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CET 4各题分值推测 作文142分 听力249分 阅读249分 综合70分PartI写作Writing 30min 15 PartII快读Fastreading 15min 10 PartIII听力LC 35min 35 25个选择题 8个单词 3个句子PartIV细读ReadinginDepth 25min 25 PartV完型填空Cloze 15min 10 PartVI汉译英Translation 5min 5 1 作文高分技巧 1 卷面整洁 书写清楚2 构思简单 少犯错误3 中心突出 层次分明4 固定经典 名言注目5 重在变化 宁简勿滥 2 熟悉老师的评分习惯 评分重点 文章的结构和语言水平两个基本点 闪光点和语法点应对策略 提问法 衔接词语 从句 并列句 谚语总结法 灵活的词汇和句型 以及被动语态等闪光点 Itisnotwhatyousay write buthowyousay writeitthatcountsformuchmore Givetheteacherexactlywhathe shewantstosee 给阅卷老师最想要看到的 3 最常用的写作模式 综观近几年的四级考试作文 尽管实用性提高了 但行文大多可以套用 中心句 1 2 3展开句 模式 每段第一句是topicsentence 改编自该段相对应的中文提纲 后面的1 2 3句是衔接词 每句后接分支观点 尽量多用衔接词 利 中心突出 层次分明 同时也节省了考生构思结构的时间 弊 忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型 对策 多掌握常用词句 多运用不同的句型 多使用不同的衔接词 4 时间分配写作 时间共30分钟 分值共142分审题构思 3分钟拟定提纲 5分钟正文写作 20分钟检查修改 2分钟 5 考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的 1 拼写正确 看文章中是否有汉字 多余符号 糊乱涂改 划线 和错别字 2 搭配正确 动宾 动词短语 形容词与副词 非谓语动词等 3 语法正确 特别是人称 时态 和单复数的 不一致 6 衔接词是文章逻辑关系的体现 可用于各段 且各段尽量用不同的衔接词 多用为妙 起 的过渡词 nowadays inthefirstplace foronething ontheonehand 承 的过渡词 inthesecondplace foranother besides moreover furthermore obviously inaddition inotherwords whatismore 转 的过渡词 however ontheotherhand but instead conversely 合 的过渡词 lastbutnotleast Itfollowedthat 由此可见 therefore asaresult inshort inbrief inaword inconclusion 7 用于文章开头的句子 Whenitcomesto people sopinionsdifferfromeachother 当谈及 时 人们的观点各异Thereisapublicdiscussiontodayabout Itissaid reported estimated believed suggested that 8 用于文章结尾的句子 AsfarasIamconcerned 主句Asismentionedabove wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat Itishightimethatweshouldtakemeasuresto Itisessentialthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakento Whatreallymattersisthat 从句 notthat 从句重要的是 而不是 9 用于阐释原因的句子 Somereasonsareresponsibleforit Therearelotsofreasonsforthedramaticgrowth decrease Thephenomenon changein mainlyresultsfromthefactthat Thereasonwhy isthat Itisbecause 10 1 对比论述型作文模版 IsMoneyAllPowerful 1 一些人认为 2 另一些人认为 3 我的看法 TheProsandConsofDormitoryLife1 很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内 理由是 2 很多人认为学校不应该强制大学生住在宿舍 理由是 3 在我看来 结构模式 第一段 导言 观点A 提出问题 阐明甲方观点及理由 第二段 观点B 阐明乙方观点及理由 第三段 我的观点 写作重点在以对比的方式展开两种对立观点 11 1 Whenitcomesto people sopinionsdiffer 2 Manypeoplebelievethat 3 Foronething 4 Foranother 5 Somepeople however takeadifferentattitude 6 Theyregard 7 Intheirviews 8 Furthermore 9 AsfarasIamconcerned 10 Ontheonehand 11 Ontheotherhand 12 So 填充内容第一段1 文章主题2 一些人的观点3 理由一4 理由二第二段5 另一些人反对6 另一些人的观点7 理由一8 理由二第三段9 作者自己的观点 看法10 论点一11 论点二12 总结上文 12 范文 1 Whenitcomestowhetheruniversityauthoritiesshouldrequirestudentstoliveindormitory people sopinionsdiffer 2 Manypeoplebelievethattherearegreatadvantagesofdormitorylife 3 Foronething studentshavethechanceofenjoyingthefriendshipoftheirroommates Thiscanbethemostpreciousmemorytheyhavelaterinlife 4 Foranother universitydormitoriesdonotcostmuch whileleavingoffcampuscanbeveryexpensive Letalonetheissueofsecurity 13 5 Somepeople however takeadifferentattitude 6 Theyregarddormitoryasanundesirableplace 7 Intheirviews since4to8peopleliveinonedormitory thereisnotenoughprivacy 8 Furthermore dormitoryistroublesomebecauseitisverylikelythatonecouldhaveclasheswithhisdormmates 14 9 AsfarasIamconcerned studentsbenefitgreatlyfromdormitorylife 10 Ontheonehand dormitorylifeprovidespreciouslessonsonhowtocommunicatewithothers 11 Ontheotherhand studentsdonotfeellonely Therearealwayspeopleofthesameagearound Andwhentheyhavetrouble therearealwayshelpinghandsinthedormitory 12 Sowhyliveoffcampuswhilethereisgoodliferighthere Comeandenjoydormitorylife 15 TheProsandConsofMay1stGoldenWeek 1 一些人认为保留五一黄金周 赞成理由是 2 另一些人认为取消五一黄金周 理由是 3 我的看法是 16 1 Whenitcomesto people sopinionsdiffer 2 Manypeoplebelievethat 3 Foronething 4 Foranother 5 Somepeople however takeadifferentattitude 6 Theyregard as 7 Intheirviews 8 Furthermore 9 AsfarasIamconcerned 10 Ontheonehand 11 Ontheotherhand 12 So 17 2 问题解决型模版 该类的作文通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题 然后要求考生就该问题提出解决方法 途径 有时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己的方法 HowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas 18 结构模式 第一段 导言 描述现状 形势 困难 提出问题 第二段 方法 列举说明处理某事的方式或者解决某个问题的途径 第三段 评价 建议或个人选择 针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的评论 也可提出个人建议或选择 并简述理由 本题型的写作重点在 how 即解决办法 19 HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview 1 面试在求职过程中的作用 2 取得面试成功的因素 仪表 举止 谈吐 能力 专业知识 自信 实事求是 20 HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview 1 Withthedevelopmentof 2 Soitisofgreatimportanceforusto 3 Ontheonehand 4 Ontheotherhand 5 To wehavefiguredoutmanywaysto 6 First 7 Second 8 Finally 9 Inaword 10 Tosumup 11 Itishightimeforusto 12 Therefore 填充内容1 问题出现的背景2 提出问题3 必要性或后果一4 必要性或后果二5 提出解决问题的方法6 方法一7 方法二8 方法三9 总结上文10 重申主题11 进一步强调主题12 总结上文 21 范文 1 Withthedevelopmentofourmodernsociety theinterviewisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinjob hunting 2 Soitisofgreatimportanceforustomasterskillsoninterview 3 Ontheonehand ifajobseekercanleaveagoodimpressiononthemindoftheinterviewer hemaybeluckyenoughtogetthejobcompetedforbymanyapplicants 4 Ontheotherhand ifthejobhuntergivesapoorperformanceduringtheinterview heisunlikelytostandachance 22 5 Tobesuccessfulinajobinterview wehavefiguredoutmanywaystomakeanexcellentperformanceinaninterview 6 First theapplicantoughttopayattentiontohisappearanceandmannerofspeaking 7 Second heissupposedtodisplayhisability 8 Finally areallyimpressivejobseekermustconveyasenseofself confidence 9 Inaword iftheintervieweedisplaysthesecharacteristicsandpresentshismostattractivequalitiesduringtheinterview theinterviewermightmakeanon the spotdecisiontotakehimon 23 10 Tosumup thejobinterviewisindeedimportant 11 Itishightimeforustopayattentiontotheskills 12 Therefore iftheintervieweehasmadefullpreparationsforitandgivenafairlyconfidentandhonestperformance hisorhersuccesscanbeensured 24 OnlineShopping Withthedevelopmentoftechnology onlineshoppinghasbecomepopularinpeople sdailylife Asmanyofusmighthavewitnessed morepeoplearebuyingproductsthroughtheInternet Andtofacilitateonlinepurchase storesprovidepicturesoftheirproductstogetherwithotherillustrationsonthewebsites Besides onlineproductsrangefromsmallitemssuchasclothesandbookstolargeoneslikecomputers 25 Undoubtedly onlineshoppinghasbroughtusmanyconveniences Yetitspotentialdangerstotheconsumercouldnotbeignored Onepossibleriskisthatconsumersmightnotgettheexactproducttheywantbecausetheinformationprovidedmightnotbeenoughorreliable Forasimpleexample aconsumerwhowantstobuyapairofshoesmightendupgettingapairwithdesiredstylebutunfitsizes 26 Afterall peoplehavetotrythemselveswhenbuyingclothesorshoes Moreover ifconsumersdonotpayattentiontothecredibilityofonlinestores theymightgetcheated 27 Therefore consumersshouldfirstlybeawareofthecredibilityofanonlinestore Secondly peopleshouldnotjumponthebandwagonbecausenotallonlineshoppingbringsaboutconvenience Instead theyhavetomaketheirownjudgmentastothekindofproductsthatcouldbeboughtonline Thus theycouldavoidpossibletroublecausingbyinadequateorinaccurateinformationprovidedbyanonlinestore 28 3 道理论证型模版 道理论证型要求考生针对反映生活哲理的某个成语 格言 谚语 警句等做出解释 并论证其寓意的正确性 结构模式 第一段 提出某种观点或现象第二段 论证 用举例法或正反证法论述其意义 第三段 结论 再次强调主题 或表明自己的态度 本题型的写作重点在解释和举例论证 29 布局谋篇 结合题目及提纲 可判定这是一篇道理论论证型的文章 文章的主题是做人应该诚实 第一段以说明文为主 列举社会上许多不诚实的现象 比如考试作弊 报纸杂志广播电视经常披露的虚假广告 众所周知的刘晓庆逃税案等 第二段做人应该诚实 诚实利人利己 通过正面展开论述 第三段重述主题 结束全文 ItPaystoBeHonest 30 ItPaystoBeHonest 1 当前社会存在许多不诚实的现象2 诚实利人利己 做人应该诚实1 Itiswell knownthat 2 Forexample 3 And 4 What smore 5 Even 6 However 7 Firstofall 8 Meanwhile 9 And 10 Therefore 11 Inaword 12 Itpaysto 填充内容1 提出主题或现象2 举例一3 举例二4 或5 6 主题词7 论证一8 论证二9 论证三10 总结上文11 总结全文12 强调主题 31 范文 1 Itiswell knownthatnowadaysdishonestyisacommonphenomenoninsociety 2 Forexample manygoodhearteddoctorswouldnottelldyingpatientsabouttheirrealcondition 3 Andpoorstudentstendtocheatontheexams 4 What smore greedyadvertisers armedwithmisleadingadvertisements maylurecustomersintobuyingfakecommodities 5 Evensuch decent andfamousfiguresasLiuXiaoqing onceconsideredChina smoviequeen havecheatedthegovernmentonincometaxes 32 6 However honestyisalwaysseenasanimportantpartofthehumancharacter 7 Firstofall ifyoutreatothersfairly thoseassociatingwithyouwillcertainlyprofitfromyoursincerity 8 Meanwhile asenseoftrustbuildsupintheirhearts which inturn willearnyoumoretruefriends 9 Andthatwillbenefityouinthelongrun 10 Therefore itisessentialforeveryonetomaintainanhonestattitudetowardsthewholesociety 11 Inaword honestywinstrust respectandhonor 12 Itpaystobehonest 33 Humor1 幽默的重要性2 幽默对身心健康及人际关系的积极作用3 因此 34 范文 1 Itiswell knownthatasenseofhumorisGod sgifttomankind 2 Forexample ahumorouspersonisoftenpopularwithhisfriendsandcolleagues 3 Anditisbornwithineveryone sheart 4 What smore ithastobeendeveloped 5 Evenhumorhastobeencultivatedwithgreatefforts 35 6 However somepeoplehaven trealizedthebenefitofhumortousinmanyrespects 7 Firstofall humorcanhelpusmaintainphysicalaswellasmentalwellbeing 8 Meanwhile itcanhelpusliveinharmonywithothers 9 Andwhenwehavemisunderstandingandtensionwithothersinourworkorstudy humormayeasetheproblemsmorequicklythanangrywordsorquarrels 36 10 Therefore asenseofhumorisreallyoneofthekeystohappiness 11 Inaword humorgivesusgreatenjoymenttolifeandmakesitworthliving 12 Itpaystobehumorous 37 4 图表分析型模版 图表作文的命题目的并不是简单考查考生描述图表表面内容的水平 而更着重于测试考生分析问题 即对图表深层含义领会挖掘的能力以及阐述能力 审题时增加了读图的步骤 文章中要考虑关键数据的引用 即体现趋势或者变化的重要数据 而绝对不能毫无目的地大量照搬堆砌 BACK 38 两种形式 一种是统计表 table 另外一种是统计图 graph 如 曲线图 linegraph 柱形图 bargraph 和饼图 piegraph 等 图表作文的体裁以说明文和描写文为主 写作模式 第一段 描写数据的主要变化趋势 对数据进行分析比较 总结归纳图表表面所呈现的主要特征 第二段 分析揭示表象后面的原因 第三段 下结论 39 StudentUseofComputer 1 上图所示为1995年 2000年 2007年某大学生使用计算机的情况 请描述其变化 2 请说明发生这些变化的原因 可从计算机的用途 价格或社会发展等方面加以说明 3 你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题 1995 2000 2007 2 4 6 8 10 12 14 16 18 20 40 布局谋篇 1 结合题目及提纲 可判定这是一篇图表作文 是一个柱状图表 体裁是说明文 文章主题是大学生使用计算机的情况 2 依据提纲内容 转换成相应的三段式结构模式 第一段概述图表内容 尤其是突出的数据变化 第二段分析这些变化产生的原因 第三段指出大学生使用计算机的困难或问题 41 范文 1 Asisclearlyshowninthechart studentsarenowspendingmuchmoretimeonthecomputer fromonehourtofourhoursperweekbetween1995and2000 2 Especially itincreasessharplytotwentyhoursintheyearof2007 3 Therearethreereasonsforthisphenomenon 42 4 Tobeginwith duetothesharpdeclineinpriceofpersonalcomputer mostcollegestudentsnowcanaffordone 5 Inaddition theyfindthecomputerawonderfulthingtohavefunwith 6 Forexample theycanchatthroughQQorplayinggamesonline 7 Lastbutnottheleast fromInternet theycanlearnthingsmuchmorequicklythansimplyfromreadingbookssothattheycansecureagoodjobinthefuture 8 Inshort lowprice increasingawarenessofhavingfunorgettinginformationfromInternetmakestudentsusecomputersalot 43 9 Asforme therearesomecomplaintsfrombothteachersandstudents 10 Ontheonehand studentscomplainaboutthelessavailabilityofcomputersandslowspeedoftheNetwork 11 Ontheotherhand someteachersworrythatthemuchmoretimespentplayingcomputergamesorsurfingonlinewillleadstudentstoignoretheirstudiesandevendocheatinginsteadofdoingresearchbytheirown 12 Inbrief inspiteofproblemsconcerningtheuseofcomputer wecan tdenythatcomputerisofmoremeritsthandefects 44 Task4RisingDivorceRatesinChina1 描述图表所反映的问题2 你认为最近几年中国离婚率高的原因是什么 1967 1977 1987 1997 2007 1 10 3 8 6 45 RisingDivorceRatesinChina 1 Asisclearlyshowninthechart between and 2 Especially 3 Therearethreereasonsfor 4 Tobeginwith 5 Inaddition 6 Forexample 7 Lastbutnottheleast 8 Inshort 9 Asforme 10 Ontheonehand 11 Ontheotherhand 12 Inbrief 填充内容1 图表总体描述 年代 年代2 指出突出的数据变化3 具体表示急剧上升下降或特殊现象的词4 叙述第一个原因5 叙述第二个原因6 具体例证7 叙述最后一个原因8 总结上文9 自己的观点10 理由一11 理由二12 总结上文 46 范文 1 Asisclearlyshowninthechart Chinahasexperiencedadramaticincreaseinthedivorceratebetween1967and2007 2 Especially duringthelastdecade thedivorcerateinbigcitieshasincreasedasmuchasithadinthepreviousthirtyyears 47 3 Therearethreereasonsforit 4 Tobeginwith legalchangeshavesimplifiedprocedures removedbarrierstodivorce 5 Inaddition therehasbeenasignificantchangeinsocialattitudetowardsthedivorcedpeople 6 Forexample thedivorceisnolongerconsideredasocialstigma 7 Lastbutnottheleast thechangeinpersonaleconomicactivitiesalsofacilitiesdivorce 8 Inshort theupwardtrendindivorceseemstobeamirrorofsomeimportantchangesinChinesesociety 48 9 Asforme whateverchangesleadingtotheriseindivorcerates thefactandthestatisticsalonereflectthechangeinpeople straditionalviewofmarriageandfamilylife 10 Ontheonehand divorceisnolongeranembarrassingtopicinchina 11 Ontheotherhand it speople 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hertoyourcityatthisweekend Somenecessarydetailsmustbeincluded 62 DearLinda Wehaven tseeneachotherforsixyearsaftergraduation IamsogladtohearthatyouhavegraduatedfromXxxandcomebacktoworkinSuzhou IfyouarefreethisSaturday pleasecometoShanghaiandhaveagoodtimewithme 63 WecanfirstgototheCenturyPark wheretheflowersareallinblossom Let sgoboatingonthelake Isn titpleasantinthecoolbreeze ThenIwilltreatyoutodinneratawesternrestaurantonHuaihaiRoad itissmallbutreallynice I msureyouwillenjoyit Afterdinner let sgotoaconcert Youareamusiclover aren tyou 64 Ifyoucouldn tcome pleasenotifymebeforeFriday Ifyoucan pleasetellmewhichtrainyouwilltakeandIwillmeetyouattherailwaystation Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyou Sincerelyyours LiMing 65 KeySentencesforCET 4Writing一 开篇 1 Withtherapiddevelopmentof Accordingtoarecentsurvey 2 RecentlytheproblemofXhasbeenbroughtintofocus hasbecomeaheatedtopic hasarousedgreatconcern 66 3 Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover 4 Whenitcomesto people sideasdifferfromoneanother 67 二 结尾 1 Fromwhathasbeendiscussed mentionedabove wecandrawtheconclusionthat Judgingfromallevidenceoffered wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat 2 Itishightimethatstrict efficientmeasuresweretakentostopV ing Itisnecessary essentialthatsteps measuresshouldbetakentoV 3 Insummary conclusion ifwecontinuetoignoretheabove mentionedissue moreproblemswillcropup 4 Tosolvetheabove mentionedproblem wemust 68 三 比较 1 利大于弊TheadvantagesofAfaroutweighitsdisadvantages TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB 2 利弊并存Justaseverycoinhastwosides everythinghasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages Evidently ithasbothnegativeandposi