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WritingPractice 1 Languageaccuracy2 Structure TypicalLanguageProblems First adultchildrenlivewiththeirparentswillaffectparents rest Studentsdothecleaningthemselvescanletthemrealizethehardnessofparents Inaword studentsdothecleaningthemselvescanbemorewholesomethanhiringcleaners Adultchildrenlivewithparentshavemanyadvantages Ithinkadultchildrenlivewiththeirparents advantageislargerthandisadvantage Itisseemedtobenotreasonable Ifweliveinthecommunity theremaybenobodytohelpus wewillfeelhopelessandhelpless Ifweliveintheapartmentalone therewillnopeopletakecareofyouifyouaresickorbeintrouble Onlytheirparentsliveacomfortablelife theycanliveandworkwithoutworry However iflivingseparately itwouldbedifficulteventovisittheirparents Theyaredifficulttofulfilltheirdesirebecauseofparents restriction Whenlivingwithparents adultchildrenareeasytobedependent Livinginapartmentsisunabletogainsuchexperience Livinginuniversitydormsdevelopsagoodrelationshipwiththeirclassmates Adultchildrenwholivingtheirownlivescangraduallylearntohandlethesocialrelationship Seniorpeopleoftenfeellonelyafterretired Whenadultchildrenarefacingwithadifficultproblemthattheycannotsolveit theycanturntotheirparentsforhelp Asastudent weshould Structure GetFurtherEducationorGetaJob HowtoSpeakGoodEnglish SavingMoneyorSpendingTomorrow sMoney LivinginUniversityDormsorApartmentsInThecommunity 1 Convenience2 Expense3 Safety4 Friendship learntobeconsiderate 5 Independence6 Freedom7 Avoidconflicts 1 GetFurtherEducationorGetaJob Thesis Reasons 1 2 3 Inrecentyears anincreasingnumberofstudentschoosetopursuefurthereducationathomeorabroad Butmanypeopleargueagainstthetendency Theyholdthattofindagoodjobsoonismorepractical AsfarasIamconcerned Outline findajob 1 Jobhuntingcompetitionisfierceatpresent soapromisingjobisattractive Onejobinhandisworthtwointhefuture Anotherthreeyears studymeansadelaybutmoreheatedcompetitionwithotherslater Haigui hasbecome haidai 2 Graduatescanaccumulateexperienceinwork Thepurposeoffurtherstudyistoworkbetter butworkingperformancedoesnotdependonthedegreeonly What sevenmoreimportantistheability whichdoesnotcomefromknowledgeordegree butfromworkexperience 3 Togetajobupongraduation studentscanbefinanciallyindependent Outline furtherstudy 1 Studentscanlaysolidfoundationintheoreticalknowledge 2 Threeyears accumulationofknowledgeismorelikelytoenablethemtosolvechallengingproblems Outline furtherstudy 3 Withprofoundknowledgeandresearchability studentwithamaster sdegreemayhaveabrightfuture Inmodernsociety manyahighpositionrequiresanacademicdegree Amaster sdegreeenablesthemtobemorecompetitivewhenhuntingforajoborjob hopping Itisafactthatinmanycasesapostgraduatehasmorechancestogetapromotion andtohavehighersalarythanagraduate Structure HowtoSpeakGoodEnglish SavingMoneyorSpendingTomorrow sMoney Moneyistoourlifewhatbloodistoourbody Intheworldtoday nobodycouldlivewithoutmoney Accordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyoneauthoritativeinformationcorporation anestimated67 ofcollegestudentsinBeijing Shanghai Chengdu Wuhan andest thinksavingmoneyisagoodhabit Onthecontrary therestareconvincedthatspendingtomorrow smoneyisbetter AsfarasIamconcerned savingmoneybestsuitsmeandrendersmethegreatestenjoyment Admittedly spendingtomorrow smoney asadvocatedbymany hasitsactiveroletoplayinoureconomiclife Itcanspurpeopletomakemoremoneytoenjoylife Andconsumerismbroughtaboutbythistrendcanofcoursedoagreatdealtodriveforwardoureconomy However therearenumerousmeritsforsavingmoney First savingmoneyisapreparationforasecuredlife Thebestwaytosecureasafeandsoundlifeandbefreefrompoverty wantandanxietyaboutfutureis ofcourse incurrentsituation tohaveacertainamountofmoneyinhand Inourdailylife variousthingsunexpectedandemergentmayfalluponus Inthesecases ifwehavesavings wecanmanagetoovercomethesecrisesmoreeasily Inaddition moneydissipatingandluxuriouslifecanweakenus Bycontrast justasAlbertEinsteinputit asimpleandunassuminglifeisgoodforeverybody physicallyandmentally Byandlarge whysomanypeopleadvocatespendingtomorrow smoneyandsomanyexclaimthedogmaisbeyondmyunderstanding Itseemsthatitcanbringusnothingbutanxietyandmoreuncertaintyaboutourlife whilesavingfortherainyday afinetraditionofChinesenationality canprovideuswiththegreatestsecurityandthebestsatisfaction MiddleSchoolLifeandCollegeLife Transitions P120 II Transitionsforcomparison Inthesameway like and both neither too also eachof thesame inaddition justas so aswellas similarly Transitionsforcontrast Although incontrast whereas ontheotherhand but while however yet conversely CityLifeandCountryLife CityLifeCountryLifeEnvironment Polluted noisy Freshair quietSpace Crowded SpaciousTransportation Moreconvenient LessconvenientEducation Moreadvanced LessadvancedEntertainment Colorful Dull BigCitiesVSSmallCities Thesis Reasons1 2 3 LivinginUniversityDormsorApartmentsInTheCommunity ComputersMustBeFemale byauniversitystudent Doyouhaveacomputer Doyouhaveagirlfriendorawife Ifyouhavebothofthem youwillfindthattheyhavemuchincommon Whenyouhaveagirlfriendorawife nomatterhownicesheis therewillalwaysbesomeonewhoseemsnicerthanshe butyoustillloveherandbelievesheisthebest Ifyoubuyacomputer youcancertainlyfindmanyothersintheshopwindowswhicharemuchcapableandmuchfaster But yourownoneisstilltheoneyoulikemost Right Ifagirlisangrywithyou shenevertellsyouwhy shejustkeepssilent Whencomputersrefusetowork theydon ttellyouthereasoneither Theyjustsay Error Youhavetofindoutwhatiswrongallbyyourself Bothgirlsandcomputerstendtogetangryeasily And it salwaysyourfault Well ifyouhaveacomputer don tcomplaintoomuch Takeyourmedicinelikeamanbecausesheisagirl EatingandReading AsacreatureIeat asamanIread Eatingistomeettheneedofthebody reading themindapleasure apastimebalanceofnutrition balanceofknowledgedigestingandassimilating understandingandmemorizingleaveoutrotten harmfulparts JourneyandLife Similarities sowhat makepreparationsinadvancebothhaveastartandanend cherishthelimitedtime beautifulthingstoappreciateagoodcompaniondifficulties brave optimistic confidentdestination aim meaningfullife Discussion DoYouPreferSelfDriveTourorPackageTour OtherTopics TheBestWaytoSolveTrafficCongestionDatingonCampusMarriageonCampusKeepingPets MobilePhone CellPhone aDouble EdgedSword Thesis Mobilephonebringsbothpositiveandnegativeeffects Positiveeffects 1 Withamobilephone peoplecancontactothersatanytime anywhere 2 Alsopeoplecankeepintouchwitheachotherbysendingshortmessages 3 Peoplecancallforhelpintimesofdangeroremergency Negativeeffects 1 Electro magneticwavefromthemobilephonedoesharmtohealth 2 Useofmobilephoneinsomepublicplaces theatre hospital library class meeting etc maydisturbotherpeople 3 Useofmobilephoneontheplaneornearthegasstationmayleadtomishaps 灾难 Conclusion Whileenjoyingtheconvenienceofmobilephone weshouldtrytoreduceitsnegativeeffects ShouldChinaEncouragePrivateCars Thesis Chinashouldnotencourageprivatecars Reasons 1 Increasingcarswillinevitablyresultinmoretrafficproblems moretrafficjamsandaccidents 2 Morecarsmeanmorepollution Result affectpeople shealthandmayincitesomeseverediseases 3 Morecarsmeanmoreconsumptionofpetrolandspeeduptheshortageofgasenergy Conclusion Chinashouldnotencourageprivatecars Instead Chinashouldlimittheincreaseofprivatecarsbeforeitistoolate andimprovepublictransportationsystembyprovidingmorebusesandbuildingsubways Thesis Chinashouldencourageprivatecars Reasons 1 Privatecarisasymbolofawealthysociety Itisanimportantelementinpeople slivingstandard Whileenjoyingthecomfortandconveniencebroughtbytheirowncars peoplemaybecomemoreenthusiasticinworkandenjoyabetterlife 2 Encouragingprivatecarsmaystimulatethedevelopmentofnationalautomobileindustryandotherrelatedindustries thusprovidingmorejobs 3 Whenpeoplehavemoreprivatecars theyareabletoconsiderbuyingalargehouseinthesuburb Thusalargecityisabletosetupsatellitetownsandrelievethedowntownfromcrowdedness Conclusion Chinashouldencourageprivatecarstoimprovepeople slivingstandardsanddevelopeconomyandsociety However weshouldtrytosolvetheproblemssuchaspollutionandshortageofenergybyfurtheradvanceofscience Notice April15Dearschoolmates I maseniorfromtheEnglishDepartment