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小马留学网：/products/zhanghao.html张昊文书写作指导（说明：下横杠的部分，是我从有道词典上翻译来的，可能未整理通顺）俄亥俄州立大学 / 哲学来源：未知2011-08-18 16:11俄亥俄州立大学 / 哲学-综合排名 53 / 专业排名 34学生硬件条件-托福：92 SAT1：1960 GPA：3.6Essay Example: 文章的例子:1. Why are you considering The Ohio State University? 为什么是你考虑美国俄亥俄州立大学吗?I choose Ohio State University to complete my undergraduate study, because there is a perfect match between my dream to pursue a career in philosophy and the education offered by the OSU department of philosophy. 我选择俄亥俄州立大学的研究人员完成我的本科学习,因为这是一个完美的匹配我的梦想追求自己的事业在哲学和教育部门提供的介绍哲学。Born into a family that appreciated intellectual pursuits, I started reading the masterpieces in childhood. The Analects have most influenced the way I view the world and the way I view myself. It taught me how to learn effectively the nature of the relationship, and the importance of studying antiquity in order to understand the present. More importantly, it cultivated my passion toward philosophy. Therefore, I began to read extensively works of philosophy by Lao Tzu, Zhuangzi, Socrates, Plato, Nietzsche, Schopenhauer and William Barrett. The more books I read the more puzzles I discover. I endeavor to understand the convergence and conflict, difference and similarity between Chinese and western philosophy, and the influence of modern philosophy on other disciplines. 出生在一个家庭,智力的追求,我开始欣赏阅读名著之一的童年。论语我最有影响力的观点看世界的方式和看待自己的。它教我如何有效的学习关系的性质研究的重要性,并对古代以了解礼物。更重要的是,它培养了我的激情向哲学。因此,我开始广泛阅读作品的哲学老子、庄子、苏格拉底、柏拉图、尼采、叔本华、威廉巴雷特。我读的书越多越困惑我发现。我努力去理解差异和收敛性和冲突,中国哲学与西方哲学之间的相似性的影响,在现代哲学领域。Now, the world has entered a globalization era. The east and west meet in every form in everywhere. The encountering of two set of philosophical ideas creates not only opportunities, but also challenges. To build a harmonious world and sustainable development, it requires us to establish a world view that truly reflects todays world and help people think more clearly and solve problems more effectively. My passion about philosophy drives me to take on this responsibility; it is also my career goal. 现在,世界已进入了一个全球化的时代。在东面和西面相遇在任何形式在到处都是。遇到的两个组的哲学思想不仅能创造机遇,但同时也面临严峻的挑战。要建设一个和谐世界和可持续发展战略,它需要我们建立一种世界范围的观点,真正体现了今天的世界,帮助人们更清晰地思考和解决问题更为有效。我热爱哲学开车送我去承担这个责任,也是自己的职业目标。To realize such a goal, however, I need to be immersed in the world of western philosophy to learn its distillation and study broad knowledge in other disciplines. As one of the research powerhouses in North America, Ohio State University provides me with opport unities to gain such an immersing and transformational experience. 为实现这一目标,然而,我需要沉浸在西方哲学的世界里学习它的蒸馏和研究广泛的知识在其他学科。作为一个研究中心在北美,俄亥俄州立大学的研究人员给了我机会以获得一个沉浸和变革的经验。At the College of Humanities, the department of philosophy offers a curriculum covers all primary areas in philosophical study, including but not limited to the history philosophy, ethics, metaphysics, logic, and the philosophy of mathematics, etc. These courses with breadth will lay me a solid foundation in philosophy. Meanwhile, because the Ohio State University offers diverse disciplines to students, I have the opportunity to integrate my philosophical study with work in various disciplines, from cognitive science, to music and political science, etc. This is just the type of education I need to gain multi-disciplinary knowledge and experience. The ideal student to faculty ration of 14:1 in a community where faculty members are actively involved in teaching and research, I have better chances to benefit from professors mentorship. Further, I will obtain more enlightenment from visiting philosophers in the active colloquium series. Outside classrooms, I will meet more people and build more relationship in the Ohio Union and student clubs, thus truly immersing in the American culture to understand the western philosophy from different angles. 大学人文、部门哲学为我们提供了一个课程所涵盖的所有的小学哲学研究领域,包括但不限于历史哲学、伦理学、形而上学、逻辑学、哲学和数学等。这些课程与广度必将我打下了扎实的哲学。同时,由于美国俄亥俄州立大学的学生提供多样化的学科,我有机会去整合工作我的哲学研究在多学科,从认知科学、音乐和政治学等。这只是一个类型的教育我需要积累多学科的知识和经验。理想的学生对教师定量的14:1在一个这样的社区成员积极参与教师的教学和研究,我有更好的机会,受益于教授的指导。然后,我将获得更多的启示在活跃座谈访问哲学家系列。教室外面,我就认识更多的人,更多的关系建立在俄亥俄州联盟和社团,从而真正沉浸在美国文化理解西方哲学从不同的角度。I envision that I am sitting in the Billy Ireland Cartoon Library to do comparative study on the Analects and the Bible, striving to prove myself by winning the Bingham Prize and preparing for my future career in philosophy research.我将希望我坐在比利爱尔兰卡通图书馆论语的比较研究和圣经,努力证明自己,赢得这个奖和准备宾厄姆我未来的事业在哲学研究。附：美国名校研究室老师讨论笔记参考1. Why are you considering The Ohio State University?Books are the carriers of civilization. Without books, history is silent, literature dumb, science crippled, thought and speculation at a standstill. 出生于书香门第的我，从小徜徉在书海之中。每本书都为我的生命注入了新鲜血液，让我不断的成长。Among them，I am willing to highlight 论语。这部著作源于孔子语录，在中国流传2500多年，影响着世代的中国人，它的经典语句，每一个中国人都能耳熟能详，我更是从中获益良多，它从学习、交友、人格修养、理想等几个方面给了我深刻的影响。知识是人类进步的阶梯. 论语教会了我很多有效的学习方法. 在文科如语文、英语、历史等科目的学习中，因为识记的内容比较多，所我采取了“学而时习”“温故知新”的学习方法.从而通过循环的识记来增强自己的记忆，获得了新的知识,达到学而不忘的目的。在理科数学、物理、化学等理科知识的学习中，我采用了“学而强思”的学习方法，学习的过程中积极思考，增强学识的系统性与连贯性，达到举一反三的效果。在不断地积累过程中，我将这些方法运用得非常娴熟，学习成绩名列前茅。在学习总结会上，我会将我所掌握的论语中的学习哲理分享给同学们，也让他们获得更好的学习方法。论语让我明白了为人处事的道理。论语说“三人行，必有我师焉”。在与朋友交往时，我总是温驯不恭，处处留心皆老师。我与他们取长补短， 相互促进。在获得知识的同时也加深了友谊。又如从“与朋友交，言而有信”这句话中我懂得了信用是人与人交往的基础。当我的哲学好友找我借威廉巴雷特教授的代表作非理性主义时，恰逢那天我姥姥生日，我需要前去祝贺。但是因为我之前已经答应借给我的同学了，所以我依然坚持将书送到了同学家再去姥姥家。因为虽送书事小，但信用事大。我的行为也让我的朋友非常意外而感动，此后我们的友情维系得更加和谐和紧密。论语提升了我自身的人格修养。 如“毋意，毋必，毋固，毋我。”让我明白在对待自己不懂的事情我不凭空臆猜，在别人提出了有用的建议前，不固执拘泥，在学习生活中，我不自以为是。这种民主而开明的人生态度，让很多同学愿意follow me to shape a team in various activities。在一次到敬老院去慰问演出的班级活动时，我组织了brainstorming on the performance。大家都建议唱老人们熟悉的老歌，但是有一位同学却建议唱流行歌曲。他说老人们已经步入了生命的黄昏期，但是却对年轻和活力有着无限的向往，我们应该边唱边跳，让老人也感受到年轻的快乐。His innovative idea won our consensus。在大家的积极组织和配合下，这次活动办的非常成功，老人们的热情被点燃，他们也和我们一起唱一起跳。听着他们的欢笑声，看着他们起皱纹的脸上绽开的笑容，让我们感到了前所未有的满足感。“我非生而知之者，好古，敏以求之者也”是论语中我最喜欢的一句话，阐释了人生求学的最好态度，我不是生来就有知识的人，而是爱好古代文化，勤奋敏捷的去求得知识的人。我爱好中国的古诗，并且在学校发起了唐诗诗社。通过古诗给同学普及中国的古代历史文化。同时我利用了很多时间来研读哲学，从最初的中国现代小品文，到中国古代哲学思想家孔子的述而、论语，老子的道德经，庄子的齐物论等著作中宣扬的中庸，朴素唯物主义和存在主义等集大成的哲学思想，再到苏格拉底，柏拉图，亚里斯多德，尼采，叔本华到现代的哲学巨匠威廉巴雷特和雅克德里达等，我徜徉在了哲学的海洋，可是书读的越多，疑惑也越多，在不断地思与辩的过程中，我无法找到自己所追求的方向，更无法明白中西方的哲学到底是融合还是冲突？中国古代的哲学和希腊古代哲学蕴含着怎样的相似和对立？现代的哲学对其他各学科有怎样的影响？带着这些我无法穿透的问题，我非常希望能走进西方的哲学世界，亲身领会到其中的广袤精髓。Life is limited, but knowledge is limitless. I envision the baptism in the知识殿堂of New York university，enlighten，enable， and empower me while I enrich it by Chinese ancient philosophy.生命是有限的, 但知识是无限的。我希望在纽约大学的知识殿堂接受洗礼、启蒙，并希望中国古代哲学能使我变得充实。宾州州立大学 / 管理来源：未知2011-08-18 16:10宾州州立大学 / 管理-综合排名 47 / 专业排名22学生硬件条件：托福：92，SAT1：1920，GPA：3.5 Essay Example: 文章的例子:1. Include a brief statement of your plans for the field of study you wish to pursue. This should include * your reasons for studying your chosen field, your intended areas of specialization within this field, and a brief description of the career you plan to follow after competing this course of study. 包括一个简短的声明你的计划的研究领域你想要追求的。这应该包括你*的原因,研究了你所选择的行业里,你要专业分工的领域,这个领域内一个简短的描述你的事业追求竞争计划本课程的学习。I have defined my career goals in my accumulation and growth. In the short term, I will study finance in your university to gain overall professional knowledge. After graduation, I want to enter a financial institution that does art collection businesses such as the Royal Bank of Canada and CLSA Asia-Pacific Markets to gain practical experience. In the long term, I will return to China and join China CITIC Bank or Chine Minsheng Banking Group, introducing financial capital into Chinas art collection market to promote its financialization. My career aspiration first stemmed from the influence of my father, who is a dedicated fan of classic Chinese arts. He bought lots of books and collections in this aspect and always tried to pass his love to beauty and freedom down to me. I have grown up in such an environment and learned much knowledge in traditional Chinese culture. Fascinated by their connotation, depth and elegance, I have developed strong interest in traditional Chinese cultures. Under the guidance of my father, I have studies the masterpieces in different Chinese dynasties and knew many famous calligraphy and painting works, seal cuttings, and duplicates. Meanwhile, I read extensively on works about appreciating classic Chinese artistic items, such as Encyclopedia of Chinese Artifacts Collection and Appreciation, and the Collective of Chinese Artifacts Appreciation, etc, which gave me basis appreciation ability. In addition, my father led me to join in the art collection activities held by his friends, learning their collection experience and appreciate their collections. Inherited my fathers passion about classic Chinese arts, I have deliberately improved myself on artistic sensitivity, appreciation ability and formed my career goal to pursue a career in this field.With the increasing of my knowledge, I have drafted a plan on my art collection career. Although my father is enthusiastic about classic Chinese arts, he doesnt force me to strictly follow him. He led me to visit exhibitions on western arts in art galleries and museums as well, which not only enabled me to learn the western arts, but also enriched my experience and opened my eyes. Therefore, I began to pay attention to the difference and convergence of Chinese and western artifacts. After collecting a large amount of information on art trade and auctions, I have gained an comprehensive understanding on the development of western art: firstly, in the west, financial capital has been introduced in art trade, and the art items can get assurance, mortgage, and realization in the banks; secondly, the prosperity of western art market owes to the financialization of art collection and the entry of tens of billions of financial capital in the marketevery year, many foreign banks put aside 3% of their profits to procure art items, especially in the US and Europe, where investment in art items is a fashion; thirdly, Chinese financial capital now has little connection with art item investment, but many overseas banks such as the Royal Bank of Canada and CLSA have displayed strong interest in Chinese art collections and relevant taxation, appraisal, assessment, and export, etc. This understanding led to my desire to participate in and promote the development of the art collection industry in China. Currently, the affluent Chinese are beginning to turn their attention to “spiritual” field, and the demand of art items investment and collection is increasing constantly. However, relevant finance products in Chinese market are scarce, which makes it a niche market. It is possible to put into use financial methods in Chinese art item collection market to improve the liquidity of art assets, establish a financing platform for the collectors, investors and artists, and provide new asset management channels for banks. If so, the art item investment may involve less direct buys and sales, but more finance products offered by financial institutions, such as collective investment scheme on artifacts collection. Now, among Chinese banks, only the Minsheng Banking Group has issued products on art investment. Longing to seize this opportunity, I want to major in finance in your university to support my art-related knowledge with finance know-how and then enter Chinas art investment industry to develop more finance products tailored for Chinese market, promoting the appreciation of Chinese art items and facilitating the development and prosperity of art investment market.My objectives are clear. First, I need to learn financial knowledge in an advanced market. Then, I need the hands-on experience to practice the knowledge I will learn. In the inclusive American culture, I can not only the knowledge and experience I need, but also learn more about different cultures and artistic features. I want to bring the arts of other cultures back to China and diversify the development of Chinese arts. Therefore, I choose to study at your renowned university and hope to realize my career dream faster. 2. Please use the space below to tell us about your preparations for college. 请用下面的空间,告诉我们你的准备上大学。Explain any interruptions in your schooling, e.g., military service or employment. Please tell us about your important time commitments other than academic work (for example, school organizations, jobs, the arts, services, and athletics). 解释任何中断学业,例如,军事服务或就业。请告诉我们关于你的重要学术工作时间承诺以外的(例如,学校组织、就业、艺术、服务、和运动)。To be a whole person, he not only need academic standout performance，meanwhile, he also need personal growth，leadership development，and enhancement of sense of social responsibility. My important time commitments other than academic work enable me to achieve the transcendence in the three aspects. 是一个完整的人,他不仅需要学术鹤立鸡群,与此同时,他的表现也需要个人成长,领导力发展,增强对社会的责任感。我的重要学术工作时间承诺以外,它让我达到超越在三个方面的内涵。The true personal growth lies in adversity. The recovering after traffic accident when I was in grade 3 of junior school made me suffered such adversity，which helped me gain rebirth in life and mentality. When I heard what the doctor said that I probably spend my rest life on the wheelchair, I was so scared but I didnt want to succumb to the fate, the belief inspired me to go through painful rehabilitation trainings to overcome the difficulties. After three months exercises, I was able to walk normally again. This experience makes me more confident about my life, because I have understood that it is inevitable to meet pains and hardship in my life, whether physically or spiritually, however, as long as I can face them with optimism and resolution, and treat them as the catalyst that facilitates my growth, I will overcome the challenges and become happier and stronger. 真正的个人成长谎言,能在逆境中成长。我的恢复交通事故后当我在初中三年级的让我遭受很不幸,这让我在生活中获得重生与心理特征。当我听到医生说我度过我的余生也许在轮椅,我非常害怕,但我不想屈服于命运,激发了我的信念去度过痛苦的康复培训,以克服困难。经过三个月的作业,我就能够正常行走了。这段经历使我更加自信的我的生活,因为我知道这是不可避免的痛苦和磨难来满足我的生命,不管是肉体上或精神上,然而,只要我能以乐观的态度面对和解决,并把他们作为催化剂,让我成长,我将克服挑战,变得更快乐、更强。Only by integrating the strengths of a team with strong leadership, can we form united force and win the battles. My leadership role in the military training led me to get such insight. In my high school, we experienced a military training in a mountainous area, during which the drill coaches organized us to do a Counter Strike combat simulation. I assumed the vice captain of one of the group. in the first round, everyone marched according his own will, which made our group in a state of disunity. There was no covering back and cooperation. No wonder, we lost this round. After summarizing our lesion, in the second round, I suggested a strategy that divided the group into squads with different responsibilities, including convoy, defense, maneuver, and main attack. With the detailed allocation, in the second round, we made an effective action, in which everyone completed his mission while cooperating with others. Eventually, we won the “combat”. I realized the importance of leadership in a combat. Without an effective leadership, we couldnt win the combat. I also understood the importance of collaboration in teamwork, which is the basis of successful team efforts. In life, there are different forms of combats ongoing every day, which in most cases are beyond the power of a single person. 只有通过整合优势的一个团队领导能力强,能形成统一的力量并赢得战斗。我的领导作用,在军事训练使我能得到这样的洞察力。在我高中的时候,我们经历的军事训练进入山区,在这期间我们做教练组织钻一个对付罢工的战斗模拟。我认为副队长的一个group.在首轮即遭淘汰,每个人都根据自己的游行,这使得我们的团队在一个州不统一。没有覆盖背部和合作。毫无疑问,我们失去了一圆的。在总结我们的病灶,在第二轮比赛中,我提出了一个策略,把班分为不同的职责,包括频繁车队、国防、机动,并发起主要进攻的师。详细配置,在第二轮比赛中,我们做出了一个有效的行动,每个人都完成了自己的使命而与他人合作。最后,我们赢得了“战斗”。我意识到,领导能力的重要性的战斗。缺乏有效的领导,我们不能赢得战斗。我明白在团队合作的重要性的基础上,这是成功的团队的努力。在生活中,有不同的形式进行,抗每天在大多数情况下都是超越的力量,一个人的。As a Chinese, I love my motherland, but I am not blind. I am always committed to seeking the best way to better it. The travel in Japan enables me to realize the gap in environment protection between China and Japan. Last summer, my parents brought me to visit Japan. I was deeply impressed by the beautiful sceneries and friendly Japanese. As a nature-loving nation, Japan boasts high forest coverage, even in the cities. On the Fuji Mountain, I was fascinated by the contrast between blue sky and snow-white mountain top, and pleasantly surprised by a wild little deer. I was surprised by the environmental consciousness of common people to protect the earth, however, while traveling in inter-Mongolia in China, despite the natural beauty of the vast grassland and Mongolian yurts, I found the desertification and dust storm is getting worse due to the sabotage of human activities. I love my motherland. I also acknowledge her defects. I have learned much from my tour to Japan. As a new generation Chinese in 21st century, the future mainstay of Chinas development, our fates is closely bound with her and our mentality determines the future of our nation. Therefore, it is our responsibility to learn from other nations their merits. Now, I want to study in the US and learn advanced economic, cultural knowledge so as to contribute better to the development of China in future. 作为一个中国人,我爱我的祖国,但我不盲目。我总是致力于寻求最好的方式。在日本旅行使我意识到环境保护的差距在中国和日本之间。去年夏天,我的父母带我去访问日本。给我留下了深刻的印象和友好的日本美丽的风景。作为一个国家,日本自夸nature-loving森林覆盖率高,即使在城市里。在富士山非常着迷,我的对比和雪白的山顶蓝天,惊喜的一只小鹿。我感到吃惊的环境意识的百姓保护地球,然而,在中国旅行时,尽管在inter-Mongolia的自然美景和蒙古族yurts辽阔的草原,我发现荒漠化和沙尘暴越来越严重的破坏,由于人类的活动。我爱我的祖国。我也承认自己的缺陷。我已经学会了很多从旅行到日本。作为新一代中国人在二十一号世纪,未来中国发展的中流砥柱,我们的命运是紧密结合决定了我们的心态与她和我们国家的未来。因此,我们的责任是他们学习其他国家的优点。现在,我想要到美国留学,学习先进的经济、文化知识,为中国经济的发展,更好的未来。Despite these preparations, I am fully aware that I still need to expand my perspective and acquiring further knowledge to fulfill the future dream. I will treasure this opportunity to realize my career goal if admitted by your leading university. 尽管有这些准备,我完全知道我仍然需要扩展我的视野和知识获取进一步实现未来的梦想。我会珍惜这个机会来实现自己的职业目标如果承认你的一流大学。附：美国名校研究室老师讨论笔记参考1. Include a brief statement of your plans for the field of study you wish to pursue. This should include * your reasons for studying your chosen field, your intended areas of specialization within this field, and a