how-to-polish-your-writing写作技巧.ppt

HowtoPolishYourWriting PartOne Generalintroductiontowriting 了解NMET书面表达的评分标准和要求 按5个档次给分 写一篇100个单词左右的书面材料 情景包括目的 对象 时间 地点 内容等 提供情景的形式有图画 图表 提纲 短文等 书面表达的要求是 1 覆盖所有的语言要点 内容要点可用不同方式表达 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分 2 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 值得注意的是语法结构或词汇方面虽有些许错误 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致 具有较强的语言运用能力 写作要领1 细读提示 明白写什么 日记 信函 报导或叙事描写2 写全要点 了解核心内容 非重要情节 图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次 表格类原则上一个不能少3 层次分明 为使短文令人感到赏心悦目分成2甚至3段为好4 承上启下 简而言之是连接词 过渡句他们是组成文章粘和剂 上下沟通的纽带 5 繁简有度 文章总有详写与略写 尤其是图画类短文 学会筛选是非常必要的 如其不然 事无巨细全部点到 不仅使文章成了流水帐 而且空耗了时间还使文章显得冗赘若再因超长而被扣分岂不得不偿失 6 亮点突出 较高级词汇和较复杂的语法结构的合理适时使用 这最能影响或打动改卷教师 是求得高档次及该档次高端分值的保证 7 书写认真 不求文字隽秀力保规范工整 这是留下好印象的起码条件8 卷面干净 事先打草稿然后誊改是使文章通畅的关键 PartTwo Polishyourwriting 一 句式变化 改变句子的开头方式 不要一味地用主语开头 适当使用状语或其他形式提前 1 Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttogetherearlyinthemorning 2 Weallknowthatinternetwillhelpusalotifweuseitproperly Earlyinthemorning wemetintheschoolgateandwenttogether Asisknowntousall Asweallknow internetwillhelpusalotifweuseitproperly Wehadashortrest Thenwebegantoplayhappily Wesanganddanced Sometoldstories someplayedchess Havinghadashortrest webegantoplayhappily singinganddancing Sometoldstories whileothersplayedchess 巧用习语 增加文采 巧用一些介词短语 名词短语 形容词短语使文采不同凡响1 Manyhousesarebeingbuilt 2 WhenIthoughtofthecomingholiday Ijustcouldn thelpsmiling 3 Whenthemangotonthebus hewastiredandhungry Manyhousesareunderconstruction Atthethoughtofthecomingholiday Ijust Tiredandhungry themangotonthebus 洋味十足 才是好文章 Idon twanttolivewithastrangerinahotelroom Sheshoutedloudly I vesucceeded Idon twanttoshareahotelroomwithastranger Sheshoutedatthetopofhervoice I vemadeit 二 连接词 高考写作中常用的连接词 表并列补充关系的 whatismore besides also aswell moreover furthermore inadditionto 表转折对比关系的 but however yet instead nevertheless onthecontrary despite inspiteof unlike ononehand ontheotherhand some others 高考写作中常用的连接词 表因果关系的 since as because of so thus therefore asaresult sothat 表条件关系的 if oncondition that aslongas unless orelse 表特定的顺序关系 aboveall firstofall first firstly secondly thenext finally intheend atlast 高考写作中常用的连接词 表时间关系的 when after before until assoonas afterwards soon lately recently since fromthenon inthemeantime atthesametime atlast suddenly allofasudden 表换一种方式表达 inotherwords thatistosay toputitanotherway 高考写作中常用的连接词 表进行举例说明 forinstance forexample like suchas 表陈述事实 infact actually asamatteroffact totellyouthetruth 表总结 onthewhole inshort allinall inaword inconclusion insummary Improvethefollowingsentences ChinajoinedtheWTO Thatendeditsmanyyearsoftalks 2 Timegoesfast Mr Smithcametoourschoolfortwoyears ChinajoinedtheWTO thusendingitsmanyyearsoftalks Howtimeflies ItistwoyearssinceMr Smithcametoourschool 3 Tourismopensourminds enablesustoknowmoreabouttheoutsideworld Italsohelpsfurtherfriendship Butithasalsogivenrisetoanumberofproblems Tourismopensourminds enablesustoknowmoreabouttheoutsideworld Inaddition ithelpsfurtherfriendship Nevertheless ithasgivenrisetoanumberofproblemsaswell Enjoythefollowingpassagesandpickouttheshiningpointsofthem WhatafineSunday IwasplanningtoplayfootballwithXiaoMing butwhileIwasgoingout Ifoundmymotherwaswashingclothes Mumwasbusyworkinganddoinghouseworkafterworkdayandnightwithoutcomplaining Shewassotired Thinkingaboutthis Idecidedtohelpdothewashing Ibegantofeeltiredafterwashingforseveralminutes AndXiaoMingcametoaskmetogooutforfootballatthatmoment Inearlygaveupwashing ButIpersuadedmyselftogoonfinally Mumcameback onlytofindalltheclotheswerehangingontheline Shesmiled WhatafineSunday IwasplanningtoplayfootballwithXiaoMing butwhileIwasgoingout Ifoundmymotherwaswashingclothes Mumwasbusyworkinganddoinghouseworkafterworkdayandnightwithoutcomplaining Shewassotired Thinkingaboutthis Idecidedtohelpdothewashing Ibegantofeeltiredafterwashingforseveralminutes AndXiaoMingcametoaskmetogooutforfootballatthatmoment Inearlygaveupwashing ButIpersuadedmyselftogoonfinally Mumcameback onlytofindalltheclotheswerehangingontheline Shesmiled 25分 DearBob It sverykindofyoutowritemeandletmeknowaboutyourbeautifulcity NowI dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownJiangcheng ThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiangRiver Itisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein Itseconomyhasbeendevelopingrapidlyinthepasttenyears Newfactories houses androadshavebeenbuilt Moreschools andhospitalsareavailableforitspeople However therearestillsomeproblems suchaswaterandairpollutionandheavytrafficinrushhours Inmyopinion Jiangchengshoulddevelopitseconomyscientifically Iwouldalsothinkthatthegrowthofitspopulationshouldbebroughtundercontrolsothatwe llhaveabetterhometowninfuture Yours Xiaohua DearBob It sverykindofyoutowritemeandletmeknowaboutyourbeautifulcity NowI dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownJiangcheng ThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiangRiver Itisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein Itseconomyhasbeendevelopingrapidlyinthepasttenyears Newfactories houses androadshavebeenbuilt Moreschools andhospitalsareavailableforitspeople However therearestillsomeproblems suchaswater