2012届高考英语 专题总复习精选荟萃书面表达系列（一）

用心 爱心 专心 1 20122012 届高考英语专题总复习精选荟萃书面表达系列 一 届高考英语专题总复习精选荟萃书面表达系列 一 1 假设你是刘英 最近你就流行节目 超级女生 Super Girls 或 快乐男生 Happy Boys 收集了同学们的不同看法 请根据下表内容给征稿的某英语报刊编辑写封信 并谈谈 你自己的观点 一些同学的看法 另一些同学的看法 有助于发现自己的优缺点 能挑战自我并丰富生活经历 易误导年轻人 会带来一些问题 如 学习受到影响 注意 1 信的开头和落款已为你写好 不计入总词数 2 可根据内容要点适当增加细节 使行文连贯 3 参考词汇 误导 mislead 挑战 challenge 4 100 词左右 思路点拨 本文为提纲表格式作文 要求对 超女 和 快男 现象进行分析并加以评论 写作时 可按议论文的写作思路去写 即提出问题 分析问题 解决问题 评论时 可用第 一人称 以增加说服力 时态应以一般现在时为主 Dear Editor Recently I ve collected some different opinions from my classmates about the program Super Girls or Happy Boys Yours Liu Ying 范文选登 Dear Editor Recently I ve collected some different opinions from my classmates about the program Super Girls or Happy Boys Some of them argue that it offers a good chance for young people to discover their own strong points as well as weaknesses Meanwhile it can get them ready for any challenges and enrich their life experiences However some of my classmates don t think so They feel that it could mislead those youngsters Especially to the school girls and boys it may cause some troubles For example it may affect their study badly In my opinion every coin has two sides So long as we have a correct attitude and good self control it s still OK to join in it Yours Liu Ying 2 2010 年 1 月 上海同济 华东师大 华东理工 上外和东华等 6 所高校 在自主招生的 理科考试中无一例外地选择了放弃考语文 根据这一现象结合下图谈谈你的看法 用心 爱心 专心 2 思路点拨 本文既有文字又有图片而且极具现实意义 出题方式比较新颖 写作时态应以 一般现在时为主 用第一人称的口吻增强说服力 图片内容比较简单 在文字中已有体现 不必赘述 如果题目中没有文字说明 则写作时第一段应该开门见山地提到图片内容并进行 适当描述 范文选登 Recently six universities in Shanghai made English language compulsory in their joint exams and left out Chinese There is no doubt that the English language is a very important medium of education But that is no reason why we should forget the importance of our mother tongue and traditions and culture It is the Chinese language that makes China a nation Once we have a thought that our mother tongue is not important our nation will be in danger With the development of China Chinese has become a worldwide language Many people in the world start to learn Chinese Being the Chinese we should feel proud of our mother tongue Chinese is one of the oldest languages in the world We should love our mother language if we want to love our nation Therefore we should view our mother tongue as a necessity Only through our own language can our culture find glory it truly deserves 精彩再现 本文使用了一些比较漂亮的表达和句型 如 There is no doubt that is no reason why It is that 强调句 Once 一旦 with the development of view as Only 状语开头的倒装句 这些表达和句型都为文章 增添了不少亮色 3 下表是某校关于中学生双休日活动现状的一份调查 请结合表格内容 用英语写一篇 120 150 词的短文 就中学生应如何过双休日发表你的看法 学习情况 几乎都在学习 16 半天学习半天 活动 24 几乎都在做其 他事情 60 娱乐休闲体育活动 20 游玩和购物 40 上网看电视 40 去图书馆经常 5 偶尔 23 几乎没有 72 课外兴趣小 组 经常 10 偶尔 20 不参加 70 思路点拨 本文为图表式作文 结合表格的四项内容进行分析对比 得出对双休日时间分 配的结论 学生的双休日生活并不那么丰富多彩 用心 爱心 专心 3 范文选登 This form displays the result of a survey on how to spend students weekends It says that few students are glued to their schoolwork any more Instead they prefer to surf on the Internet watch TV go shopping rather than involve in sports games Library and interest groups are available but not favorable Personally I think students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out More time should be spent not only on green field but also in the libraries to build up themselves physically and mentally Besides more interest groups should be established for students to widen their horizon and sharpen their brains so that they can become more creative eventually All these will contributes a lot to a well informed and highly qualified teenager In conclusion students should be more scheduled with colorful and fruitful activities 精彩再现 本文完整全面准确地描述了表格内容 人称 时态使用得当 语言过渡自然 经典句子 Instead they prefer to surf on the internet watch TV go shopping rather than involve in sports games Personally students are now freed from heavy burden but their spare time is not well arranged They are expected to spend some time on what they learn instead of hanging out 诸如此类的句子不妨背下 来 作为写作素材 4 假设你是某中学学生李明 请你给在美国的网友 Mike 写一封信 告诉他你难忘的一次聚 会 主要内容如下 1 简述与朋友或同学的难忘聚会 2 描述当时聚会的情况 3 谈谈自己的体会和感受 注意 1 不少于 120 词 信的开头结尾已给出 不计入总词数 2 可适当发挥想象 增加细节 以使行文连贯 3 文中不得出现与本人及学校相关的真实信息 Dear Mike I have been interested in the adventurous and colorful stories you told me in your school time Hoping to get your early reply Sincerely yours Li Ming 思路点拨 本文是一封信 信的内容是告诉对方难忘的一次聚会 写作时要按一定的逻辑 顺序组织安排好材料 注意使用一些较复杂的句子结构和一些较高级的词汇或短语以增加文 章的亮点 适当使用过渡词以使文章节奏紧凑 行文流畅 范文选登 Dear Mike I have been interested in the adventurous and colorful stories you told me in 用心 爱心 专心 4 your school time now I will tell you something of my own to share with you It is an unforgettable party in my life which happened in my high school time On a snowy day owing to a careless slip on my way to school I fell onto the ground Only to find that my feet were seriously hurt I was told by doctor to lie in bed for one month or so which deeply frustrated me Still more disappointedly my classmates and I had planned a trip to Dongjiang Lake Park to celebrate my birthday party the following Sunday However now my plan melted into the air There was no doubt that I would have a lonely and boring birthday To my surprise on the afternoon of my birthday several classmates turned up in my home with a bunch of flowers and wonderful gifts We had a merry chat singing Karaoke and playing cards All of us were bubbling over with enthusiasm When they were leaving they wished me a speedy recovery I was deeply touched by their thoughtfulness and kindness and the impressive birthday party will stick in my mind forever Isn t it moving and unforgettable Hoping to get your early reply Sincerely yours Li Ming 精彩再现 文章脉络清晰 要点齐全 文中使用了 which 引导的限制性和非限制性定语从 句 only to find that 结构 两处被动语态结构 there was no doubt that 句式 when 引导的时间状语从句 wish 引导的双宾结构 使用了 owing to turn up melted into the air turned up were bubbling over with enthusiasm 等短语以及 frustrated disappointedly lonely and boring thoughtfulness impressive 等较高 级词汇 过渡词或短语 however to my surprise 的运用等较好地满足了高分作文的要求 5 假设你校在举办征文活动 题目为 How to Overcome Test Anxiety 请你用英语写一篇 短文 谈谈你自己的具体做法 以供同学们借鉴 注意 1 词数 120 左右 2 做法不少于四点 3 参考词汇 well prepared take a deep breath positive thoughts concentrate on repeat 4 开头已给 不计入你所写的总词数 Whoever takes exams will feel more or less tense and anxious 思路点拨 短文标题已经给出 要求依据自己的观点写四点具体做法 需要注意的是所写 的四个要点必须紧紧围绕 怎样克服考试焦虑 这一主题进行展开 注意使用较复杂的句式 和较高级的词汇或短语 以满足高分作文的要求 在段落之间和句子之间合理使用衔接词 使短文如行云流水般流畅自然 范文选登 Whoever takes exams will feel more or less tense and anxious So how to overcome test anxiety is very important and a problem in desperate want of being solved Personally the following may be of help to you First make sure that 用心 爱心 专心 5 you re well prepared for the exam which will make you feel confident that you can do it Second once you have take your seat take a few minutes to relax such as letting your arms hang loosely moving your fingers as well as taking a few deep breaths Third push away the negative thoughts and turn them into positive ones Fourth concentrating on the exam may also benefit you a lot and don t pay attention to the people around you Besides if you are sitting for an oral exam smile a lot and imagine you are having the nicest conversation in a long time Of course when you start feeling tense and anxious again during the exam repeating the exercise to relax yourself is essential 精彩再现 文中使用了 how 引导的不定式短语作主语 动词 ing 形式短语作主语 which 引导的非限定性定语从句 that 引导的宾语从句 if 和 when 引导的状语从句等 使用了 in desperate want of be of help be prepared for such as as well as concentrate on 等短语 过渡词 so personally first second third fourth besides 等的使用 使文章结构分明 衔接自然 6 现正处于紧张的高三备考攻坚阶段 你班刘老师为了提高复习效率 广泛征求学生意见 假如你叫张华 请根据以下提示 给他写封信 表达你们的需求和建议 要求包含以下内容 适当放慢进度 多留点思考时间 突出重难点 反复训练重要 易错知识点 提供科学的学习方法 减少作业量以保证质量 给予更多鼓励 关注心理问题 注意 1 根据以上内容写一篇短文 不要逐句翻译 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯 2 要准确使用语法和词汇 利用句型 短语词汇 清楚 连贯地表达自己的意思 3 词数 100 130 开头已给出 不计入总词数 4 参考词汇 psychological 心理的 Dear Mr Liu We re so pleased that you are willing to share our views In the course of the general revision what we need is solid foundation 思路点拨 本文是一封为提高复习效率而给老师写的一封信 信的内容要点已经给出 考 生需要根据阅读材料和自身的感受谈一下对老师的需求和建议 写作时要注意合理组织内容 要点 保持表达形式的多样性 尽量多使用一些较高级的词汇和句子结构 增强文章的表现 力 范文选登 Dear Mr Liu We re so pleased that you are willing to share our views In the course of the general revision what we need is solid foundation As you know we didn t learn well enough in the first two years so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something and then figure out the important as well as