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韩国交换学习计划篇一:学习计划批改-申请赴韩国交换_托福写作智课网TOEFL备考资料学习计划批改:申请赴韩国交换_托福写作这篇study plan读下来显得有点空泛,建议内容方面再丰富一些。另外,注意变化句型句式。 So, when I was informed that school of Law in CAU in not available for international exchange students, I didnt get regretful, instead, I became exciting for I will get an opportunity to learn knowledge in another field (这句话较为中式,建议换个方式来表达,如 I feel excited and chanllenging when being informed that I could apply for another field instead of law in CAU)原文:Im XXX from XXX, female, major in law. After a two-year long study in law, I found out that a law school student should not only comprehend what is written in the codes, but also understand the society, especially the area in which we are going to practice law. So, when I was informed that school of Law in CAU in not available for international exchange students, I didnt get regretful, instead, I became exciting for I will get an opportunity to learn knowledge in another field.(这句话较为中式,建议换个方式来表达,如 I feel excited and chanllenging when being informed that I could apply for another field instead of law in CAU.)Among all the departments, I prefer to study in the school of business administration most, because I have been interested in business for a long time, and want to become a lawyer who has specialty in dealing with business-related matters. However, though my home university is famous for its law school, it has little strength in business administration education. Therefore, I would like to study in acomprehensive university which is professional in business administration, if the university is located in a developed country where the economic is prosperous, that will be great. Thus, to me, CAU is a perfect destination of aninternational exchange program.I have taken several courses in commercial laws, such as Securities Law and Insurance Law and got high marks in the final exams. Besides, I took an internship in AIA Group Limited (Hong Kong) through a summer program last year. AIA Group Limited is the biggest insurance company in Hong Kong, during my work there, I communicated to theirmanagers and staffs, gained a lot of beneficial experience.(内容较为空洞,建议列举具体的实例说明)Although my internship in Hong Kong isnt long-lasted, I learned many useful knowledge in business administration and insurance and get more interested in business administration from then on.As I have mentioned, I highly appreciated the education offered in CAU, because is ranked 6th among universities in Korea, and is regarded as the first-choice university by Korean students. The first time I read the motto to CAU, I was deeply move, Die in justice, live in righteousness, it is also the goal I am purchasing.Except all of the spiritual motivation, I have some detailed study plan. First, I going to enhance my linguistic ability. I will learn and practice Korean before and during my exchange program at CAU so that I can adapt to the environment quickly and communicate to local students easily. Whats more, enhancing my reading and writing skills in English must be important. I will definitely keep practicing and make sure I can finish the program without the handicap of language. Second, I plan to learn some theories and practical skills in business administration. I will choose courses likeinternational business, management science, marketing and consumer behavior etc. if permitted. I have already bought some related books, with then I can prepare those lessons in the coming summer holiday and understand the courses in CAU better. After I come back to my home university, i will combine my knowledge in business and law, and continue chasing my dream as a good lawyer(如果是要凑够字数,建议加一些描述学校的优势之类的话,或者提及自己的喜好等,以此进一步说明自己非常适合来CAU读书).TPO小站综合点评及批改意见:总的来说,这篇study plan读下来显得有点空泛,建议内容方面再丰富一些。另外,注意变化句型句式。篇二:学习计划批改-赴韩国交换_托福写作智课网TOEFL备考资料学习计划批改:赴韩国交换_托福写作申请赴韩国交换,学习计划批改。总的来说,TPO小站认为这篇学习计划写得太过笼统,之前的相关领域的一些成就,体会,和为什么转专业做交换学习都没有完全交代清楚,不够细化具体。 学习该专业的理由,未来的计划以及所做的准备工作,建议参考这个思路来重新组织文章结构。原文:Introduction of my backgroundIm XXX, female, a sophomore studying in XXX. During the past 2 years, I was fascinated in the knowledge I have learned. I got a competitive GPA 4.14(equivalent to 3.44/4.0 ) and won a second scholarship (top 15%). I won the first prize of debate competition and diplomatic negotiation competition in our university for many times. The more had I experienced, the stronger willing of getting challenges and broaden my horizon raised. So I seize the opportunity of this international exchange program for the coming fall semester.Why CAUFirst, CAU located in Korea, a fascinating country. Korea is a center of economic activity, culture, and arts, owing an excellent industrial system, those industrial products influence our life, for instance, everyone in my family use mobile phone produced in Korea. Recently Korean dramas, movies, and music are attracting many audiences all around the world, watching Korean drama with my friends in leisure time is one of my hobbies. Thus, Id love to study and live in Korea for a period of time.Second, CAU is a attracted university with long history, high reputation and high quality of education. Ranked 6th among universities in Korea, CAU is the first-choice university by Korean students, it is the best choice for me as well. I am dreaming to become a contributing member of society and believing that I can get closer to righteousness and truth with the help of CAU.Why do I choose to study business administrationI have been interested in business for a long time, though Im major in law. Last summer, I got an internship in AIA Group Limited (Hong Kong) through a summer program, developed my interest in business administration. After came back to my home university, I choose several course about commercial law, such as securities law and insurance law, both got high marks in the final exams. I choose to study business administration in order to enlarge my knowledge about business, combine my knowledge in law and business, get ready to become a lawyer who has specialty in dealing with business-related matters.Detailed study plan1. Enhance my linguistic abilityI will learn and practice Korean before and during my exchange program at CAU so that I can adapt to theenvironment quickly and communicate to local students easily. Whats more, enhancing my reading and writing skills in English must be important. I will definitely keep practicing and make sure I can finish the program without the handicap of language.2. Learn some theories and practical skills in business administrationI will choose courses like international business, management science, marketing and consumer behavior etc. if permitted and study those courses with all my enthusiazen.批改后:Introduction of my backgroundIm XXX, female, a sophomore studying in XXX. During the past 2 years, I was fascinated in the knowledge I have learned.(建议将所学的专业具体介绍出来。)I got a competitive GPA 4.14(equivalent to 3.44/4.0 ) and won asecond scholarship (top 15%). I won the first prize of debate competition and diplomatic negotiation competition in our university for many times. The more had I experienced, the stronger willing of getting challenges and broaden my horizon raised. So I seize the opportunity of this international exchange program for the coming fall semester. (关于GPA及奖学金相关的信息,建议在简历中列举出来。在这里最好是重点介绍在本科阶段学习到的知识与技能,以及还有那些方面有不足,因此才申请做交换。)Why CAUFirst, CAU located in Korea, a fascinating country. Korea is a center of economic activity, culture, and arts, owing an excellent industrial system, those industrial products influence our life, for instance, everyone in my family use mobile phone produced in Korea. Recently Korean dramas, movies, and music are attracting many audiences all around the world, watching Korean drama with my friends in leisure time is one of my hobbies. Thus, Id love to study and live in Korea for a period of time.Second, CAU is a attracted university with long history, high reputation and high quality of education. Ranked 6th among universities in Korea, CAU is the first-choice university by Korean students, it is the best choice for me as well. I am dreaming to become a contributing member of society and believing that I can get closer to righteousness and truth with the help of CAU.(建议将喜欢CAU的原因,描述得更为详尽具体;另外就是第二个理由才是重点,建议与第一个理由互换一下位置。)Why do I choose to study business administrationI have been interested in business for a long time, though Im major in law. Last summer, I got an internship in AIA Group Limited (Hong Kong) through a summer program, developed my interest in business administration. After came back to my home university, I choose several course about commercial law, such as securities law and insurance law, both got high marks in the final exams. I choose to study business administration in order to enlarge my knowledge about business, combine my knowledge in law and business, get ready to become a lawyer who has specialty in dealing with business-related matters.(看到这里,才知道是要转专业。建议在第一段介绍完自己的学习背景后,就直接接这一段。)Detailed study plan1. Enhance my linguistic abilityI will learn and practice Korean before and during my exchange program at CAU so that I can adapt to theenvironment quickly and communicate to local students easily. Whats more, enhancing my reading and writing skills in English must be important. I will definitely keep practicing and make sure I can finish the program without the handicap of language.2. Learn some theories and practical skills in business administrationI will choose courses like international business, management science, marketing and consumer behavior etc. if permitted and study those courses with all my enthusiazen. (最好将具体的课程名称细化出来。)TPO小站综合点评及批改意见:总的来说,这篇学习计划写得太过笼统,之前的相关领域的一些成就,体会,和为什么转专业做交换学习都没有完全交代清楚,不够细化具体。 学习该专业的理由-未来的计划-所做准备,建议参考这个思路来重新组织文章结构。篇三:韩国交流生学习计划韩国留学学习计划我叫韩洋,女,籍贯黑龙江省尚志市, 19xx年x月x日出生于xx市xx区xx庄。身份证号码:xx。我从儿时便开始对韩国的各个方面产生了浓厚的兴趣。在对它深入了解的过程中,我渐渐认识到了韩国与中国同属东亚,并且同样具有重要的地位。通过我从各方面的了解,我发现韩国是传统的东方礼仪之邦,具有悠久的历史和灿烂的文化,无论是在语言,文字上,还是在传统的建筑,服饰,饮食,体育上等,都蕴含着独特的民族色彩,并且与此同时,现代的韩国也在飞速的发展着。在科技方面,例如在电子,汽车等领域的成绩在世界上占有重要的地位;在文化方面,韩国的教育水平具有世界级的水准,可以给留学生提供学习先进文化的机会;在艺术方面,韩国的电影,音乐等现代艺术,也对亚洲及世界的青年人产生了巨大的影响。此外,更加令我欣赏的是韩国人所特有的民族感及道德观念。韩国人坚韧和团结的品德获得了全世界的认可和敬佩;韩国人规范的礼仪以及对待他人的友好与热情也十分令人感动。我认为,学习这些待人处事的优秀品德,是和学习知识同样重要的事情。韩国作为将传统与现代很好结合的国家,在以上的各个方面都能为我提供广阔的学习空间。为了适应经济日趋发展,技术复合人才的需要,自费出国留学已经成为众多青年人所选择的捷径,韩国是我留学的最佳选择,我决定申请韩国xx大学的韩国语课程。在韩国留学,我将投入最大的热情,积极地面对未来的学习和生活,为今后报效祖国贡献自己的一份微薄之力。我的父亲在xx工作,母亲在xx工作,他们非常支持我赴韩留学,无论在精神上还是物质经济上都将全力支持我!我计划在x年内学习韩国语,作到听、说、读、写、译全面发展,为今后进入韩国xx大学打下一个良好的语言基础和开端!学习期间我将遵守韩国法律,团结同学,尊重老师,在语言过关后,我诚恳请求导师推荐我读本科生,完成本科学位后我将按时回国,从事相关的工作,为中韩两国的交流和进一步的相互了解,以及整个亚洲更加密切的合作与发展贡献自己的知识和力量。在这里恳请韩国xx大学,韩国法务部的签证官给我一个完成儿时梦想、赴韩留学机会,我将会不惜余力的珍惜与感激!在此我向您保证会严格遵守贵国法律,好好学习!此致敬礼申请人:xxxx年篇二:关于选拔2016年春季学期赴韩国交流生的通知关于选拔2016年春季学期赴韩国交流生的通知各学院:根据我校与韩国忠北大学、济州大学、新罗大学、中央大学、清州大学签署的校际交流协议,拟于2016年2月派出学生赴相应大学进行为期半年的交流学习。为做好此项工作,现将有关事项通知如下:一、选派名额二、选拔对象20132014级在校本科生。三、派遣时间2016年2月2016年7月四、选拔条件1、政治思想好,热爱祖国、品学兼优、身体健康,遵纪守法,无违规违纪记录;2、学习成绩平均学分绩点达到3.0及以上,无不及格科目,具有较高的综合素质和较强的独立学习及生活能力;3、家庭或本人有相应的经济能力,没有拖欠学费或其他费用,能够负担在韩国的生活及其他费用;4、韩国语能力水平考试达到中级或对外联络处出具的韩语水平证明;5、本人自愿,遵守学校派出的有关规定和要求。五、可选择学习的专业(一)忠北大学1、人文学院:国语国文学、中语中文学、英语英文学、德语德文学、法语法文学、俄语俄文学、哲学、史学、考古美术史学2、自然科学学院:数学、信息统计学、物理学、地球环境科学、化学、生物学、微生物学、生活学、天文宇宙学3、社会科学学院:社会学、心理学、行政学、政治外交学、经济学4、经营学院:经营学、国际经营、经营信息系统管理5、工程学院:化学工程、土木工程、金属工程、电机工程、建筑工程、计算机工程、安全工程、环境工程、电子工程、计算机和通信工程、工业化学工程、城市工程、结构系统和计算机辅助工程、精密仪器工程、无线电工程控制和测量工程6、电机工程学院:电气和电子学、计算机7、农学院:农艺学、烟草科学、园艺科学、森林科学、森林产品、农业经济、动物学、农业生物、农业化学、食品科学和技术、农业工程、农业机械工程8、法学院:法律学9、人类生态学院:自然科学教育、住宅环境设计和消费、食品和营养学、儿童福利(二)济州大学1人文学院:韩国语国语国文系、英语英文系、日语日文系、中文系、德文系、史学系、社会学系、哲学系2社会科学学院:行政系、政治外交系、语言宣传系、法学系3商经学院:经营学系、观光经营系、会计系、贸易系、经济系、观光开发系、经营情报系4师范学院:国语教育系、英文教育系、伦理教育系、社会教育系、数学教育系、电子计算机教育系、科学教育系5生命资源科学学院:生物产业系、生命工学系、产业应用经济学系6海洋科学学院:海洋生命科学系、海洋产业警察系、地球海洋科学系、环境工学系、土木工学系、海洋系统工学系7自然科学学院:物理系、生物系、化学?化妆品系、食品营养学系、数学系、电子计算机统计学系、生活环境福祉系、衣类系、体育系8.工科大学:机械工学系、食品生命工学系、机械电子工学系、通信工学系、能源工学系、电子计算机工学系、电子工学系、电气工学系、生命化学工学系、建筑系9兽医科学院:兽医系、兽医预科10美术设计学院:美术系、产业设计系(三)新罗大学1.人文社会科学学院:日语日文学系、英语英文学系、国语国文学系、史学系、法警察学系、保健行政学系、国际关系学系、中国学系、社会福利系、家族老人福利学系、文献情报系、地理学系2商经学院:经营学系、经营情报学系、广告宣传系、税务会计系、国际观光经营系、宾馆.观光活动经营系、经济系、贸易系3医学生命科学学院:护理系、物理治疗系、制药工学系、生物科学系、食品营养系、bio食品素材系、体育系4工学学院:建筑系、汽车机械工学系、电子工学系、电子材料工学系、环境工学系、能源应用化学系5it设计学院:计算机情报工学系、it学科、室内设计学科、时装产业学系、产业设计学系、传媒设计系、贵金属.宝石设计系6师范学院;教育学科、幼儿教育科、国语教育科、日语教育科、英语教育科、历史教育科、数学教育科、计算机教育科7艺术学院:音乐学系、美术学系、工艺学系、舞蹈学系(四)中央大学1.人文学院:国语国文系、英语英文系、历史系、欧洲文化学系、亚洲文化学系2社会科学学院:公共人才学系、心理学系、文献情报学系、社会福祉学系、新闻放送学系、城市规划系、社会学系3师范学院:教育学系、幼儿教育学系、英文教育学系、家庭教育学系、体育教育学系4自然科学学院:物理学系、化学系、生命科学系、数学系5生命工学学院:生命资源工学系、食品工学系、系统生命工学系6工学学院:社会基础工程系统学系、建筑学系、化学新素材工学系、机械工学系、电子电器工学系、电子计算机工学系、融合工学系、能源系统工学系7经营经济学院:经济学系、经营学系、应用统计学系、广告宣传系、国际物流系、知识经营系8医学学院:医学系
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