高考英语讲座五：发言稿类写作

1 高考英语讲座五 发言稿类写作高考英语讲座五 发言稿类写作 第一节第一节 发言稿类写作概述发言稿类写作概述 发言稿类书面表达也是高考书面表达常见类型之一 发言稿是生活中一种常见的应用 文体 发言稿一般由称呼语 正文和结束语三部分组成 发言稿的开头和结尾一般有固定 的格式 高考试题在命题形式上侧重于考查发言稿正文的写法 下面举例说明 如 2010 年高考四川卷英语书面表达 假定你校将举行一个成人仪式 你将作为代表在仪式上发言 请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿 1 过去对成年的向往 2 现在的感受和认识 3 将来的目标及措施 参考词汇 责任 responsibility 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 使行文连贯 3 发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好 不计入总词数 Good morning everyone The topic of my speech today is thoughts on becoming a grown up Thank you for listening 参考范文 Good morning everyone The topic of my speech today is Thoughts on becoming a grown up As a child I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked Now I m a grown up but I find things do not go as I expected Although I can enjoy more freedom at the same time I realize that being a grown up not only means this but also more responsibilities I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful To reach the goal I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university Thank you for your listening 再如 2010 年高考江苏卷英语书面表达 假设你应邀参加学校组织的 英语学习师生座 谈会 请你根据下表所提示的信息 用英语写一篇发言稿 简单介绍自己英语学习的情况 并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议 2 注意 1 对所给要点逐一陈述 适当发挥 不要简单翻译 2 词数 150 左右 开头和结尾已经写好 不计人总词数 3 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名 Dear teacher and schoolmates It s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you Thank you for listening 参考范文 Dear teacher and schoolmates It s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you I m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future Naturally it s very important for me to learn English well As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language just like bricks in a building I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible After class I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio Besides I ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources Now I d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school Firstly we should be given more opportunities to use what we ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it Secondly I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them Finally 1 suggest we have more English activities such as English contests and festivals Thank you for listening 欢迎词和欢送词也是常见的发言稿内容 例如下面这篇书面表达 假如你叫李明 你 的同学汤姆一年前随父母来中国 现在要回国了 请你代表全班同学起草一篇欢送辞 内 容包括 1 在中国逗留期间 你们的经历 2 一年以来汤姆对你们英语学习的影响 3 你们的希望 1 英语学习的目的 2 英语学习的方法 3 课外自学的途径 自己英语 学习的情 况 对学校英 语教学的 建议 请考生根据自己的经历与感想 提出两至三点建议 3 注意 1 词数不少于 120 个词 2 文章应包括所有要点 Dear friends 参考范文 Dear friends Today we are having a party in honor of our close friend Tom who is returning to his own country with his parents How time flies It has been one years since he came to our school During this period we have helped each other thus having become good friends What s more due to his help and encouragement many of us have become more interested in English and have made great progress in it We all hope that when he returns to his homeland he will get in touch with us as often as possible We also hope that he will come to China again some day Good luck Tom And good luck to your family May you have a pleasant trip home Thank you 下面的书面表达是一篇告别演讲 假设你将作为新华中学高三毕业生代表 请根据以 下要点在毕业晚会上用英文作一个告别演讲 1 感谢家人 朋友和老师 特别举例感谢某个老师 不用真名 一律使用 Mr Zheng 并写出原因 2 回顾高中三年的生活 列举出你印象深刻的活动 3 展望未来 注意 开头与结尾已经给出 所写部分 120 字左右 Dear teachers families and graduates welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xnhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2010 Finally best wishes to the Class of 2010 Thank you very much 参考范文 Dear teachers families and graduates welcome and thank you for joining us tonight at Xinhua High School graduation ceremony for the Class of 2010 4 First let me thank all our families and friends for their love and support on behalf of the graduates I also want to thank our diligent teachers for guiding us through to this moment My personal thanks to Mr Zheng you got me through Math when I had given up hope Graduation is a time to go over enjoyable memories which have been made over the past three years Many events become so vivid in my mind at this moment military training soccer and basketball games However graduation is also a time to look forward to the future in front of us No matter what you plan next I hope you can go about it positively Each of you will create your own unique path Let s remember the saying attitude determines altitude Please always keep a smile on your face Finally best wishes to the Class of 2010 Thank you very much 下面探讨发言稿类书面表达的要点处理 第二节第二节 发言稿类写作要点处理发言稿类写作要点处理 发言稿语言要简洁明快 发言时因为要直接面对听众 所以发言稿的特定形式决定了 其语言的口语性强 因此要适量使用复杂句型 换句话说 句子结构太复杂 听众难以理 解 多用简单句 话说的要准确 易懂 最好运用大众语言 所以我们在组织句子时要注 意 三多一少 即简单句式多 祈使句多 情态动词多 现在我们举例讨论发言稿类书面 表达的基本要点处理 例如 2010 年湖南卷英语书面表达 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部 开展了 为期两个月的活动 现在 你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流 请写一篇英语发言稿 主要内容如下 1 简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动 2 谈谈你们开展该活动的收获 注意 1 词数不少于 120 个 2 不能使用真实姓名和学校名 下面对这篇书面表达的要点进行梳理 首先 背景要点 1 和几位同学成立了一个英 语俱乐部 背景要点 2 开展了为期两个月的活动 整理好背景要点 自然而然的进入到主体要点的讨论 这篇书面表达主体要点内容开 放 考生有很大的发挥空间 主体要点 1 俱乐部开展的一项活动 主体要点 2 我们的收 获 下面表达上述两类要点 背景要点 1 和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部 可以表达为 It is two months since we set up the English club 或者 Two months ago some classmates and I set up the English club 背景要点 2 开展了为期两个月的活动 可以表达为 We have held some activities so far 或者 We have arranged some activities in the past two months 主体要点 1 俱乐部开展的一项活动 可以表达为 One of the activities is the English 5 corner 主体要点 2 我们的收获 这个要点需要围绕上面所说的活动展开描述 一定要合情 合理 可以这样表达 Students have made a lot of progress in their oral English We have also made many new friends 合并上面两类要点 可以得到下面两篇初稿 第一篇 It is two months since we set up the English club We have held some activities so far One of the activities is the English corner Students have made a lot of progress in their oral English We have also made many new friends 第二篇 Two months ago some classmates and I set up the English club We have arranged some activities in the past two months One of the activities is the English corner Students have made a lot of progress in their oral English We have also made many new friends 再以 2009 年高考安徽卷英语书面表达为例 假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛 请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象 写一篇演讲稿 陈述你的观点 演讲稿的主要内容应包括 认为同学们不必为此苦恼 希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 建议与父母进行交流和沟通 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头和结尾已为你写好 不计入总词数 Good morning ladies and gentleman Some of us are having problems with our parents as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries Thank you 现在对这篇书面表达的两类要点进行处理 根据所给开头 很容易确定背景要点 有 些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包 主体要点很明确 有三个 主体要点 1 认为同学们不必为此苦恼 主体要点 2 希望 能够体谅父母的苦衷 主体要点 3 建议与父母进行交流和沟通 这里只需要处理三个主体要点 主体要点 1 认为同学们不必为此苦恼 可以表达为 There is no need to feel too sad 或者 We don t have to feel too annoyed 6 主体要点 2 希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 可以表达为 Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we re not getting into any trouble 或者 Our parents check our bags or diaries hoping to give us more help in our life 主体要点 3 建议与父母进行交流和沟通 可以表达为 My suggestion is we find time to stay and communicate with them from time to time 合并上面要点 可以得到下面两篇初稿 第一篇 There is no need to feel too sad Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we re not getting into any trouble My suggestion is we find time to stay and communicate with them from time to time 第二篇 We don t have to feel too annoyed Our parents check our bags or diaries hoping to give us more help in our life My suggestion is we find time to stay and communicate with them from time to time 下面再以一篇开幕词为例 2009 年高考天津卷英语书面表达 假设你是晨光中学的学 生会主席李华 学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛 本年度的主题为 The English Novel I Like Best 作为组织者 你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言 请你根据以下提示用英语 写一篇发言稿 1 说明比赛的意义 如提高英语听说能力 养成读书的习惯等 2 说明比赛的注意事项 如每人演讲不超过 5 分钟 语言流利 发音准确等 3 预祝比赛圆满成功 注意 1 词数 不少于 100 词 2 可适当加入细节 以使行文连贯 3 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好 不计入词数 Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen Welcome to this year s English speech competition Thank you 对这篇书面表达的要点进行处理 背景要点 演讲比赛马上开始 这个要点已经给出 7 主体要点很明确 主体要点 1 比赛有帮助 如提高英语听说能力 养成读书的习惯 主体要点 2 比赛要求每人演讲不超过 5 分钟 语言流利 发音准确 主体要点 3 预祝比 赛取得成功 下面表达上述要点 主体要点 1 比赛有帮助 如提高英语听说能力 养成读书的习 惯 可以表达为 Attending such activity is really meaningful It s good for us to improve our speaking and listening skills and helps us form the good habit of reading 或者这样表达 The speech competition is very helpful By attending such activity we ll improve our speaking and listening We ll also develop the good habit of reading 主体要点 2 比赛要求每人演讲不超过 5 分钟 语言流利 发音准确 可以表达为 Make sure to limit your speech to 5 minutes Fluent English and correct pronunciation are expected 或者表达为 Remember finish your speech within 5 minutes And we expect to hear fluent English and correct pronunciation 主体要点 3 预祝比赛取得成功 可以表达为 Let s hope the competition will be a great success 或者表达为 I wish the competition a success 合并上面要点可以得到下面两篇初稿 第一篇 Attending such activity is really meaningful It s good for us to improve our speaking and listening skills and helps us form the good habit of reading Make sure to limit your speech to 5 minutes Fluent English and correct pronunciation are expected Let s hope the competition will be a great success 第二篇 The speech competition is very helpful By attending such activity we ll improve our speaking and listening We ll also develop the good habit of reading Remember finish your speech within 5 minutes And we expect to hear fluent English and correct pronunciation I wish the competition a success 通过上面的例子 不难看出 发言稿类书面表达的要点提供的方式与话题类书面表达 类似 即往往以短文形式 要点提纲形式或者表格形式给出提示 下面一节探讨发言稿类 书面表达要点的细节添加技巧 第三节 发言稿类写作细节增添技巧第三节 发言稿类写作细节增添技巧 我们说过 发言稿一般由称呼语 正文和结束语三部分组成 发言稿的开头和结尾 一般有固定的格式 所以如果遇到没有格式内容 或者格式内容不全的发言稿类的书面表 8 达 要注意添加格式信息添加格式信息 常见开头 常见开头 Dear friends I am very glad to give a speech here Dear friends it is a great honor for me to speak here to welcome our guests Good morning boys and girls Good afternoon everyone Good evening Ladies and gentlemen 常见结尾 常见结尾 That s all Thank you Thank you for listening 如果是欢迎词 欢送词 开幕词 闭幕词 结尾往往要表示欢迎 祝愿或者感谢如果是欢迎词 欢送词 开幕词 闭幕词 结尾往往要表示欢迎 祝愿或者感谢 发言稿的格式内容也比较固定 考生只要在日常注意积累 不难掌握 发言稿类的信息添加主要还是体现在围绕一些主体要点 进行适量适宜添加 下面仍 以上面的例子展示信息添加技巧 2010 年湖南卷英语书面表达 假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部 开展了为期 两个月的活动 现在 你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流 请写一篇英语发言稿 主 要 内容如下 1 简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动 2 谈谈你们开展该活动的收获 注意 1 词数不少于 120 个 2 不能使用真实姓名和学校名 通过整理两类要点 进行表达 已经得到下面两篇初稿 第一篇 It is two months since we set up the English club We have held some activities so far One of the activities is the English corner Students have made a lot of progress in their oral English We have also made many new friends 第二篇 Two months ago some classmates and I set up the English club We have arranged some activities in the past two months One of the activities is the English corner Students have made a lot of progress in their oral English We have also made many new friends 通过对这两篇初稿进行两类细节添加 可以得到下面两篇定稿 所添加细节用黑斜体 下划波浪线标注 第一篇如下 Hello everybody Thank you for coming to exchange our opinions It is two months since we set up the English club We have held some activities so far which are interesting and successful A lot of students have taken part in these activities and had a good time One of the activities is the English corner Every Friday after school many students come to the large classroom where the English corner is held There we carry out dialogues in pairs discuss topics that we are interested in and make public speeches Students have made a lot of progress in their oral English We have also made many new friends 9 Students have benefited a lot from these activities As organizers we are really proud I hope more and more students come and enjoy these activities Thank you 这篇习作文章要点完整 思路清晰 选词准确 格式规范 信息添加合理适度 众多 的精彩句型和表达使整篇文章文笔生动 总词数 136 词 整体上是一篇佳作 再看第二篇 Good morning dear students It is a great honor to stand here and share experience with you Two months ago some classmates and I set up the English club in order to help students study English We have arranged some activities in the past two months I m glad to see that the activities turned out to be very successful and were welcomed by students One of the activities is the English corner Every Sunday afternoon after students come back to school many students come to take part in the English corner There we speak English freely and talk about topics that we are interested in Students have made a lot of progress in their oral English We have also made many new friends Students have benefited a lot from these activities I hope more and more students come and enjoy these activities Thank you 这篇作文总词数 143 词 作者能够严格按照提示要点和题目要求进行习作 发言稿格 式完整 语言流畅 内容充实 选取的事例可信 一气呵成 是一篇亮点荟萃的中学生佳 作 再以 2009 年高考安徽卷英语书面表达为例 假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛 请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象 写一篇演讲稿 陈述你的观点 演讲稿的主要内容应包括 认为同学们不必为此苦恼 希望能够体谅父母的苦衷 建议与父母进行交流和沟通 注意 1 词数 100 左右 2 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 开头和结尾已为你写好 不计入总词数 Good morning ladies and gentleman Some of us are having problems with our parents as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries Thank you 通过对这篇书面表达的两类要点进行处理 已经得到下面两篇初稿 第一篇 10 There is no need to feel too sad Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we re not getting into any trouble My suggestion is we find time to stay and communicate with them from time to time 第二篇 We don t have to feel too annoyed Our parents check our bags or diaries hoping to give us more help in our life My suggestion is we find time to stay and communicate with them from time to time 通过对两篇初稿进行细节添加 可以得到下面两篇定稿 已给内容用黑体下划横线标 注 Good morning ladies and gentleman Some of us are having problems with our parents as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries In my opinion there is no need to feel too sad Although we should have our own space and secrets we must understand our parents Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we re not getting into any trouble However many students fail to understand them As a result they often become so angry that they have a bad relationship with their parents My suggestion is we find time to stay and communicate with them from time to time Thus they will know what we are doing and will not look into our bags or read our diaries We must know that our parents love us and want to help us Do you agree with me Thank you 这篇作文不包括所给开头和结尾 总词数 119 词 作者能够做到认真审题 并且严格 按照作文提示和要求进行写作 文章语言地道 语法规范 衔接自然 行文流畅 充分展 示了作者大量的语言积累和娴熟的语言应用技能 再如第二篇 Good morning ladies and gentleman Some of us are having problems with our parents as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries We don t have to feel too annoyed Our parents check our bags or diaries hoping to give us more help in our life Unfortunately many students fail to realize this They often get angry with their parents which often lead to a bad relationship between them As a result the atmosphere 11 in the family is embarrassing Some students even can t concentrate well in their study My suggestion is we find time to stay and communicate with them from time to time Since our parents want to know what we are doing and want to help us why not tell them Talks will bring understanding between parents and kids That s all Thank you 不包括所给开头 这篇作文总词数 110 词 作者按照行文要求 在表达所有要点的同 时适当发挥 丰富了文章的内容 这是一篇文采和内容并茂的高考满分作文 不难看出作 者在平常的学习中能够注意积累和思考 善于观察生活细节 从而在作文中充分展示了自 己的水平 下面再看开幕词 2009 年高考天津卷英语书面表达 假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席 李华 学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛 本年度的主题为 The English Novel I Like Best 作为组织者 你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言 请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿 1 说明比赛的意义 如提高英语听说能力 养成读书的习惯等 2 说明比赛的注意事项 如每人演讲不超过 5 分钟 语言流利 发音准确等 3 预祝比赛圆满成功 注意 4 词数 不少于 100 词 5 可适当加入细节 以使行文连贯 6 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好 不计入词数 Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen Welcome to this year s English speech competition Thank you 对这篇书面表达的要点进行整理表达已经得到下面两篇初稿 第一篇 Attending such activity is really meaningful It s good for us to improve our speaking and listening skills and helps us form the good habit of reading Make sure to limit your speech to 5 minutes Fluent English and correct pronunciation are expected Let s hope the competition will be a great success 第二篇 12 The speech competition is very helpful By attending such activity we ll improve our speaking and listening We ll also develop the good habit of reading Remember fi