小升初英语作文专题

第一英语 决胜名校 第 1 页 作文专题作文专题 审题过程审题过程 1 时态时态 主要考虑四种时态 一般现在时 一般过去时 一般将来时 现在进行时 要根据题意判断正确的时态 注意 一篇作文可以不止一种时态 注意 一篇作文可以不止一种时态 2 人称人称 主要有第一人称和第三人称 审题时根据题意用正确的人称写 1 如使用第三人称 需注意三单在一般现在时的用法 动词后需加 s 或 es 如 She likes playing ping pong 2 写作过程中注意代词的格式 如 He 主格 feels tired I like him 宾格宾格 This is his 形代形代 bike That s not your book It s mine 名代名代 复数形式 复数形式 Their English teacher is very funny They often play football together 3 结构 使文章有条理的方法结构 使文章有条理的方法 1 使用时间词语衔接 如写过去时的作文 使用时间词语衔接 如写过去时的作文 Last Sunday Last Weekend My Holiday 等等 作文题目示例作文题目示例时态时态时间结构衔接词时间结构衔接词 Last Sunday过去时in the morning in the afternoon in the evening Last Weekend过去时on Saturday morning afternoon on Sunday morning afternoon My Holiday过去时on Monday on Tuesday on Wednesday on the 1st day on the 2nd on the 3rd last day Sunday Plan将来时in the morning in the afternoon in the evening 2 总起句和结尾句前后呼应 总起句和结尾句前后呼应 4 容易出错的句型 容易出错的句型 1 be 动词和行为动词 同一个句子只能出现一种 现在进行时除外 错误 I was went to the park last Sunday 把把 was 去掉去掉 2 like 动词 ing 形式 I like going shopping 注意注意 like 后面紧跟的动词一定要加后面紧跟的动词一定要加 ing 3 三单句子 She goes to school on foot every day 动词后加动词后加 s 或或 es 4 There be 句型 There is a bird and two monkeys in the tree 用 there is 而不是 there are 范文 范文 1 过去时 过去时 动词用过去式动词用过去式 Last Weekend I was busy last weekend On Saturday morning I went to the park with my grandparents We went fishing there In the afternoon I played ping pong with my friends It was funny On Sunday morning I read books and did my homework at home In the afternoon I went shopping with my mother In the evening I played chess with my father I was very happy last weekend 第一英语 决胜名校 第 2 页 2 将来时将来时 be going to 动词原形动词原形 或或 will 动词原形 动词原形 be going to will Sunday Plan I am going to have a busy Sunday In the morning I am going to the park with my grandparents We will go fishing there In the afternoon I am going to play ping pong with my friends Then we will go to the cinema In the evening I am going to read books and do my homework at home Then I will play chess with my father It will be a funny day 3 一般现在时 一般现在时 第一人称 动词用原形 第一人称 动词用原形 My Sunday I have a busy Sunday In the morning I often go the park with my grandparents Sometimes we go fishing there In the afternoon I often play ping pong with my friends Then we go to the cinema In the evening I often read books and do my homework at home Then I often play chess with my father Sunday is fun 4 一般现在时 一般现在时 三单 注意人称 动词 三单 注意人称 动词 S My family There are three people in my family My father is a doctor He likes playing football He is very kind My mother is a teacher She often reads books in the evening I am a student I like playing computer games and do sports with my friends I often go hiking with my parents on the weekend I love my family very much 小升初英语作文范文小升初英语作文范文 1 我的书包 我的书包 My Backpack I have a backpack It is large and it is blue It is a birthday gift from my parents I love it very much It is very hard working because I keep all my school things in it It is very heavy It is with all the time during school days It is a good friend of mine 2 我的铅笔盒 我的铅笔盒 My Pencil box I have a good friend Her name is Pencil box She is a very beautiful girl Look There is a picture on her face It s a picture of flowers Her coat is blue and yellow There are some pencils a pen a ruler a rubber and a tape in her stomach From Monday to Friday I go to school with her When I want to copy or write the new words I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach She helps me a lot And I like her very much 3 我的房子 我的房子 My House I have a house It is big and new There are eight rooms in it They are a living room a kitchen three bedroom one study and two bathrooms I watch TV in the living room I do my homework in the study I have dinner in the kitchen This is my house I like it 4 我的卧室 我的卧室 I love my bedroom 第一英语 决胜名校 第 3 页 I have a bedroom It is not big but it is nice There is a bed in my bedroom A yellow dog is on the bed Every night I sleep with it Next to the bed there is a desk A bear lamp is on the desk I like the bear lamp It s cute I like to do homework under the lamp every evening I have a new computer in my bedroom It is my best friend Because I study at it play at it There are also several beautiful pictures on the wall I like my bedroom Do you like it 5 我的新学校 我的新学校 I have moved to my new school since September It is a modern and nice school which is in Beijing It has a playground a library several labs classrooms with electronic equipment and so on It s quite different from my old school It s larger much more modern This is why I love my new school If you are free you are warmly welcomed to come to our school to have a look 6 开学见闻 开学见闻 It s the first day of school once again Stepping into the gate of the school always reminds me of the responsibility I carry as a student Being a student is not just about attending classes and showing up during examinations I m here to be empowered To gain knowledge is all about empowerment And wish that someday I could use that knowledge to make a significant contribution to the society 7 今年暑假 今年暑假 This vacations In this vacations I am going to go to travel in some famous places and I am going to go to visit my grandparents in the village I am going to learn something different like example I know people work in the village it is so hard and so tired they are grow the vegetable rice and something else it is very difficult 8 小学的最后一个暑假 小学的最后一个暑假 the last summer in my elementary school The last summer in my elementary school is very unforgettable I remember I will go to another school and have to leave my friends and teachers I feel sad but I learned to get together with them to remember the friendship between us we have a good time and swear to study hard in order to have a bright future 9 今天的经历 今天的经历 Today s experience It was a fine day today and the sun was bright I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate Zhang Hong 第一英语 决胜名校 第 4 页 The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys I ran to him and said Animals are our good friends and we must take good care of them 10 有趣的一天 有趣的一天 A Wonderful Day Last November 24 was my birthday I had a party at my home My friends came to my home in the afternoon and I got a lot of presents from them At the party we ate a big cake sang songs watched TV and listened to music We were very happy But all good things must come to an end We said goodbye at about ten o clock We had a very good time on November 24 11 生日 生日 Birthday My birthday is on Sunday My parents are going to have a birthday party at home I invite my friends to come to the party At the party They give me many small presents Such as cards picture books pens They sing Happy Birthday to me My mother makes a big cake for me I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out we sing and dance We have a good time at the party 12 我的理想 我的理想 我想成为校长我想成为校长 I want to be a headmaster I want to be a headmaster when I grow up I think that s a good job My school is in the forest It s very beautiful I go to work by Benz at eight o clock in the morning The teachers in my school are kind and patient They are all hardworking so they get good salary The children in my school have three classes in the morning In the afternoon they play and pick up mushrooms or strawberries in the forest They have no homework They are very happy At four o clock in the afternoon I go home with kinds of mushrooms and fruits in my Benz They are for my dinner 动物动物 13 我的狗 我的狗 My Dog I have a dog My dog name is DuDu DuDu is 9 years DuDu is fat It wears a white coat DuDu has two big eyes and two small ears It has one short mouth My dog is smart I like my dog Do you like it 14 猫 猫 A cat Who am I Hello My name is Feifei My mother is very beautiful My father is very handsome 第一英语 决胜名校 第 5 页 So I m very lovely Look My coat is white My eyes are blue I have a long tail Fish is my favorite food I like mice too Guess Who am I 15 我喜欢的动物 我喜欢的动物 Animals I like animals very much I have a dog It s my favourite animal It s white It looks like a snow ball It has two big eyes and ears But its nose and mouth are very small It s very naughty It often stares at my food when I have a meal When I m home it follows me all the time When I do my homework it often sits beside quietly but sometimes runs around me and shouts Woof Wood I like my dog very much 16 动物自我介绍 兔子 动物自我介绍 兔子 Do you like me Hello Everyone I m a little rabbit My name is Hanhan Look I m very lovely My eyes are red My ears are long My hair is white My tail is short I like carrots very much I have a good friend She s my little master Her name is Zhou Xun We always play games together I like her very much and she likes me too 人物人物 17 自我介绍 自我介绍 Hi I am a happy and quiet girl I am from China I am twelve years old I am a pupil I am in Class Three Grade Four I have many good friends I like many pets the peacock panda rabbit and bird They are lovely I am tall I have around face there are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face I have a black long hair I like eating apples bananas chicken and I like music singing running pinting I often say Book is my good friend I like it Who am I Yes my name is Lv Enhui Do you like me 18 我的好朋友 我的好朋友 My Good Friend Zhang Ying is my good friend She s in Class1 Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School She s a model student She s clever and she s helpful too She often helps teachers and young students at school She is good at Chinese maths English arts music and so on She has a lot of hobbies She likes painting and drawing And she likes listening to music having picnics with her parents But she doesn t like playing basketball football table tennis or volleyball Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine I like playing with her We 第一英语 决胜名校 第 6 页 always work together and help each other 19 我的父母 我的父母 My Parents My parents work in a shoe factory They get up at five thirty They first get breakfast ready Then they go to work by bus They work there from eight to five They come home at about six and prepare super for us Mother washes clothes in the evening Father often makes toys for toys for us They are busy all day 我的父母 我的父母 My mother is 38 years old but she never tells others how old she is She says she just doesn t want them to know about it My mother is a well known doctor in our area She works hard She often gets up very early in the morning and rushes to the hospital to look after her patients She is kind to her patients and treats them the way she treats her family Sometimes I wonder whom she loves more her patients or me 我的妈妈 我的妈妈 My father is 40 years old He has short hair big eyes and a small mouth He is my best friend My father is a teacher He is very busy He doesn t have any holidays or weekends Every morning he goes to school very early and stays with his students until late in the afternoon It seems that he never gets tired His students love and respect him 我的爸爸我的爸爸 20 我的新老师 我的新老师 My new teacher My new teacher is science teacher He s very strong He has a big mouth two big ears two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants with two big shoes My science teacher is very kind And he is very smart isn t he Today we have science class We are very happy Because he is so funny Who is he He s a Mr Zhou 21 我的好习惯 我的好习惯 My good habits In the morning First I get up Next I brush my teeth Then I wash my face After that I have breakfast At last I go to school In the evening First I finish my homework Next I have dinner Then I pack my schoolbag After that hang up my clothes At last I go to bed 22 我最喜爱的照片 我最喜爱的照片 My favourite photo There is an Aoyu in the picture The Aoyu has a green tail two colorful horns and the silver skin It s a silver Aoyu It looks beautiful and lively Aoyu dance is a traditional dance in Shawan Piaose It means it can always get the first It s a good symbol Everyone likes it very much 第一英语 决胜名校 第 7 页 23 最有趣的事 最有趣的事 To me the most interesting subject is English But I find studying English is very difficult So if you ask which subject is the most difficult to me My answer will be English Now I am a student everyday I have more than one English classes I like studying it very much and I hope I can study it very well So I can talk with foreigners and know the foreign countries things it is very useful 24 我最喜欢的季节 我最喜欢的季节 例一例一 My favourite season is summer Firstly we will have a long holiday in summer so we can relax oueselves And we can also eat ice cream in summer I love eating it very much Secondly it gets really warm in summer so I feel really energetic Thirdly the days are longer than nights in summer so we can play longer In a word I love summer very much 例二 例二 My favourite season is autumn It is a harvest season Farmers are all busy getting in the crops There are lots of different fruits in the season such as apples oranges bananas and so on The Mid Autumn Festival is the Chinese traditional festival in autumn People often have a big family dinner to celebrate it The whole family have mooncakes and admire the full moon in the open air at night It is cool in autumn So autumn is a good season to travel National Day is on October 1 Lots of people go out for a trip during the holiday We can learn a lot about the history of our country from the trip I want to visit Beijing the capital of China with my parents this autumn People also do many different kinds of sports in autumn For example children often fly kites in the park The young like climbing the hills and having a camping trip at weekends The old can go out for a walk and do some exercise There are many beautiful flowers in autumn Chrysanthemums are the most popular They have a sweet smell I like autumn best What about you my dear friend 25 我最喜欢的节日 我最喜欢的节日 My favourite festival My favourite festival is the Spring Festival Why Because I have lots of fun at the Spring Festival The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country It is in January or February Our family get together We have a big dinner at my grandparents home I always eat a lot 第一英语 决胜名校 第 8 页 of delicious food My cousin and me both get red packets from our grandparents My parents usually go shopping with me We buy some nice clothes for ourselves We often watch TV at home and sometimes read books or surf the Internet Sometimes we greet other people on the phone I m always happy at the Spring Festival Which is your favourite festival 26 交通安全 交通安全 With the development of the modern technology private car is no longer a luxurious thing for ordinary people more and more people drive to work instead of going by bus The popularization of private car has many advantages First it is very convenient and time saving you can drive your own car to the workplace instead of waiting for the crowded bus and afraid of being late for working Second it can also improve the traffic structure and help to mitigate the stress of the traffic Third the popularization of private ca