高二学英语报第五期作文讲评.ppt

学英语报高二第五期作文讲评 作者缪丽红 Candy 富阳二中 题目假设你是李华 你的美国笔友Jason来信说暑假准备去加拿大旅游 请你根据以下要点给他回一封邮件 要点 1 祝他旅途愉快 2 请他记录旅游见闻和感受 3 邀请他明年暑假来中国旅游 注意 1 词数100 1202 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 3 1 体裁 书信2 人称 第一 二人称3 时态 一般将来 现在时 审题 可用句型1 Thereisgoingtobemuchpleasureinyourtravel 2 Itisnecessarytowritewhatyou3 Onlyif canyou 4 Itis that who 5 With 6 Iconsider think believeit to 3 开头 3 DearJason I mglad happytohearfromyou It sniceto 3 请他记录旅游见闻和感受 Thereisnodoubtthattravelingoutsideisagoodwaytoexpandoureyesandknowcustomsinothercountriesbetter So Iconsideritnecessaryforyoutowritedownwhatyouseeandhearinyourjournal 邀请他明年暑假来中国旅游 3 IwishyouhaveagoodtimetrvelinginCanadasincerely Andthen itisyouwhoIreallywanttoinvitetocometoChinatonextsummervacation ItisworwhiletopayavisittoChina Onlyifyouseeyourselfcanyoufeelherbeauty I mwaitingforyourarrvial combineall 3 DearJason I mgladtohearfromyou WhatexcitesmeisthatyouaregoingtoCanadaforyoursummerholiday BecauseCanadaistheplacewhereIlongtogo IwishyouhaveagoodtimetrvelinginCanadasincerely Thereisnodoubtthattravelingoutsidecanexpandoureyesandknowcustomsinothercountriesbetter So Iconsideritnecessaryforyoutowritedownwhatyouseeandhearinyourjournal Andthen itisyouwhoIreallywanttoinvitetocometoChinatonextsummervacation ItisworwhiletopayavisittoChina Onlyifyouseeyourselfcanyoufeelherbea