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记叙文范文赏析记叙文范文赏析 范文分析Directions Now you are allowedthirty minutes to write a passageon thetitle My Best Friend You shouldwrite at least120words butno more than180words followingthe outline given belowin Chinese 1 简要介绍你最好的朋友 2 你们之间的故事 3 你对朋友的理解 范文MyBestFriend Upon the words best friend a figureJumps intomy mind jump这个词使一个人物形象活灵活现地展现在读者眼前 Zhang Ye my schoolmatein seniorhigh school and alsomy best friend During thethree yearsin highschool we sharedcountless momentsof laughter and tears joy andsorrow 排比句式能使表达更有力度 而且将与朋友的共同经历 描绘得丰富多彩 She isof mediumheight andslim figure Though notstrong she isreally a girl with amazing stamina 毅力 Despite thesimilarities inour outlookon lifeand living it is always she the physicallyweaker one who encouragedand urgedme tofinish sometasks when I attemptedto giveup When wewere preparingfor theNational EntranceExam she cheeredme upemotionally andwould giveme ahand wheneverI wasin trouble But foreverything shedid forme I couldn t havehad thisopportunity toget adecent jobwithadecent pay After theexam she gotenrolled byTsinghua Universityin Beijingwhile Iwent toa collegein southChina 对3年中两人共同勉励 共同奋斗经历的叙述为读者展 示了一段难忘的人生时光 确实不愧为best friend For thepast severalyears we havebeen intouch andshare everythingwe areexperiencing sad orhappy dull orexciting True friendshiplasts lifelong Friendship isa magic It canmelt theice inone s heartand blow away the mist on one s mind It caninspire othersand outdothe self 再次应用排比句式表达了对友谊真谛的理解 感人至深 I believethe friendshipbetween ZhangYe andme will be thelife time beaconfor bothof us 评析这是一篇典型的人物记叙文 大多数人物记叙文都遵循一个比较固定的写作套路 即 第一段叙述 文中人物与作者的关系 并对人物进行综合评价 第二段叙述文中人 物其个人或与作者共同的某段经历 活动 第三段进行综合叙述 本文的第一段总体叙述了两个人相识相知的经历并用一个排比结构 总括了两人共同经历的苦与乐 欢笑与泪水 laughterandtears jo y andsorrow 第二段通过对具体事例的叙述将人物的性格特点表现得淋漓尽致 也丰富了bestfriend这个称谓的具体内涵 最后一段作者陈述了自己对友谊真谛的感悟 使文章的主题得到升 华 而其中所使用的句式和词汇 melt theice inone s heart blowawaythemistonone s mind inspire othersand outdothe self 也展示了作者深厚的语言功底 叙事记叙文参考模版中心模板英文模板教师笔记 一 背景描述段1 每个人都有挥之不去的难忘记忆 2 对我来说 这件事发生在 时间和地点 我对整个过程仍记忆犹 新 3 当时 我正在 我 在做什么 1 Everyone has an unforgettablememory andcannot removeit 2 To me it happened 时间和地点 I stillremember thewhole processvividly 3 At thattime I was 我 在做什么 一 背景描述段要点1 精辟开头 说明背景 指明事件性质 插入现在进行时的动词词组 二 说明过程段4 那天天气很好 在发生那件事之前一切都很 形 容词 5 然后 事件吸引了我的注意力 6 我看见 详细说明当时情况 令我 表达感受的名词 当事人 正在 正在进行的动作 7 整个过程持续的时间并不长 但给予我的印象却相当深刻 我将 自己的感受 4 It wasa sunnyday andthings wereawfully 形容词before it happened 5 Then 事件drew my attention 6 I saw 详细说明当时情况 and tomy 表达感受的名词 当事人was 正在进行的动作 7 It didnot lastvery long but itimpressed meso deeplythat Iwould 自己的感受 二 说明过程段要点按时间顺序讲述事情发生的过程 可以添加自 己的感受 表述事情的发展状况 插入名词 插入 人 动词的分词形式 表主动 用现在分词 表被动 用过 去分词 宾语 主动 by名词 被动 三 观点总结段8 每当我回忆起那天的事 我都觉得 理应采取的 措施或态度一是对的 9 首先 没人能否认它 他 她 对当事人评价的名词或名词词组 10 其次 理应采取的措施或态度二对我们来说很重要 11 我将一生珍视这段回忆 8 Whenever Ilook backon whathappened thatday I thinkit isright to 理应采取的措施或态度一 9 First of all no onecan denyits his her 对当事人评价的名词 10 Furthermore it isimportant forus to 理应采取的措施或态度二 11 I willcherish allthese memoriesforever 三 观点总结段要点通过事情的回忆 提出自己看法 并进行总结 动词词组 动词用原形 动词词组 动词用原形 例文1题目 An Eye witness Aountof aTraffic AidentDirections for thispart you areallowed30minutes towrite aposition on the topicAn Eye witness Aountof aTraffic Aident You shouldwrite atleast120words and base your position on the outlinegivenbelow 1 车祸发生的时间及地点2 你所见到的车祸情 况3 你对车祸原因的分析Sample A 中心模板英文模板教师笔记 一 背景描述段1 每个人都有挥之不去的难忘记忆 2 对我来说 这件事发生在 上周日上午 我对整个过程仍记忆犹 新 3 当时 我正 走在人行道上 1 Everyone hasan unforgettablememory andcannot removeit 2 To me it happened on themorning oflast Sunday I stillremember thewhole processvividly 3 At thattime I was walking on the sidewalk 一 背景描述段要点1 精辟开头 说明背景 指明事件性质 插入现在进行时的动词词组 表示正要做什么的词组还有be readyfor doing be about to be going to 二 说明过程段4 那天天气很好 在发生那件事之前一切都很 顺 利 5 然后 巨大的撞击声吸引了我的注意力 6 我看见 一个女人被一辆快速行驶的车撞倒了 令我 惊愕的是 那辆车正 试图逃离现场作 7 整个过程持续的时间并不长 但给予我的印象却相当深刻 我将 在马路上更加当心 4 It wasa sunnyday andthings wereawfully smooth beforeit happened 5 Then a loud crash drew myattention 6 I saw a womanknocked downby aspeeding car and tomy astonishment the driverwas trying todrive away 7 It didnot lastvery long but itimpressed meso deeplythat Iwould be morecareful on the street 二 说明过程段要点按时间顺序讲述事情发生的过程 可以添加自 己的感受 表述事情的发展状况 若要表示顺利或好的意思可用smooth all right 插入名词 插入 人 过去分词 表被动 by名词 被动 三 观点总结段8 每当我回忆起那天的事 我都觉得 处罚那些不 负责任的司机是对的 9 首先 没人能否认 其正确性 10 其次 限制驾驶速度对我们来说很重要 11 我将一生珍视这段回忆 8 Whenever Ilook backon whathappened thatday I thinkit isright to punish thoseirresponsible drivers 9 First ofall no onecan denyits rightness 10 Furthermore it isimportant forus to limit thedriving speed 11 I willcherish allthese memoriesforever 三 观点总结段要点通过事情的回忆 提出自己看法 并进行总结 名词后还可以接不定式 to 名词 来表示 做 是正确的 等等 Sample B It wasat about9 00on Sundaymorning when Iwent outof thecampus togo toa supermarketfor ashopping I waswalking leisurelyon thesidewalk ofXueyuang RoadwhenIheard aloudcrashjust at the crossabout10meters away Two carscrashed together It wasa serioustraffic aident Lots ofpeople rushedto thespot tosee whathad happened me included I foundtwo cars were badlydamaged witha doorknocked off One driverwas bloodingon hisforehead and another wasshut inthe taxi Some peoplewere tryingto helpthe driverget outof thedamaged car others werecalling110and120for help At thattime alot ofcarswerejammed onthe road It isobvious thattwo driverswere drivingtoo fast What s worse they areall tryingto passthe crossat thelast momentwith theyellow lighton Certainly the aidentis inevitable But ifall ofthe driversobey thetraffic rulesand remember the sloganeverywhere onthe streetthat says a littleslower a littlesafer everything willbe OK Therefore please keepin yourmind taking care of other s livesmeans taking careofyour ownlife Sample C When I was goingback homefrom collegeat fouro clock inthe afternoonlast Friday June13th xx I witnesseda terriblecar aident The aidenttook placeontheNanjing Road As faras Icould remember I waswalking onthe pavementandablue Santanaswiftly passedby When itapproached atruck parkedonthe roadside suddenly agirlstepped outfrom behindthe truck On seeingthe girl the cardriver pulleda suddenbrake However itwas toolate The girlwas hitby thecar andbounced offatleastthree meters Then shelay onthe road her legswere seeminglyinjured The policeand theambulance arrivedin less than fiveminutes andthe girlwas sentto hospitalimmediately That isall Ihad seen To methe maincause ofthe aidentmight belike this The girlwas justabouttowalk tothe otherside oftheroadwhen thecar movednear She shouldhave seenthe approachingdanger Unfortunately her viewwas blockedby thehuge vehicle which eventuallyled tothe tragedy 例文2A SpecialSocial Practice1 Everyone hasan unforgettablememory andcannot removeit 2 To me it happened during mylast winterholiday I stillrememberthewhole processvividly 3 At thattime Iwas working asan assistantin aputer pany 4 It wasa sunnyday andthings wereawfully dull beforeithappened 5 Then my colleaguesdrewmyattention 6 I saw them celebrating and tomy delight they were talking happilyabout agreat suessofaproject 7 It didnot lastvery long but itimpressed meso deeplythat Iwould pursue thesame profession 8 Whenever Ilook backon whathappened thatday I thinkit isright to pursue suess 9 First ofall no onecan denyits ability tobring happiness 10 Furthermore it isimportant forus to cooperate withcolleague 11 I willcherish allthese memoriesforever 一对外发行的英文报纸有 人物剪影 栏目 请 根据下面的提示写一篇短文 介绍我国著名乒乓球运动员王楠 提示1 王楠1978年10月出生于辽宁 2 身高1 62米 体重54公斤 3 7岁开始打球 1989年进入辽宁队 1993年入选国家队 4 训练刻苦 与队友相处融洽 5 喜欢上网 交友 网址wangnan wang nan 6 在国际比赛中获得几十枚金牌 为国家争得了荣誉 注意1 题目自拟 2 不要逐条翻译提示 可适当增加细节 使短文连 贯 3 词数100 140Wang Nan World Championin Pingpong Wang Nan a worldchampion inPing Pong is1 62meter tallwith theweight of54kilograms She wasborn in Liaoning Provincein October1978 She beganto playping pongattheage ofseven She workedinLiaoningTeam forthree yearsbefore shecame tothe nationalteam in1993 She trainedhard andgot alongwell withher teammates WangNanhas wonscores ofgold medalsin internationaltable tennis gamesand wongreat hon or forour motherland She likesgoing onthe and sheenjoys chattingwith friendsthr ough theInter You canfind moreinformation abouther atWangnan wang nan Directions For thispart youareallowed30minutestowriteaposition onthe topicMy MostFavorite Programmer You shouldwrite nolessthan100words andyou shouldbaseyourpositionontheoutline given inChinese below 1 我最喜爱的电视 或无线电 节目是 2 这类 节目的内容和特点3 我喜欢它的原因My MostFavorite ProgrammerThe NewsReport hasalways beenmy favoriteTV program Almost everydayI turnontheTV at6 30p m and waitfor thenews program This hasbee apart ofmy life The NewsReport containsa largeamount ofinformation Cfrom theinternational political situation tothe latestfoot ball game And themost importantcharacter isits fastpace Because ofthis fastpace news programscan containmuch informationin ashort time In myopinion the NewsReport ismorethana TVprogram It isa wayof munication From thisprogram people canknow andunderstand worldaffairs The worldthus beessmaller I especiallyappreciate thisbenefit ofwatching thenews 今天是教师节 请根据以下提示写一篇记叙你的英语老师 的短文 约220词左右 1 李老师教课生动活泼 印象深刻 2 上课前班长通知说李老师要动手术 暂时不能来上课 谁能代课 还未决定 3 同学们悄然无声 似乎都担心她不再来上课了 4 李老师走进教室 她说不愿意耽误同学们的功课 要求医生推迟 了手术时间 并说新老师明天就来 希望同学们同老师很好地相处 她病愈即返 校 Miss Liis ourEnglish teacher She alwaysimpresses usdeeply withher livelyEnglish class One daywhen the first bellrang the monitorstood upand said Our Englishteacher isgoingtohave anoperation today It hasnot beendecided yetwho willgive usthe lesson The classturned silentat hiswords It seemedthat noone wouldbelieve him In fact all ofus wereafraid thatMiss Liwould nolonger bewith us At thismoment Miss Liappeared atthe door She lookedtired andpale I llbemissing youbadly she saidin alow voice I haveasked thedoctor toput offthe operationtill tomorrowbecause Idon t wantyou tomiss asingle class She wenton A newteacher willtake myplace andI hopeyou ll geton wellwith him I ll eback as soon asI m better Hearing this all ofus weremoved totears What a good teacherwe have 常用句式及常用表达1 表示时间after after ashort long time period afterwards assoonas at last finally from thattime on immediately lately nowadays recently shortly since since then then when while2 表示因果aordingly asaresult consequen ce consequently hence so therefore thus3 平行结构 排比结 构 这种结构的使用可以使行文生动 简洁 紧凑 富有节奏感 1 有些排比结构是通过连词来实现的 and but or neither nor either or not only but also both and as wellas 2 但更多的情况下这种结构是通过词性 均为名词 动词 形容词 等 词形 均为分词形式等 和词组结构 均为不定式 从句 介词 词组等 的一致与对应实现的 以下是5个排比结构1 My mother s rolein myfamily iswashing cleaning andtakingcareof herchildren 2 Studies servefor delight for ornament and forability 学习足以怡情 足以博采 足以长才 3 The Americangirl impressedis assweet kind andgenerous 4 Jeff hasexperienced aperiod ofanxiety forisolation fromparents when hefirst went tothe kindergarten when hefirst attendeda lodgingschoolandwhenhefirstwentto collegein anothercity 杰夫第一次去幼儿园 第一次住校读书 第一次到另 外一个城市去读大学时 都经历了与父母分离而产生的焦虑时期 5 Never hadBrent seensuch cha