大学英语四级考试写作必备模板

大学英语四级考试写作讲座 内容提要 四级写作应达到的水平四级作文评分标准作文条理性及相关句式写作模板 写作一般要求我能填写常见表格如注册表 申请表 问卷调查表等 我能写给或回复他人祝贺卡 生日卡 邀请信 便条 短信 通知等 我能写出简单的指示语 个人广告 社团海报 个人简历等 我能简要地描述个人经历 发生的事件 读过的故事 观看的影片 喜怒哀乐等情感 写出或回答个人或公司的信函 电子邮件 传真等 我能就一定话题或提纲在30分钟内写出不少于120词的短文 内容基本完整 中心思想明确 用词恰当 语意连贯 我能在一般写作或应用文写作中恰当使用相应的写作技能 评分标准 2 不切题 条理不清 思路紊乱 语言支离破碎 5 基本切题 表达思想不清楚 连贯性差 大部分句子均有错误 且多数为严重错误 8 基本切题 有些地方表达思想不够清楚 文字勉强连贯 语言错误相当多 其中有一些是严重错误 11 切题 表达思想清楚 文字连贯 但有少量语言错误 14 切题 表达思想清楚 文字通顺 连贯性较好 基本无语言错误 仅有个别小错 注 白卷 作文与题目毫不相关 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想 则给0分 字数不足以应酌情扣分 1 如题目中给出主题句 起始句 结束句 均不得计入所写字数 2 只写一段者 0 4 只写两段者 0 9 指规定三段的作文 条理性 作文是主观性题 要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去 评卷老师的时间很短 每份卷子的作文只有一两分钟就要阅完 用firstofall second tobeginwith afterthat next moreimportant atlast等短语 可以使阅卷老师一眼就看出你作文的条理性 增加条理性的常用句式 表层次 递进 Furthermore What smore Also Next Besides Moreover Inaddition Lastbutnotleast 增加条理性的常用句式 表因果 Therefore Consequently becauseof thanksto Thus isdueto owingto Onthisaccount Since as Asaresult Asaconsequence 增加条理性的常用句式 表总结 Insummary Inaword Inconclusion Inshort Tosumup 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赢得 取得acquire obtain attain reap gain procure 支持 赞成approveof infavorof uphold standbyone sside agreewith提倡advocate recommend反对 抵制oppose objectto beagainst resist重大的 有决定性的profound significant eventful vital crucial critical decisive运用 使用optimize makefull bestuseof employ utilize apply 当前 目前nowadays atpresent currently presently表达 说voice convey express deliver communicate适应beadaptedto beaccustomedto beadjustedto阻碍 阻止hinder curb hamper restrain prevent wardoff avoid 好处 优点advantage merit benefit坏处 缺点disadvantage defect flaw drawback deficiency参加participatein takepartin attend goinfor engagein集中精力于 专心于focus one sattention on centeron concentrateon setone smindon依赖 依靠depend relyon leanon取决于itdependson 努力做 尽力做attemptto makeeffortsto endeavorto manageto进步 成就 成绩advancement achievement accomplishment feat fulfillment除 外apartfrom inadditionto alongwith开展 实施 做practice carryout enforce conduct perform 强调 重视 突出lay placeemphasison attachemphasisto stresson highlight优秀的outstanding brilliant remarkable 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haveeffecton意识到beawareof beconsciousof 写作模板 对立观点型 辩论型说明原因型解决问题型 对立观点型 辩论型 A 一个校园或社会现象 问题B 有人认为X是好事 赞成X 为什么 有人认为X是坏事 反对X 为什么 C 我的看法 对立观点型 辩论型 Nowadays moreandmorepeoplebecomeconcernedaboutthesocial economic environmental problem phenomenonthat出现的现象或问题 Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic Withthedevelopmentofsociety moreandmoreXhavecomeintobeing 说明这种现象的情况或举例子 Thereisahotdebategoingonarguingwhethertheyaregoodforthepublicornot especiallyforcollegestudents Eachcoinhastwosides Asforsuchaquestion differentpeopleholddifferentopinions Somebelievethat支持X的第一个原因 Ontheonehand Theyalsoarguethat支持X的另一个原因 However thereisanoppositevoice whichclaimthat反对X的第一个理由 Ontheotherhand Theyfirmlypointoutthat反对X的第二个理由 AsfarasI mconcerned IholdthebeliefthattheadvantagesofXoverweighthedisadvantages because说明原因 Isuggestweshould建议 对立观点型 辩论型 e g 2008 6 真题Directions Forthispart youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicRecreationalactivities Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline giveninChinese below 1 娱乐活动多种多样2 娱乐活动可以使人们受益 也可能有危害性3 作为大学生我们的看法 对立观点型 辩论型 范文 Withthedramaticdevelopmentofsocietyandtheimprovementofpeople slivingstandard moreandmorerecreationalactivitiesarecomingintobeing SomepeoplemaygotoKTVwiththeirfriendsonweekendstogetrelaxedafterfivedaysintensework Meanwhile othersmightchoosetosurftheinternettokilltimeandappreciatevastresourcesontheinternet Everythinghastwosidesjustlikeacoin andentertainmentisnoexception Differentpeopleholddifferentopinionsonrecreationalactivities Ontheonehand amusementactivitiescanenrichpeople slivesandbroadenpeople shorizons Ontheotherhand somepeoplemaywastetheirtimeiftheyfailtoapproachrecreationproperly Asfarascollegestudentsareconcerned Iholdthebeliefthattheadvantagesofrecreationalactivitiesoverweighthedisadvantages becausewecantakeadvantageofthebenefitstorelaxourselvesandlearnmanythingsoutofschool Weshouldalwayskeepthefollowingwordsinmind itisessentialtobeself disciplinedandstayawayfromthenegativeinfluencesfromrecreationalactivities 对立观点型 辩论型 2009 6 真题Freeadmissiontomuseums1 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么 2 也会带来一些问题3 你的看法 2006年12月英语四级作文1 许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 2 但有些人提出取消春节晚会 3 我的看法 说明原因型 A 出现的现象B 一些人这样做的原因 另一些人这样做的原因 还有一部分人这样做的原因C 我的看法 这种现象造成的结果 说明原因型 Nowadays moreandmorepeoplebecomeconcernedaboutthesocial economic environmental problem phenomenonthat出现的现象或问题 Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic 说明这种现象的情况或举例子 However asforthereasonswhypeople differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions Somepeople inorderto Somepeoplewantto sothat Andtheothershavethepurposeof AsfarasIamconcerned effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento SoIsuggest给出建议 Thisphenomenonwillleadto 造成什么结果 Anotherresultis 说明原因型 e g 2007 12 真题WhatElectivesToChoose1 各学校开了各种各样的选修课2 学生选课有不同的原因3 就我而言 说明原因型 WiththereformofChinesehighereducation moreandmorecollegesanduniversitiesputanemphasisonnurturingstudents practicalabilities Asaresult avarietyofelectivecoursesareavailableforcollegestudentsofallmajors Certainly asforstudents reasonstochoosetheirownelectives differentstudentshavedifferentopinions Somestudentschoosetheelectivesinordertodeveloppracticalskills whicharetheessentialpartofcollegeeducation andtherefore coursesoncomputerscience marketing andfinancearehighlypreferred Ontheotherhand othersmaythinkthatliberaleducationandelectivesconcerningliterature history andphilosophyarethemostwelcomed AsfarasI mconcerned universityisnotaplaceforsurvivalskills butapalaceofknowledgeandcriticalreasoning Althoughmymajorischemistry theelectivesIattendmostfrequentlyareEnglishliterature anIntroductiontoClassicMusic andDifferentSchoolsofWesternPainting Theyreallybroadenmyhorizon 说明原因型 2010 6 真题DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling1 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2 出现这种情况的原因3 这种现象导致的结果 解决问题型 A 出现了什么现象 造成了问题一 二 三B 解决的途径一 二 三C 我的途径 解决问题型 Nowadays Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic anditmightleadtosomeproblems Oneobviousproblemisthat问题1 问题2isanotherproblem Theworstresultmaybe问题3 However theproblemscanbedealtwithinmanydifferentways Themostcommonwayis途径1 Anotherwayis途径2 Thereisstillthethirdchoicethat途径3 Asforme Iwouldliketo because Therefore Ichooseto 2008年12月英语四级作文LimitingtheUseofDisposalBags1 一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用2 造成的问题3 限制使用塑的意义 2009年6月英语四级作文Freeadmissiontomuseums越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么 也会带来一些问题你的看法 解决问题型 e g 2000 1 真题HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation Direction Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation Youshouldwriteatleast100words andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline giveninChinese below 1 上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决2 哪种途径适合我 说明理由 解决问题型 Everyyear thousandsofyoungmenenteruniversitiesandcolleges Ithasbeenaproblemforsomestudentsandtheirfamiliestofinancetheircollegeeducation Infact theproblemcanbedealtwithinmanyways Themostcommonwayistogetallthemoneyfromtheparents Iftheirparentscan taffordthefees studentscanapplyforaloanfromthebank Thereisstillanotherway Studentscanfinancetheireducationbydoingsomepart timejobsintheirsparetime Asforme myparentscanpaythegreaterpartofthefeesforme So Iwon thaveaheavyfinancialburden andIcanfocusonmystudy Iwouldliketopaytherestofthemoneybydoingapart timejob becausealthoughmyparentsareabletopayallthetuition Istillwanttoknowmoreaboutsocietythroughmyownworkingexperience Therefore Ichoosethiswaytofinancemycollegeeducation 图表式作文 A 说明图标内容和显示的变化B 说明原因一二三C 预测发展趋势 有什么困难问题 怎么解决 图表式作文 第一句先说明主题是什么 Readingthischart wecanfindthat Itisobviousinthegraph tablethattherate number amountofYhasgoneup grown fallen droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears asXvaries AtthepointofX1 Yreachesitspeakvalueof 多少 Whatisthereasonforthischange Mainlythereare 多少 reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraph table Firstofall playanimportantrolein 第一个原因 Also leadsto 第二个原因 Besides enables to 第三个原因 Fromtheabovediscussions wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture Thetrenddescribedinthegraph tablewillcontinueforquitealongtime ifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势 Therearesomeproblems difficultiesin Forexample Soweshould 图表式作文 2002 6真题Directions ForthispartyouareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicStudentUseofComputers Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow 1 上图 图略 所示为1990年 1995年 2002年某校大学生事业计算机的情况 请描述其变化2 请说明发生这些变化的原因 可从计算机的用途 价格或社会发展等方面加以说明 3 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题 图表式作文 Studentstendtousecomputersmoreandmorenowadays Readingthischart wecanfindthattheaveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsonthecomputerperweekhasincreasedsharply In1990 ithaslessthan2hours andin1995 itincreasedtoalmost4hours andin2000 thenumbersoaredto20hours Obviouslycomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular Mainlytherearethreereasonsforthis Firstofall computersplayanimportantroleinmanyaspectsoflife Also fastdevelopmentoftheInternetleadstogreaterdemandsforusingcomputers WecaneasilycontactwithfriendsinremoteplacesthroughtheInternet Besides thepriceofcomputersaregettinglowerandlower whichenablesmorestudentstoaffordthem However therearesomeproblems Forexample somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeinplayingcomputergamesandforgettostudy Soweshouldbalancethetimebetweenusingcomputersandstudying Anyhow wewillbenefitalotfromcomputersaslongasweusethemproperly 论证句式 表示原因表示好处表示坏处表示重要 必要 困难 方便 可能表示措施表示变化 表示原因 Therearethreereasonsfor Thereasonsfor areasfollows Thereasonfor isthat 表示好处 Ithasthefollowingadvantages Itdoesusalotofgood Itbenefitsusquitealot Itisbeneficialtous Ithasapositiveeffect 表示坏处 Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages Itdoesusmuchharm Itisharmfultous Ithassomenegativeeffects 表示重要 必要 困难 方便 可能 Itisimportant necessary difficult convenient possible forsb todosth Wethinkitimportant necessary difficult convenient possible todosth Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife 表示措施 Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome conquer thedifficulties Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfrontedwith 表示变化 Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears Agreatchangewillcertainlyappearintheworld scommunications Thecomputerhasbroughtaboutmanychangesineducation 2009年6月英语四级作文 Freeadmissiontomuseums1 越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么 2 也会带来一些问题3 你的看法 FreeAdmissiontoMuseums 满分版 Nowadays anincreasingnumberofmuseumsareadmission freetovisitorshomeandabroad Thehiddenreasonbehindthisisnothardtoanalyzeasthere sagrowingawarenessoftheauthoritiesregardingtheurgencyofpopularizationofculture knowledgeandhistorywitheveryaveragepersoninoursociety Onlywithfreeaccesstothislive database canmostpeoplefullyenjoywhatmuseumscouldofferthem However freeadmissiontomuseumsmightleadtosomesocialproblemsaswell Themostobviousproblemisthatitmightgivemuseumsaveryheavyeconomicburdenwhichdirectlyimpedesthesustainabledevelopmentoftheseorganizations Asaresult ourgovernmenthastoworkoutotherwaystocoll