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Alittlefiremancontinuationwriting 情节的逻辑性和语言的丰富性 1 注意 1 所续写短文的词数应为150左右 2 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3 续写部分分为两段 每段的开头语已为你写好 4 续写完成后 请用下划线标出所使用的关键词语 Paragraph1 ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled Paragraph2 Hisdayasarealfiremanstarted wardwasfilledwithsadnessdreamoutofbreaththelong lostexcitementfirestationfireenginedeeplymovedWednesdaymorningfireuniform 2 Whatisthetypeofwriting A narrative 记叙文 B exposition 说明文 C argumentation 议论文 when where who what why how 3 Thebasicplotsofthestory AcoldSundaymorning Wednesdaymorning makeBob sdreamcometrue Bobwasdying 4 FurtherReading Q HowwasBob Wecouldinferfrom Helookedsosmallandweakthatevenagentletouchcouldbreakhim Thoughthewordscosthimmuchstrength andhewasnowcoughingandoutofbreath usedetaileddescription 细节描写 toshowcharacter smallandweak Appearanceandbehavior 外貌和动作描写 5 Q Howdidtheyoungmotherfeelwhenhersonwasdying Shewasfilledwithsadness Q HowdidtheyoungmotherfeelwhenPhilipdecidedtohelpher grateful Hecouldseethatthemother seyeswereglitteringwithgratitude Q Didshedoanythingforherson Shewantedtomakeherson sdreamcometrue sobeggedPhilipforhelp usedetaileddescription 细节描写 toshowcharacter Facialexpression 面部表情 Feeling 感受 6 beanhonoraryfiremanforthewholedayandgetarealuniform comedowntothefirestationandgooutonallfirecalls takearideonthefireengine Q InordertomakeBob sdreamcometrue whatwouldPhilipdo 7 Whatwouldhappeninthehospital Paragraph1 ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled wardwasfilledwithsadnessdreamoutofbreaththelong lostexcitementfirestationfireenginedeeplymovedWednesdaymorningfireuniform Trytousethefollowingwords 8 9 ParagraphA ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled TheyrushedintoBob sward Bobjumpedwithjoyandwonderedwhytheycamehere Bob youhavetotakeonalotofresponsibilitiestoday soyoucan trelaxanymore FiremanPhilipspokequicklybeforeBobcouldsayanything Meanwhile anotherfiremanaskedBobtodresshimselfintothefireuniform Bobdidn tknowwhathappened Hejustrealizedthathewasafiremannow Fewminuteslater theyheadedforthefirestationimmediately ParagraphB ThreedayslaterFiremanPhilipandhismenarrivedatthehospitalasscheduled ThemotherwassoexcitedthatsheledthemtoBob swardwithoutdelay Onseeingthefiremen Bobstruggledtositupandtriedtogreetthem Philipquicklysteppedforwardandgavehimabighug Welcometobeamemberofus Mylittlefireman theyhelpedBobsitup dressedhiminhisfireuniformandwheeledhimtothewaitingtruckatthegate Arealfireengine Bobscreamedexcitedly WithPhilipleadingtheway Bobdirectedthetruckbacktothefirestation Tip Acoherentparagraphisbasedonlogicalfactsreferredfromrelatedcluesinthecontext 条理清楚的段落是建立在合逻辑的事实基础上的 而这些事实应根据上下文的相关线索来推断 10 herheartwasfilledwithsadness themothercouldfeelthelong lostexcitement feelings behavior cough outofbreath beg struggletositup triedtogreet facialexpression language eyeswereglitteringwithgratitude hiseyesglitteringwithexcitement mydreamofbeingarealfiremanisfinallytoberealized 11 Paragraph2 Hisdayasarealfiremanstarted Whatwouldhedothewholeday Findoutsomerelatedclues 相关的线索 inthecontext 12 beanhonoraryfiremanforthewholedayandgetarealuniform comedowntothefirestationandg