英语图标作文浅析(补充).ppt

图表作文浅析 补充 copyrightbyxyk Attention WhatIpresentisjustasupplementofwhattheothertwoclassmateshaveshownlastweek Atfirst Letusseesomeopinionsofsucceededstudents tellingussomeitemsweshoulddrawattention Duringtheprocessofdescribingthetableorgraphatthefirstparagraph weshouldmakeourselvesstandoutamongothers usingadvancedwordsandhigh levelsentences Herearesomecommonsentencesstructure 1 常用的开篇句型 即概述图表内容时常用的表达法 Accordingtothetable piechart linegraph bargraph wecansee concludethat 根据该表 图 我们可知 Thetable graphreveals shows indicates illustrates represents pointsout that 该表 图表明 Aswecanseefromthetable Ascanbeseenfromtheline bargraph Asisshown illustrated indicated inthepiechart 如表 图所示 2 描述增减变化常用的句型 Comparedwith isstillincreasedby Thenumberof grew rosefrom to Anincreaseisshownin thencameasharpincreaseof In thenumberremainsthesame dropsto Therewasaveryslight small slow gradual rise increasein1990 Therewasaverysteady marked sharp rapid sudden dramatic drop decrease decline fall reduction in1998 comparedwiththatoflastyear Towriteangoodcompositionoftable thekeyistounderstandtheinformation suppliedbythetableorgraph Aftergettingtheinformationthetablehasgiven graspingtheconnectionamongthem analyzinganddrawingyourownconclusionsisalsoveryimportant Don tabusethedata Thecommoncompositioniswrotebythreeparagraphs Don tforgettowriteatopicsentencesatthebeginning Weshouldgraspthechiefdiscipline tendsandinducethem Let slookanexample Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionofnolessthan100wordsonIncomeSourcesbetweenChineseandAmericanStudents Studythefollowingtablecarefullyandyourcompositionmustbebasedontheinformationgiveninthetable Writethreeparagraphsto 1 DescribethedifferencesoftheincomesourcesbetweenChineseandAmericanstudents 2 Analyzepossiblereasonsforthesedifferences 3 Predicatefuturetendency IncomeSourcesBetweenChineseStudentsandAmericanStudentsIncomesourcesofChinesestudentsarequitedifferentfromthoseofAmericanstudents InChina studentsget90 oftheirmoneyfromtheirparentswhileinAmerica only50 ofstudents moneyisprovidedbyparents Inaddition Chinesestudentsearnonly5 oftheirmoneyfrompart timejobsand5 fromfellowshiporscholarshipwhileincomefromthesetworesourcesforAmericanstudentstakesup35 and15 respectivelyoftheirtotalincome Ithinkthereareprobablythreereasonsfortheirdifferences First becauseoftheinfluenceofdifferentsocialandfamilyvalues ChinesestudentshaveformedthehabitofaskingformoneyfromtheirparentswhileAmericanstudentshavedevelopedmoresenseofbeingfinanciallyindependent Second mostChineseparentsdevotetoomuchcaretotheirchildrenandtheywouldrathersaveuptoaffordtheirchildren seducationratherthanencouragethemtotakepart timejobs ButinAmerica manyparentspaymoreattentiontodevelopingthestudents abilityofself reliance sotheyencouragetheirchildrentofindpart timejobtoearnsomemoneybythemselves Third sinceAmericaismoredevelopedthanChina itisrelativelyeasyforstudentstofindpart timejobs InChina suchopportunitiesareratherrare IbelievewiththedevelopmentofChina moreandmoreChinesestudentswillrealizeandpaymoreattentiontothenecessityofselfdependence Inaddition moreandmoreopportunitieswillbeprovidedforthemtotakepart timejobs Somorestudentswillgooutoftheivorytowertobroadentheirknowledgeandtobecomethemasteroftheirownlives Commonmistakes 1 readsubjectcarelessly2 writetheconclusiondirectlywithoutanalyze missingthekeydata 3 theabilitytoanalyzeisnotverygood 4 lackoflanguageabilityofdescribing Atlast Someusefulwords 上升 increase rise ascend core surge goup climb mount levelup下降 decrease fall drop descend decline reduce lessen leveldown平稳 stable steady remain maintain keep bethesameas similarto波动 fluctuate fluctuation riseandfalls upanddown占 occupy takeup accountfor gain而 while howeve rwhereas ontheotherhand actually infact相比 bycontract onthecontrary likewise comparedwith最高点 thehighest thetop thesummit thepe