英语作文中比较和对照的写作方法

精品文档 1欢迎下载 ComparisonComparison andand ContrastContrast 比较和对照的写作方法比较和对照的写作方法 目标 掌握英语作文中比较和对照的写作方法 比较着重相似点 而对照强目标 掌握英语作文中比较和对照的写作方法 比较着重相似点 而对照强 调不同之处 调不同之处 二 使用比较和对照写作方法的一般是说明文与论说文 常见的比较对照有两二 使用比较和对照写作方法的一般是说明文与论说文 常见的比较对照有两 种方式种方式 1 1 块状比较方式 块状比较方式 blockblock methodmethod 先 先 A A 后后 B B 即 即 A1 A1 A2 A2 A3 A3 B1B1 B2B2 B3 B3 2 2 逐点比较方式 逐点比较方式 point by pointpoint by point methodmethod ABAB 交错 即交错 即 A1A1 B1B1 A2A2 B2B2 A3A3 B3 B3 范文一 范文一 CountryCountry LifeLife andand CityCity LifeLife ItIt isis reallyreally hardhard toto saysay whichwhich isis betterbetter thanthan thethe other other citycity lifelife oror ruralrural life life BothBoth havehave theirtheir meritsmerits andand shortcomings shortcomings LivingLiving inin thethe citycity hashas a a greatgreat manymany advantages advantages First First youyou cancan enjoyenjoy variousvarious kindskinds ofof foods foods bothboth foreignforeign andand domestic domestic Second Second therethere areare moremore culturalcultural activitiesactivities inin thethe citycity youyou cancan gogo toto thethe concert concert thethe theatre theatre thethe moviesmovies oror thethe discodisco clubclub afterafter a a dayday s s hardhard work work ButBut citycity lifelife hashas manymany problems problems too too TheThe overcrowdedovercrowded population population traffictraffic jam jam industrialindustrial pollution pollution andand thethe lacklack ofof understandingunderstanding betweenbetween peoplepeople maymay resultresult inin diseasedisease andand unhappiness unhappiness LivingLiving inin thethe country country however however youyou cancan watchwatch thethe magnificentmagnificent sunrisesunrise andand sunsetsunset andand listenlisten toto thethe birdbird singingsinging inin thethe tree tree IfIf youyou want want youyou cancan certainlycertainly havehave a a hugehuge gardengarden whenwhen a a smallsmall greengreen spacespace seemsseems a a luxuryluxury inin thethe city city InIn thethe country country youyou dondon t t havehave soso mucnmucn worries worries YouYou cancan enjoyenjoy thethe pleasurepleasure ofof workwork byby plantingplanting seedsseeds inin thethe earthearth andand watchingwatching themthem growgrow intointo flowersflowers andand finallyfinally intointo fruitsfruits oror food food ButBut ruralrural lifelife maymay notnot bebe thatthat perfect perfect ThingsThings areare goinggoing soso slowlyslowly thatthat sometimessometimes youyou maymay feelfeel thatthat youyou areare absoluteabsolute leftleft behindbehind inin somesome remoteremote cornerscorners ofof thethe world world YouYou maymay againagain missmiss thethe parties parties friendsfriends andand moviesmovies inin thethe city city LikeLike anythinganything else else countrycountry lifelife andand citycity lifelife havehave theirtheir advantagesadvantages andand disadvantages disadvantages TheThe bestbest solutionsolution maymay bebe thatthat youyou enjoyenjoy pleasurespleasures ofof bothboth liveslives andand getget ridrid ofof theirtheir inconveniences inconveniences 范文二 范文二 MiddleMiddle SchoolSchool LifeLife andand CollegeCollege LifeLife ThereThere areare manymany differencesdifferences betweenbetween middlemiddle schoolschool andand thethe college college FirstFirst inin middlemiddle schoolschool wewe havehave toto listenlisten toto whatwhat thethe teacherteacher sayssays inin class class toto understandunderstand thethe contentcontent ofof thethe text text ButBut inin collegecollege wewe mustmust studystudy byby ourselvesourselves beforebefore class class IfIf notnot wewe couldn tcouldn t followfollow thethe teacher teacher SecondSecond therethere areare lotslots ofof rulesrules inin 精品文档 2欢迎下载 middlemiddle school school ForFor exampleexample wewe shouldshould wearwear thethe uniformuniform thethe girlsgirls mustmust havehave theirtheir hairhair cutcut shortshort andand wewe areare notnot allowedallowed toto makemake boy boy oror girlfriends girlfriends HoweverHowever inin collegecollege wewe havehave moremore freedom freedom WeWe cancan wearwear thethe clothesclothes wewe like like AndAnd thethe girlsgirls couldcould havehave longlong beautifulbeautiful hair hair WeWe areare alsoalso freefree toto makemake boyboy oror girlfriends girlfriends TheThe thirdthird inin thethe middlemiddle schoolschool wewe mustmust studystudy first first ThatThat meansmeans wewe couldcould dodo nothingnothing butbut study study InIn contrastcontrast wewe havehave toto dodo everythingeverything byby ourselvesourselves inin college college ThatThat meansmeans wewe mustmust planplan ourour timetime carefully carefully ThereThere areare alsoalso otherother differencesdifferences betweenbetween ourour schoolschool lifelife andand ourour collegecollege life life WeWe havehave toto learnlearn toto adaptadapt ourselvesourselves toto collegecollege life life 三 写作步骤三 写作步骤 1 1 写前阶段 写作提纲写前阶段 写作提纲 1 1 对两个对象或一个对象的两个方面进行比较与对照分析 找出相似点对两个对象或一个对象的两个方面进行比较与对照分析 找出相似点 不同不同 之处 之处 如分析如分析 OnlineOnline shopingshoping oror in storein store shoppingshopping 网络购物还是店内购 网络购物还是店内购 AdvantagesDisadvantages Online shopping Convenient Cheap A lot of selections Cheated Cannot see the items in person In store shopping Personal talk Know the quality Good for health Expensive Time consuming tiring 2 2 写作阶段 利用相关资料 组织结构与内容写作阶段 利用相关资料 组织结构与内容 1 1 UsefulUseful wordswords andand phrases phrases 比较比较 like like similarly similarly likewise likewise inin thethe samesame way way inin thethe samesame manner manner equally equally 对照 对照 byby contrast contrast onon thethe contrary contrary while while whereas whereas onon thethe otherother hand hand unlike unlike instead instead but but conversely conversely differentdifferent from from however however nevertheless nevertheless otherwise otherwise whereas whereas unlike unlike yet yet inin contrast contrast 2 2 UsefulUseful expressionsexpressions JustJust likelike a a coincoin hashas twotwo sides sides everytingeveryting hashas itsits advantagesadvantages andand disadvantages disadvantages andand isis nono exception exception TheThe advantageadvantage farfar outweighoutweigh thethe disadvantages disadvantages TheThe advantagesadvantages ofof A A areare muchmuch greatergreater thanthan thosethose ofof B B A A maymay bebe preferablepreferable toto B B butbut A A sufferssuffers fromfrom thethe disadvantagesdisadvantages that that ForFor allall thethe disadvantages disadvantages itit hashas itsits compensatingcompensating advantages advantages LikeLike anythinganything else else itit hashas itsits faults faults A A andand B B hashas severalseveral pointspoints inin mon 精品文档 3欢迎下载 A A bearsbears somesome resemblancesresemblances toto B B However However thethe samesame isis notnot applicableapplicable toto B B A A andand B B differdiffer inin severalseveral ways ways Evidently Evidently itit hashas bothboth negativenegative andand positivepositive effects effects TheThe samesame isis truetrue ofof B B WonderingWondering asas A A isis it it hashas itsits drawbacks drawbacks ItIt isis truetrue thatthat A A butbut thethe chiefchief faultsfaults obvious obvious defectsdefects are are I I IntroductionIntroduction Comparison and contrast is a method that is often used by writers to analyze the similarities and differences between two subjects To compare is to bring out th e similarities between two things and to contrast which is a form of comparison is to emphasize the differences between them As a result we can understand the two subjects better than we would do if we just examine the two individually In writing a comparison and contrast essay you may emphasize either the simila rities or the differences between the two subjects or if you like you may includ e in your essay both the similarities and differences No matter what you may emphas ize in your essay remember you should make a point in your essay that is there should be a purpose for making the comparison and the contrast If the two items are too similar or too different there won t be any point in comparing or contrasting them II II ThreeThree purposespurposes forfor makingmaking a a comparisoncomparison andand contrastcontrast A To present information about something unfamiliar by comparing it with someth ing familiar B To show the superiority of one thing by comparing it with another C To show the reader of the similarities and differences of two things to help the reader understand or evaluate them III III TheThe organizationorganization ofof a a comparisoncomparison andand contrastcontrast essayessay A A HowHow toto introduceintroduce a a comparisoncomparison andand contrastcontrast essayessay You can introduce your comparison and contrast essay by explaining clear your pu rpose for making the comparison and or contrast You can also present the background information that promotes you to write the essay B B HowHow toto organizeorganize thethe bodybody ofof a a comparisoncomparison andand contrastcontrast essayessay When you come to the body of a comparison and contrast essay you should follow the following two steps 精品文档 4欢迎下载 1 IdentifyingIdentifying thethe pointspoints If you don t know what points to compare and or con trast about the subjects you can create a list of potential points for each of the subjects Then you can rearrange these points 2 ChoosingChoosing anan effectiveeffective patternpattern to organize the similarities and differences a TheThe subject by subjectsubject by subject patternpattern to present each of the two subjects separat ely that is to present first about one of the subjects covering the points com pletely then proceed to the other subject also covering all the points completel y In general this way works better in short essays where few aspects are consider ed or where the writer s interest is in the whole Its pattern is like the follow ing b TheThe point by pointpoint by point patternpattern to discuss the two subjects for each point of c omparison and contrast th