重庆渝中区2016高考英语二轮训练及答案：短文改错（4）

高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 1 重庆渝中区 2016 高考英语二轮训练及答案 短文改错 4 河北省唐山一中河北省唐山一中 短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 l 分 满分 l0 分 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文 中共有l0处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修 改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改l0处 多者 从第11处起 不计分 参考答案参考答案 短文改错 短文改错 Though great progress has made in science these years there been are still many people lived in poor conditions They make their living living by collecting and selling used thing Their children cannot go to school things because they have not enough money to send their children to there Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now do The answer lies on the population explosion A president of a developing in country once said It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to we 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 2 produce child without limit Although these few words sound simple enough children but they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion clearly 2012 模拟短文改错 M Today we went to climb the West Hill Early in morning 1 we started out and arrived an hour late Then we began 2 to climb The hill was high and some of us got tired 3 soon and all of us were very excited We cheered 4 happily when we got the top We had our lunch there 5 and had enjoyed ourselves very much Unfortunately 6 when we walked down the hill We were caught by 7 a rain We remained calmly shared umbrellas and 8 raincoats and walked carefully Finally we both reached 9 the parking lot safely In spite of the unexpecting rain 10 and wind we had a good time 参考答案及解析 1 morning前加the 考查冠词的用法 注意习语in the morning 2 late改为later 考查副词比较级的用法 此处表示 迟到了一小时 故用比较级 3 正确 经分析本句正确 4 and改为but 考查句间的逻辑关系 根据文意此处为转折关系 5 got后加to或got改为reached 考查动词的用法 此处the top作宾语 故改为got to 或及 物动词reached 6 去掉had 考查动词时态 根据句中的and可知 前后是并列关系 时态应一致 7 by改为in 考查介词的用法 解题关键 掌握动词catch的用法 be caught in意为 遭遇 8 calmly改为calm 考查形容词的用法 此处remain为系动词 其后接形容词 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 3 9 both改为all 考查代词的用法 根据文意没有两者的范围 10 unexpecting改为unexpected考查分词的用法 此处unexpected意为 意料之外的 2012模拟短文改错N Of all my teachers Mr Moore is the one who impress me 1 most He is 34 so he looks young for his age And he s one of 2 the most popular teacher in our school Mr Moore pays more 3 attention to his way of teaching comparing with other teachers 4 He tries different ways to make his classes actively and lively 5 In his opinion we should not only know what but understand 6 why So instead giving us answers immediately he encourages us 7 to think by myself whenever he puts forward questions With his help 8 we ve learned from how to settle problems He leads us to such a 9 wonderful world of why as we all admire and respect him 10 参考答案及解析 1 impress 改为 impresses 考查主谓一致 此处先行词 one 前有 the 故其后定语从句的谓语 动词应和 one 保持一致 用单数 2 so 改为 but 考查句间的逻辑关系 根据语境此处应为转折关系 3 teacher 改为 teachers 考查名词的单复数 根据句中的 one of 可知 后面的名词应用复数 形式 4 comparing 改为 compared 考查固定短语 和 相比应用 compared with to 5 actively 改为 active考查形容词的用法 此处 make 后接形容词作宾补 6 正确 经分析本句正确 7 instead 后加 of 考查固定短语 根据后面的 giving 可知 其前应用介词 of 8 myself 改为 ourselves考查代词指代一致 根据文意反身代词应和 us 相一致 故用 ourselves 9 去掉 from考查动词的用法 learn from 意为 向 学习 此处不合文意 10 as 改为 that 考查固定句型 此处考查 such that 句型 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 4 2012 模拟短文改错 O Time seem limited for us Senior Three students 1 Therefore more and more student are studying from early 2 morning till lately afternoon even during the ten minute 3 break In my opinion Take a break between classes is 4 not necessary Otherwise we will feel tired both physically 5 and mentally During the break we should do something 6 to get rid of tiredness What they need is to have a real rest 7 instead getting more tired My break is always pleasing 8 Sometimes I take some simple exercise Sometimes I had a free 9 chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside While the 10 next class begins I feel fresh again 参考答案及解析 1 seem seems 考查主谓一致 此处time是主语 谓语动词用单数 2 student students 考查名词的单复数 根据后面的are可知用复数形式 3 lately late 考查形容词 副词的用法 修饰名词afternoon应用形容词 4 Take taking考查动名词的用法 此处动名词短语作主语 故用动名词形式 5 去掉not 考查语境的理解 根据文意应为肯定意思 6 经分析本句正确 7 they we 考查代词指代一致 通篇文章都在谈论我们的事情 故用we 8 instead 后加of 考查固定短语 根据后面的getting可知用instead of 9 had have 考查动词时态 根据时间副词sometimes可知用一般现在时 10 While When考查状语从句的连接词 根据文意用when 当 的时候 2012模拟短文改错P The other day my father called me that at first made 1 me very glad because of he seldom calls me I was extra 2 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 5 happy for that day was his birthday and I thought he 3 remembered the date But to my disappoint our talk was 4 so short and ended so soon My father called only tell me 5 that he has put another 1 000 yuan to my account then hung 6 up after I could even tell him that it was my birthday Tears 7 of sadness came to my eye Honestly I understand that he 8 loves me just as true as my mom but I d prefer to hear 9 him say it out to me on my birthday 10 参考答案及解析 1 that 改为 which 考查非限制性定语从句的关系词 此处 which 替代前文整个句子的内 容 2 去掉 of 考查状语从句的连接词 根据后面的句子 he seldom calls me 可知用 because 3 his 改为 my 考查代词指代一致 根据文意应是 我的生日 4 disappoint 改为 disappointment考查固定短语的用法 此处 to 是介词 其后用名词 5 only 后加 to 考查不定式作目的状语 父亲给我打电话只是告诉我 6 has 改为 had 考查动词时态 根据文意 存钱 在 打电话 之前 故用过去完成时 7 after 改为 before 考查句意的理解 我还没有来得及告诉他那天是我的生日就挂掉了 此处 before 意为 没来得及 就 8 eye 改为 eyes 考查名词的单复数 此处指双眼用 eyes 9 true 改为 truly 考查副词的用法 修饰动词 love 用副词 10 正确 经分析本句正确 2014 高考英语高考英语四川省绵阳市二模试题四川省绵阳市二模试题 短文改错短文改错 共 10 小题 每小题 1 5 分 满分 15 分 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作 文 文中共有 10 处语言错误 每句中最多有两处 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增 加 删除或修改 增加 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 并在其下面写出该加的词 高考资源网 您身边的高考专家 版权所有 高考资源网 6 删除 把多余的词用斜线 划掉 修改 在错的词下划一横线 并在该词下面写出修改后的词 注意 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2 只允许修改 10 处 多者 从第 11 处起 不计分 Nowadays many young students are like cigarettes One reason is because they feel it s a kind of fashion By smoke they can look cool Some teenagers think smoking is good to social contact so that they can develop social skill Some others want reduce stress and become relaxing so they join sm