人教版高中必修Uni Writing求助信ppt课件.ppt

ALetterofAskingforHelp 求助信的写作指导1 正确把握时态写求助信通常是因为目前自己或他人遇到了一些困难 需要对方的帮助 因此应以一般现在时为主 在叙述求助原因和事情经过时应恰当使用过去时态 2 贴切使用过度性词语列举自己所碰到的困难时 可用first besides what smore等过度性词语 请求对方提供一系列的帮助时 可用inthemeanwhile atthesametime inaddition also等过度性词语 当写信需要时 要恰当使用这些词语 以使行文连贯 熟悉常用句型写英文求助信时需要经常用到下面的一些句型 1 说明写作目的时可用 Mynameis I mwritingtoyouforsomehelp I mwritingtoyoutogetsomehelp Iamwritingtoyoutoaskforsome yourhelp 2 简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用 Ihavemuchdifficultyin Facedwithsomanydifficulties Ihaveto IwouldliketoknowhowcanI Doyouhavesomegoodadviceon 2 简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用 Ihavemuchdifficultyin Facedwithsomanydifficulties Ihaveto IwouldliketoknowhowcanI Doyouhavesomegoodadviceon 3 请求对方做某事时可用 Ireallydon twanttobotheryou butIreally Wouldyouoffermesomeadvice Doyouhavesomegoodadviceon Wouldyouliketo Iwouldlikeyouto Iwonderwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor Whatdoyouthink Whatifwe Whatifweusethename Moonlight 4 展望获得帮助后和表示感谢的表达 I msurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress Iwillappreciateanyofyourhelp and Itwillbeappreciatedifyoucan Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould would 5 表示期待对方回复时可用 Iwouldappreciateyourreplyofferingsomesuggestions Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou I mlookingforwardtoyourreply Iamlookingforwardtoreceivingyouradviceletterandthankyouinadvance 这些句型不但使用频率高 而且语气委婉 态度谦恭 符合求助信的语言特点 Theoutlineoftheletter Dearxx Mynameis I mwriting Ihavemuchdifficultyin Introducethepurposeofwritingtheletterandyourproblems Facedwith Ihavetoaskforyourhelp Wouldyouliketo Inthemeanwhile Ibegyouto sothat inorderthat Also Iwouldlikeyouto Askforhelp I msurethatIcan withyourhelp Itwillbeappreciatedifyoucanhelpmeto Lookforwardtoyourreply yours XX Predicttheeffectandexpressthanks Signature 熟悉求助信常用句型 1 说明写作目的时可用 Mynameis I mwritingtoyouforsomehelp I mwritingtoyoutogetsomehelp Iamwritingtoyoutoaskforsome yourhelp 2 简要交待自己所遇到的困难时可用 Ihavemuchdifficultyin Facedwithsomanydifficulties Ihaveto IwouldliketoknowhowcanI Doyouhavesomegoodadviceon 3 请求对方做某事时可用 Ireallydon twanttobotheryou butIreally Wouldyouoffermesomeadvice Doyouhavesomegoodadviceon Wouldyouliketo Iwouldlikeyouto Iwonderwhetheryoucoulddomeafavor Whatdoyouthink Whatifwe Whatifweusethename Moonlight 4 展望获得帮助后和表示感谢的表达 I msurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress Iwillappreciateanyofyourhelp and Itwillbeappreciatedifyoucan Iwouldbegratefulifyoucould would 5 表示期待对方回复时可用 Iwouldappreciateyourreplyofferingsomesuggestions Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou I mlookingforwardtoyourreply Iamlookingforwardtoreceivingyouradviceletterandthankyouinadvance DearFreddy politegreetingParagraph1 thepurposeandthesituationParagraph2 theproblemsinyourbandParagraph3 endingYourssincerely hopefully politeendingLiHua yourname Structureoftheletter Writingtask 你和你的朋友想组建你们自己的乐队 但你从来没有在乐队里演奏过 现在你想写一封信给Freddy 向他求助 询问他的建议 信的开头已经给出 P39 请完成后部分的内容 提示 根据Freddy的回信 完成求助信正文里问题的阐述 可适当扩展 字数 除了开头100字左右 Content Areyourideasclearandtothepoint 观点是否清晰 Haveyouusedlinkingwordsproperly 有没有用连接词 Haveyouwrittenwithpropertopicsentenceandsupportingsentences Accuracy Arethereanyspellingorgrammaticalmistakes 是否有拼写或语法错误 Handwriting Isyourhandwritingneatandeasytoread 书写是否工整 Step4Assessment DearFreddy MynameisLiHua I mbeginningabandwithmyfriends However wehaveneverbeeninabandbefore Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice Iwouldliketoknowwhatmusictoplayandwecannotdecide Ilikepopmusicbutmostofmyfriendslikerock n roll LiuMeilikesrap Howarewetodecidewhattoplay Doyousuggestweplayalittleofallofthesetypesofmusic Orshouldweonlyplayonekindofmusic Howdidyouandyourfriendsdecidewhattoplay Wehopeyoucangiveussomeadvice Yourshopefully LiHua Sampleletter politegreeting thepurposeandthesituation theproblems thepoliteending yourname DearFreddy MynameisZhouYufei I mbeginning startingabandwithmyfriends Canyoupleasegiveussomeadviceaboutpractising Shouldweinviteourfriendstolistentousandgiveussuggestions Shouldwefindaquietplacewherewewillnotbotherotherswithnoise Inyouropinion what sthebesttimetopracticeourmusic Ifyouarefacedwiththeseproblems whatwouldyoudo Anyadvicewillbeabighelp Sinc