作文讲评-our spring outing.doc

时态：过去时, 上周发生人称：第一人称Our Spring Outing Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.We were tired but happy. (112字)边慧婷Our class intended to go out for spring outing. We discussed where to go. Some preferred to go to amusement park; some felt like going boating in the park and others were willing to climb the mountain. In the end, we made up our mind to climb the mountain. Early in the next morning, we set out to climb the mountain. The sun was shining and the air was fresh. Surrounded by the beautiful trees and flowers, we were all impressed by the scenery. As we got to the top of the mountain, we were exhausted. But to our surprise, there were a variety of wastes lying on the ground, such as the plastic cans, the food wastes and so on. Though very tired, we all picked up the wastes and put them into our bags. When we reached the foot of the mountain, we found two bins. One was intended for recycled wastes and the other was for non-recycled wastes. So we sorted out the wastes and threw them into the correct bins. After everything was finished, we were all tired but we thought it was worthwhile to protect the environment. (but our efforts didnt prove to be in vain.) We should pay more attention to it and take measures to protect it. We all believe if we do so we will have a more beautiful environment. (228字)郝语Im Li Hua studying in Class 1 Grade 3. Last week, we discussed about the places for spring outing. The three choices were amusement park, going boating and climbing mountain. Eventually, we decided to climb mountain.Early in the morning, we arrived at Xiang Shan Park together. It was a sunny day. And the beautiful scenery surrounding us seemed like a painting. The trees and flowers kept us spellbound. We enjoyed the fresh air. On the top of the mountain, we spotted a variety of rubbish, such as bananas, empty bottles, plastic bags and so on. We aimed to protect the environment, so we picked up the rubbish. On the way back, we sorted out the rubbish and threw them into the bins. To our delight, we helped to protect the e