英语议论文写作指导(对比分析---正反观点)ppt课件

高三英语写作 Howtowriteanargumentation 议论文 书面表达 满分30分 2006年陕西卷 1 暑假即将来临 你班同学讨论了假期计划 提出了不同看法 请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文 并谈谈你的看法 注意 1 词数100 1202 短文必须包括表中所列要点 3 可以适当增加细节 以使行文连贯 Thesummerholidayiscoming Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday convenientandcomfortablecostless savemoney losethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld 2 increaseone sknowledgeandwidenone shorizons views spendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroubleontheway beginning havedifferentviewsonsth reacttosthindifferentways differintheirattitudestowardssth 待在家中 外出旅游 some others Part1 beginning havedifferentopinionsonsth reacttosthindifferentwaysdifferintheirattitudestowardssth Part2 body some others prefertodoA ratherthandoB Part3 conclusion inaword inshort inmyopinion Iaminfavoroftheideathat for against structure Thesummerholidayiscoming Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday Studentsreacttothisproblemindifferentways Someareinfavorofstayingathome Theysayit sbothconvenientandcomfortable What smore theycansetasidemoneyforotherpurposes ButTheywilllosethechanceofgettingtoknowtheoutsideworld However othersprefertogoouttravelingasitcanenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirviews Buttheywillspendmoremoneyandgothroughsometroublewhiletraveling Inmyopinion itwouldbemuchbettertostayathome ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit Whenstayingathome IgettodowhatIlike suchasreadingbooks watchingTV andhelpingmyparentswiththehousework Inaword tostayathomeisbetterthantotravel 正反观点对比常用句型 1 Wehavea heated discussionabout 我们对 进行了一次讨论 We vehadadiscussionaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks 2 Wehavehadasurveyon 我们对 开展了一次调查 We vehadasurveyonwhetherstudentsshouldbeallowedtocarrymobilephonestoschools 3 Opinionsaredividedonthequestion 在这个问题上意见有分歧 4 Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups 有两种不同意见 5 Othershavedifferentopinions 其他人有不同看法 6 Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefortheidea whilefortypercentofthestudentsthinkotherwise 有60 的学生支持这个观点 然而有40 的学生则不这样认为 7 Sixtypercentofthestudentsthinkitnecessaryto butfortypercentofthestudentsdon tthinkso 60 的学生认为 是必须的 而40 的学生则不这样认为 8 Ontheonehand Ontheotherhand 一方面 另一方面 在对某一观点作进一步论证时 可用下列句型 1 What smore 还有就是 What smore wecangetagoodknowledgeofthecultureandsocialcustomsofthecountrywherewestudy aswellasimproveourEnglish 2 Besides 除此之外 Somestudentscannotdisciplinethemselves Besides it sfartooexpensivetostudyabroad whichisaloadtothefamily 当然在提出多个论据时 也可用First Second Third 来列举论据 词汇 句型 语法多样化 1 覆盖了所有的要点2 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 要点全 连接词 如何算是一篇好文章 一 使用高级词汇 词汇量能反映一个人知识贮存量的多少 也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准 考生要想取得高分 就要强化使用复杂 高级的词汇 常用方法如下 1 多实少虚写作中多用specificwords 少使用generalwords 多用蕴含感情色彩的词语 少用中性词 如good指人时可用以下形容词替换 kind honest generous selfless brave warm hearted sympathetic honorable humorous smart gentle等 good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换 great fantastic splendid marvelous excellent wonderful meaningful enjoyable nice等 以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替 但远不如原句出彩 Ihopeeveryonecanhaveatime Heisateacher ThisisreallyaideatogoclimbingMountHuathisweekend wonderful warm hearted nice 2 短语优先多使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 以增加文采 Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous Icannolongerthewayhespeakstous HewhatIsaidintheclass HewhatIsaidintheclass putupwith didn tlistento turnedadeafearto 3 弃旧取新写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的 较长的词汇 Weallthesamechance Weallthesamechance opportunity Wehavehomeworktodoattheweekend Wehavehomeworktodoattheweekend have possess alotof endless 4 避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词 必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替 Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherwatchingfootballmatches Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherwatchingfootballmatches likes enjoys We vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe vealsoalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe We vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe vealsoalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe built setup 二 使用较复杂结构1 在一篇文章中要适当地改变语法结构来增加文章表达方式的多样性 1 改变时态和语态Thebellisringingnow Theregoesthebell 2 使用名词性从句Itdisappointedeverybodythattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstround Thefactthattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstrounddisappointedeverybody 3 使用较高级的状语从句Iwon tbelievewhatyousay Nomatterwhatyousay Iwon tbelieve 4 使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof Hercompositionwaswellwritten Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof 5 使用虚拟语气Youdidn ttakemyadvice soyoufailedintheexam Ifyouhadtakenmyadvice youwouldn thavefailedintheexam 6 使用倒装句Somevaluablebooksandmycreditcardsareinit Initaresomevaluablebooksandmycreditcards 7 使用强调句型Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened 2 改变句子开头的方式 不要一味地采用 主语 谓语 宾语 的文法语序 可以适当地把一些成分 如状语 提前 放在句子的开头 这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏 增加书面表达的表现力 WemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogetherearlyinthemorning EarlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogether Theyoungmancouldn thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews Hearingthebadnews theyoungmancouldn thelpcrying 3 通过整合的方式 把几个松散的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来 也可以对所学的英语句式加以简化 使写出来的句子更加准确 得体 简洁 灵活 Wehadashortrest Thenwebegantoplayhappily Wesanganddanced Sometoldstories Someplayedchess Afterashortrest wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing tellingjokesandplayingchess Homework 根据学校通知 从即日起因学习需要高三学生体育课暂时取消 通知发出后 在学生中引起了热烈的讨论 假如你是李华 请根据下表提供的内容给 ChinaDaily 编辑写一封信反映讨论情况 并提出自己的看法和理由 注意 1 词数100 120 2 开头已写好 不计入总词数 Deareditor Asisannouncedinourschool ourPEclassesforSeniorThreestudentshavebeencancelledthisterm Deareditor Asisannouncedinourschool ourPEclassesforSeniorThreestudentshavebeencancelledthisterm Studentsreacttothisproblemindifferentways Somestutentsthinkitcanbenefitusinmanyways First PEclassescanmakeusfitandstr