英语作文提分技巧ppt课件.ppt

范文赏析Today moreandmorestudentsgotoschoolwithmobilephones Students attitudestowardsthisvaryfrompersontoperson Thosewhosupportthissayithelpsstudentstokeepintouchwiththeirparentsandfriends Moreover usingmobilephonescanbefun However otherstudentsholdtheoppositeopinion Theythinkthatusingmobilephonescancauseproblems Firstly studentswithmobilephonesatschooldonotconcentrateonstudyingduringclass butplaygamesorsendtextmessagesinstead Besides itcostsalottouseamobilephone Asforme thereisnodenyingthatusingmobilephoneshasitsadvantages butI dstillpreferstudentstousethemathomebecausestudyshouldcomefirst 1 书面表达系列讲练之赢取高分策略 2 NMET书面表达评分原则 1 先根据文章的内容 语言和整体感觉初步确定档次 第五档 21 25分第四档 16 20分第三档 11 15分 第二档 6 10分第一档 1 5分0分 3 语言地道 规范 覆盖所有内容要点 2 主要内容 内容要点 词汇和语法的数量和准确性 上下文的连贯 语言的得体性 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 4 3 拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面 评分时 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑 5 4 词数少于80和多于120的 从总分中减去2分 5 如书写较差 以至影响交际 将分数降低一个档次 6 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少 也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少 从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 使用恰当连接词 对写一篇有 英语味 的文章很重要 能使文章上下衔接自然 紧凑 增强书面表达效果的技巧 7 1 Becausetheweatherwasgood ourjourneywascomfortable 2 Weallthinkheisagreatman 3 SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea 4 Thestudentsthereneedn tpayfortheirbooks 5 Asaresulttheplanwasafailure Theplanturnedouttobeafailure Thankstothegoodweather ourjourneywascomfortable 一 怎样使用较高级的词汇 Weallthinkhighlyofhim Agoodideaoccurredtome Agoodideasuddenlystruckme Booksarefreeforthestudentsthere 8 二丰富的句式 常用到的句型结构 利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思 能增加文章的文采 1 感叹句e g HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter Whatakindboyheis Howdisappointedhewas 2 强调句e g Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible 9 3 倒装句e g Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem Therecomesthepolicecar Hardlyhadtheygottothestationwhentheymettheyoungman 4 省略句e g Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus Cometomeifnecessary 5 with短语e g Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand 10 6 定语从句e g Inmyopinion cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation Let scometothemainteachingbuilding atthebackofwhichstandstheschoollibrary 7 各种名词性从句e g That swhatIshoulddo Weshoulddoafavourtowhoeverneedshelpatpresent 11 8 各种状语从句e g Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit Themomentwereachedthefarm wegotdowntoharvesting Solongasweworkharderatourlessons we llcatchupsoonerorlater DocallmebeforehandsothatIcanmeetyouattheairport Theyhadtowaitbecausetherainwasgettingmoreandmoreheavily 12 三高考大纲中常用的连接词1 表示递进 另外 还有 whatismore besides also moreover inaddition2 表示转折关系但是 然而 相反 but however yet instead ontheotherhand onthecontrary 13 3 表示因果关系因为 因此 所以 since as because of so thus therefore asaresult 4 表示条件关系如果 只要 if oncondition that aslongas除非 unless否则 orelse 14 5 表示时间关系当 的时候 when while在 之后 after在 之前 before直到 until一 就 assoonas后来 然后 later afterwards不久 soon近来 lately recently自从 since从那时起 fromthenon 常见的对称关系的过渡词语1 Foronething foranotherthing 2 Ononehand ontheotherhand 15 6 表示特定的顺序关系首先 最主要的 aboveall其次 secondly然后 then next最后 finally intheend lastbutnotleast7 换一种方法表述换句话说 inotherwords thatistosay 16 8 进行举例说明例如 比如 forinstance forexample like suchas9 用于陈述事实实际上 infact actually asamatteroffact跟你说实话 totellyouthetruth 17 10 对一个话题进行总结总而言之 总的来说 onthewhole inshort allinall ingeneral inaword inconclusion Tosumup inbrief其它常用到的表达1 intermsof就而言2 asfaras beconcerned3 inmyopinion view4 AsfarasIknow 5 Asforsb 18 假设你是星光中学的李华 将参加主题为 Let sRideBicycles 的英语演讲比赛 请撰写一份演讲稿 主要内容包括 1 汽车虽然便利但带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题 2 骑自行车的益处 如节能环保 有利健康等 参考词汇 低碳生活low carbonlife节能energysaving注意 1 词数 120词左右 2 演讲稿开头和结尾已给出 且该部分不计入总词数 Goodmorning everyone IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool Thetopicofmyspeechis Let sRideBicycles 19 Dearclassmates I mverygladtohavethischancetotalktoyou Thetopicofmyspeechis Let srideabicycle Asisknowntoall withtheimprovementofpeople slivingstandards carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife However theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams Howcanwesolvetheseproblemsthen AsfarasI mconcerned ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution Foronething bicyclesdon tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy saving Foranother bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon tgiveoffwastegas What smore ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexerciseanditisgoodforourhealth Therefore let staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalow carboncitybyridingbicycles Comeonandjoinus Thankyouforlistening 20 2001年春季高考作文给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信 谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化 Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife Before wehadmanyclasseseveryday Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool Iwenttobedat11 30intheevening Ihadnotimetoplay Iwasverytired NowIcanvisitmuseums Icanlearncomputeranddrawing Intheevening IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV Igotobedat10 00now 17分 21 高考满分作文I mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced Beforethat learningduringthedaywasverysimple Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlythingweshoulddo Intheevening wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo Wecouldnotgotobeduntil11 30 Nevertheless sincereducingthelearningload mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime Intheevening IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers Inolongerstayuplate onthecontrary Igotobedatabout10pm Inshort Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow 22 书面表达常用语句 书信Thanksforyourlastletter Iamwritingjusttoinformyou Inreplytoyourlastletter Iamwritingtoexplainthetwoquestionsasfollows 开头 Lookingforwardtoyourreply hearingfromyou Thanksforyourconsideration Doremembermetoyourparents 结尾 23 2 叙事Itisquiteobvious clearthat 很显然 Thereisnodoubtthat 毫无疑问 Take asanexample 以 为例 Ononehand ontheotherhand 一方面 另一方面 Onl