2011高考英语书面表达提升策略素材

20112011 高考英语书面表达提升策略高考英语书面表达提升策略 考情动态分析考情动态分析 书面表达 高考 25 30 分 宗旨是测试考生的英语表达能力 看其是否能够运用学过的 知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流 他不仅能测试出考生的词汇量 语法 书法等方面的能 力 更能测试出考生组织文章 输出所学知识的表达能力 从历年来的高考试卷来看 书面表达是指导 限制 性的写作 即按照题目 或一段文字 或及幅图画 所给的条件 内容 要求 时间 地点 在限制的字数 100 个词左右 内 去 完成写作 它不同与其他命题写作文 可以随意发挥 也不是简单的翻译 而必须做到行 文切题 紧扣中心思想 不漏要点 符合语法 并且意思连贯 文理通顺 语言准确得当 一 书面表达解题方法与技巧 一 书面表达解题方法与技巧 1 认真审题 理解题意 首先要看准文章的写作体裁 其次 才能定时态 定人称 定格式 因为不同的文体的 格式不同 然后再考虑语言 语气的运用 一般的记叙文 说明文 议论文等多用书面语 而 应用文 如书信 口头通知 便条等多用口头语 记叙文 日记等一般可用过去时 而说 明文 通知等一般要用一般现在时或将来时 如果是看图写文 看懂每幅图之间的联系至 关重要 写要点 据每幅图写出一至两句话 因为每年高考书面表达一般控制在 10 句话 120 个词左右 2 连句成文 每句话写好后 用适当的连词连接起来 使之上下连贯 呼应 通顺 简洁 3 查错漏 完稿后 检查一下有没有时态 语态 拼写错误并逐一加以改正 4 书写规范 卷面干静 任何一种形式的书面文字材料 都要求书写规范 拼写准确无误 字迹清晰 按书写 规则大小写及移行正确 且记不要有铁丝网 地雷 篱笆之类的东西 卷面一定要讲究干 净 不要用铅笔答题 要用圆珠笔 钢笔 不同的书面表达形式有不同的格式 如书信 日记 通知等各有其特殊形式 都要按 要求书写规范 书写时除了注意移行规则外 还应注意字母写得圆滑饱满 有 15 左右的 倾斜度 每行写 10 个单词左右 词与词的距离要小 行与行的距离稍大些 写 10 行左右 这样字段既符合要求 也显得短小精悍 同时 还要注意文章的开头和结尾写好 要用最流行 最回味的语言和语句去写 这 样更会得到评卷老师的好感 只有这样您才会得到满意而有理想的高分 总之 书面表达必须在所提示的范围内 根据不同文体的特点和要求来解题 努力做到 要点全 句子通 条理清 指代明确 时态呼应 格式标准 书写工整 卷面干净 当然 冰冻三 尺 非一日之寒 因此 要写好书面表达 除了掌握一定的写作方法及技巧 还要特别注意平 时知识的日益积累 因此 平时要多读 多写 多记一些句型并掌握词汇的用法 多背一些优美 的句子及范文 只有具备了一定语言基础知识和语言组织能力 积累大量的语言材料 再加上 平时的强化训练 同学们的写作水平就一定会大大地提高 在高考中就一定会写出更好的文 章来 为了帮助同学们在平时写作练习的时候时刻牢记这些写作的基本要领 特编顺口溜如 下 细审题 巧构思 列要点 防遗漏 写日记 同汉语 书信 通知格式要牢记 看清图 表细梳理 写人记事按顺序 完稿后查遗漏 整洁干净莫忘记 二 高考英语书面表达高分策略 二 高考英语书面表达高分策略 从遣词 造句 谋篇三个方面分析 1 遣词的原则 使用高等级词汇及短语 如果仅仅记住几个简单基础的词汇 而且一味的重复低水平的 英语知识点 还远远没有达到大学的入学要求 这就要求考生在平时的训练和考试当中 有 意识的强化 复杂 高级 这两个概念 使自己的作文能力区别于普通学生的作文 使自 己一下子就站在一个比别人高的位置上 充分显示自己的实力 平时学习过程中注意总结 各种各样的词汇 以描述人物的词汇为例 表达人物爱憎感情 like love be interested in be fond of hate dislike be tired of lose interest in happy excited pleased satisfied angry sad worried disappointed terrified mad frightened 介绍人物的影响及人们对人的评价 He became famous for his new theory The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader We regard Li Fei as our model Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit People spoke highly of him and all respected him 常见描述人物性格 外貌和身体状况等的词语 good looking funny looking strong looking ugly looking dirty looking ordinary looking blue eyed white eyed warm hearted light hearted kind hearted near sighted far sighted foolish stupid silly clever smart wise bright diligent intelligent lazy hard working etc 2 造句的原则 句式多变 语法活用 句子是表达一个完整意思的最小当位 所以造句能力在英文写 作中是非常重要的 好的英语句子能够生动 形象 准确的表达内容 所以要想写出漂亮 的书面表达 必须从写好句子开始 英语基本句型及造句 主语主语 谓语谓语 状语状语 介词 名词短语或从句 The sun rises up in the east and sets in the west We get up early every morning The meeting lasted 2 hours 主语主语 不及物动词不及物动词 副词副词 This kind of wine drinks well and sells well The suit wears well Glass breaks easily 主语主语 谓语谓语 介词介词 宾语宾语 We all agreed on the terms He hates to argue with his wife about such small matters All these things are to be answered for 主语主语 系动词系动词 形容词形容词 Good medicine tastes bitter to the mouth He was so tired that he fell asleep the moment he went to bed Your explanation sounds reasonable 主语主语 谓语谓语 直接宾语直接宾语 I want your promise Have your fixed my watch This factory produces 1000 cars a week 主语主语 谓语谓语 间接宾语间接宾语 直接宾语直接宾语 He paid me a visit yesterday He owed me 50 yuan He wrote his family a letter yesterday 主语主语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语 宾补宾补 to to do do I will get someone to repair the recorder for you I didn t mean to hurt you He invited me to teach at a well known university 主语主语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语 宾补宾补 do do I often hear her sing the song The boss made workers work 15 hours a day Don t forget to have him come 主语主语 谓语谓语 现在分词现在分词 I heard her singing in the next room We could feel our heats beating fast Did you observe the birds flying around the trees 主语主语 谓语谓语 过去分词过去分词 I must have my watch repaired We must get he task finished on time Speak louder to make yourself understood by everybody 主语主语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语 动名词动名词 I suggested putting off the meeting They all avoided mentioning the matter We can t help laughing at the news 主语主语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语 不定式不定式 I can t afford to buy such a large house Don t pretend to know what you don t He feared to speak in her presence 主语主语 谓语谓语 宾语宾语 名词名词 代词代词 介词介词 宾语宾语 Nothing can prevent us from going forward Thank you for your help He demanded an answer from me 练习写好句子的方法一 合并句子合并句子 It was early in the morning Mr Smith was in his garden He was watering flowers Early in the morning Mr Smith was watering flowers in his garden A girl was crossing a road The girl was pretty The road was wide A pretty girl was crossing a wide road 写好句子的方法二 改写句子改写句子 1 Mr Green is a tall man who wears a pair of thick glasses 改成介词短 语做伴随状语 1 The book cost me 300 yuan Mr Green is a tall man with a pair of thick glasses 2 The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on 使用 so that 结构 改写句子 The ice on the lake is so thin that we can t skate on it 练习方法三 一句多译一句多译 这本书花了我 300 元 I spent 300 yuan on the book I paid 300 yuan for the book The price of the book is 300 yuan It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book 我不懂什么英语 李明也不懂 I don t know any English nor does Li Ming I hardly know any English nor does Li Ming I hardly know any English neither does Li Ming I hardly know any English no more does Li Ming I hardly know any English so it is with Li Ming I know no more English than Li Ming does I know as little English as Li Ming does 一到家 我就把所见到的一切都记了下来 On Upon arriving home I wrote down everything I had seen As soon as I arrived home I wrote down everything I had seen The moment I arrived home I wrote down everything I had seen The instant I arrived home I wrote down everything I had seen No sooner had I arrived home than I wrote down everything I had seen 昨天下午他才来 He came here yesterday afternoon He didn t come here until yesterday afternoon Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here 3 谋篇的原则 满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 文章的 连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的 句子作为最小的表达意思的语言当位如果只是被随意的整合 是无法达到有效表达的目的 常见的句子之间的连接手段有 使用代词指代上一句中的名 词 重复使用上一句中的词 使用连接词 使用平行结构高考大纲中常用的连接词 表并列补充关系的表并列补充关系的 what is more besides also as well moreover furthermore in addition 表转折对比关系的表转折对比关系的 but however yet instead on the other hand on the contrary although different from in contrast to despite in spite of whereas unlike nevertheless not only but also here there years ago today this that the former the latter then now the first whereas the second once now on the one hand on the other hand some others 表因果关系的表因果关系的 since as because of for so thus therefore as a result so that 表条件关系的表条件关系的 if on the condition that as long as unless or else 表时间关系的表时间关系的 when after before until as soon as later afterwards soon lately recently since from