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高分写作 高分句型 高分作文 高分句型高分短语思维方式 高分句型 IfIbecomefamous Ineedn ttoworryaboutmylifeproblems Imayhavealotofmoney soIcanbuyacarandgivemyfatherandmymother AndIalsocandowhatIlike Imayrunalittlecompany andusesomemoneytohelpthepoorchildreninruralareas AndIcanestablishsomeHopePrimarySchool IfIbecomefamous Ineedn ttoworryaboutmylifeproblems Imayhavealotofmoney ThenIcanbuyacarandgivemyfatherandmymother AndIalsocandowhatIlike Imayrunalittlecompany andusesomemoneytohelpthepoorchildreninruralareas AndIcanestablishsomeHopePrimarySchool 1 句子开头单调 I2 短句过多 无长句3 句型简单 主 谓 宾 口语化 高分句型 基本要求 开头多样化写长句句式复杂化 开头多样化 分词开头Exhausted Islumpedintoachair Notknowingwhatshouldbedonenext Iconsultmanyofmyfriends Runningtoraisefundsforacharitygivesyouasenseofunselfishness Tobeabetterstudents Ideterminedtonevertounderachieveagain 短语开头 Afraidofbeingcheated Iturnedmybackonthatstranger Regardlessofanykindofdifficulties keepingagoodmoodhelpsyoukeepcoolandfindsolutionsinasensibleway Comparedwithhangingoutwiththefriendsinareallife meetingnetfriendscouldberisk taking Apartfromthebenefitsofbuildingupyourconfidence youcouldfindotherbenefitsinyourvolunteeringwork Owingto asaresultof soasto inspiteof intermsof inlightof onthecontrary asweallknow sofarasIknow shortof attheriskof 状语从句开头 Muchastheinternetprovideawealthofinformation peoplecannottrusteverypieceofit Assumingeveryoneassociatewithfriendsthroughtheunfeelingscreenofcomputer howdoestheworldlooklike Inasmuchaswearelivingintherealworld indulginginthevirtualworldismisleadingevendangerous 使用稀有连接词 BecauseInasmuchas inthat consideringAlthoughMuchas inspiteofthefactthat granted granting forall that Ifprovidedthat onconditionthat supposing assuming With Without开头 Withthepopularityofpersonalcomputersandtheadvancementofinternettechnology younggenerationareeagertoembraceeverynewexperienceinthevirtualworld Withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy Withtheremarkableimprovementofpeople slivingstandards Withthesteadygrowthof Withouttheteachers help Icouldnotovercomemyweakness Withoutthepress studentscannothaveenoughimpetustoworkharder 主语从句开头 Whoyoumeetinthevirtualworldcannotbetotallytrusted Whattheysaidmaybequitedifferentfromthetruth Howyougetanewfriendisnotasimportantaswhatkindofpersonheorsheis ThatIwasabletohelpothersgavemesensesofself worthandachievement There It开头 Therearefewthingsmoresatisfyingthanhelpingpeopleinneed Therearepotentialdangerstomakingfriendsonline TherehasbeenagooddealofcontroversyastowhetherPCgamesshouldbeprohibited Itisespeciallybeneficialforpeopletokeepagoodmood Itdoesharminseveralwaysifwemakefriendsonline ItisreportednowChinahas4 5millionregisteredvolunteershavingprovidedmorethan4 5billionhoursofvolunteerwork 数字开头 Severalfactorsshouldbetakenintoaccountwhenitcomestostayinghealthy Fewpeoplewouldfeelunhappywhenprovidingtimelyhelptotheneedyperson The21centuryhaswitnessedtherapiddevelopmentinChina 4 5millionregisteredvolunteersarereportedtoprovidemorethan4 5billionhoursofvolunteerworkinChina 练习 1 Somepeopledisagreetomakefriendsonthenet 前加 改 Havingbeencheatedonthenetbefore Afraidofbeencheated Inasmuchassomepeopleareafraidofbeingcheated theyWhattheydisagreeistomakefriendsonthenet Therearesomepeopleagainstmakingfriendsonthenet Itisundeniablethattheredoexistsomepeopleagainstmakingfriendsonthenet 2 3ofparentsdisagreetomakefriendsonthenet 写长句 向前 向后向前 句前加从句 分词 介词短语从句 状语从句向后 句后加从句 分词 介词短语 并列句从句 状语从句 定语从句 同位语从句 and but or so 加并列句 使用稀有连接词 2 andwhile whereas buthowever still nevertheless orotherwise sotherefore thus hence yet Makingfriendsonlineisamatterofexcitementandcuriosity neverthelessitmayinvolvedeceitsandtraps Makingfriendsonlinemayinvolvedeceitsandtraps henceeveryonehastobecautious Everyonehastobecautiousofmakingfriendsonline otherwiseyoumaybeatriskofbeingtreated 加状语从句 Theworldwillbecomecoldanddullprovidingeveryoneassociatewithfriendsthroughtheunfeelingscreenofcomputer Oneofmyfriendswasaddictedtothenetgamesandfailedalmosteveryexamination sothathewaskickedoutofschool Heturnedonthecomputerthemomenthearrivedbackfromschool Heplayedtruantinasmuchashewantedtoplayinternetgameswithvirtualmates Partyanimalsspendmanyoftheirnightsindifferentparties Theyhadagreattimebothwithfriendsandstrangersthere Partyanimalsspendmanyoftheirnightsindifferentparties havinggreattimebothwithfriendsandstrangersthere Workingpeoplenormallysleepatnight Partyanimalssleepduringtheday Workingpeoplenormallysleepatnight partyanimalssleepingduringtheday 同一主语 ing 不同主语 独立主格结构 ing分词表并列 who whose which that where when why 非限定性定于从句 最安全Partyanimalssleepduringtheday Partyanimalssleepduringtheday whospendmanyoftheirnightsindifferentparties Partyanimalssleepduringtheday whenothersworkorstudyhard 同一主语 同一宾语 有时间状语 有地点状语 加定语从句 Partyanimalsspendmanyoftheirnightsindifferentparties Theyhadlotsoffriendstalkingandplayingthere Partyanimalsspendmanyoftheirnightsindifferentparties withlotsoffriendstalkingandplayingthere Libraryisanidealplaceforstudy withoutanyvoicesIdonotwanttohear 加with结构 表having Hewrote5booksinhislife Oneofthemwerepublished Hewrote5booksinhislife withonlyonepublished Theteacherhastalkedwith20students Shehas5morestudentstocommunicatewith Theteacherhastalkedwith20students with5moretocommunicatewith Ipublished2articleslastweek Iamabouttopublishother3thisweek Ipublished2articleslastweek with3moretobepublishedthisweek 加with结构 表having 2 练习 2 Childrenspendmuchtimeonthenet 后加 andtheygetaddictedtoit hencetheyspendlesstimeonstudy inasmuchastheyaretooyoungtocontrolthemselves regardlessofparents warnings chattingwithpeopletheydonotknow withabundantenergyandtimewasted whichisabundantinunhealthyinformationandtemptingonlinegames 句式复杂化特殊句式 强调句型 It s that so that 伴随句型 themore themore themore theless 倒装句型 Youngasheis Only NosoonerhadIoffered than 比喻句型 都肯定Justas so Justlike 都否定no morethan 对比句型notsomuch as notmorethan虚拟语气 if 插入语 同位语 定从 连词however therefore 多样否定 Itistalkingandplayingwiththefriendsintherealworldthatcanactuallyimproveyourinterpersonalskills Theinternetissotemptingthatthemoreyouareexposedtoit themoreyoucannotresistit NosoonerhadIsteppedintotheorphanage thanIfeltthechildren scuriosityandexcitement Ifthenetaddictsspentmoretimeintherealworld theirliveswouldbemorecolorfulandhealthy Justasmotoristocar sopressistostudents 比喻 Nobodycantotallytrustnetfriendsmorethanthedietersbelieveadvertisementsofthedietpill 都否定 强调前者 比喻 Netaddictsdonotreallywanttomakefriendsmorethanjustevadefromthereality 否定前者 肯定后者 比较 ratherthan Netaddictsdonotsomuchwanttomakemorefriendsasjustevadefromthereality ToPlayworld however canactuallyimproveyourwithfriendsintherealinterpersonalskills especiallyyourfacialexpressionsandgestures Anetfriend whoyoudonotknowverywell maydeceiveyouwithoutthefearofbeingdiscovered 多样否定 No not否定副词Never hardly否定动词fail lack haveyetto 比较级 than shouldknowbetterthan deprive of否定主语Nobody noneofyou few little否定表语 作状语Short absent devoidoffreefrom farfrom beyond ignorantof reluctantto butfor without Wedonothaveanyevidence Weneverhaveanyevidence Wehaveyettogetanyevidence Wefailtogetanyevidence Welackenoughevidence Noneofushaveanyevidence Littleevidencehasbeenfound Wearedevoidofevidence Shortofevidence Youshouldknowbetterthantoplayfootballintheclassroom Youarewiserthantodosuchathing Hisnameescapedme Hisnameisbeyondmymemory Yourworkisfarfromsatisfactory Studentsarereluctanttostudyinthisway Butforhishelp Icouldsucceednowad