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随着人口的增多 人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住 而且需要越来越多的食物 人类把森林变成了耕地 新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地 许多动物遭到猎杀 所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝 然而动物是我们人类的朋友 我们有责任去保护他们 而不是伤害或猎杀它们 请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文 要求 1 语言规范 意思连贯 表达完整 2 提示的内容要全部用上 It syourturn 练练笔 Let sHelpOurFriendsWiththeincreasingpopulation humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat Asaresult wechangetheforestsintofarmland Ifeelpityfortheanimals Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimals habitat Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur Thereusedtobelotsofanimals butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior Forexample thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture Don tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends Iknowyouransweris No Soit sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem Don tputitoff Let stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday Yourturntogoforit Goodwords Goodsentences Connectionwords 模板作文 开头公式一 名人名言1 Aproberbsays Asanoldsayinggoes Youareonlyyoungonce 2 Aseveryoneknows Asisknowntous noonecandenythat 开头公式二 数字统计1 Accordingtoarecentsurvey about78 9 ofthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation 2 Arecentstatisticsshowsthat 附 结尾公式一 结论1 Obviously wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers 2 tosumup inconclusion inbrief onaccountofthis thus 结尾公式二 建议1 Accordingly Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken 2 Consequently tosolvetheproblem somemeasuresshouldbetaken 写作的 五项基本原则 一 长短句原则Asacreature Ieat asaman Iread Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind theyareinawayquitesimilar 二 主题句原则Tobeginwith youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam 主题句 Withoutsufficientpreparation youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly 三 一二三原则1 first second third last2 firstly