初中英语书面表达材料.doc

促优班英语资料：书面表达二一、用正确的句型结构翻译下列句子:1. Betty 是个大眼睛，长头发的女孩。_ 2. 他个子高高的，戴着一副眼镜。_3. 每年有许多的外国人来参观故宫。_4. 南宁是一个具有几百年历史的城市。_5. 你越努力学习，你的成绩就会越好。_6. 中国的人口比世界上任何一个国家的人口都多。_7. 在夏天，南宁的天气比桂林的热一点。_8. 据说，中国在未来的十年里将发生巨大的变化。_9. 我明天之前做完这项工作是不可能的。_10. 我觉得学好物理很难。_11. 你觉得这部电影如何？_12. 老实说我认为英语没有语文那么有用。_13. 他激动得说不出话来。_14. 她是个那么好的老师以至于我们都非常喜欢她。_15. 如果五一节我有空，我将去丽江旅游。_16. 我宁可走路上学，而不愿乘公交车。_17. 俗话说，“不到长城非好汉。”_18. 据我所知，第三十一届奥运会将于今年在巴西的首都举行。_19. 我迟到的原因是我遇上了交通堵塞。_20. 我们的政府应下大力气保护城市，免遭更多的污染。_二、熟记下列名言警句，在作文中适当引用，将会给你的作文提分增亮。你能把下列英语谚语翻译出来吗？1. Every coin has two sides. _ 2. Time and tide wait for no man. _3. Actions speak louder than words._4. Dont judge a man by his look. _5. All things are difficult before they are easy._6. Look before you leap._7. A good beginning is half done. _8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun._9. All roads lead to Rome. _ 110. A friend in need is a friend indeed. _11. We can live without a brother but not without friends._12. A good book is a good friend._13. Doing is better than saying._14. Study hard and make progress every day. _15. The first wealth is health._16. Practice makes perfect. _17. Where there is a will, there is a way._18. Its never too old to learn._19. Great minds think alike._20. Its hard to please all._21. An apple a day keeps the doctor away._22. Rome was not built in a day._23. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. _24. Better late than never. _25. When in Rome do as the Romans do._26. Everyone has his price._把你懂的格言写下来。_三怎样写好一篇满分作文Beginning开头 topic sentence 主题句 -说出文中的要点、核心问题Middle 正文 supporting sentences支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论Ending结尾 concluding sentence 结论句-对全文的总结和概括。作文开头万能句型：1) .plays an important role in the.2) As we all know, . becomes more and more.3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in . 4) Many people say that. But I dont think so.5) I will never forget the .6) As a student , it isfor us to .作文结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally . 最后 In a word, . 总而言之 In short, . 简言之 We hope that 我们希望 Lets try our best to . 让我们尽力去。 I believe if we can., . will be .我相信如果我们。， 将会。 What a .! / How.! This is my,What about yours? 满分作文欣赏现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活”(low-carbon life)，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。提示词语： make a difference, environment, suggest, reuseAs we all know,Low-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think its my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest to reuse books as long as possible. And wed better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. 四课堂实练 在提倡和谐的社会里，我们怎样才能成为一名讲文明，懂礼貌，守纪律的中学生？请根据下面的提示，以“ How to be a good student?”为题写一篇词数为80个左右的作文。提示: 1. 家庭表现：爱父母，帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务等。 2. 学校表现： 遵守校规，与同学友好相处。 3. 公共场合表现。勿大声喧哗 ，坐公交车时主动让给老人等。要求:文章必须包括所给提示中的13项内容，可适当发挥。文中不能出现真实姓名，校名和其他真实信息。思路引导审题-抓准信息，快速判断1.体裁：议论文； 2. 人称:第一人称； 3.时态：一般现在时 4. 谋篇开头，开篇点题： Its necessary and important to behave well.具体做法： 1.at home, help parents 2. at school, get on well , follow the school rules 3. in public, not talk or speak too loudly, help people who are in trouble结尾，总结归纳： If we do so, our society will be better and better.成篇-衔接过渡，润色成篇 How to be a good student ? _五、写信开头和结束的客套话开头：How are you ? How are you getting on recently ? Many thanks to hear from you. Thanks for your last message. It is my great pleasure to hear from you.(万能回信开头语) （请你来补充）_结束：Best wishes to you. Good luck to you. Looking forward to hearing from you. Please give my best wishes to . Wish you good luck.（请你来补充）_ 2六、作文修改。仔细阅读和观察下列三篇学生写的作文。写得都很好，但也出现了一些瑕疵因而拿不到满分。请同学们点评一下这两篇篇作文。并指出错误之处。 A篇许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：(1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；(2) 我的压力是什么；(3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。注意：文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80100。 Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too many pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams。Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of classes at the weekend. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think have a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem。 B篇题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢？请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested inLi Hua spent too much time to play computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of him I must do something to help him。Firstly, I think its very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that play computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon。 七、练笔。1. 书面表达（共10分）假如你是Daming，今天早上你发烧咳嗽了，医生让你在家休息两天。请你以此为理由用英语写一份请假条，向班主任Miss Zhou 请假两天。 A sick leave Dear Miss Zhou,Im sorry to tell you that _Best wishes.Your student, Daming 42. 书面表达（共10分）同学们，网上购物是一种新型的现代购物方式，你们喜欢网购吗？比较起实体店购物来，网购有什么优点和缺点呢？请你以shopping online为题写一篇短文，谈谈你对网上购物的看法, 并且给出建议。要点包括： 1. 网上购物的优点和缺点；2. 我的建议。写作要求：1. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）： 2不能出现真实的校名和人名，否则不得分； 3写作要点都必须用上：紧扣主题，适当发挥。Nowadays，more and more people like to go shopping on the Internet. We have found that shopping online has become a fashion._ 1,请假条Dear Miss Zhou,Im sorry to tell you that I cant go to school today. This morning I was feeling ill. Ive caught a cough and a fever. My doctor advises me to stay in bed for 2 days. Now I am writing to you to ask for 2 days sick leave. Best wishes.Your student, Daming2.网上购物Nowadays，more and more peoplele like to go shopping on the Internet. We have found that shopping online has become a fashion.Compared with shopping at traditional stores, there are many advantages about shopping online. First of all, its very convenient. we can buy what we want at home. Second, the shops on Internet are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. Besides, the products are always cheaper than the ones in a traditional store.But there are some disadvantages about shopping online. Sometimes we may not actually see the products until we receive them, so we may have the chance to buy something wrong. Whats more, theres always a trap online. If you are careless, it will bring you some trouble. You may even be treated. As we all know, every coin has two sides. My advice is that we should be careful when we shop online. Dont buy things on the strange pages. I believe that we can make good use of online shopping.二、熟记下列名言警句，在作文中适当引用，将会给你的作文提分增亮。27. Every coin has two sides. （每个硬币都有两面。比喻事物的两面性）28. Time and tide wait for no man. 时间不等人。29. Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。30. Dont judge a man by his look. 不可以以貌取人。31. All things are difficult before they are easy.万事开头难。32. Look before you leap.三思而后行。33. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的