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In this argument the author recommends/concludes/asserts thatThe recommendation/conclusion is on the basis of the evidence thatMore presisely,it is argued since In addition, the author cites statistics indicating that .Compelling as it appears to be at first sight/at the first blush, the line of reasoning of the author suffers from several critical flaws. Therefore,the argument is unwarranted as it stands.The most glaring problem that significantly undermines the argument is that/The argument is flawed primarily because Even if we concede the preceding assumption that another issue to be addressed is Finally To sum up, the credibility of the authors assertion is called into question since To render the argument logically acceptable and persuasive, the author would have to demonstrate thatOnly by providing a context under which all the possible factors are taken into account,can we promote a more comprehensive evaluation of the argument.1. all things are equalThe author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”. In other words,the argument is based on the current situation, but present conditions may not necessarily continue in the future. What if ? This would make it difficult,if not impossible,for to The conclusion is based on an upward trend derived from data for two years.However,data from only two years provide rather weak evidence of a trend.Additional evidence that provides a context will promote a more solid evalution of the prediction.2.false analogyThe author unfairly assumes that strategies drawn from A are applicable to B/can be applied to B /Given(+that) 3.Insufficient-sampleThe argument moves from a particular sample, that is, , to a generalization concerning ,which is insufficient to lend support to what the author claims.Any example of contradicts the generalization of /Specific information that suggests that would support the generalized argument. 4.causal oversimplificationThe sequence of these events, by themselves, is not sufficient to demonstrate that the former causes the latter because a chronological relationship is only one of the indicators of a causal relationship between two events./ However, the mere fact that precedes is insufficient to conclude that it causes these events. Perhaps Moreover, may not necessarily indicate that It is also highly possible that No additional evidence linking and is offered in the argument, making for the possibility that these events are not causally related but merely coincident.5. gratuitous assumption The argument relies on the idea that If this were so, Thus,if we add the information that ,the conclusion that would be much less well supported. 6.错误地认为X就是由Y引起的，忽视了其他可能原因In the argument, the author ascribes/attributes X to the fact that/claims that However, is there any circumstance under which? An alternate explanation is that , could well be responsible for Lacking a more comprehensive analysis of the causes, it is presumptuous for the author to claim that A solely determined B/the author concludes too hastily that 7.survey is doubtful 错误地从某一数据/样本中得出结论 the statistics cited in support of the final conclusion that could be misleading. Although , might spend more in terms of the actual amount. Therefore there is no way to 【percentagethe actual amount】【salesprofits】The author fails to distinguish between and Although,it is quite likely thatThis leaves open the possibility that/ the author unfairly equates to. .8.错误地由某些原则/理论推出某一事物应该被重视、被选择Finally, even if will be true/ is guaranteed, it doesnt stand that should/will The author unfairly applies the general principle to a specific field/industry. What if Lacking information about , it is imprudent for the author to assert that 9.Either