如何写好建议信.ppt

Writingaletterofadvice No 1highschoolinQiyang Lucy Towhom 收信人姓名 一般在左上角 顶格写 Fromwhom 写信人姓名 一般在右下角 DearMr Liu Yourssincerely truly DrFang 如何写好建议信 格式和书信基本一致 基本框架 1 开头 开门见山 向对方陈述自己的观点2 主体 对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由 接着提出自己的建议3 结尾 呼应开头 重申观点 写作规范 一般建议信可分三段来写 第一段 开头 即确认对方的要求 并说明提出与要求相符合的建议第二段 主体 即具体的建议内容 建议要具体并有可操作性 不能空洞 以三至五条为佳 每条建议三至五句话告诉对方如何实施或操作 第三段 结尾 即对以上建议的总结 Openingsentences 常用开头句 Iamverygladtohearfromyou Concerningyourrequest Iwouldliketooffermyadviceonhowto 3 Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions 4 Iamwritinginreplyto Firstly youshouldbenotonly butalso Youmustn talways Maybe Secondly youmaytryto Ononehand youcan ontheotherhandyoucan Donot Thirdly inmyopinion youwouldbewiseto Youcanturnto forhelp Whynot Bodystructure 常用主体模式 Closingsentences 常用结尾句 Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions recommendations advicehelpful practical useful 2 Atlast IhopeIwillbeyourbestfriend sforever Goodlucktoyou 3 Let skeepintouch Idohopetoheargoodnewsfromyou 4 Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion Dear Youaskedmeformyadviceabout 问题 andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere Inmyopinion youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions Firstly Secondly Last Ihopeyouwillfindmyadviceuseful Yours Lucy 以下是一封如何和儿子相处的建议信的范文 DearMr Liu Iamverysorrytohearthat HereIwanttogiveyousomeadvice Iwishitcouldbehelpfulforyou Firstly youshouldbenotonlystrictbutalsokindtohim Treathimasanadult Youmustn talwaysshoutathim Respecthimandhisadvice Maybehisadviceisofvalue Secondly youmaytrytoenjoywhathelikes suchasmusicandDVDs Takemorenoticeofwhathethinks Ononehand youcanunderstandhimfurther ontheotherhandyoucannarrowthegapbetweenyou Thirdly youcanturntoyourson sclosefriendsforhelp Theycanunderstandwhatyoursonthinksandneedsbetter Ibelieveyoucansolvetheproblemsatisfactorily andeverythingwillgowell Goodlucktoyou Practice 假定你是李华 你的笔友Tom给你发来电子邮件 询问怎样才能哦与同学和睦相处 请你根据要点提示给Tom回一封电子邮件 提出你的建议 要点提示 1 尊重别人 2 宽宏大量 注意 1 词数120左右 2 不要逐条翻译 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 参考词汇 心胸开阔的broad minded Homework 请你以祁阳一中高二学生的名义 用英语就祁阳县的环境污染问题向县政府相关领导写一封120字左右的建议信 P37Readandunderstand Whatdoesthesonthinkabouthisfather Findoutthekeysentences Hisfatherdoesn tlistentohimwhenhewantstodosomethingorsuggestsanidea problemsthesonthinksabouthisfather Hisfathershoutsathimwhenhetriestotalktohim Hisparentsalwaysmakehimdothingshedoesn tlike Theycallhimselfishanddistantwhenhewantstobealone Hisfathergetsveryangrywhenheplaysforeignmusic HisfathersendshimtobedortellshimtostudywhenhewatchesaDVD HisfatherforbidshimfrommeetinghisfriendsattheInternetcafe Howcanwehelphim 帮助某人某事和某人相处建议 暗示出去吃饭让某人做空余时间独自一人的感到孤单的自私的冷漠的生气禁止某人做某事对某人严格要求做某事有麻烦或困难 helpsbwithsth 帮助某人某事getalongwithsb 和某人相处suggest 建议 暗示gotofordinner 出去吃饭makesbdo 让某人做sparetime 空余时间bealone 独自一人的belonely 感到孤单的selfish 自私的distant 冷漠的getannoyed 生气forbidsbdoingsth 禁止某人做某事behardonsb 对某人严格要求havediffic