusinesscollegesandbecomemanagers somegotonormaluniversitiestobeteachers Butmydreamisamedicalcollege Iwanttobeanoutstandingdoctorwhoisabletorelievepainsandsavelivesofmypatients Thereasonsareverysimple Attheageof12 mydeargrandmawhobroughtmeupdiedofcancer Towardstheendofherlife whenIsawshewasingreatpainwhilethedoctorsandwecoulddonothing myheartbroke AtthattimehowIwishedIhadbeenanextraordinarydoctorthatcouldcureher Now I vegrownupandIknowtherearelotsofmedicalproblemsleftunsolvedbesidescancer SoI mdeterminedtobeoneofthosewhowillmakegreatcontributionstothedevelopmentofmedicalscience However I mfullyawarethatnowmydreamisonlyadream Ihavealongwaytogotorealizeit Therefore whatI mtodointhefollowingdaysistogetdowntomyrevision IfirmlybelievethatsolongasItrymybest mydreamwillcometrue 25分钟限时训练3 当前 人们普遍认为现在孩子的行为习惯没有他们小时候好 请根据下表提供信息写篇短文 简要介绍这种现象及出现这一现象的原因 并针对这种现象提一些建议 Nowadays alargenumberofchildrenhavehadbadmannerswhiletheirparentsbehavedwellwhentheywereatthesameage Whentheirparentswereyoung theybehavedwell havinggoodmanners respectingothersandobeyingrulesofallkinds Onthecontrary childrennowarenotreadytohelpothers Actually theydon tshowrespecttoothersandexpressthemselvesandbehavefreely Thereasonsarerelatedtomanyfactors oneofwhichistheillinformationontheInternetandTVbecauseithasabadinfluenceonchildren Worsestill parentsandteacherspaytoomuchattentiontotheirscores ignoringthefactthatchildren sbehaviorsshouldbe theirgreatestconcern Consideringtheseriousnessofthisproblem effectivemeasuresshouldbetaken Inmyopinion parentsandteachersaresupposedtosetanexampleofgoodbehaviorstochildrenastheyarerolemodelstothem Meanwhile theinformationontheInternetorTVshouldbeunderstrictcontrol Onlyinthesewayscanwehelpchildrendevelopgoodbehaviors 25分钟限时训练4 根据下图 结合实际 以 Howcomesfrogsareinwells 为题写一篇英语短文 分析 井蛙 成因并发表你的看法 注意 1 仔细品味画面内容 要适当发挥想象 不要做简单叙述 2 词数150词左右 开头已写好 不计入总词数 4 提示词汇 sprayinsecticide喷洒杀虫剂 Frogsinwells isawellknownChineseidiom referringtothosewhoarenarrow mindedorshort sighted 审题 该作文由三幅图画组成 第一幅图阐述的是工业污水被排入河中 河水受到污染 导致青蛙失去水域这块家园 第二幅图叙述的是农民喷洒农药 田野受到污染 青蛙又失去了岸上的家园 第三幅图画说的是人们捕杀青蛙 青蛙肉成为人们餐桌上的美食 所以青蛙没有一处干净或安全的地方可呆 只能选择水井这块相对较安全的地方 归纳起来 就是工农业污染加人为的猎杀给青蛙造成的生存威胁 由此发挥想象 Frogsinwellsisawell knownChineseidiom referringtothosewhoarenarrow mindedorshort sighted However itseemsthattheidiomhascreatedadeepmeaninginthismodernsociety Abovearesomepictureswhichdescribevividlyacommonphenomenoninourcountry Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology factorieshaveproducedmanygoodproducts buttheycausemuchdamagetonature Meanwhile farmersshouldbecomekillersbysprayinginsecticidetoprotecttheircrops Somepeoplealsosparenoeffortstohuntfrogsfortheir ortogainprofits Asaresult frogshavenoalternativebuttohideinwells Frommypointofview thelackofawarenessisthedirectreasonwhythereexiststhisphenomenon Thepainfullessonshassetthealarmbellsringing It shightimethatwetookstepstorebuildharmoniousrelationshipbetweenmanandnature Natureistouswhatwateristofish Onlyifwecantakegreattroubletosavethemcanthesefrogsinwellsdisappear Frogsinwells isawell knownChineseidiom referringtothosewhoarenarrow mindedorshort sighted Interestingly therecenthotissuenolongerrestsupontheliteralmeaningoftheidiomitselfbutonhowcomefrogsareinwells Commonly fieldsarenaturalhometofrogs wheretheyenjoyacomfortablelifefeedingonpestsharmfultocrops helpingsolvethebigheadacheoffarmers However fieldsarenowbynomeanscozylivingareasforfrogs Poisonouswasteisdumpedintoriverswithoutbeingtreated whichendangerseveryinchoffrogs livingspace Andalso constantsprayinginsecticidekillsmillionsoffrogsyearly Evenworse frogisregardedasdeliciousfoodbysome sofroghuntinghasbecomeaseriousproblem Asfutureconstructors weshallinevitablybearresponsibilitiesforprotectingnatureincludinganimalsoranyspeciesoflifelikefrogsinit Besidesstoppingmassfrogkilling weshouldpromotescientificfarming whichsurelyhelpsincreaseproductionandprotectfrogsaswell Solongaswecontinue oureffortswilleventuallypayoff Whatagoodintentionmayleadto Heavysmoke Fire Splash Seewhatyou redoing Water Whatdoesagoodintentionleadto Agoodresult ofcourse Butthisisnotalwaystrue YesterdayafternoonmyfriendTom whoiskind heartedandhelpful wenthomeafterschool Whenhewalkedpastahouseonhisway hesawheavysmokecomingoutofitsopenwindow Afire theideasuddenlyoccurredtohim Hetookactionimmediately Herantofindwaterquicklyandcarriedalargebucketofwatertothescene andwithallhisstrength hepoureditintothewindow Nomoresmokecouldbeseenandhebreathedasighofrelief feelingquitehappy Justthen aman whowaswetallover shoutingatthewindow Iwasmakingafirewithwood Seewhatyou redoing YoucanimaginehowembarrassedTomwas Soagoodintentionmaysometimesleadtobadresults Todowell onlyagoodintentionisnotenough Todaywiththedevelopmentofeconomy moreandmoreadsarecomingintoourlife Youcanseethemnearlyeverywhereeveryday inanewspaperormagazine andontheradioorTV Ofcoursewecan tdenytheadvantagesofthem Adsgiveusmuchinformationabouttheproductswewantandhelpusmakebetterchoiceswhenbuyingthem Theyalsohelpincreasethesalesofgoods andasaresult promotethedevelopmentofeconomy Butontheotherhand theirdisadva