专业八级作文写作的基本模式.doc

V写作(PartVI：Writing) 测试要求： 学生应能根据所给题目及要求撰写一篇400词左右的说明文或议论文。该作文必须语言通顺，用词得体，结构合理，文体恰当，具有说服力。 题型： 要求应试者按题撰文。考试时间为45分钟。 一般作文要求：In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a summary.2004年真题It was reported in the press some time ago that a few second-and third-year students in a provincial university decided to try their hands at business in order to get prepared for the future. They opened six small shops near their university. Their teachers and classmates had different opinions about this phenomenon. Some thought that the students business experience would help them adapt better to society after graduation, while others held a negative view, saying that running shops might occupy too much of the students time and energy which should otherwise be devoted to their academic study. What do you think? Write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic:Should University Students Go in for Business? In the first part of your writing you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should brig what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.2003年真题Interview is frequently used by employers as a means to recruit prospective employees. As a result, there have been many arguments for or against the interview as a selection procedure. What is your opinion? Write an essay of about 400 words to state your view.In the first part of your writing you should state your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay. 2006年专业八级样文解析 Ambition is the decision one makes and the resolution with which he carries out that decision. It provides us with the required driving force to accomplish any undertakings in our life. Just as Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer put it, “And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed.” Indeed, once we make up our minds to choose to do something, then our life becomes meaningful and specifically orientated. This notion of life, as far as I observe, is closest to truth and does apply to almost all aspects of life. First things first, ambition renders us a sense of mission. No matter what decision you make you have to be responsible for your choice. Your choice procures you a sense of orientation, or more specially a sense of mission. And only a strong mission may enable one to accomplish greatness. Caesar of the ancient Roman Empire was urged by his ambition “I came, I saw, I conquered.” And became an unrivaled empire builder in the history of Rome. John Milton, stimulated always by his ambition that aimed at writing some “mighty lines” which England would unwillingly forget, had in due time secured his position as the second Shakespeare in the history of English literature. In the second place, ambition can bring ones potentials to the full. Ambition may well serve as a catalyst activating ones dormant potentials. Without ambition ones potentials will remain slumbering like a dormant volcano. A case in point is Ms Zhang Haidi, a Chinese Helen Keller. It was her ambition to be a useful person has turned the almost paralyzed Zhang Haidi into a well-accomplished figure whose achievements would dwarf those of some normal people aim at the sun, though, at worst, they may probably land on the moon. Influential as it is upon us, however, ambition must be channeled in the right direction. If wrongly directed, ones ambition may bring havoc on him and others. Hitler, whose ambition was to conquer Europe by whatever evil means, finally turned him into a demon. It was this demon that almost cast Europe into an unfathomable abyss of anguish and suffering. Another case is Macbeth whose ambition was to become the king of Scotland. However, his ambition was materialized by the murder of King Duncan. Consequently, unbearable guilt and psychological agony drove him to his tragic doom. To sum up, ambition can benefit us tremendously if wisely and correctly channeled, otherwise it may ruin others and ourselves. A poet says: life can be bad; life can be good; life can be dirty; life can be sad,; life can even be painful. In my minds eye, a person can make his life beautiful, meaningful and rewarding and stand out as a respectable personage if he is motivated by a well-orientated ambition.专业八级作文评分标准20-18 EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION WITH ACCURACIESThe writing effectively addresses the writing task. It demonstrates a well developed logical organizational structure with clearly stated main ideas and sufficeient supporting details. It has almost no errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays an adequate ability to use the language with appropriacy. No difficulty is experienced by the reader.17-15GOOD COMMUNICATION WITH FEW INACCURACIESThe writing adequately addresses almost all of the writing taskit deals with some parts more effectively than others. It demonstrates a generally well developed logical organizational structure with main ideas and supporting details. It has relatively few significant errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays an ability to use the language with appropriacy. Very little difficulty is experienced by the reader.14-12 PASSABLE COMMUNICATION WITH SOME INACCURACIES.The writing adequately addresses most of the writing task. On the whole, it demonstrates an adequately developed organizational structure, though there may occasionally be a lack of relevance, clarity, consistency or support. It has occasional errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, which may, from time to time, obscure meaning, and for the most part it displays some ability to use the language with appropriacy. Occasional difficulty is experienced by the reader.11-9 PROBLEMATIC COMMUNICATION WITH FREQUENT INACCURACIESThe writing only addresses some of the writing task. It demonstrates an inadequate organizational structure, and there may quite often be a lack of relevance, clarity, consistency or support.It has frequent errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays a limited ability to use the language with appropriacy. Some difficulty is experienced by the reader.8-6 ALMOST NO COMMUNICATIONThe writing almost completely fails to address the writing task. It has neither an organizational structure nor coherence. Almost all sentences contain errors of vocabulary, spelling, punctuation or syntax, and it displays no ability to use the language with appropriacy. Even after considerable effort on the part of the reader, the text is largely incomprehensible.专业八级作文开头结尾写作段首句Peoples opinions aboutvary from person to person. Some people consider . Others point out that When it comes to _, some people hold that _. Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but _.Many people advocate that _. They claim/are of the opinion that _. Mine is the same as theirs in the following reasons.It has been widely noted that . Its universally acknowledged that This raises serious doubts about _Its generally accepted that It goes without saying that Here I will discuss the pros and cons of this question段首句As is known to all, _ is a common phenomenon in our society.Have you ever thought/wondered ? But do they realize that? But is it really the case? Personally I think, but is it a wise one? It is now being challenged by more and more people.Its reported by a recent/new research/survey/study that结尾句 对比论证We can conclude that _ has both positive and negative effects. What we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.On the whole, _ have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone should admit that its advantages outweigh it disadvantages. We should _.As far as Im concerned, I dont agree with the view that _ and _ are always in conflict with/in opposition to each other. So Ive come to the conclusion that _ and _ are equally important.总结观点In conclusion/To sum up/In summary/In short/To conclude/To bring a long story short . To sum up the above arguments, I think a proper attitude towards _ is that _.Experience/Evidence/All the facts suggest/show/demonstrate/ indicate(s) that From what has been discussed above/Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw/reach/come to/arrive/ the conclusion thatIf , the efforts will be worthwhile/paid-off/rewarded. People used toin the past, but things are quite different today.Personal experience has taught that 个人经验告诉我There is every reason to believe that 完全有理由相信There is strong evidence to show that 有缺凿的证据显示专业八级短文写作的基本模式 一、 段首句 1) Peoples opinions aboutvary from person to person. Some people consider . Others point out that 2) When asked about , most people say But many other people regard as . I personally think _.3) When it comes to _, some people hold that _. Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but _.4) Many people advocate that _. They claim/are of the opinion that _. Mine is the same as theirs in the following reasons.5) It has been widely noted that . Its universally acknowledged that This raises serious doubts about _. Its generally accepted thatIt goes without saying thatHere I will discussthe pros and cons of this question. 6) With the development of our society, _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some problems as well.7) As is known to all, _ is a common phenomenon in our society.8) Have you ever thought/wondered ? 9) But do they realize that?/But is it really the case? Personally I think10) , but is it a wise one? It is now being challenged by more and more people.11) As the saying goes, 12) Its reported by a recent/new research/survey/study that二、 结尾句（一）对比论证1) We can conclude that _ has both positive and negative effects. What we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.2) On the whole, _ have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone should admit that its advantages outweigh it disadvantages. We should _.3) As far as Im concerned, I dont agree with the view that _ and _ are always in conflict with/in opposition to each other. So Ive come to the conclusion that _ and _ are equally important.（二）解决措施4) In my opinion, it is not easy to _. But Im confident that well be able to overcome all the difficulties that confront us and achieve successes in _.5) Many solutions are offered here and all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be studied in depth in the future and we still have a long way to go.6) It is important/necessary/essential that effective/proper/powerful actions/measure/remedies should be taken to 7) In my opinion, the whole society should place much emphasis on the importance of _.8) Given all the above arguments, it is high time that the authorities enforced some reforms to _.（三）总结观点9)In conclusion/To sum up/In summary/In short/To conclude/To bring a long story short . 10) To sum up the above arguments, I think a proper attitude towards _ is that _.11) Experience/Evidence/All the facts suggest/show/demonstrate/ indicate that 12) From what has been discussed above/Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw/reach/come to/arrive/ the conclusion that13) If , the efforts will be worthwhile/paid-off/rewarded. 三、 正文段落常用句型1、 分析原因a) There are ample/powerful/sufficient/various reasons in saying thatb) There are two factors accounting for c) There are some good reasons ford) There are two possible reasons fore) There are three reasons for the improvement in peoples living conditions. In the first place, Secondly, Furthermore, 2、 提出建议a) My suggestion to deal with/solve/tackle the problem are as follows. To begin with, Secondly, Finally, b) To crack this hard nut, people have worked out many effective measures.c) To achieve the best result, we have tod) Perhaps it is recommendable/practical/feasible toe) Maybe we could firstly resort tof) The top priority in isg) Perhaps we could try as a premium way toh) Perhaps nothing is better thani) In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of3、 发表见解a) Its true thatb) To be sure,c) It cannot be more agreed upond) Something immediately coming to the mind ise) We can deduce from this picture that the drawer is trying to attract our attention tof) The purpose of this picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid tog) But there is a deeper social message in this cartoon.h) Its important/necessary/urgent/difficult/easy/expensive/desirable/convenient/comfortable for sb to do Its desirable to build more hospitals, shopping centers, recreation centers, and other public facilities to meet the growing needs of people.4、 分析利弊a) As a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides.” Now On the other hand, b) Whenever we talk about, well instantly have the idea that its good for Indeed/In fact/Actually, have advantages. We can take for example. In the meantime/Meanwhile, we must realize those disadvantages of First of all, In addition, 5、 举例阐述a) for example, /for instance, b) Lets take for example.c) is a good case in point.d) An example coming in hand is aboute) An example is found inf) We may cite/quote/take another example ofg) The opinion/point/idea may be proved/exemplified/illustrated by the following facth) First/ Second (Next) / Third (Then)/ Last (Finally), a) Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly/Last(Finally) i) In the first place/Secondly/ Last but not least The most essential/most important/primary/chief is j) First and foremost/Secondly/Besides/In addition/Last but not least6、 引证观点a) Nowadays there is much/general discussion as to . b) Now, it is commonly/widely/increasingly believed/thought/held/acknowledged/held that , c) According to a recent survey/investigation/poll, 7、 因果关系a) causes/produces/brings about/leads to/ results in/gives rise to some other problemsThere is no doubt that the increase in demand causes the rise in prices.b) results from/arises from/lies in/can be attributed to the fact thatc) as a result, consequently, therefore, hence, so, d) because of this, for these reasons, due to the fact that 8、 论述相互关系have much/something/nothing to do withbe closely related tobe directly bound up withGo hand in hand withl The pollution of our environment has much to do with the increasing numbers of cars.l The strength of a countrys economy is directly bound up with the efficiency of its industry and agriculture.l More than ten leading diseases are related to smoking, such as cancer and heart trouble.9、 比较对照 比较：like A, B Just as A, B A, similarly/correspondingly, likewise/in the same way, B 对照： Unlike/ Contrary to/ As opposed to A, B Quite to the opposite, DifferentlyThe difference lies inQuite surprisingly, could be the other way round. A , however/on the other hand/in contrast, B . A , B, however/on the other hand/in contrast, 10、 提出转折观点1) It sounds like a good/attractive idea/suggestion, but they fail to understand/see/ notice 2) There is probably an element of truth in the arguments/ideas, but they ignore a more important fact 3) Closer examination/analysis, however, suggests/shows that this argument/claim/ idea may not be borne of/supported by the following evidence /facts/examples/statistics. 4) However logical /sound/forcible these arguments may be, they dont make sense /only skim the surface of the problem when is viewed the other way /taken into consideration. 5) As opposed to /Contrary to the widely /commonly/ generally held idea /belief/ view, new studies /facts challenge /fail to justify the opinion/view. 6) Good/Superior/Wonderful as ., it has its own disadvantages/ it brings its own problems. 7) They may be right about , but they seem to neglect /fail to mention/take into account 8) In all the discussion and debate over