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是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语;3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词; 4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词; 5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项: 1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so,its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力) 下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。 Computer and I By Simmy I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of 替换 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular Coincident with 非常地道的句型,表达“与一致”的意思,替换 With ;Advancement 替换 development ;Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into ;Current ( currently )替换 now ;Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. ;Growing individuals 替换 more and more people ;It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型, 说某事是毫不夸张的 ;For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. ;For a start 替换 To begin with ;We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法 ;our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动 ;Additionally 替换 In addition / Besides ;Deliver 替换 send ;There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,*, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先There is no denying that这个句型,还有however作为插入语, function in the disservice of 替换 do harm to Emerging 替换 appearing ( fading 替换 disappearing ) Net citizen 网民,属于精彩用词 As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替换 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ,do 强调 Positive 替换 important / good 等 A slice of 替换 a part of Unfavorable 替换 bad Impacts 替换 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入语 Fruits 而且fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替换 advantage ( defects 替换 disadvantage ) Facet 替换 aspect 各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢! 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly13.beneficial, rewarding替换helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18.capture ones attention替换attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换.reasons for sth23.desire 替换want.24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替换remember26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)27. interaction替换communication28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with st29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible 希望各位朋友能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点,并与大家共享!as the saying goes, .(相关的名言或谚语)as far as i am concerned, .in conclusion, .last but not least, .一、 the + est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/ heard/ had/ read, etc) 例句:Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V 例句:Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。 三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。) 例句:We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 四、There is no denying that + S + V .(不可否认的.) 例句:There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。 五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 (全世界都知道.) 例句:It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。 六、There is no doubt that + 句子 (毫无疑问的.) 例句:There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、An advantage of is that + 句子 (.的优点是.) 例句:An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。 八、The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 (.的原因是.) 例句:The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 (如此.以致于.) 例句:So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it. 时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它。 十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然.) 例句:Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不 虽然我们的国家富有,我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。 十一、The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more + Adj + S + V (愈.愈.) 例句:The harder you work, the more progress you make. 你愈努力,你愈进步。 The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问。 十二、By +Ving, can (借着.,.能够.) 例句:By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康。 十三、 enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (.使.能够.) 例句:Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 十四、On no account can we+ V (我们绝对不能.) 例句:On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是.的时候了) 例句:It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 十六、Those who (.的人.) 例句:Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished. 违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。 十七、There is no one but (没有人不.) 例句:There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。 十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不.) 例句:Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动。 十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的) It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的) It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的) 例句:It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。 二十、That is the reason why (那就是.的原因) 例句:Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I dont like it. 夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 二十一、For the past+ 时间,S + 现在完成式.(过去.年来,.一直.) 例句:For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试。 二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式。 例句:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中,他一直很用功。 二十三、It pays to + V (.是值得的。) 例句:It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。 二十四、be based on (以.为基础) 例句:The progress of thee society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的) 例句:We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让.明白.事) 例句:We should bring home to people the value of working hard. 我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。 二十七、be closely related to (与.息息相关) 例句:Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做运动与健康息息相关。 二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V (养成.的习惯) We should get into the habit of keeping good hours. 我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。 二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, (因为.) 例句:Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream. 因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。 三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V! = How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么.!) 例句:What an important thing it is to keep our promise! How important a thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事! 三十一、Leave much to be desired (令人不满意) 例句:The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired. 我们的交通状况令人不满意。 三十二、Have a great influence on (对.有很大的影响) 例句:Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。 三十三、do good to (对.有益),do harm to (对.有害) 例句:Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。 Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。 三十四、Pose a great threat to (对.造成一大威胁) 例句:Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。 三十五、do ones utmost to + V = do ones best (尽全力去.) 例句:We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life. 我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标Theabovepiechartconsistsof6segments,thelargestonerepresentingfood,whichaccountsfor60%ofthetotal.Clothesandentertainmenteachtakesup10%.5%goestotransportationand3%books.Alltherestexpenses,12%ofall,isspendonunknownitems. 总结写作模式: piechartconsistsofsegments,thelargestonerepresenting,whichaccountsforofthetotal.eachtakesup.goesto.Alltherest,ofall,. 八.原因结果 1.(结果),owingto(原因)owingto为分词结构 2.(结果),attributableto(原因)attributableto为形容词短语 3.(结果)lieinthefactthat(原因)同位语从句 4.(结果)resultfrom(原因)句型一般 5.Itispreciselybecause(原因)that(导致结果)强调结构 6.,asaresult,(导致结果)asaresult做插入语 7.(原因)beresponsiblefor(结果)常见句型 8.(原因),whichinturn(结果) eg.Theygiverisetounfaircompetition,whichinturnthrowsoriginalbusinessesintoacommercialpanic. 九.采取措施,提出建议 1.Mysuggestiontodealwith/solve/relievetheproblemareasfollows.Inthefirstplace,.Secondly,.Finally,常见句型 2.Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,.Bythattime,.如果让这种情况继续发展下去,那么。到那个时候,。比较好的句型 3.Moreandmorepeoplearerealizingtheimportanceof进行时态,moreandmore比many好 4.Greatefforts/Moremeasures/Dueattentionmustbetaken/paidtodo被动语态,dueattention和bepaidto搭配 5.If,willtherebeanythingthatcanmakemeevenhappier?如果(我们怎么怎么做),那将没有比这令我更高兴的了。条件句,反问句 6.Itisimportant/necessary/urgent/desirable(希望)/advisable(明智)forsb.todosth.Itisfortodo句型 7.enhancetheawarenessofpeoplethat 8.Thefirstnutforustocrackis我们首先要解决的是。比Thefirstthingweshoulddois句型高级的多,精彩的多,生动的多 9.assoonaspossible常见句型 10.sth.beoftheutmostimportancebeofn.结构,比sth.bemuchimportant好十.方式,比较 1.(Just)as,so正如比较句型 eg.Justaswateristhemostimportantofliquids,soairisthemostimportantofgases. 2.inmuchthesameway/mannerthat正如,和一样 eg.TheAmericansspendChristmasDayinmuchthesamewaythattheEuropeansdo. 十一.让步 1.nowthat既然让步从句 eg.Nowthatthedecisionhasbeenmade,wemusttryourbesttocarryitout. 2.unlessnot让步从句 eg.Itisaviciouscycleandunlessyouconsiderthesesocial,economicandenvironmentalproblemsinonecontext,youarenotseriousaboutmeetingthechallenges.注意例句中的considersth.inonecontext句型:把什么事情放在一起加以综合考虑 十三.强调句 1.only既是强调句,又是倒装句 eg.Onlyinthiswaycanyouhopetoimprovethepresentsituation. 2.Itisthat eg.Itisbecausehewastoocarelessthathefailedintheexam. 3.nothingbut只不过;只有 eg.Ifwhatwehavebeenstrivingforisnothingbutpleasure-seeking,ournationwillbedeprivedoftherighttorise.(这里nothingbut可以去掉,不影响句意,但有了nothingbut,就强调了后面的名词) 十四.假设 1.Supposing,itislikelythat.假设,那么很可能假设,虚拟语态 eg.Supposingyouwantedtobuyawashingmachine,itismorethanlikelyyouwouldobtaindetailsregardingperformance,price,etc.fromanadvertisement. 十五.反问 1.Whatelsecan?.还能做什么呢? eg.Whatelsecanthepoorparentsdobutobey?这些可怜的家长除了听从外还能做什么呢? 2.Howcould?怎能. eg.HowcouldIputtheEnglishbooksasidetoreadpastimebooks?三.起伏 1.togoupanddown起伏不定 eg.Thestrikeratewentupanddownduringtheperiodfrom1952to1967. 2.Therebeupsanddowns有起有伏 eg.Between1972and1979,therewereseveralupsanddownsin(某方面). 四.稳定 1.toremainsteady/level/unchanged保持
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