writing_非谓语动词在写作中的应用.ppt

Thebeautyofwriting Readingmakesafullman conferenceareadyman andwritingan man FrancisBacon exact 阅读使人充实 交谈使人机智 写作使人精确 培根 阅卷老师喜欢的句子 同位语结构 with复合结构 使文章简洁 通顺 尽量使用动词短语和词组 定语从句等复合句 修辞润色文章 使用分词短语 非谓语动词 Non finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用 1 Seeingfromthetopofmountain thecityisbeautiful 2 Inmyopinion climbmountainisanenjoyablething 3 Whichteamisgoodatcooking Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook Correction 写作中非谓语动词常见的错误 Seen climbing calling 1 Whensheheardthenews sheburstintocrying thenews sheburstintocrying 2 AustraliaislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific AustraliaisthelargestcountryinOceania Australia thewestcoastofthePacific isthelargestcountryinOceania 用非谓语结构改写句子 Hearing locatedon 3 ThoughIadmitwhathehassaid Istilldoubthedidn tdohisbest Istilldoubthedidn tdohisbest 4 BecauseImissedthebus Iwenttoschoollate Iwenttoschoollate Admittingwhathehas said Missingthebus 5 WhenIwaswalkinginthestreet Isawhim inthestreet Isawhim 6 Ifyouworkhard hard youwillsucceed Walking Working 7 Althoughhehadfailedmanytimes hedidn tloseheart manytimes hedidn tloseheart 8 Asshewasscoldedbytheteacher thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead Havingfailed Scoldedbytheteacher 例文 1 Gettingbackwhatyouhavelostwouldbeanunforgettableexperience LastMonday Ilostmyexpensivecellphone onwhichmynamewasinscribed 刻 Fortunately itwasreturned Thatmorning Irushedoutofmyhouseandjumpedintoataxi forIwouldbelateforthefinalexamination Onarrivingatschool Iheadedtomyclassroomquickly notnoticingthatIhadleftmycellphoneonthebackseat Enjoytwoessays Thereisalwayssomeonebehindus caringaboutus Oneverydaymorning walkingoutofthedoorwaytogotoschool wemaybetoldtopayattentiontothetraffic nottofightorquarrelwithothers andmayevenbetoldtochewslowlyattable Beingachild wemayfeeltiredofthosewords whenwecomehomeafterschool shehastriedherbesttoprovidewhatshehasforus Evenifwhatweneedisjustaglassofwater shewillalsokeepitinmind 例文 2 Whennoticinghergreyhairsandthewrinklesaroundhereyes IrealizeIhavegrownupwhilesheisnolongeryoung It stimethatIshoulddosomethingforher evenonlygivingherbacksomemassageormakingacupofteaforhercanmakeherfeelthatsheseemstobethehappiestwomanintheworld Doyouknowwhosheis SheisourMom Funtime Pickoutapictureandfinishthetask playmusic make happy Playingmusicmakesthemhappy makeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs bythereporterfromCCTV themansaidhewasveryhappy interview Interviewed Finishthesentenceusingnonfiniteverbs e g Havingfinishedmyhomework Iwentontohelpmyparents listento burstoutlaughing Havinglistenedtothesongcalled Gangnamstyle weburstoutlaughing Followtheexampleandmakeasentence 3 Moyanstoodthereandwassurroundedbymanyreporters Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 Combinethefollowingsentences 1 Assoonastheyarrivedattheschool Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere Arrivingattheschool theyfeltthehappyatmosphere 2 IfIamgivenanotherchance Iwillsucceed Givenanotherchance Iwillsucceed 3 HewantstoimprovehisEnglish 目的 Hestudiesharder ToimprovehisEnglish hestudiesharder 4 Whenhelefttheclassroom hedidn tsaygoodbyetome 5 Becauseheisill hecan tattendthemeeting Whenleavingtheclassroom hedidn tsaygoodbyetome Beingill hecan tattendthemeeting 6 Thepolicemansawthethiefwhowasstealingabike 7 Theboyswhoswamintheriverwereindanger Thepolicemansawthethiefstealingabike Theboysswimmingintheriverwereindanger 8 Becausehehadn tseenthefilmbefore hewenttothecinema Nothavingseenthefilmbefore hewenttothecinema 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 1 因为在这国家没有朋友 她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的 用连词becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry shefounditimpossibletofindajob 用非谓语结构Havingnofriendinthecountry shefounditimpossibletofindajob 2 这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂用定语从句Thebook iseasytounderstand 用非谓语结构Thebook iseasytounderstand 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish writteninsimpleEnglish 3 他们是来自于几个国家的游客 用定语从句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries 用非谓语结构Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 4 发现他好朋友沮丧 他竭尽所能让他朋友开心 用并列句Hefoundhisbestfriendfrustratedandhedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy 用非谓语结构Findinghisbestfriendfrustrated hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy 4 用非谓语结构合并下列句子 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 Nowadays somestudentsoftencheatinexams Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon tworkhardattheirlessons Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired Also somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams 用非谓语结构美化文章 Nowadays somestudentsoftencheatinexams Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon tworkhardattheirlessons Nowadays cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon tworkhardattheirlessons 用非谓语结构美化文章 Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired 用非谓语结构美化文章 Also somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams Beingafraidoffailinginexams somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams 用非谓语结构美化文章 Nowadays cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon tworkhardattheirlessons Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired Beingafraidoffailinginexams somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams 用非谓语结构美化后的文章 要求 1 用2 3句话表达表格内容2 2 3句话要有连贯性 necessary aneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork 2011高考模拟 高考临近 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑 还能增强克服困难的勇气 Havingatry 翻译 高考临近 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑 还能增强克服困难的勇气 Step1 拆分成几个简单句 中文 高考临近 NationalCollegeEntranceExamination 保持良好的心态很重要 havearightattitude 它有助于减轻焦虑 relax 和勇敢地克服困难 Step2 分别翻译这几个简单句 NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming Itisimportanttohavearightattitude Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely Havingatry Step3 合并句子 WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming 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tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork Tip Neverignoretheconjunction Havingatry WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely Havingenoughsleepisnecessary becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass Moreover tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork Besides doingexerciseregularlyisofgreatbenefittoourhealth Lastbutnotleast itisveryimportanttokeepabalanceddiet 二 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 三 巧用倒装增强句子表现力 四 尝试多样化表达方式 一 使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力 强调句 With短语复合结构 定语从句 名词性从句 主宾表同从句 各种状语从句 被动语态 1 beggar lie sleep2 Mr Li hurry paynoattentionto3 stickout tripover 绊倒 angry Abeggar 1 一天 一个乞丐在路边讨钱 但是李先生匆忙赶路上班 没有注意到那个乞丐 2 结果这个乞丐很生气 伸出拐杖 差点把李先生绊倒了 3 意识到他是个残疾人 李先生想给他一些钱 4 于是他拿出了一张百元钞票 突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中 5 看到被风吹到空中的百元钞票 乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票 使李先生非常惊讶 实战演练 用五个句子写出下列信息点 注意非谓语和复合句的运用 Abeggar Writing 2 MrLihurriedhome payingnoattentiontoabeggar 1 Thebeggarlayontheground sleeping 3 Suddenly thebeggarstuckouthislegs trippingoverMrLi whichmadehimveryangry Makeanending Exchangeanddiscussyourpartner scomposition followingthecriteria Pairwork AbeggarOneday hurryinghome Mr Lipaidnoattentiontothebeggarwholayontheground sleeping Suddenly thebeggarstuckouthislegs trippingMr Liover whichmadehimveryangry Realizin