短文改错2010—2007.doc

短文改错一（2010新课标全国）My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US, which was very interested. One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help. As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold, he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card say：25 cents each. You will never sell these for that much. he told Nick. Convinced, Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moments delay, my neighbor pricked up the box but announced, Ill take them.My friend Nick told me story about his esperience back in the US.which was Avery interested. One day be was having a yard sale and the old man living next door interestingcome by to help. As the old man looked over the thing on the yard that were to became in 或groundSold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees. On the box was a card ballssay：”25 cents each.” You will never sell these for that much.”he told Nick.sayingConvinced , Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece. Without a moments downdelay, my neighhor pricked up the box but annountend：”I ll take them.” 2 （2010大纲卷1）It was a chance of a lifetime to win the first prize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize. What were better, I had useful help. There was Uncle Chen, gentleman living near my house, who was a very much famous writer. He agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.3 （2010大纲卷2）Christie was one of my best friend at high school. At that time, we often spend time together. Thank to her help, I made great progress in my study. Last year, she decided to study abroad. In other words, we would be separated for long time. Before her leaving off, I prepared a gift to show my best whishes to him. She said it was the best gift she has ever had. From then on, weve kept touch with each other through e-mails. I look forward to see her again in the near future.76. 77.答案onin【解析】考查介词的用法。根据后面“the Story Writing Show”，可知此处的介词应该用in。78.答案orand【解析】考查and和or的用法。此处根据句意可知前后表示肯定并列关系，所以应该用“and”。79. 答案havehad【解析】考查时态，根据上下文句意，可知此处应该用过去时态表示，所以用had。80. 答案they前面加what【解析】what引导的宾语从句在这里充当句子的主语。81.答案werewas 【解析】Whats better，可看作是固定用法，表示“更好，更有利的是”82.答案gentleman前面加a【解析】考查冠词的用法。gentleman是可数名词，所以前面应该加不定冠词a。83. 答案去掉much【解析】“a very famous writer”表示“一个非常著名的作家”，一般来说，very much用来修饰动词。84. 答案readingread 【解析】考查词组“agree to do sth”的用法，意思为“同意做某事”。85. 答案advicesadvice 【解析】考查可数名词和不可数名词。“advice”意思为“意见、忠告”，为不可数名词，所以单复数形式一致4 （2010重庆卷）Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes him happily too. Whats more, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.76. how what,由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语。77. 在secret之后加with，share sth. with sb.78. talks talk，will后须加动词原形。79. 在always之后加a，listener是可数名词，且是泛指。80. hear hearing，after是介词，后接名词或动词-ing形式。81. is are，that代指先行词words，所以谓语动词要用复数。82. happily happy，形容词作宾语补足语。83. 去掉to，which you need作定语，意为：提供你所需的帮助。84. advices advice，advice是不可数名词。85. spent spend，前后时态须一致。5 （2010辽宁卷）Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didnt talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didnt Really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did.Christine was just a girl in one of my class. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. she didnt talk many .her hair was black 解析：except that中不能再用for。much 解析：修饰动词talk应该用much，此处是副词，many没有此用法。and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater ,although in thewore解析：谓语动词用过去式，不能用过去分词even 解析：although是连词，不能修饰介词短语，even可以summer .she was ,in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what attractive解析：做表语，用形容词 to 解析：seem后用带to的不定式the rest if us thought about her like the rest of my classmate ,I didnt really classmates 解析：名词需用复数want to get closest to her . it was only when we did their chemistry project close 解析get是连系动词，后跟形容词 our解析：人称和前面一致together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did .begin解析：时态前后不一致 6 （2010陕西卷） My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shot assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that shed left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny!My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then wereshe bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his it the herT-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop Hard toas fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It wasturned out to be her own cup, that shed left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, which embarrassed for I just thought it was funny!But/yet/while/and7 （2010四川卷）An English lady was finally decided that she really should learn to drive, and after many attempts, she past her driving test and told her husband that, to release, he was going to drive him over to France for a holiday. But then a week after the trip, she suddenly announced that they wouldnt take the holiday. “How did you change your mind?” he asked her by surprise. “Well，it is all because of the business of driving on right.” She said, “I have been practicing for three weeks now， but I still couldnt get used to it-in fact, Ive nearly killed three peoples.”66.答案：去掉finally 前的was解析：lady与decide 之间为主动关系67.答案：pastpassed解析：此处意为“通过”，应使用pass的过去式68.答案：heshe解析：此处应为妻子要带丈夫去法国，应用女性的人称代词69. 70.答案：afterbefore解析：此处应为在此次旅行之间，妻子就因不适应右侧驾驶改变了主意71.答案：HowWhy解析：此处为丈夫对妻子突然改变主意不理解，而询问原因72.答案：byin解析：in surprise 为固定搭配，意为“惊奇地，惊讶地”73.答案：rightthe right解析：方位名词前腰加定冠词74.答案：couldntcant解析：此处应为目前还不是要右侧驾驶，应用现在时。75.答案：peoplespeople解析：不可数名词8 （2010浙江卷）After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They are silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, mother stopped on their table. “Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. “You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug you?” The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, “That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didnt think she looked like Grandma.” “Neither did me.” said Mother cheerfully. 1. notice 改为noticed 解析：本文的时间都是一般过去时态。2. occupy改为occupied 解析：此处是分词短语作后置定语，occupy 与table是被动关系，故应用过去分词。3. young之前加上a。解析：从下文可知是一对夫妇，所以需加冠词。4.clearly改为clear。解析：此处是作表语，用形容词形式。5. on改为by或at。解析：被桌子挡住了，应用by或at。6.Put改为putting。解析：此处是分词短语作伴随状语。此时是主谓关系，故用putting。7. many改为much。解析：此处是回忆，不可数名词，所以用many。8. 去掉to。解析：accept之后不需要接to。9. So 改为But。解析：根据前后关系，应表示转折关系。10.me改为I。解析：作主语，应用主格。九2009海南，宁夏Dear Mrs. Winthorp,So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think Id email you and let you know what things are going. Im glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well, I had better to stop now. Im going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for Ive got some preparation to make, Keep in touch. Best,CarolDear Mrs. Winthrop,So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think Id email you and let you know what things are going. howIm glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as everythingfar away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There the are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each friendsother on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. with warmWell, I had better to stop now. Im going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for Ive got my sosome preparation to make, Keep in touch. Best,Carol十2009辽宁When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased. If I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. KWhen I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. friends oneOne day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my fatherthe which formoney. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half I myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him drop“the”the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy later gave drop “much”I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.s5u十一2009浙江One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it possible give without expect anything in return. One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to friends a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella beside anbecause he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful acceptedwas gratefullythe offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyonebut Someone/somebodyelse. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything to expectingin return.十二2009全国1After five years away in my home town, I find that the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school were gone. There exist now a park that has a small river running through. The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides, the bookstore next to our middle school is still there.After five years away in my hometown, I find that 76. _from_the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed 77. _live_a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop 78. _old_across the street from our middle school were gone. 79. _are_There exist now a park that has a small river running 80. _exists_through. The factory at the comer of Friendship Street and 81. _Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports 82. _a_center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of 83. _its_Friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to 84. _been_a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle 85. _But_school is still there.十三2009全国2Hi Susan,Im sorry that I wasnt able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of Park Street. I happened to see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I hope you understand. Thank you! ks5u ks5uLi Ling ks5u ks5u76. To 77. meanmeant 78. andbut 79. holdheld80. turned the corner 81. 82. goinggo 83. herethere84. hourhours 85. werewas十四2009四川Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with them. The first man got over his shock and politely said to the angel, “Ive suffered by back pain for years. Can you help me?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered. The second man pointed to his glass and asked if the angel could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes, but he could see everything clearly. The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands in fear. “Dont touch me!” he cries. “Im on disability pay! I dont want to be a normally person!”Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat 66. an With them. The first man got over his shock and politely said to 67. The angel, “Ive suffered by back pain for years. Can you help68. from Me?” The angel touched his back, and he had recovered.69. had The second man pointed to his glass and asked if the angel70. glasses could cure her poor eyesight. The angel touched his eyes,71. his but he could see everything clearly.72. and The angel then turned to the third man, threw up his hands73. who In fear. “Dont touch me!” he cries. “Im on disability pay!74. cried I dont want to be a normally person!”75. normal 十五2009重庆DearJerry, ksuIm glad to know that you had an interest in Chinese food. Here Id like to tell you something about them. Chinese food is famous with its wide variety. The food in one area can be easy told from that in another. For example, Shanghai food, a little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is rather hot. However, every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying, because each has a delicious taste and good for health Since the restaurant in China usually serves special dish of different areas, you can enjoy various Chinese foods whenever you are. Im looking forward to meet you here so that I can tell you more about Chinese food at table.BestwishesDear Jerry: Im glad to know that you had an interest in Chinese 76.haveFood. Here Id like to tell you something about them. Chinese 77. itfood is famous with its wide variety. The food in one area 78.forcan be easy told from that in another. For example, Shanghai 79.easilyfood. A little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is rather 80.differshot. However , every kind for the Chinese food is worth trying, 81 去掉thebecause each has a delicious taste and A good for health. 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