选修六 unit3 作文

编号 高二英语选修六 unit3 A Healthy Life 制作者 任秋芳 校审 何利霞 时间 2015 12 Rome is not built in One day 班级 姓名 选修六选修六 Unit3 A Healthy Life Period 5 writing Teaching aims 1 Enable students to know how to write a persuasive letter 2 Let them use new words and expressions freely and correctly 写作任务写作任务 假设你是李华 你的英国笔友 Smith 染上抽烟的恶习不能自拔 请你给他写 一封信 告诉他吸烟的危害并提出你的建议 帮助他尽快戒烟 注意 词数 100 词左右 写作指导写作指导 这是一封劝告信 劝告信是书信的一种 主要目的是改变别人的观点 除了遵循书信写作的一般格式外 劝告信的主题内容通常采用如下写作 方法 首先 开门见山 直入主题 在正文的开头照转话题的切入点 自然而 然的引出自己想要谈的话题 然后 给出希望对方采取或终结某种行为的理由 在陈述理由时要换位 思考 尽量为对方考虑 尽可能用事实说话 以增强说服力 最后 给出合理建议 通过提议让对方明确行动方向 从而达到写信的 最终目的 就本篇而言 我们可以按以下步骤来写 第一段 表明写作意图 第二段 陈述对方戒烟的理由 第三段 就如 何戒烟提出自己的建议 第四段 希望对方采纳自己的意见 常用表达 I am sorry to hear that I m writing to suggest persuade you I would like to suggest that I think it would be more beneficial if you I know it s difficult to but The following suggestions might help you In my opinion it would be wise to take the following action As to I suggest that you should I hope you will take my advice into account consideration I hope you will find these suggestions practical useful helpful Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help You had better not do 最好 不 做 How about what about doing 怎么样 I think you should do 我认为你应该 I suggest advice that you should do 我建议你做 If I were you I would do 我要是你的话 我会做 It s best to do 最好做 Why not do why don t you do 为什么不 参考例文参考例文 Dear Smith I m sorry to hear that you have got into the habit of smoking I m writing to suggest you quit First smoking can make you ill later in life Second it causes terrible smells I know it s difficult to stop smoking but the following suggestions might help you First make a list of the harmful effects of smoking and the benefits you get from quitting Keep the list with you and reread it when you feel like smoking Second do something else to keep busy such as exercising Third visit your friends often They may help you strengthen your resolve I hope you will take my advice into consideration Yours sincerely Li Hua 编号 高二英语选修六 unit3 A Healthy Life 制作者 任秋芳 校审 何利霞 时间 2015 12 Rome is not built in One day 班级 姓名 书面表达 假设你是李华 你得知你的英国笔友 Jack 最近经常熬夜学习 请你用英语给他发 一份邮件 劝他注意改掉这个不良习惯 注意 词数词数 100 词左右词左右 Dear Jack Yours Li Hua 作文欣赏 健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的 但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问 题 你很为他们担忧 请你以此为话题 并结合提示给他们写一封信 提示 1 要走路去上班 而不是开车或坐车 2 每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次 或打球 或游泳 3 饮食要健康 4 不要工作太晚 要早休息 要求 1 短文结构完整 意思连贯 语言流畅 语法准确 符合逻辑 2 80 100 词左右 3 开头和结尾部分已给出 不计入总词数 例文例文 Dear Dad Mum You re so busy every day that you don t pay much attention to your health I m worried about your health all the time I d like to give you some suggestions I hear walking is the best sport Your company isn t far from home is it Why not walk to the office You d better take exercise at least once a week such as playing tennis in the gym Going to swim is also a nice choice too What s more it s necessary to have healthy food Try not to stay up