高中英语基础写作公开课课件.ppt

基础写作训练 学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 Shooting originatedasameansofsurvival developedintoasportonlyinthelate19thcentury Thesport whichfirstappearedin1896 waseversuspendedduringthe1904and1928Games ItwasonlyfouryearsbeforethesportreturnedtotheOlympic However notuntil1968werewomenfirstallowedtocompeteintheOlympicshooting Withthesportbecomingmoreandmorepopular ithasgrownsteadilyfromjust3shootingeventsatthe1896OlympicGamesto17today 广东08高考基础写作范文 句子表达有何亮点 写作中复合句常见的错误 1 只有从句 没有主句 Thekeeperwhohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime sohecouldkeepcalminthestorm Thekeeper whohadlivedinthelighttowerforalongtime couldkeepcalminthestorm 2 以逗号代替句号 把两个简单句当成一个句子 Theoldmanthoughtofhisson tearscamedownfromhisface Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings itismadeofglass 3 刻意使用从句 表达不自然 ThereareoverfiftystudentsinthisschoolwhoaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday OverfiftystudentsinthisschoolaregoingtotakepartinthesportsmeetnextSunday Thehallisdifferentfromallotherbuildings whichismadeofglass Theoldmanthoughtofhisson withtearscomingdownfromhisface 4 过多地使用并列句组合信息 Weweredrivingoutintothecountry andwesawourEnglishteacherridinginabus andthebuswascrowded Itisabeautifulday andthesunisshiningandabreezeisblowing Itisabeautifuldaywiththesunshiningandabreezeblowing Asweweredrivingoutintothecountry wesawourEnglishteacherridinginacrowdedbus MyEnglishLearning ItissixyearssinceIbegantolearnEnglish Withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates IhavemadeprogressinmyEnglish NowI mdoingwellbothinwritingandreadinginEnglish ButIstillfindithardtolearnEnglish suchassomedifficultidioms Difficultasitis Ihavemadeupmymindtomasterthisusefullanguagebymyhardwork 请看范例 从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫 规范的英语句子 其实 规范的英语句子 就是我们经常讲的三种句子 A Simplesentence Hearingthenews hewashappy B CompoundsentenceA HegavemeabookbutIforgottobringitbackhome C CompoundsentenceB Whatheisdoinghasnothingtodowithme Whenheheardthenews hewashappy Hereare3waystomakesentences I 巧妙运用短语 写出规范的简单句 1 借助名词短语做同位语 如 李立 男 19岁 1986年生 籍贯 广东 LiLi aboyof19 wasborninGuangdongin1986 2 借助介词短语做定语 如 李飞 男 10岁 棕色短发 身穿白色茄克 LiFeiisaten year oldboywithshortbrownhairandawhitejacket 如 有了Tom的帮助 我们很快就找到了他们的村子 WiththehelpofTom wesoonfoundtheirvillage 4 借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 如 他们站在大树下 等待着总统的到来 Theyarestandingunderthebigtree waitingforthepresident 3 借助介词短语做状语 II 巧用连接词 写出规范的并列句 如 他给我钱 我不要 IwasjustwalkingdownthestreetcornerwhenIsawyou 如 我刚到拐角处 就见到你啦 HegavemealotmoneybutIrefused III 用好从句和引导词 写出规范的复合句 1 名词性从句 如 老师生气 原因 王力迟到 ThatWangLicamelatetoschoolmadetheteacherveryangry 2 定语从句 如 中国 地处亚洲东部 特点 地大物博 人口众多 China whichliesintheeastofAsia isagreatcountrywithalargeareaandpopulationaswellasrichnaturalresources 3 状语从句 如 雷锋还活在我们心中 我深受感动 Iwasdeeplymovedbythis becauseIknowLeiFengisstilllivinginourhearts 学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 Kateisanewstudent Shecomesfromanorthernprovince Shespeaksadialect Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect Kate anewstudentfromanorthernprovince speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand 用一句话表达 不是人人都能学好英语 小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习 学会运用复合句和非谓语动词 第一步 拆分成几个简单句 不是人人都能学好英语 小学生同时学汉语和英语 这会影响汉语学习 第二步 分别翻译这几个简单句 NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoollearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy 第三步 合并句子 ThatchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametimewillaffecttheirChinesestudy becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish NoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish ChildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime ThiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy 第三步 合并句子 IfchildrenfromprimaryschoolstarttolearnEnglishandChineseatthesametime thiswillaffecttheirChinesestudy 方法2 becausenoteveryoneisgoodatlearningEnglish 情景说明 通知 新光中学高三年级学生将于9月9日去体检 体检地点 第一人民医院体检时间 9月9日 星期六注意 1 7 45在医院门口集合 可以骑车或步行前往 2 体检前空腹 3 在医院要保持安静 听从医生和护士的安排 实战练习 Notice ThestudentsinSeniorThreeofXinguangMiddleSchoolwillgotohaveaphysicalexaminationintheFirstPeople sHospitalonSaturday 9thSept We llmeetatthehospitalgateat7 45 Youmayeitherwalkthereorgotherebybike Wearenotallowedtoeatordrinkanythingbeforetheexamination Pleasekeepquietandlistentothedoctorsandnurseswhenyouarethere 学会使用复合句和非谓语动词 你来试试 参考词汇 错别字 wrongly writtencharacters网络语言 weblanguage 要求 1 用两句话表达表格内容2 两句话要有连贯性 第一句 两个信息点 1 学生作文中出现很多错别字2 他们 上网聊天时经常使用网络语言 Therearemanywrongly writtencharactersinstudents compositions Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinstudents compositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline 合并句子 Theyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline 1 Theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters 第二句 1 每天有很多作业做2 没有记住生字 Theyhavemuchhomeworktodoeveryday 2 Withsomuchhomeworktodo theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters 3 Becausetheyhavesomuchhomeworktodo theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters 合并句子 Theyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters 连接两句话 Thereasonwhytherearemanywrongly writtencharactersinstudents compositionisthattheyoftenuseweblanguageswhenchattingonline Moreover theyhavesomuchhomeworktodoeverydaythattheyfailtomemorizethenewcharacters Exchangeanddiscussyourpartner scomposition thengiveeachotherascoreaccordingtothefollowingcriteria Pairwork 1 一个乞丐在路边讨钱 askformoney 李先生匆忙赶路上班 没有注意到那个乞丐 2 乞丐很生气 伸出 stickout 拐杖 差点把李先生绊倒了 tripover 3 李先生意识到他是个残疾人 便在口袋里找钱给他 4 李先生拿出了一张百元钞票 a100 yuannote 突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中 5 乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票 李先生站在那里 惊得合不拢嘴 实战演练 以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求 经过观察 整理排列成的五个信息块 请分别用一个句子表达出来 并组成一篇连贯性的短文 Abeggar AbeggarOneday Mr Lihurriedonhiswaytowork Abeggarontheroadsidewasaskingformoney Mr Lipaidnoattentiononhim Thebeggargotangryandstuckouthiswalkingstick ItalmosttrippedMr Liover Whenherealizingthebeggarwasadisabledperson Mr Libegantosearchforsomemoneyinhispockettogivehim Hetookouta100 yuannote butitwassudde