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英语组郑志鹏 SummaryWriting fornewsreports 1 ofanewsreport Structure 2 女孩睡前戴耳机听歌 第二天却再也没能醒过来 你有经常戴耳机听歌的习惯吗 19岁女孩GabrielleSamuels与男友通完电话后 躺在床上用耳机听音乐 但第二天 家人发现GabrielleSamuels一直迟迟没有起床 推开她的房间门 就闻到一股焦味 家人们看到GabrielleSamuels奄奄一息的躺在床上 她全身都是血迹和烧焦的痕迹 不知道经历了什么 等警方赶到 GabrielleSamuels已经死亡 调查结果显示 她当晚听音乐时手机同时在充电 充电器接头短路 强大电流瞬间从耳机灌入女孩头部 女孩的死让家人很伤心 这本来是可以避免的悲剧 很多人喜欢在电子产品充电时仍继续使用 这样直接就把你手中的电子产品变成有致命威胁的危险品 Eventingeneral Eventin oftheevent detail Reason 3 Structure Retelltheeventingeneral Retelltheeventindetail Concludethereason influenceoftheevent 4 Structure Retelltheeventingeneral Retelltheeventindetail Accordingtothestructureabove pleasefindoutwhateachparagraphisabout Concludethereason influenceoftheevent 5 Structure Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 Generaldescription Theprocessofthestoryindetail Theresultofthestory Theinfluenceofthestory 6 Structure Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 Generaldescription Theprocessofthestoryindetail Theresultofthestory Theinfluenceofthestory 7 Structure Generaldescription Theprocessofthestoryindetail Theresultofthestory Theinfluenceofthestory ofthesummarywriting Sentence Sentence2 Sentence3 Sentence4 1 8 Sentence Howtouseone totellastory 9 Sentence Whatshouldwewriteinthe 10 Whatdoes consistof story a 11 讲故事 有座山 从前 12 讲故事 有座山 有座庙 有个 他每天都下山 从前 山上 庙里 和尚 挑水喝 13 有座山 有座庙 有个 他每天都下山 从前 山上 庙里 和尚 Whatdothesewordstellyouinthestory 挑水喝 讲故事 14 从前 山上 庙里 和尚 Whatdothesewordstellyouinthestory when where where who what 挑水喝 15 when where who what why how story Whichtwoarethemostimportant Elements of 16 What stheuseoftheseelementstoourwriting when where who what why how 17 有座山 有座庙 有个 他每天都下山 从前 山上 庙里 和尚 挑水喝 What stheuseoftheseelementstoourwriting 18 从前 山上 庙里 和尚 挑水喝 Theyhelpustellthestoryinshort What stheuseoftheseelementstoourwriting 19 Pickproperelementstowriteasentenceforeachparagraph when where who what why how 20 Pickproperelementstowriteasentenceforeachparagraph Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 21 Pickproperelementstowriteasentenceforeachparagraph Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 Recently awildfishrestaurantinHarbinfacedbeingshutdownandalargefine 22 Pickproperelementstowriteasentenceforeachparagraph Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic 23 Pickproperelementstowriteasentenceforeachparagraph Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 Therestaurantaswellassomerelevantgovernmentdepartmentsreceivedtheirpunishment 24 Pickproperelementstowriteasentenceforeachparagraph Para 1 Para 2 Para 3 Para 4 Similarcaseshappenedelsewhereandthegovernmentwillpunishtheseactions 25 Similarcaseshappenedelsewhereandthegovernmentwillpunishtheseactions Recently awildfishrestaurantinHarbinfacedbeingshutdownandalargefine AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic Therestaurantaswellassomerelevantgovernmentdepartmentsreceivedtheirpunishment Canwesimplyputsentencestogetherintoawholepassage 26 Polishyourwriting 27 Polishyourwriting 1 Useconnectivewords 2 Usespecialsentences 28 1 ConnectiveWords 关联词 29 thereisnodoubtthat 30 thereisnodoubtthat asamatteroffact 31 thereisnodoubtthat asamatteroffact itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 32 thereisnodoubtthat asamatteroffact asfarassbisconcerned itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 33 thereisnodoubtthat asamatteroffact asfarassbisconcerned inmyopinion itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 34 thereisnodoubtthat itgoeswithoutsayingthat asamatteroffact asfarassbisconcerned inmyopinion itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat 35 关联词精华 段落间逻辑 句子间逻辑 36 段落间逻辑 起 合 转 承 first besides meanwhile whereas while insummary 关联词精华 句子间逻辑 37 句子间逻辑 因果 目的 让步 对比 therefore therebydoing incontrast while despite soasto 举例 forinstance 关联词精华 段落间逻辑 38 similarcaseshappenedelsewhereandthegovernmentwillpunishtheseactions Recently awildfishrestaurantinHarbinfacedbeingshutdownandalargefine AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic therestaurantaswellassomerelevantgovernmentdepartmentsreceivedtheirpunishment Therefore Besides 39 2 Specialsentences 40 2 Specialsentences 1 倒装句Neverwill can shouldsbdosth 2 非限制性定语从句主句 which 41 2 Specialsentences 1 倒装句Neverwill can shouldsbdosth 解释 某人绝不会 能 应做某事 举一反三 怎么用该句型写 某人一定要做某事 Neverwill can shouldsbstop ignoredoingsth 42 2 Specialsentences 1 倒装句Neverwill can shouldsbdosth Neverwill can shouldsbstop ignoredoingsth 适合作为文章的 句 A 总起B 总结C 过渡 总结 43 similarcaseshappenedelsewhereandthegovernmentwillpunishtheseactions Besides 实战练习 将第四段主旨句改成倒装句 Besides similarcaseshappenedelsewhereand neverwillthegovernmentstoppunishingtheseactions 44 2 Specialsentences e g HarryPotterisaninterestingbook whichweallknow 2 非限制性定语从句主句 which which指 45 2 Specialsentences e g HarryPotterisaninterestingbook whichweallknow 2 非限制性定语从句主句 which 前一个句子里的事件与第二句有逻辑关联 就可以用该句型合成长句 46 2 Specialsentences 2 非限制性定语从句主句 which 因果 Hegotawarded Hefeltproud 改写 whichmadehimproud 目的 Hehuggedher Hewantedtoshowlove 改写 whichwastoshowhislove 47 AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic therestaurantaswellassomerelevantgovernmentdepartmentsreceivedtheirpunishment Therefore 实战练习 将第二 三段主旨句合成长句 提示 两段之间是什么逻辑关系 48 AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic whichledtopunishmentontherestaurantandsomerelevantgovernmentdepartments 实战练习 将第二 三段主旨句合成长句 AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic therestaurantaswellassomerelevantgover