高考作文Writing写出正确的句子.ppt

Writing 写出正确的句子 1 I mverylikeyouIlikeyoueverymuch2 ThebookisTomsells ThebookissoldbyTom3 Theyallveryhappy Theyareallveryhappy 4 IhaveanewswilltellyouIhaveapieceofnewstotellyou 五种基本句型 1 主语 系动词 表语2 主语 不及物动词3 主语 及物动词 宾语4 主语 及物动词 宾语 宾语补足语5 主语 及物动词 宾语1 宾语2 Compoundsentences Wetookaphotowherestandsamonument adverbialclause 状语从句 Thetreatmentwillcontinueuntilthepatientreachesthepointwherehecanwalksafelyandcorrectly attributiveclause 定语从句 Iwonderwherehegetthesestrangeideas objectclause 宾语从句 Itiswherehelives TheAmericanandChinahasadifferenceinAmericahaveafewdifferencesintheeducationsystem 车明慧TheAmericansecondaryschoolsystemisdifferenttheChina fromthatofTherethreegradeintheMiddleSchool马莉莉 aregrades InAmerica Whenchildren11 12 theyareare11or12Grade6th 孙喜萌insix the6thgradeLessonone thefirstlesson 1 Atthattime I mverynervousbeforethewascompetition Iwanttogiveup Buteveryonewantedencouragedme 2 Forthisway interestedinEnglish Ibegan In 3 ThemoreIlearnEnglish thebetterwill 王芙雨thebettermyEnglishwiilbe Americanstudentneedattendjuniorschoolatstudentsshouldtheageof11to12 orandtheirjunioryearonlythreeyears thereareonlythreeyearsoftheirjunioryear Attheageof12to13 Theyareingrade7th andattheageof13to14 Theywillreceivingtheirjuniorschooldiploma andattheendofthejunioryeartheyhaveaprom Attheageof12or13 theywillbeingrade7 whentheyare13or14 theywillreceivetheirjuniorschooldiplomasandattheendofthesenioryeartheywillhaveaprom After schooltheyhavemanydifferentkindofactivities suchasplaysocceronthesportsfield workasamediatorandsonon Itmakesthemrelaxanddynamic butinChina wecouldn tdoallofthis Itwaswedomoreactivitiesthatbadtoourstudy sowedon thaveenoughdynamic After schooltheyhavemanydifferentkindofactivities suchasplaysocceronthesportsfield workasamediatorandsoon Itmakesthemrelaxanddynamic butinChina wecouldn tdoallofthis Itwaswedomoreactivitiesthatbadtoourstudy sowedon thaveenoughdynamic Afterschool theyhavemanydifferentkindsofactivities suchasplayingsocceronthesportsfield workingasamediatorandsoon Itmakesthemrelaxedanddynamic ButinChina wecouldn tdoallofthis anditisthatwedolessactivitiesthatisbadtoourhealth sowedon thaveenoughenergytostudy IthinkAmerican sschoolsystemisverygood Ifhavelikely IthinkChinacanalsodothis Ifitispossible IhopeChinacanalsodolike asthis TherehavefourgradesinSeniorHighareSchoolinAmerica 6 Youneedchooseahoteltostay tostayin TheAmericanSecondarySchoolSystemEducationisimportanttoeveryone InAmerica theyhaveasecondarySchoolSystem whichhastwoparts middleschoolandsecondarySchool Thesetwopartsaresimilartooursexceptalittledifference Inourcountry middleschoolhasfourgradesandseniorhighschoolhasthreegrades ButinAmerica it scontrary Americanchildrenattendmiddleschoolwhentheyare11 12 andgraduateintheir14 Americanusuallystarttheirseniorhighschoollifeattheageof15 Thereissomethinginteresting TheycallthelastyearofSeniorhighschoolsenioryear andwhentheyendthisyear theywouldbe18yearsold Thereisapromwaitingforthem Educationisimportanttoeveryone InAmerica thereisasecondarySchoolSystem includingtwoparts middleschoolandsecondarySchool whichissimilartooursexceptafewdifferences Inourcountry therearefourgradesinMiddleSchoolandthreegradesinSeniorHighSchool Onthecontrary inAmerica therearethreegradesinMiddleSchoolandfourgradesinSeniorHighSchool AmericanchildrenattendMiddleSchoolwhentheyare11or12 andgraduateat13or14yearsold Americanstudentsusuallystarttheirseniorhighschoollifeattheageof15or16 Thereissomethinginteresting TheycallthelastyearofSeniorHighSchoolsenioryear whentheyareinthisyear theywouldbe18yearsoldandtherewillbeapromwaitingforthem 审题草稿1 列提纲 要点2 连词成句3 连句成篇4 润色修正定稿 写作步骤 体裁人称时态要求 字数内容 应用文 书信格式 第一 三人称 一般现在时 过去时 高分口诀 主动不如被动巧 宾语从句是活宝 定语从句必须要 分词结构不能少 肯定不如双否好 陈述不如倒装妙 长句短句结合造 一些模板要记牢 正确的谓语 时态 语态 句子结构 主动不如被动巧Beijinghostedthe29thOlympicGameswithgreatsuccess The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithgreatsuccess Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost andwecankeepthemfortendays Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays 一些模板要记牢IwouldliketodoItisnecessaryforustodo Thankyouforwritingtome I mwritingtotellyouthat First second third What smore moreover besides Somethink othersthink I msure However ontheonehand ontheotherhand 适用于两点的情况 foronething foranotherthing 适用于两点的情况take asanexample 定语从句必须要I llaskmyclassmatesforsomeadvicewhichmaybeofgreatvaluetome 分词结构不能少 2005 咨询旅游价钱 BecauseIamastudent I dliketoknowthepriceforstudents 改成 Beingastudent I dliketoknowthepriceforstudents 肯定不如双否好 Ihaveneverheardabettervoice Hervoiceisthebest 陈述不如倒装妙 Thedooropened Tomcamein Thedooropened IncameTom 增加高级结构 二 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 三 巧用倒装增强句子表现力 四 一 使用较高级词汇 强调句 五 With短语复合结构 一 使用较高级词汇1 Manypeoplewanttovisitthestadium Manypeoplearedyingtovisitthestadium 2 Thestadiumisuseful Thestadiumisofgreatvalue 二 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档The29thOlympicGamesweresuccessfullyended Itleftmanystadiumsunused The29thOlympicGamesweresuccessfullyended leavingmanystadiumsunused 三 巧用倒装增强句子表现力IrealizedthatIwaswrongonlythen OnlythendidIrealizethatIwaswrong 四 强调句ItisIwhoamwrong五 With短语复合结构IwilldowellintheexamwithMr Chenteachingme 气球在桥上汉语可以指气球在桥面上 也可以指气球在桥的上空英语要用不同介词来描写点 线 面和体的不同维度关系 Theballoonisonthebridge 表示气球是接触桥面的 是静止状态Theballoonisabovethebridge说明气球在桥上面 但不一定在垂直的上方Theballoonisoverthebridge 表示气球在桥的上空 很可能是飘过的 是动态的 问题小结 1 时态语态问题2 介词短语问题3 连词问题4 词性混淆问题5 冠词问题6 定语从句关系词问题7 非谓语动词问题8 结构问题9 固定搭配问题10 代词问题 练标准的套路取作文的进步 Theenvironmentwillbeimprove improvedMostofsnacksbelongtounhealthyfoodMostsnacks mostofthesnacksmanyboysmanyoftheboysWhat smore therearestudentsthrowwrappersthrowingwhothrow Inmyopinion Ithinkstudentscanenjoystarsintheirspacetime spareThismakemeveryconfused mademakes Itisn tagoodmannerandIdon tlikeit too eitherForexample oneday wewalkedonaroadandyouthrowedgarbageontheground threwAsaresult apasserpassedbyandhehurtwashurtpast ThevolunteertowhichIspokesaidconditionsweredifficult towhomThevolunteersaidconditionsweredifficult IspoketothevolunteerSecond ifyouwantimproveyourEnglishtoimprove Highschoolisregardedasthebesttimeofmylife Besides classandhomework there ssomethingmorethatIespeciallytreasure BesidesclassandhomeworkSoifIamexpectedtotheUniversityofColumbia IwilltrymybesttolearneverythingthatIdon tknow Iamacceptedby Iamadmittedto 王楠楠 Ithinkthattheenvironmentinfuturewillbemorebeautiful becausepeoplerealizedthatprotectenvironmentisimportant willrealizeprotectingHighschoolisregardasthebesttime regared ThenI dliketohaveawordwithwhohavemisunderstoodme thosewho whoever1 Itis Ilivenow2 Itistheplace Ilivenow AwhereB inwhichInaddition itisnecessaryformetohaveatalkwithwhoevermighthavemisunderstoodme ThehotelawayfromtheentrancetoBaishan500meters Thehotelis500metersawayfromtheentrancetoBaishan Youcanfreeofchargeswimming Youcanswimfreeofcharge Theswimmingpoolfreeofcharge 1 Weareloveusparents Weloveourparents 2 YouisconsideredoneofthebestHongKongmoviestar YouareconsideredasoneofthebestmoviestarsinHongKong 3 I magreetothemostofpeople Iagreewithmostpeople mostofthepeople 4 Therewasatrafficaccidenthappenedathappening whichhappenedthesecondcornerofXinhuaRoadat9 00am 5 Theythinkmusiccanbringhappytopeoplehappiness6 Theyneverfriendlytome are7 Itismakesmehappy Itmakesmehappy 8 Wewereverythankforyourhelp Wethankyouverymuchforyourhelp 9 Youcanbybus Youcangobybus 10 Istillthinkmusicmakesusheartquite Istillthinkmusicmakesuscalmdown 11 It smakesushappy Itmakesushappy 12 Ihearfromyourletter Ihearfromyou get receiveyourletter13 Manystudentswanttolistenmusicintheirfreetime 14 Ihavefoundaroomwhichnotfarfrom