15年考研英语大作文范文

Part B52. Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay you should1) describe the drawing briefly2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your commentsYou should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)1. 推导图画寓意手机的出现给生活带来了巨大的变化，对人际交往的负面作用逐渐呈现，如何抵制这样的影响是现代人需要关注的问题。2. 罗列关键词table n.餐桌 dish n.菜seat v.坐play with phones玩手机smart phone 智能手机face-to-face communication面对面交流contact in real life真实生活中的交流3. 优秀范文赏析手机时代的聚会【参考范文】Four friends get together to have a dinner. Whats weird is that the four appear to be stranger to each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.The picture reveals a typical scene for modern people. Whenever people have a chance to relax, they will fish out phones to play for a while. The warm face-to-face communication which was taken for granted has been violently ruined by smart phones and becomes a luxury. It is challenging or even impossible for many people to keep concentration on face-to-face communication. As the quality of emotional interaction between people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives. Unfortunately, it is only a theoretical opinion. Few people apply it.The smart phone is really the most controversial modern invention, bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causing problematic phone addiction and consequent interpersonal isolation on the other hand. Rational attitude should be paid to the mobile phone. We should not squander on a lifeless machine the limited and precious time with friends and relatives. Due importance should be attached to the contact in real life.批判词汇：weird， indulge in, be violently ruined by, impossible,suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, unfortunately, controversial, problematic addiction, interpersonal isolation, squander time on ., take a rational attitude to,hold a rational attitude toward,attach due importance to sth.精彩句式1. Whats weird is that the four appear to be stranger to each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.句子成形步骤：1） 写出简单句The four seem not to know about each other.They dont talk with others.They only play with smart phones.It is weird.2) 整合简单句It is weird that the four seem not to know about each other, because they dont talk with others and only play with smart phones.3) 增加表达精确性和美感Whats weird is that the four appear to be stranger to each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.2. As the quality of emotional interaction between people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives.句子成形步骤：1） The quality of communication declines.People are with friends or relatives.People should shut down mobile phones.More and more people agree about it. 2) 整合简单句As the quality of communication declines, more and more people agree that people should shut down mobile phones when they are with friends or relatives.3) 增加表达精确性和美感As the quality of emotional interaction between people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives. 3. The smart phone is really the most controversial modern invention, bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causing problematic phone addiction and consequent interpersonal isolation on the other hand.句子成形步骤：1） 写出简单句The smart phone is controversial.The smart phone can make people relaxed. The smart phone brings convenience. The smart phone will make people addict to the phone.The addiction to the phone causes interpersonal isolation.2) 整合简单句The smart phone is controversial, which can make people relaxed, bring convenience but will make people addict to the phone, which causes interpersonal isolation.3) 增加表达精确性和美感The smart phone is really the most controversial modern invention, bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causing problematic phone addiction and consequent interpersonal isolation on the other hand. consequent adj.随之发生的；作为结果的必然的抵挡作文进阶演练低档作文（7分）修改范例（15分）The picture above depiction1 that two girl and two boy2 sit3 near a table having4 a dinner together. However, all them5 looking6 masseges7 in their mobiles8 instead of eat and talk9. How horrible it is! The picture above depicts1 that two girls and boys2 are sitting3 near a table to have4 a dinner together. However, all of them5 are checking6 messages7 in their mobile phones8 instead of eating dishes and talking to each other9. How horrible it is! The picture reflect8 what happening9 more freqently10 in now society11. It1 send2 a profound massege3 that young4 are addict5 to phone6 forget some time for real person7. They12 rather13 talking or playing14 with stranges15 on the internet than talking or playing16 with friends or families17. This is the high technology can be a double sword.18 On one hand, it give great convenient for19 life and work, but on the other hand, it get people further and further away20. The picture1 conveys2 a profound message3 that young people4 are addicted5 to phones6 and forget to spare some time to communicate with real persons7. What the picture reflects8 happens9 more frequently10 in todays society11. Young people12 would rather13 talk or play with14 strangers15 on the internet than do16 with friends or family members17. The mobile phone really is a double-edged sword.18 On one hand, it brings great convenience to19 life and work, but on the other hand, it makes people distant from each other20.I think it best if we use1 our phone2 proper and wise3. What screen disply4 never replace5 the feel6 among human7. I think we should use1 our phones2 properly and wisely3. What is displayed on the screen4 can never replace5 the warm communication6 among people7.Unfolded in the elaborately painted cartoon is a thought-provoking scene: four youngsters are sitting together to have their gathering feast. However, much of their attention has been attached to their mobile cell phones, totally forgetting what they are gathering for. Just as is put in the caption of this cartoon, it is typically a“Dinner party in mobile era.”This picture is naturally associated with a wide-spreading phenomenon in contemporary societytoo much addiction to the mobile phones. Indeed, we have all stepped into an era of getting and staying in touch with others through telecommunication. Each of us seems close to another under this circumstance, bu