英语 必修一Unit 1 建议信.ppt

必修1 必修一Unit1FriendshipWriting如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice 如何写建议信howtowritelettersofadvice 写作三步曲 说明写信目的 提出建议以及改进措施 忠告 表达希望采纳建议 或者期盼回复 注意 语言要委婉 礼貌 顾及对方感受 在提出缺点之前 最好先肯定其优点 建议信 三段式 第一段 点明主题第二段 陈述事实 提出建议 给出理由 是什么 为什么 怎么样 第三段 总结全文 表明希望 适当运用模板 DearLiHua I msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem Inyourletter yousaid 你碰到的问题 Mysuggestionsareasfollows Firstly because Secondly youshould because Thirdly you dbetter Onlyinthiswaycanyou What smore Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou Bestwishes Yours xxx 建议信重点 第二段 说明建议的内容 是什么 提出具体建议的原因 为什么 指出采纳建议的益处 怎么样 注意事项 语言要委婉 礼貌 顾及对方感受 Openingsentences开头句 Iamverygladtohearfromyou Thankyouforyourletter 3 Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions 4 Iamwritinginreplyto 5 Iamsorrytohearthat 表示建议的句子Youshould must Don t What Howabouttryinganewmethod Whynotfindanewway You dbetterchangeyourformerplan I dliketosuggestyoumakeanewplan IfIwereyou Iwould I dliketosuggest Istronglyrecommend Youmightaswell 学会用notonly butalso 表示并列含义亲爱的朋友们 去参加课外活动吧 这不但会使你的校园生活变得丰富多彩 还会改善你的学习 Dearfriends pleasetakepartinafter classactivities whichwillnotonlymakeyourschoollikecolorful butalsoimproveyourlearning Closingsentences结束语 Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestions advicehelpful useful 2 Atlast IhopeIwillbeyourbestfriend sforever Goodlucktoyou 3 Let skeepintouch Idohopetoheargoodnewsfromyou ReadXiaoDong sletteronpage7andanswer WhatisXiaoDong sproblem Readtheinstructionsatthetopofpage7andfindoutwhatyouarerequiredtodo He snotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeople Hefindsithardtomakefriendswithhisclassmates ILeadin Toaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes Tojoinindiscussions Toshowinterestinothers ideas Tosharehisfeelingswithothers IIBrainstorming YouradviceforXiaoDong Presentingtheproblem Proposingthesolution Conclusion DearXiaodong I msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends However thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice Herearesometipstohelpyou First whynot Ifyoudothis Secondly youshould can Then Thatway Thirdly itwouldbeagoodideaif Bydoingthis Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful Yours MissWang Outlining 建议信重点 第二段 说明建议的内容 是什么 提出具体建议的原因 为什么 指出采纳建议的益处 怎么样 注意事项 语言要委婉 礼貌 顾及对方感受 Firstly whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingalone Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatstudentmaybelonelytoo Ifyoudothis I msureyouwillsoonhavenewfriends Secondly youshouldbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes Thatway youwillsoonfindpeoplewiththesameinterests becausethatisagoodwaytofindnewfriends Thirdly itwouldbeagoosideaifyoutrytojoininadiscussion Youmayfeelthatisright Bydoingthis youarelettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare Sothereshouldbenoproblem Itshouldprovideyouwithsomenewfriends 即时训练 你是我们学校一名很热心的学生 得知我们校要建设娱乐休闲中心 正在征求同学们的意见 请你根据以下几个方面的提示给校长写一封120词左右的建议信 1 娱乐休闲中心应该包括乒乓球室和羽毛球室 2 最好在学生的课余时间开放 3 尽量不要收费 4 写作分析 第一段 引出话题 得知要建娱乐中心 想提建议 第二段 建议建乒乓球室和羽毛球场 第三段 建议课余时间开放 能使其得到充分利用 第四段 免费开放 有些学生经济困难 第五段 简单总结 DearMr President It scometomyattentionthatourschoolisgoingtobuildanewleisurecenter I mwritingtoaskyoutoconsiderthefollowingsuggestions Firstly I dliketosuggestthatthereshouldbeatable tennisroomaswellasabadmintoncourt Ithinkitwoulddogreatgoodifyoucouldbuildthecenterwithaneyetothosestudentswhoareinterestedinplayingtable tennisorbadminton Secondly couldthecenteropeninoursparetime Ifso wewillhaveenoughtimetomakefulluseofit Thirdly wewillbemorethanhappyifthecenterisfree Asweallknow noteverystudentcanaffordtheextraexpense Thankyouforreadingmyletter Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions Ifthecenterisbuilt itwillgreatlyenhancestudentlifehereoncampus Yourssincerely LiHua 范文 建议信模版 Dear Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto 关于 andIwilltrytomakesomeconductive 建设性的 suggestionshere Inmyopinion youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions 建议的内容 Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails GoodLuckwithyour 祝愿 Yourssincerely签名 English exams 假设你是某报社编辑 最近收到读者李华的一封来信 信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难 这让他很苦恼 请根据以上提示 写一篇回给李华的建议信 帮他解决困难 促进学习 建议内容 1 不要灰心 保持良好心态 2 掌握学习方法 3 培养对英语的兴趣爱好 第一步 审题养成重视审题的习惯 虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的 但审题仍然十分重要 现以样题为例 谈谈如何审题 第一人称 一封信 对英语学习给出建议 说理的逻辑性 一般现在时 假设你是某报社编辑 最近收到读者李华的一封来信 信中李华提到自己是高一的学生 在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难 这让他很苦恼 请根据以上提示 写一篇回给李华的建议信 帮他解决困难 促进学习 建议 1 保持良好心态 2 掌握学习方法 如坚持每天记单词 读英语课文 多练 多问等 3 培养对英语学习的兴趣爱好 developaninterestinlearningEnglish坚持每天记单词 insiston persistindoinginsiston persistinrememberingwordseveryday DearLiHua I msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem Inyourletter yousaidyouhavesomedifficultiesinlearningEnglish Thisisanormalproblemthateverystudentcouldsuffer soIthinkIcangiveyousomeusefulsuggestions Mysuggestions adviceareasfollows Firstly youshouldlistentotheteacherscarefullyintheclass Secondly thebestwaytolearnEnglishisreadingitwellandknowingthemeaningsofit Thirdly youcanspeakEnglishwithyourclassmatesandteachers whichcanimproveyourlisteningandspeakingabilities What smore themostimportantadviceisreadingEnglishbooksbeforetheclassandaftertheclass 假定你是李华 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文 请你根据下列要点写回信 要点 参加中文学习班 看中文书刊 电视 学唱中文歌曲 交中国朋友 注意 可适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 开头语已给出 DearPeter I mgladtohearthatyoucanaskformyadvicenohowtolearnChinesewell Bestwishes LiHua Homework DearPeter I mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell Hereareafewsuggestions First itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse asyou llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents Then italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks newspapers andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible Besides itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs becausebydoingsoyou lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily Inaddition YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime Bestwishes LiHua 第二篇建议信 对于我的朋友花大量时间上网 耽误学习的建议信建议内容 1 和他面对面地交流 沟通 2 给她发邮件或短信 3 告诉他学习的重要性 Homework DearLiHua I msorrytohearthatyouhavesuchadifficultproblem Inyourletter yousaidyourfriendspendsmostofhistimechattingontheInternetandoftengoestotheInternetcafeinsteadofattendingclasses Youreallywanttohelphimoutbutyoudon tknowwhattodowithit howtohelphim Well Iwouldliketogivemyadviceforyou Myadviceareasfollows Firstly Ithinkyoushouldhaveatalkwithhimsincerely Becauseifyourfriendskipsclasses heisnotgoingtodowellatschool Secondly youcane mailhimorleaveamessage Thirdly youshouldtellhimtheimportanceofstudy Becauseeveryoneofusjusthasonechancetogotohighschool heshouldstudyhardandnotwastetimeinindulgingontheInternet Inaword Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfulforyou Bestwishes Yours Editor Homework假定你是某中学的学生李华 请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信 表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法 主要内容包括 优点 1 话题广泛 2 图片丰富3 有助于提高学习兴趣建议 适当降低词汇难度DearEditor Asastudentreader IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse 常用关联词 表示并列的过渡词或短语aswell or too also aswellas and notonly butalso both and either or neither nor First Second Third Foronething Foranother thing 2 表示递进的过渡词或短语Moreover What smore Besides What sworse 3 表转折对比的过渡词 insteadof but however onthecontrary although differentfrom despiteinspiteof Some Others Ontheonehand Ontheotherhand 4 表原因的过渡词 because becauseof since as for nowthat thanksto dueto 由于 5 表结果的过渡词 so thus therefore asaresult sothat then 6 表条件的过渡词 if unless aslongas7 表时间的过渡词 recently finally atthesametime atlast fromnowon 8 表特定的顺序关系的过渡词 first firstly second secondly third thirdly aboveall firstofall then next finally intheend atlast 9 表换一种方式表达的过渡词 inotherwords thatistosay10 表进行举例说明的过渡词 forinstance forexample suchas11 表陈述事实的过渡词 Infact Totellyouthetruth12 表目的的过渡词 forthisreason forthispurpose sothat inorderto soasto13 表总结的过渡词 Inaword 总之 简言之 i