2012届高考英语二轮专题复习 短文改错

用心 爱心 专心 1 20122012 届高考英语二轮专题复习短文改错届高考英语二轮专题复习短文改错 Passage 1 河北部分重点联考 Dear Anish Here are the information about Manchester University 1 It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2 has a very big schoolyard You can live in the school3 or near the school They have all sorts of course 4 I m sure you will find one you like it I know you5 are particular interested in human rights So I will 6 see that there is anything on their website 网址 7 I ll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport8 when you arrived You met him a few years ago but he 9 has changed a lot since then Both your aunt or I look10 forward to seeing you again See you soon Peter 答案与解析 1 are is information 是不可数名词 谓语动词应使用单数形式 2 去掉 far far 通常不与表示具体距离的数词连用 3 4 course courses 根据句中的 all sorts of 可知 这里要表示的是各种各样的课程 因此应用复数形式 5 去掉 it that you like 是定语从句 修饰先行词 one 在从句中 关系代词 that 作 like 的宾语 所以 it 多余 6 particular particularly interested 是形容词 应使用副词修饰 7 that if whether 根据上一句中的内容可知这里的意思是看网络上 是否 有相关信 息 8 meet 前加 to 此处是不定式表示目的 9 arrived arrive 如果主句是一般将来时 时间状语从句通常用一般现在时 10 or and 此处是 both and 结构 表示 两者都 Passage 2 石家庄质检 I am a very active girl in my class I have many hobby 1 such as writing stories playing piano and singing English2 songs My most favorite subject is English I became3 interested in it when I was very young My dream is 4 to study abroad But now I need to improve my English5 and learn more about west culture as well I will be6 able to improving the friendship between China and7 the rest of the world I hoped my dream will come true 8 And I believe in nobody can change my mind I will work9 harder and follow my heart no matter how happens 10 用心 爱心 专心 2 答案与解析 1 hobby hobbies many 后接复数名词 下文 such as 后列举的内容也是提示 2 piano 前加 the play the piano 表示 弹钢琴 是固定搭配 西洋乐器类名词前常用 定冠词 the 3 去掉 most favorite 本身就是 最喜爱的 因此原句语义重复 4 5 But So 前后逻辑上是因果而不是转折关系 6 west western 依据语境这里表示 西方文化 应用形容词 western 作定语 7 improving improve be able to do sth 表示 能够做某事 8 hoped hope 这里表示说话人现在的愿望 故应用一般现在时 9 去掉 in I believe that 我相信 believe in 表示 信任 信仰 其后不能接 从句 10 how what no matter what happens 无论发生什么 what 充当从句的主语 Passage 3 唐山联考 When I was a child my mom was pushed me to study hard 1 hoping I could get a chance to go to college I experience2 pressure for the first time I did that my mom expected3 because I didn t want to let her off I was born to a poor4 peasant family but I really knew life was not easy All the5 things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6 lead better life in the future As the saying goes No pains7 no gains I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8 have a chance to go to college Thanks to my mother s push and the 9 pressure I made it Now I no longer think pressure is a good thing 10 答案与解析 1 去掉第二个 was 此处不用被动语态 故 was 多余 2 experience experienced 此处应用一般过去时态 与全文时态保持一致 3 that what 这里用 what 引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语 that 没有这种用法 4 off down 结合上下文可知此处意为 我不想让她失望 故应用 let sb down 表示 让某人失望 5 but and 或 so 此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系 故将 but 改为 and 或 so 6 was were 此处主语为 all the things 故应用 were 7 better 前加 a lead a better life 表示 过一种更好的生活 8 mother mother s 此处表示 达到了妈妈的期望 故应用其所有格形式 9 10 good bad 根据上文可知此处是指 我不再认为压力是一件坏事 故应将 good 改为 bad Passage 4 保定调研 Last Sunday I went to the Bird s Nest Stadium At gate1 I happened to meet some young America tourists I greeted2 to them in English and then we began to chat From the chat3 I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4 用心 爱心 专心 3 but most of them were fond of Chinese culture They were5 busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6 the changes which had been taken place in the past few years 7 After come out of the Stadium we went to the Water Cubic 水立方 8 and had a good time there We exchanged our email address so that9 we could write to each other later They thanked us again and again 10 I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English 答案与解析 1 gate 前加 the 此处表示特指 指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门 2 America American 应该用形容词来修饰名词 3 去掉第一个 to greet 是及物动词 可直接加宾语 不必加 to 4 5 but and 来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折 应用 and 表示并列 6 seem seemed 根据事情发生的时间 last Sunday 和全文的时态可知 此处也应用一般 过去时 7 去掉 been take place 无被动语态 8 come coming 介词 after 后要用动名词形式 9 address addresses 交换的是双方的邮箱地址 故此处应用复数形式 10 us me 是 我 帮助了他们 因此用 me Passage 5 重庆调研 Today is Sunday We had not lessons After breakfast1 I wanted to do with my homework when Li Lei rang me 2 He asked me to go to the cinema with he I agreed but3 I have to finish my homework first About an hour later 4 we went out In the way we saw Kate she was mending5 her bike She looked very worry Let us help you Li Lei6 and I all said All right And we stopped to help her 7 There was nothing much wrong with the bike so it cost8 us only several minutes time to finish it Kate was very 9 thankful When we hurried to the cinema the film had10 been on for ten minutes But we felt happy 答案与解析 1 not no 没有课 应是 have no lessons 或 don t have any lessons 2 去掉 with do 是及物动词 直接跟名词作宾语 3 he him 介词后跟代词时要用宾格 4 have had 本文是叙述过去发生的事情 5 In On 在 途中 是 on the way 6 worry worried 她看上去很着急 应该用形容词作表语 7 all both 因为只有我和李蕾两人 8 cost took 花费时间做什么 要用 It takes some time to do something 9 去掉 time 有具体的时间名词 minutes 无须再用 time 10 Passage 6 用心 爱心 专心 4 成都检测 My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1 and August We will travel for about two months but2 will tour the United States and parts of the Canada We3 have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4 as vacationing in hotels but we had to plan carefully I5 think the car what we are going to drive is very small so6 we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7 and as few camping things as possibly We will take some8 medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us and also9 some food for picnics I m sure that we will have fun 10 答案与解析 1 am are 本句的主句是 my father and I 所以谓语动词用复数形式 2 but and 此处表示的是顺承关系 而不是转折关系 3 删去第二个 the 一般情况下 表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词 4 spend cost 本句的主语不是人 而是 it 所以用 cost 5 had have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况 6 what that which 或删去 what that which we are going to drive 是定语从句 修饰先行词 the car 关系代词在从句中作宾语 可以省略 7 them us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲 因此应用 us 8 possibly possible as as possible 表示 尽可能 9 prevent 前加 to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语 10 Passage 7 绵阳诊断 Tom is a little boy but he is only seven years old One day he1 went to the cinema It was the first time for him to do that He2 bought a ticket and then went out But after two or three minutes3 he came out and bought the second ticket and went in again After a4 few minutes he comes out again and bought a third ticket Two5 or three minutes later he came out and asked another ticket 6 Then the girl in the ticket office who asked him Why do you7 buy so many ticket How many friends do you meet Tom8 answered No I have not friends here But a big boy always 9 stops me at the door and tear my ticket to pieces 10 答案与解析 1 but 改为 and 依据语境 这里前后句之间是并列关系而不是转折关系 2 3 out 改为 in 依据语境 男孩买票走进电影院 4 the 改为 a 下文 bought a third ticket 有暗示 序数词前用不定冠词 表示 再一 又一 5 comes 改为 came 结合行文逻辑 这里应用一般过去时 男孩进去又出来了 6 asked 后加 for ask for sth 表示 要求得到 用心 爱心 专心 5 7 去掉 who 这里不是定语从句 假如是定语从句 原句缺少主句 8 ticket 改为 tickets so many 后接复数名词 9 not 改为 no not 是副词 不能修饰名词 应改为 no 10 tear 改为 tears 这里 stop 和 tear 是并列谓语动词 要用第三人称单数的一般现在时 Passage 8 内江 广安模拟 Last Saturday we had a party at home Dad s friends come1 along with their families Since Mom was not at home Dad2 and I had to prepare everything so it turned out such a miracle3 that they did make it Everything went perfectly fine 4 A lot of kids who came that day I had the most wonderful time5 with Steven It was just amazed to find someone so much6 like me We had a lot of things by common The time seemed7 short to me and I wished we could have had some more time8 to continue the conversation Hopeful we re going on9 a trip together next summer and also summer after next 10 答案与解析 1 come came 整篇文章为一般过去时 应把 come 改为 came 2 3 so but 前后语境为转折关系 应把 so 改为 but 4 they we 根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称 此处指作者和父亲俩人 因此应把 they 改为 we 5 去掉 who 本句为简单句 去掉 who 6 amazed amazing 主语为 it 应用 amazing 作表语 表示 令人惊异的 7 by in 固定短语 have in common 表示 有 相同之处 8 去掉 had wish 后的宾语从句用虚拟语气 谓语应用情态动词 动词原形 因此把 had 去掉 9 Hopeful Hopefully 副词 hopefully 放在句首 表示 希望 副词作状语修饰整个句 子 10 在 also 后加 the next summer 指明年夏天 the summer after next 指后年夏天 Passage 9 郑州质检 We all know that healthy is very important to us Both1 study and work depend by strong bodies Doing sports2 and games helps us keep strong and healthy If we do not3 take any exercise we may feel tired but get sick easily 4 There s many different kinds of sports we can do them 5 such as playing ball games running walking and swim 6 However now we have too much homework to do in7 every day We hope that we ll be giving less homework8 and have more time take part in sports We also hope9 that our school can hold a sports meeting every term 10 答案与解析 用心 爱心 专心 6 1 healthy health 这里是句子的主语 因此用名词形式 2 by on upon depend on upon 是固定搭配 3 help helps 这句话的主语是动名词短语 doing sports and games 动名词短语作主语 表示一件事时 谓语动词用第三人称单数形式 4 but and feel tired 和 get sick 是并列关系 不表示转折 因此将 but 改为 and 5 去掉 them 这是一个定语从句 从句中作动词 do 的宾语的关系代词 that 或 which 被省 略了 因此 them 是多余的 6 swim swimming 应用动名词与前面的 running walking 并列 故应用 swimming 7 去掉 in every day 可以单独作状语 前面不需要加介词 8 giving given 这里是被动语态 因此用过去分词 9 take 前加 to 此处考查的是 have time to do sth 的结