高考英语作文写作技巧之-看图作文.ppt

英语作文的写作技巧之看图作文 请根据图画和所给词语的提示 叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事 然后 再根据此故事内容 发表你自己的感想 自拟 不得少于三点想法 开头已给出 Oneday XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover 一 描写图片 说明所发生的事 左边一幅图 1 女孩跌倒2 小明要帮她3 小明的母亲阻拦他说 不要扶 否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的 如何变图片为文字左边一幅图1 Oneday XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover 试题中已给出 2 XiaoMingwantedtohelpthegirlup 3 Hismotherstoppedhimandsaid Don tdothat otherwiseotherswillthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherdown 右边一幅图 1 有一天 小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子2 小明说 我扶了 你会说是我碰倒的 右边一幅图1 Anotherday themothersawthefallenoilbottleontheground 2 XiaoMingsaidtohismother 注意小明的话要用虚拟语气 IfIhadstraightenedthebottleup youwouldhavethoughtthatIdidit 二 谈感想1 我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法 不同意2 我想 父母应该为孩子树立好榜样 父母不仅要关心孩子的身体 还要关心他们的思想 父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事 因为我们生活在社会这个大家庭中 Idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory 2 Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren shealth buttheirminds Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble Becauseweliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus 五 增加结尾句 整理成文Oneday XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover Hewantedtohelpthegirlup buthismotherstoppedhimandsaid Don tdothat otherwiseotherswillthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherdown Anotherday themotherwasshockedtoseeXiaoMingjustletthefallenoilbottlebe sayingtohim Can tyouseethefallenoil Whycan tyoustraightenitup butXiaoMingsaidtohismother IfIhadstraightenedthebottleup youwouldhavethoughtthatIdidit Idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren shealth buttheirminds Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble Weliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus Everyoneshoulddosomethinggoodtobuildupoursociety right 例 WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsonthepictureandinstructionsgiven 2002上海高考题 1 描述图片whenachildislearningtoridebicycle theparentsandgrandparentsaresweating runningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotectthechildforfearthatsheshouldfallandhurtherself Itcanbeseenfromthepicturethat Accordingtotheabovepicture wecanseethat Inthepicture wecanseethat Inthispicturewecanseeagirllearningtorideabikewithherparentsandevengrand parentsrunningaroundher sweating Obviously theyintendtoprotectthechild forfearthatshemightfalloffthegethurt 2 陈述此图片反映的社会现象Duetotheone childpolicyinChina mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusuallyspoilthechildtoomuch Duetotheone childpolicy theonlykidsinmanyfamiliesareconsideredaskingsorqueens Theparents consciouslyorunconsciously haveofferedtoomuchhelpandmaketoomanydecisionsforthekids whichdefinitelyspoilthechildren Asaresult childrenbecomesodependentandincapablethattheymayfindithardtosurvivethefiercecompetitioninfuture 表明自己的观点和想法 提出建议Asthisphenomenahasbeenbecomingafiercesocialissue Manymeasurescanbetakentopreventitgettingmoreandmoreserious Astoparents it sbetterforthemtoprovideguidanceaswellasopportunitiesforkidstofallandfail astheyarerecognizedasaninevitablewaytogrowup Whileforthechildren it shightimethattheylearnedtosaynototheirparents unnecessaryprotection Atthesametime youngastheyare theyshouldmakeparentsbelievetheyareoldenoughtoaccumulate 累积 practicalexperienceinreallifeandpreparethemselvesforthefuture Theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselvesandareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneagerparent 总结Inconclusion thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles Onlywhenkidsdependonthemselvesratherthantheirparentscantheygetmatureandfaceeverythingwithconfidenceandcourageinthefuture Formanychild learningtobikecanbeafunexperience butthisisnotthecaseswiththegirlinthepicture whoobviouslyhasnofunatall Forfearthatshemayfalloffthebike herparentsareholdingthehandle withhergrandmothergivingahardpushfrombehind Thethreeadultsaredrippingwithsweatwhilethegitlissittingonthesaddlewonderingwhoactuallyislearningtobikeabike Theyhavewithoutdoubtgonetoofarprotectingthegitl Today sparentsseemtobetooprotectiveoftheirchildren whi