高中英语短文改错练习.ppt

短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有10处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 错误涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下画一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改10处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 一 OnedayLiMingcaughtalittlebird Hetieditwiththepieceofthreadandplayedithappily Atthattime heseesalittlegirlcryingbytheroadsides Apolicemansawher cameoverandaskedherhowshewascryingandwhereherhomewas Whenhelearnedaboutthatthegirlhadgotlostandhewaslookingforhermother hedecidedtoleadthegirlbackhome SeethisLiMingthoughtthelittlebirdalsohaditsmotherandheshouldsetthelittlebirdfreelysothatitcouldbewithitsmotheragain ThenLiMinguntiedthethreadbutthelittlebirdflewtothebluesky 二 OneeveningafterworkJohndroveawayhissecretaryhomebecauseshefailstostarthercar Notwanttobotherhiswife Maureen hedecidednottomentionittoher Laterthatnight JohnandMaureenwasdrivingouttoeatwhenJohnspottedahigh heeledshoehidunderthepassengerseat Pointingtoanythingoutofthepassengerwindowtodistracthiswife hepickeduptheshoeandtosseditoutofherwindow Theyarrivedintherestaurantashorttimelater Whentheywereabouttogetoutofcar Maureenenquired John haveyouseenmyothershoes 三 IbringRosehomefiveyearsago MyneighborMrs Blackfellinlovewithherimmediateshesawher Shewassuchlovelydog afterall RosealsoseemedtolikeMrs Black Twoyearsago however Mrs Blackgotcancer Havingbeentreatinginhospital shedecidedtoreceivetreatmentathome SincemyhusbandandIwerebusyinourwork weseldomwenttoseeher Threemonthsago Mrs Blackdied Tooursurprised herhusbandcametothanktousforkeepingRoseoneday Hesaidinthepastseveralmonths RosewenttoaccompanyhiswifeeverydaybeforemyhusbandandIwenttowork Withshearound hiswifefeltsowarmandwasn tinsomuchpain Ineverknewthat ThatRosedidwasreallyheart warming 四 Longlongago therelivedthemanwhowassolazythatnojobwasfitofhim Inordertomakealivingheonedaywenttoaneighborofhimforhelp Theneighboradvisedhimworkasacemeterycaretakerasitwasthemosteasiestjobonecouldfindintheworld Thelazymanisdelightedandsoonbecameacemeterycaretaker Buttoeverybody ssurprisingheresignedhisjobthreedaysbeforehegotit It sunfair Hesaidtotheneighborangry InthecemeteryalltheothersarelyingstillwhileIamtheonlyonewhohadtostand 五 MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake Assoonaswearrived sowedroppedthelinesintothewater Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently Iwantedtogiveup andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger Finally therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught Withinthenextfewminute mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish Felthungry webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish Itwasdelicious 六 DearMing Itwasverynicetohearfromyouforalongtime I mgladtolearnthatyou vebeensettleddowninBostonandaregettingusedtothelocalwaysoflife Asyouknow I mstillburiedwithbooksatschoolyouaresofamiliarwith WhatmaysurpriseyouarethatI mgoingtotheUSthisJulyinasummercamp SurelyI mexpectinglotsofsightseeingtours partiesandanotherexcitingthings WemustdefinitelymeetwhenI mover Asisplanning I mcomingtoBostonaroundthe15th andIwonderifyou llfreethensowecouldchataboutthegoodolddays Hopetoseeyousoon Yours XiaoLei 七 Thisisastorytoldbymyfather WhenIwasboy themostexcitingthingwaswhentocelebratetheSpringFestival Mygrandmawasthebestcookerintheworldbutcouldmakethemostdeliciousdishes Once Ijustcouldn twaitfortheSpringFestivaldinner AsIwasabouttakeapiecefromacookedduck IsawGrandmainthekitchenlookingme Shakeherhead shesaid Itisn tagoodtimetodothat dear Iapologizeandcontrolledmeatthebesttillthedinnerstarted Youknow thatwasadinnerwehadwaitedforseveralmonth 八 MyfriendDickwassevenyearsold andhersisterKatherinewasfive Onedaytheirmothertakethemtotheiraunt stoplaywhileshewenttothecitybuysomenewclothes Theyplayedforahour andthentheiraunttookDickintothekitchen Shegavehimanicelycakeandaknifeandsaid Dick cutthiscakeinhalf andgiveoneofthepiecetoyoursister Butrememberingtodoitlikeagentleman Howdogentlemendoit Dickasked Theyalwaysgivethebiggeronepiecetotheotherperson answeredhisaunt Dickthoughtupthisforafewseconds Thenhetookthecaketohissisterbutsaidtoher Cutthiscakeinhalf Katherine 九 RecentlyIreadanarticleinamagazine Itwasofamotherwhowasworriedabouthissonjustbecauseofhealwayskepthishairlong Themotherthoughtthatwasnotright butthesonfelttherewasnothingunusuallyaboutit Differentgenerationshavedifferentopinionsonthesamething Thatiswhatismeaningby thegenerationgap Wecanseetheminourdailylives Mostofourparentslikelisteningtooldsongwhileyoungpeoplepreferpopsongs Everytimemyfatherfindsmelistentorockmusic healwaysshouted Shutitoff It sawful Howcanwedealthegenerationgap 十 Mysparetimeisfullofinterestedactivities IreadallkindsofbooksinthereadingroomwheneverIamfree Ilearnmuchinthelibrarythaninclassinthisway Meanwhile Iparticipatedinmanysportsactivities ofthatmyfavoriteisvolleyball Ioftenplayvolleyballaftertheschool Sportsandgameskeepmehealthyandenergeti