2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(三)体育与校园活动

1 2018 年广州市中考英语作文专题复习 三 体育与校园活动年广州市中考英语作文专题复习 三 体育与校园活动 一 与专题相关的话题项目一 与专题相关的话题项目 学校 school 文娱与体育 Entertainment and sports 二 与专题相关的知识准备二 与专题相关的知识准备 1 相关单元 7A Unit 1 Making friends 7A Unit 2 Daily life 7A Unit 7 School clubs 8A Unit 5 Educational exchanges 8A Unit 7 Memory 8A Unit 8 English Week 9A Unit 4 Problems and advice 2 相关词汇 高频词 n hobby country age dream flat world mountain engineer sound table tennis break band guitar market practice fair rocket power skill information headline ant butterfly bee culture host weekday success guest corner trouble step cycle note wallet basket manager list mile letter speech notice competition text chance topic winner opinion model diet situation advantage mess exam comment v complete ride ring end attend teach tour introduce respect lose improve mention spell advise communicate hide choose regret hate suggest fail adj daily friendly elder surprised amazing boring recent glad fantastic local silly worth whole rich poor shy awful ashamed embarrassed mad annoying careless polite adv never seldom usually together already yet confidently else pron everyone yourself conj though 高频短语 be good at go to school make friends with take part in have a good time d like to all over on foot go to bed get up learn about all the way look up so far introduce to take out pour out treasure hunt in public put on in my opinion look out be on a diet laugh at feel ashamed of drive sb mad Make a mess out of place none of one s business hear from 拓展词汇 experience disappear attack exchange t ai chi chopstick reference application treasure several suggestion unless whenever request keep in touch with apply for make sth A big success 2 advise sb to do give sb a chance to do sth be worried about regret doing have a habit of make up one s mind pay attention to 句式句型 1 My favourite subjects are 2 I am good at 3 I like enjoy 4 I always have a good time at school 5 be so adj that 从句 6 I m glad to do 7 Spend in doing 8 It s been a fantastic experience so far 9 We ve tried to 10 I can t wait 11 I haven t had much success but I ll keep trying 12 If you you will 13 It is adj to do sth 14 Some students Other students 15 What should I do in this situation 16 It s none of my business 三 经典例题三 经典例题 v 体育体育 1 2007 年天津市书面表达考题 日前 由教育部 国家体育总局 共青团中央联合举办 全国亿万少年阳光体育运动 启动仪式 其影响巨大 意义深远 你在本校参加了此项活动 请根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文 内容感想 1 学校师生收看了启动仪式 launching ceremony 2 开展了一个小时的集体体育活动 如 跑步 做操 打 篮球等 1 锻炼有利于强健身体 2 运动使大脑休息 学习效率更高 3 每天锻炼一小时 幸福生活一辈子 注意 1 词数 80 个左右 2 短文的开头已为你写好 不计入总词数 3 3 短文须包括所有内容要点 但不要逐句翻译 可适当加入细节 可适度发挥 使短文通顺 连贯 4 文中不得使用真实姓名 校名 Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine launched on April 29 2007 The teachers and students in our school were organized to 2 解题思路示范 1 审题 本文共有 5 个要点 时态主要采用 一般过去时和一般现在时 人称是 第一人称 段落 第一段落写活动情况 第二段落写感想 2 可能用到的短语和句型 词汇 the launching ceremony 启动仪式 build up one s body strength 强身健体 more effective 效 果更好 take part in different kinds of enjoy oneself be good for have a rest an hour a day in one s opinion have a happy life 连接词 after that besides also what s more 句型 some some others so that I think Doing sth is adj Why not do If you I m sure 内容内容感想感想 1 学校师生收看了启动仪式学校师生收看了启动仪式 launching ceremony 2 开展了一个小时的集体体育活动开展了一个小时的集体体育活动 如如 跑跑 步步 做操做操 打篮球等打篮球等 短语 短语 do different kinds of sports for an hour 1 锻炼有利于强健身体锻炼有利于强健身体 短语 短语 build up our body strength 2 运动使大脑休息 学习效率更高 短语 have a rest more effective 3 每天锻炼一小时每天锻炼一小时 幸福生活一辈子幸福生活一辈子 短语 短语 do sports an hour a day have a happy life 3 学生成文 Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine launched on April 29 2007 The teachers and students in our school were organized to see a launching ceremony After that we did different kinds of sports for an hour For example running taking exercise playing basketball and so on In my opinion do sports can help build up our body strength What s more it also can let our 4 brains have a rest then our study will more effective I am enjoy running every day I think running can make me relax So why not take part in some exercise with me every day As the saying goes do sports an hour a day have a happy face every day 点评 整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位 没有什么单词拼写错误 而且文章最后一句写得相当漂 亮 但是全文还是存在不少语法小错误和用词不当 部分句子的表达过于中式 分项分档评分表分项分档评分表 项目要素给分表 切合题意 体现要点 内容 6 分 有所发挥 6 5 5 6 5 4 5 4 3 5 3 2 521 510 语 法 词 汇 准确 性 6 分 机械性 大 小写 拼写 和格式等错 误 6 5 55 4 54 3 5 3 5 3 2 521 510 流畅 性 3 分 结构3 2 52 1 5 2 10 50000 自评总分 11 5 4 检查思路 完成作文自查表 1 如果没有问题的 请在项目后打 2 如果有问题 请在项目中圈出来 并在文中做出修改 项目 第一次自查第二次自查 布局与内容要点 人称 时态 主谓一致 动词搭配 介词搭配 5 拼写错误 好词好句 5 参考例文 Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine launched on April 29 2007 The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony After that all of us went to the playground We had different kinds of sports for an hour Some took part in running some played basketball and football and others did some exercise We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time What a good time we had I think doing sports is very good for us It helps to build up our body strength Besides our brains can have a good rest after doing sports so that our study can be more effective So why not join us If you can do sports an hour a day I m sure you can have a healthier and better life v 校园生活校园生活 1 2007 年广州市初中毕业生学业考试真题 通通 知知 活动 学生音乐会 时间 星期五下午 2 30 地点 玫瑰音乐厅 集合时间及地点 下午 1 30 学校门口 出发时间 下午 1 45 过时不候 注意事项 1 厅内不准喝饮料 不准吃食物 2 看表演过程中不得拍照 不得喧哗 3 看完表演后一起坐校车回校 注意 1 词数 80 左右 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好 但不计人总词数 2 不能透露个人的任何信息 例如 具体的学校和姓名等 否则答案作废 Hi Ben Our class is planning to go to a student concert As you weren t at school today I m sending you the information Cheers 6 Li Ping 2 解题思路 1 审题 a 本文共有 6 个要点 1 时间 星期五下午 2 30 at half past two on Friday afternoon 2 地点 玫瑰音乐厅 Rose Music Hal 3 集合时间及地点 下午 1 30 学校门口 school gate at half past one 出发时间 下午 1 45 过时不候 4 6 注意事项 1 厅内不准喝饮料 不准吃食物 No drinks or foods be allowed 2 看表演过程中不得拍照 不得喧哗 take photos during 3 看完表演后一起坐校车回校 return to school by bus b 时态主要采用 一般将来时 c 人称是 2 可能用到的短语和句型 1 主要连接词 If so also 2 主要句型 We are going to We will You can I think You should shouldn t Remember to 3 成文 In Friday afternoon we have a students music concert This music concert is start half past two p m And the concert will be held in The Rose Concert Hall We will meet at the gate of school at half past one p m and the go off at a quarter to two In the concert we must in attention First don t drinking and eating in the hall Second we needn t take photos and make noise in the show Last we will come back to school by school bus when we will be watched the concert 点评 整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位 但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多 部分句子的表达过于中 式 分项分档评分表分项分档评分表 项目要素给分表 7 切合题意 体现要点 内容 6 分 有所发挥 6 5 5 5 4 5 4 4 3 5 3 2 521 510 语 法 词 汇 准确性 6 分 机械性 大 小写 拼写 和格式等错 误 6 5 55 4 54 3 5 3 2 5 2 2 1 510 流畅性 3 分 结构3 2 52 1 5 2 10 50000 自评总分 8 4 检查思路 完成作文自查表 如果没有问题的 请在项目后打 如果有问题 请在项目中圈出来 并在文中做出修改 项目 第一次自查第二次自查 布局与内容要点 人称 时态 主谓一致 动词搭配 介词搭配 拼写错误 好词好句 5 参考例文 Hi Ben Our class is planning to go to a student concert As you weren t at school today I m sending you the information The concert will be held in the Rose Music Hall at half past two on Friday afternoon You must be at the school gate at half past one We will leave at a quarter to two Don t be late If you are late we won t wait for you No drinks or foods are allowed inside the hall Photos may not be taken during the concert Also we are not allowed to talk loudly during the show We ll return to the school by bus after the concert 8 Cheers Li Ping 四 练习四 练习 你校正在举行英语艺术节 请你根据下面的海报 写一个通知 告诉你班同学关于艺术节 读书活动的情况 注意 1 词数 80 左右 文章的开头已给出 不计入词数 Attenti