高三英语写作复习II.ppt

高考英语作文复习II Howtowritecompositionofcomparisonandcontrast 表示观点对比类写作套语 A 总起 Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion Differentpeopleholddifferent oppositeopinions Peoplehavetaken adopteddifferentattitudestowards Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion B 表达观点一 ofthemholdtheopinionthat ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat Peoplewhoarefortheideathink C 表达不同观点之间的衔接 However ofthemholdadifferentview ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion Peoplewhoareagainstitdon tthinkso However everycoinhastwosides Differentfromthose peoplethink Ontheotherhand peoplethink D 结尾常用套语 Inmyopinion Personally AsfarasI mconcerned Inshort inbrief inaword WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathat Ontheotherhand about35 studentsare againsttheidea what smore Besides Filmorbook whichdoyouprefer Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory Besides thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting anditiseasiertofollow Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal Meanwhile thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful Personally Iagreewiththesecondview ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit IthinkIcanstayathome readingquietlyinasituationofmyown andwhat smore Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor sideas Inaword toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit Someofusthinkthat Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion Personally Iagreewiththesecondview Besides Meanwhile what s more Inaword 表列举说明的关联词 Firstly Firstofall Tobeginwith Secondly Thirdly Inthefirstplace Inthesecondplace Inthethirdplace Finally Lastbutnotleast 表示递进 强调的关联词 Besides Apartfrom What smore Inaddition Furthermore Moreover worsestill tomakemattersworse A 运用高级词汇或短语B 增加形容词或副词C 灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨 B 增加形容词或副词 在我们的校园里有一个小池塘 Thereisalovelypondinourbeautifulcampus C 灵活运用各种句型1 活用it句型 It常用句型 Itisthefirst second timethat Itis high timethat Itissaid reported well knownthat Ittakessb sometimetodosth sb feel find make think considerit adj todoWhenitcomestosth 我们到了采取措施保护环境的时候 我认为举行英语比赛很有意义 从句 李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一 这令她的歌迷们很兴奋 LiYuchunwonthefirstintheSuperGirlCompetition whichmadeherfansexcited 倒装句型 我们只有通过努力才能获得成功 Onlybyworkinghardcanweachievesuccess 强调句型 是超级女生比赛让女孩们获得了自信 ItistheSuperGirlCompetitionthatmakesgirlsgainconfidence with结构 有那么多的人支持超女比赛 这个活动很成功 WithsomanypeoplesupportingtheSuperGirlCompetition itenjoyedagreatsuccess 分词短语 30 同学不赞同这一看法 认为孩子不应当 30 ofmyclassmatesdisagreewithit sayingchildrenshouldn t 知道了这点 他们会越来越努力学习 Knowingthis they llstudyharderandharder 近来湖南卫视策划的 超级女生 节目热播 在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的凡响 现在你班为此展开了一场讨论 把讨论的结果写成一篇文章 写作基本步骤 仔细审题 把握要点 围绕要点 写出句子 添加过度 确保连贯 先求正确 再求灵活 认真眷写 卷面整洁 Homework Finishandimproveyourcompositionandhanditintomorrow Thankyou 你校部分学生进行了一场有关学生可否带手机进校园的讨论 请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文 介绍讨论的情况 Homework Recentlymanypeopleespeciallyhighschoolstudentshavebeenfascinatedbyasingingcompetition SuperGirl sVoice whichisheldbyHunanTVStation Lastweekendthestudentsinourclasshadaheateddiscussionaboutit Somestudentssupportingitthinkhighlyofthecompetition Theythinkithasofferedawonderfulstagetoordinarybutwell singinggirlstoshowtheirsingingtalentsinpublic andencouragespeopletopursuetheirdreams Andthiscanhelpthemgainmoreconfidencethanever What smore theycanalsodeveloptheirsenseofcompetingduringcompetition Ontheotherhand theothersdon tagreewiththem Theythinkaseriesofcompetitionscostslotsoftimeandmoney Asmostofgirlsarestillstudentswhoshouldconcentrateontheirstudyatpresent takingpartinitisnotgoodfortheirfurtherprogress Besides someyoungpeoplemaywronglyfeelthatsuccesscomesfromluckbutnothardwork Inmyopinion itisjustasuccessfulprogram whichhasattractedlotsofaudience sattention Butseeingabunchofgirlswithpassiontorealizetheirdreamsinthecompetition weareinspiredtostudyhardertobesupergirlstoo justascompetitors Thestudentsofourschoolhadadiscussionaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentscangotoschoolwithmobilephones Differentpeopleholddifferentopinions Somestudentsthinkthatstudentshavemobilephonesatschool becausemobilephoneswillenablestudentstostayintouchwiththeirfriendsandfamilywherevertheyare Besides themobilephoneisawaytohavefun Asacoinhastwosides themobilephones whileprovidingconvenience causetroubletoo Inclassrooms theuntimelyringingofphonesinterruptslecturesanddestroystheatmosphereofstudy Andsomestudentsmayspendtoomuchtimeandmoneyonphonecallsandsendingmessages What sworse sometimesstudentsmightusephonemessagestocheatduringexams A 高级词汇和短语举例 challengingavailablesignificanttakeadvantageof makefulluseof makethemostofmakeforcontributetoinfavorofenjoy tothefullest WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies becloseto energetic feel likegoing afford fixtheir attentionon drawingnear WhetherornotshouldSenior3studentsgospringouting Wehavehadaheateddiscussion Opinionsaredividedonthequestion Moststudents about65 arefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshairandwhat smore theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudents Ontheotherhand about35 studentsareagainsttheidea Theysaythatwithcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear theydon tfeellikegoinganywhere Besides theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff Theycan taffordthetime Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudies becloseto energetic feel likegoing afford fixtheir attent