今昔对比作文

今昔对比作文 北京西藏中学 教学目标 通过本节课今昔对比作文写法的学习 期望学生能够掌握今昔对比作文的结构布局 时态以及常用的描述过去和现在的句式 并能用所学知识写出一篇描述过去和现在区别的今昔对比的文章 Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourhometown Wherecanchangesbefound communication population environment housing transportation economy education culture change information 根据下列六幅图所反映的内容 结合写作提示 以 ChangesInOurLife 为题写一篇短文 04北京高考题 通讯方式 获取信息方式 住房 ButnownotonlycanwegetintouchwithothersoverthetelephoneathomebutalsowecangetmuchmorenewsandinformationbywatchingTV What smore wehavemovedintoaspacioushouse Inshort changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtusalotofhappinessandconvenience Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifeinthepasttwentyyears Inthepast myparentsgotintouchwithothersbysendinglettersandtheyusedtolistentotheradiofornewsandotherinformation Besides theyhadtoliveinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture 1 2 3 4 Readandputthe4paragraphsintorightorder Thekey 3 4 1 2 Inshort changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtusalotofhappinessandconvenience Inshort changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtusalotofhappinessandconvenience Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifeinthepasttwentyyears Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifeinthepasttwentyyears Inthepast Inthepast myparentsgotin touchwithothersbysendinglettersandtheyusedtolistentotheradiofornewsandotherinformation Besides theyhadtoliveinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture ButnownotonlycanwegetintouchwithothersoverthetelephonebutalsowecangetmuchmorenewsandinformationbywatchingTV What smore wehavemovedintoaspacioushouse Butnow 点明主题 集中对比先过去后现在 总结 TopicSentence Past Present Summary thelayoutofdescribingthepastandthepresent 今昔对比作文之时态 Inthepast myparentsgotintouchwithothersbysendinglettersandtheyusedtolistentotheradiofornewsandotherinformation Besides theyhadtoliveinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture 昔 一般过去时 ButnownotonlycanwegetintouchwithothersoverthetelephoneathomebutalsowecangetmuchmorenewsandinformationbywatchingTV What smore wehavemovedintoaspacioushouse 今 一般现在时或现在完成时 Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifeinthepasttwentyyears Inshort changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtusalotofhappinessandconvenience 提出主题句和总结句 现在完成时 最近 学校高二年级正在开展研究性学习 这让我们的学习生活更加丰富多彩 阅读下面有关开展研究性学习前后的文章 改正时态错误 练习 Correctanytensemistakes Quiteafewchangestookplaceinmyschoolrecently Inthepast theteachersalwayskeeponexplainingthepointsinclass Westudentsjustlistenedandtooknotes Besides weusetodoalotofhomeworkafterclass havetakenplace kept used Butnow weoftendiscussandtriedtosolvetheproblemsbyourselves Afterclass weenjoydifferentkindsofactivitiesinsteadofdoingendlesshomework Inshort thesechangeshavebringusmorefreedomandhappiness try brought 经典回放 提出主题句 现在完成时昔日情况 一般过去时今日情况 一般现在时 现在完成时总结句 现在完成时 今昔对比作文之时态 Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifeinthepasttwentyyears Inthepast myparentsgotintouchwithothersbysendinglettersandtheyusedtolistentotheradiofornewsandotherinformation Besides myparentshadtoliveinasmallroomcrowdedwithfurniture ButnownotonlycanwegetintouchwithothersoverthetelephoneathomebutalsowecangetmuchmorenewsandinformationbywatchingTV What smore wehavemovedintoaspacioushousewithquiteafewroomsinsideit Inshort changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtusalotofhappinessandconvenience Greatchangeshavetakenplacein wedid weusedtodo Besides Inshort thesechangeshavebroughtus Describingthepast Howtobegin Summary Describingthepresent notonlycanwe butalsowe what smore Inthepast Butnow 1 最近五十年 我的家乡发生了很大的变化 Greatchangeshave inmyhometowninthepast years Practice知识点巩固 takenplace fifty 2 过去人们没有自己的住房 Peopledidn thave inthepast theirownhouses 3 以前这里没有学校 Thereusedtobe noschools 4 现在 我们都有机会上学 Now nearlyallofus havethechancetogotoschool 6 家乡的巨大变化给我们带来了更加便利的生活 Greatchangesinourhometownhave broughtusamoreconvenientlife 5 现在 我们不仅可以享受便利的交通 还能住上宽敞舒适的房子 Now notonly enjoyconvenienttransportation butalsowecanlivein canwe spaciousandcomfortablehouses Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepastfiftyyears Inthepast peopledidn thavetheirownhouses Besides thereusedtobenoschools Butnow notonlycanweenjoyconvenienttransportation butalsowecanliveinspaciousandcomfortablehouses What smore nearlyallofushavethechancetogotoschool Inshort greatchangesinourhometownhavebroughtusamoreconvenientlife 练笔 过去五十年 西藏发生了翻天覆地的变化 这些变化给人们带来了幸福和便利的生活 请以 ChangesInOurHometown 为题 根据表格内的提示 参照雄鹰模板 写写你家乡的变化 要求 词数约80文章包含所有内容要点可适当增减细节 信心小贴士 1 过去没有 2 自己的住房3 能 Thereusedtobeno theirownhouses wereableto 4 享受便利交通5 宽敞舒适6 有机会 enjoyconvenienttransportation spacious comfortable havethechancetodo 今昔对比作文之雄鹰模板 Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlifeinthepast years Inthepast andweusedto Besides Butnownotonlycanwe butalso What smore Ins