雅思强化-大作文-3-观点判断型.ppt

雅思主流写作题型之观点判断型 表现形式 Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion Discussbothopinions statements andgiveyourownone Towhatextentdoyouagree ordisagree Howfardoyouagree ordisagree What syouropiniontowardsthestatement 题目示例 2009年2月7日Richcountriesoftengivefinancialaidtopoorcountries butitdoesnotsolvethepoverty sorichcountriesshouldgiveothertypesofhelptothepoorcountriesratherthanthefinancialaid Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree 2009年3月7日Somepeoplethinkmusicplaysanimportantroleinsociety Othersthinkitisitissimplyaformofentertainment Discussbothsidesofthisargumentandgiveyourownopinion 观点判断型话题细分 观点判断题又通常分为两类 一种是观点陈述分正反两派 如 2009年4月25日SomepeoplethinkthatcomputersandtheInternetaremoreimportantforachild seducationthangoingtoschool Butothersbelievethatschoolsandteachersareessentialforchildrentolearneffectively Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion 另一种是题目中只提一种观点立场 但通常里面含两个对立要素 如 2009年3月21日Somepeoplethinkitismoreimportanttospendpublicmoneyonpromotinghealthylifestyleinordertopreventillnessthantospenditonthetreatmentforpeoplewhoarealreadyill Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree 解题步骤一 审题 善于把握题目中的关键字词 题干中的主语或者宾语 即把握 谁 哪个 问题定性 即把握 更重要 应该 如Moreimportant essential Necessary unnecessaryRather otherthan 解题步骤二 确定基调 Discussbothviews型的题目 只适合对称式的写法 即两边的观点你都需论证 即使你完全只同意当中的一派 Doyouagree型的题目 可写成一边倒 即对题目观点完全的赞同或否定 并就此展开论述 也可以写成对称型 即对题目观点部分同意 解题步骤三 Discussbothviews型的题目段落安排 注意 一般只能写成对称型 第一段 复述观点 表明自己大概立场第二段 第三段 正 反的主要观点各写一段 可举1 3 视难易程度决定 但长度要合适 轻重程度排序得当 两种观点的顺序可自由调换 不过建议养成自己的习惯以免临时决定浪费时间 同之前利弊型一样 如果某一个观点论得比较透的话 同意 反对可以只着重讲一个 其他带过 说明 根据自己的立场决定写作时掌握何派观点的篇幅 以及语气强弱 第四段 结论 强调自己的观点偏好 解题示范1 对称式论文首段模板 开头段 介绍两派观点 可表明偏向 也可 引而不发 Somepeopleholdthebeliefthat观点A whileothersdisagree Theycontendthat观点B AsfarasIamconcerned Iaminfavoroftheformer latteropinion或者bothsidesoftheargumenthavesomestrongpointsandsoundreasons 对称式论文论述段套句 第二段 Ontheonehand A观点成立forthefollowingreasons firstly inthefirstplace tobeginwith furthermore moreover what smore secondly等列举过渡词在二三段的应用 第三段 Ontheotherhand B观点成立because 1 2 对称式论文总结段模板 Fromwhathasbeendiscussed itcanbeseenthatthereiscertaindegreeoftruthinbothofthearguments Personallyspeaking Itendtosidewiththeformer latteropinion ideathat观点A 观点B相对更有道理 范文赏析 Somepeoplesaythattheincreasingbusinessandculturalcontactbetweencountriesisapositivedevelopment whileothersthinkthatmanycountrieswilllosetheirnationalidentities Discussbothsidesandgiveyouropinion 题目分析 观点分析型 但不适合一边倒 适合对称型 因为两派的观点都有道理 关键词 引 increasingbusinessandculturalcontact 论 positivedevelopment losenationalidentities Theworldtodayischaracterizedbythefreeflowofinformationandcommodity Thefrequentinteractionandgrowinginterdependenceamongcountrieshaveendedthedaysofregionalisolationandabsolutenationalsovereignty 背景介绍 完全不用模板 接着引出所讨论问题 buttheyhavealsosparkedoffsharpcontroversiesoverthepositiveandnegativeimpactsthataglobalculturecanbringintoourlife 名词性从句及定语从句计数 1 Somepeoplesaythat 宾语从句 thewideninginternationalexchanges bothinthefieldofbusinessandculture haveexertedpositiveinfluencesonanationaswellasitspeople 改写题目正方观点原句 Tobeginwith theypromotebusinesscooperationamongnations 经济原则 Forexample largemultinationalcompaniesspreadthelatesttechnologiesandexperiencearoundtheworld andinternationaltradehashelpedsomanylessdevelopedeconomiesgrow 经济 技术 原则 例证法 Also theyenrichpeople slivesbecausepeopleofonenationaregivenopportunitiesthroughinternationaltourism exhibitionsandfairs TVprogramsandfilms etc toenjoytheachievementsofotherculturesacrosstheglobe 名词性从句及定语从句计数 1 However otherpeoplearguethat 宾语从句 theseconditionsalsocreatethepossibledangerofunderminingacountry snationalidentity 改写题目反方观点原句 Inthefirstplace traditionalculturesmightfallvictimtoaglobalmediaandentertainmentforce Thisismostevidentinsomepartsoftheworld 定语从句 where Americanization isthreateningthepreservationoftheirindigenousculture InChinaforinstance fewyoungsterslikeorunderstand PekingOpera thequintessenceofChineseculture theygoforHollywoodmoviesandrockmusicinstead Moreover intheprocessofglobalization theworldisgettinglesslinguisticallydiverse asagrowingnumberofpeoplegiveuptheirnativelanguageforthedominantlanguageintheworld English 文化原则 引证法 名词性从句及定语计数 2 Frommypointofview bothargumentsarethetruereflectionsofthepossibleconsequencesofanincreasingeconomicandculturalinteractionamongnations Itboostseconomicintegrationandspeedsupmodernizationbutalsocreatestensionsbetweenaglobalcultureandacountry snationalidentity Therefore weshouldtaketheinitiativeinfightingtoprotectourdistinctcultureandidentityfrombeingsubmergedbyotherculturaloreconomicinfluences 名词性从句及定语计数 0 名词性从句计数 4句 其中宾语从句2句 定语从句2句 观点计数 正方两点 反方两点意思的表达主要依靠动词词组及非谓语动词的使用 以及状语从句 doyouagree型题目的结构安排 三种立场 完全同意 完全反对 部分同意 完全同意 反对时 可写成一边倒式 部分同意时仍写成对称式 完全同意 反对时的写法 完全赞成时 背景介绍之后 Speakingof对题目所讨论话题的高度浓缩 somepeoplesaythat原题改写 Irendermyunreservedsupporttothisstatement 完全反对时 背景介绍之后 Speakingof对题目所讨论话题的高度浓缩 somepeoplesaythat原题改写 Iamincompletedisagreementwiththisstatement 2009年4月18日Ifaproductisgoodoritmeetspeopleneeds peoplewillbuyit SoadvertisingisunnecessaryandnomorethananentertainmentTowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree 示范 背景句 Advertisementhaspenetratedeveryaspectofsocietyandexertedstronginfluenceonourpurchasingbehavior Speakingoftheimportanceofadvertising somepeoplebelievethatitisunnecessaryandjustaformofentertainmentwhenaproductiswell madeandmeetsconsumerdemand 完全同意时 Irendermyunreservedsupporttothisstatement 完全反对时 Iamincompletedisagreementwiththisstatement 2009年2月7日Richcountriesoftengivefinancialaidtopoorcountries butitdoesnotsolvethepoverty sorichcountriesshouldgiveothertypesofhelptothepoorcountriesratherthanthefinancialaid Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree 示范 背景介绍 Howtohelppoorcountriesoutofthepovertyhaslongbeenaprofoundtopicintheinternationalcommunity Speakingoftheeffectivemeasuretoprovideproperaidtothosenations somepeoplebelieverichcountriesshouldprovideothertypesofassistancetotheirpoorcounterpartsotherthanfinancialaid Iaminfullcompleteagreementwiththisopinion Doyouagree题目一边倒写法论述段套句 第二段第一句 引出具体论据TherearenumerousreasonswhyIholdthisstance andIwouldexploreafewofthemostimportantonesinthisessay 接着讲第一个理由 firstly tostartwith inthefirstplace foronething 理由1 第三段 secondly then moreover what smore foranotherthing apartfromtheabove mentionedfactor reason 理由2 一边倒式论文总结段模板 Fromwhathasbeendiscussed itisnotdifficultforustodrawtheconclusionthat自己观点成立 Basedontheabovediscussionandanalysis wecancometotheconclusionthat itiseasytosee自己观点成立 Tosumup insummary tosummarizeInbrief inshort inanutshell Nowadays internationaltourismisoneofthebiggestindustryintheworld Unfortunately itcreatestensionratherthanunderstandingbetweenpeoplefromdifferentcultures Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree 题目类型 观点分析型关键点 引 internationaltourism 论 tensionvs understanding 解题方向 最好还是对称型而非一边倒 用一边倒的写法对思路的获取及论证的把握要求较高 本范文另辟奚径 用一边倒手法论述 可学习一下其写作技巧 Theboomingtouristtradehasbroughtaboutmassexchangeofpopulationbetweendifferentnations 背景介绍 Atfirstglance thisbridgestheunderstandingandcommunicationbetweendifferentcultures 引出题目某一方观点 看似表示同意 Inmyopinion 但话锋一转 引出作者的真正立场 however thisfast growingindustryhasproducedtensionbetweenpeoplefromdifferentculturalbackground 改写所选取立场的原句 从句计数 0 Thefirstbarrierforcurioustouristsfromallovertheworldistheproblemoflanguage Themostattractivedestinationsoftourismare ironically lessdevelopedareas 定语从句 wheretheworldlanguage English hasnotbeenprevalent Therefore thedirectcontactbetweentouristsandlocalresidentshasbeencutdown Thetourguide normallyinterpretertoo becomestheonlylinkofcommunication Butunfortunately asindicatedinanyguide traininghandbook theresponsibilityofatourguideistoarousethetourists interestandpassionratherthanpresentalectureonculturaldifference Thus tourists beyondtheirexpectations cannotfullyunderstandthecultures 定语从句 whichappearstobeexotic Anotherobstacleisfromthelocalgovernment AsIarguebefore inmostofcase the local referstothelessdevelopedregions Inordertoattractforeigninvestmentandmaintainthelocaltourismindustry theofficials deliberatelyornot onlyhopetoshowoutsidersthepositivesideofthearea hence thepartoflocalliving Asaresult conductedtoursarecarefullycensored Thetourists or prisoners tosomeextent areallowedtoseeonly 宾语从句 whattheorganizerswantthemtoseeandnomore Awindow shopschedulegivesnoopportunitytowanderoffonone sown Inthisway evenforaknowledgeabletravelerwithpracticalexperiencecanonly see thesuperficialofthelocalculture Ifso aninstantmisunderstandingwillbefalselyshaped Allthingsconsidered theinternationaltourismcontributesabsolutelynothingtoincreasingunderstanding Instead initswayasitistoday ahideousprejudiceandmisinterpretationwillbeestablished 从句计数 3个 1个宾语从句 两个定语从句 观点计数 仅有2个 一个是导游的局限性 没能够完整详尽地介绍不同地方文化的差别 一个是地方政府的粉饰导致游客只能看到政府希望他们所看到的东西 由此可见 观点不在乎多 如果能深入论证的话 两个观点足以撑起一篇议论文 而且很重要的一点 虽然上文的观点有其很明显的漏洞 但一定要牢记 雅思考的不是观点正确与否 而是你的观点能不能很好被你的论证所支持 所以可能的话 应该多用一些论证上的技巧 比如列举法 举例法 引证法等等 doyouagree首段模板2 部分同意时的写法 背景介绍之后 Speakingof对题目所讨论话题的高度浓缩 somepeoplesaythat原题改写 Tome Icontain believethat用含both and bothsides的句子 改写题目 arereasonable makesense havetheirmerits 部分同意时首段的写法 2010年2月6日Airtravelonlybringsadvantagestotherichpeople Butthemajorityofpeopledonotbenefitfromit Towhatextentdoyouagree 背景 Airtravelissocommonlyusednowadays Speakingofthebeneficiariesofthepopularmodeoftransport somesaythatitbringsadvantagestotherichpeopleonlybutnotthemajorityofpeople Tome Ibelievethatboththerichandthepoorbenefitfromairtravel 部分同意时的主体段写法 第二段 thereisnodoubtthat原观点的某方面成立 并解释理由1 2 第三段 nevertheless wealsoneedtotakeinaccountthefactthat原观点对立方面成立的理由1 2 部分同意时的结论段写法 Ascanbeseenfromtheabovethediscussion thereistruthinbothsides Formypart Icompletelyagreewiththelatterviewthat Admittedly therearemeritstobotharguments AsfarasIamconcerned Ifirmlycommittothenotionthat Nowadays internationaltourismisoneofthebiggestindustryintheworld Unfortunately itcreatestensionratherthanunderstandingbetweenpeoplefromdifferentcultures Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree 题目类型 观点分析型关键点 引 internationaltourism 论 tensionvs understanding Internationaltourismisbooming millionsoftouristsgotoothercountriestoexploretheoutsideworld Tourismenhancesthemutualunderstandingbetweenthelocalpeopleandtourists Somepeopleholdoppositeopinions Theythinkthatinternationaltourismcausestensionratherthanpromotingunderstandingbetweenpeoplefromdifferentcultures Thepeopleholdingthelatterviewsupposethattouristsarelikelytooffendthelocalpeoplebecauseofthelackofknowledgeofthelocalcustoms whichdifferfromtheirown Moreover tourisminevitablyharmsthenaturalresourcesandtheculturallegacy whichmayleadtotheresentmentofthelocalpeople However Icanhardlyassenttothisidea theabovementionedrarelyhappens Inmyopinion internationaltourismdoesencouragetheunderstandingbetweenpeoplefromdifferentcountries Fo