高考英语记叙文写作.ppt

storywriting HarryLi ClearideaCorrectgrammarCompletepassageBeautifullanguageBeautifulhandwriting Whatisgoodwriting Oneday Mr Liwasreadingabookinhisofficeafterschoolwhenaballbrokethewindowandhithimonthehead Shocked hetooktheballandcamedownstairstoseewhothrewtheball HemetalittleboyatthedoorwayandtheboysaiditwashewhohadthrownitandsaidsorrytoMr Li SoMr Lipraisedtheboyforhishonestyandtoldtheboytobemorecarefulnexttime Theboythankedhimforhiskindnessandsaidgoodbyetohim runningawaywiththeball Sixelements timeplacepersonbeginningprocessending Howtowriteapicturestory Tips1 Ihadaverybaddayyesterday Everythinggowrong Inthemorning myalarmclockdidn tringsoIwokeupanhourlate IaminsuchahurrythatIburnedmyhandwhenIwascookingbreakfast Correctanymistakes ThenIrunoutofthehousetocatchthe8 30bus butofcourseImissit IwasveryunhappybecauseIknowmyteachergotangryifanyonewaslateforclass SoIranthreemilestotheschool ButwhenIarrivedthereintheend IfindthatitwasSunday Correctanymistakes Howtowriteapicturestory Tips2 1 Thinkaboutthestoryyouwanttotell2 Payattentiontothetenseinstory3 Makealistofallthethingsthathappen 根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历 用英语写一篇故事 短文要写得连贯 完整 Sample1 Tom rideabikeAlongthestreet roadAfewdaysago theotherday oneday 2 Gooverthepictures who what where when why how Acar runfastto runoverhimTom falloffhisbikeSuddenly 2 Gooverthepictures who what where when why how Thedriver frightened runaway 2 Gooverthepictures who what where when why how Awoman rememberthenumberofthecarThepoliceThedriver catch 2 Gooverthepictures who what where when why how Keywords sentences Awomansawtheaccidentandrememberedthenumberofthecar Shecalledthepolice Thedriverwascaught rideabike runfastto seetheaccident rememberthenumber callthepolice becaught befrightened runaway hithim falloffhisbike WhenTomwasridingalongthestreet Acarranfasttohim Thecarhithim Andhefelloffhisbike Thedriverwassofrightenedthatheranaway Tomwasridingalongthestreet Acarranfasttohim Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike Thedriverwasfrightened Heranaway Awomansawtheaccident Sherememberedthenumberofthecar Shecalledthepoliceman Thedriverwascaught Passage1 Theotherday Tomwasridingalongthestreetwhenhesawacarrunfasttowardshim Heturnedleftquicklybutitwastoolate Thecarhithimandhefelloffhisbike Thedriverofthecarwassofrightenedthatheranawayasfastashecould Hewassoonoutofsight leavingTomhelplessonthespot Fortunately awomanhappenedtoseeitandrememberedthenumberofthecar Shecalledthepolicemanandtoldhimwhathadhappened Finally thedriverwascaughtandpunishedforhiswrongdoing Passage2 1 Useconnecti