高三英语二模作文范文汇编

20142015 学年高三英语二模汇编写作浦东新区ii. guided writingdirections: write an english composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.父母的言传身教在孩子的成长过程中往往起到重要的作用。请结合自身的经历，描述一件印象深刻的事例，并谈谈感受it is oftensaid that a familyis like a harbour, in which parents willgive their children love ,support and comfort after ups and downs ;and my parents are one ofthem,whose good words and behaviours are more than i can describe .today i want to share one thing impressing me so deeply that it seems it had happended yesterday.that was several years ago. my mum s boss put an end to their company .she became a laid-off worker , which meant my father would be the only bread-owner of ourfamily. my sister and i both felt somewhat worried ,and my parents sensed our anxiety immediately . on one hand ,my mum was applying for other positions actively , which left no trace of dismay at all , encouraging and moving us greatly ;on the other hand my parents had a talk with us ,in which they expressed gently and confidentlythat feeding our familyis theirresponsibility;they hopedthat we two could focus on our study as before . seeing our mum spersistence ,taking their advice ,we two returned to school life quickly .and fortunately my mum found anotherjob after a while .we together experienced those days , which helped us grow more .from it , we konw that members of a family should support and love each other withoptimisticattitudeno matterwhatconditons we are in ; we understandthatparents are loving us so much that they re willing to shoulder all of the hardships to help us walk a smoothy way ;and we bear in mind that we must study hard to rewardthem and us ourselves whothey love most .atthis moment,iam writingdown this article ,full of gratitude and love once more.范文 1：it s widely shared that the words and behaviors of parents exertan overwhelminglydispensableinfluenceon children s develoment,icantagree more, for my mum s words have left a deep impression on me. in my childhood, iwas addictedtothe chinesechess.my grandpa s chessingskillwas very outstanding but he never helped me win. so whenever my“ general ” was in a dilemma, i always burstintotears.however, my mumnot onlydidn t relieveme, buttoldme patiently that success was was always left for those who were willing to take pains. thewords are so powerful that it constantly reminds me of perseverance whenever andwherever i am. as a saying goes,” failure is the mother of success.” i exceedly realize the significant impact my parents words have on me.范 文 2： it s widely acknowledged that children naturally imitate what their parents do during the process of growth. thanks to my moms kindness, i ve learned to treat the world friendly. in the deep winter, my momand i went out to buy things.at the corner of the street, we discovered an old beggar. lying on the cold cement ground, he looked so helpless. every people passing were so indifferent that they all turned blind eyes to him. my mom removed her warm gloves and searched for a minutes. finding several coins, she bended and carefully put them into the bowlinfrontof him.“ on no accountdoes anyone want tobeg, throwingaway hisdignity,unlessthose who trulyhave no way to go” ,she wore her golvesagain and said. being kindtoall,especiallythosetrappedinmiserablesituationsiswhat my momtaught me. everyonemay catchtroublesand everyoneneeds inspirationand encouragement.范文 3： theparents actionsand words can have greateffectson theirchild.according to my experience, that is really true. when i was a 5-year-old child,one day, my father drove me to a park to see the beautiful scenery. whenwe arrived the parking zone, we found that it was full of different cars. wecould hardly find a place to park our car. then i found the sidewalk outside the parking zone wasnearly empty and there was a santana car withoutpassengers in it on the sidewalk. so i asked my father to park the car on the sidewalk like the santanacar.my fatherrefusedto do so.he explained,” ifwe parkthecar on thesidewalk,i willthe likelyto pay fora trafficfine.besides,parkingthe caron the sidewalk may bringconveniencetous.but itmakes thewalkersunconvenienttowalk.wemust consider the effect to the other people, not only think for ourselves.” then i know what was wrong withme. fromthismatter,i learnttobe considerateand know theimportanceof obey trafficlaws.as you can see,the parents action and words may impact on their children a lot.奉贤区 .guided writing （ 25 分）教室是我们学生学习活动的最主要场所，简单描述你现在的教室，并发挥想象力， 描述你理想中的教室。my classroom, with 33 desks and chairs and two blackboards, is on the fifth floor. although the noise or the bad smell can be disturbing , it s still a good place to study in.however, the present classroom is far from my ideal home. first of all, my ideal one should be large to hold more desks or shelves, where books and papers can be stored. and i wantit to hold an entertainment corner in which to have a rest for a cup of tea or coffee. second, there are just three oldfans and i feel very hot in summer, so i want it to be equipped withan air conditioner. finally i wish i hope it can be a home, where joys and sorrows can be shared.this is my ideal classroom, a seeminglyunrealistic but extraordinarily beautiful place.my ideal classroomi m now studying in a bright classroom on the fifth floor, where i can have a bird s eye view of the school. although the loud noise after class or the bad smell in hot weather can sometimes be disturbing, it s still a harmonious place to study in.however, the present classroom is far from my ideal home. first of all, my ideal one should be large enough to hold more desks or shelves, where piles of books and papers can be stored. and i want there to be an entertainment corner in which to have a good rest for a cup of tea or coffee after class. second, i want it to be equipped with anenvironment friendly air conditioner instead of three old fans making much noise while working.and withthe approach of hot summer weather, i cannot help sweating, which makes me feel embarrassed and anxious, causing my distraction from what the teachers are saying. so an energy-saving air conditioner is a must in my ideal classroom. finally i wish i can feel at home and feel close to nature in it, surrounded by plants and flowers breathing out their sweet perfume.this is my ideal classroom, a seemingly unrealistic but extraordinarilybeautiful wonderland.黄浦区ii. guided writingdirections: write an english composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.近期， 你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研，结果如图所示， 请结合图表信息写一份调研报告，须包括以下内容：1. 图表产生的背景和基本内容；2. 就你个人而言， 你会考虑哪些因素？请列出其中你认为相对重要的两项因素，并说明原因。下面图表是对我省某校高三学生选择高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请根据图表， 用英语写一篇简要的报告，并说说你自己的观点。注意：（1 ）文章的开头已经写好。（ 2 ）词数 120 左右。（ 3 ）可以适当发挥some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majorsand universities.答案one possible version:some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.about 35% of the students insist that the choice should be based on their owninterest. they say interest is the way leading to success. they think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what they have no interest in.about 45% of the students, however, consider it is the need of the society that matters a lot, for, they say, it will help them find the job they like best. in addition, interest can be developed and changed.interestingly, there are about 20% of the students who find it so difficult to make a choice that they prefer to follow the advice offered by their parents or teachers.in my opinion, interest is the most important of all. without interest you can tstudy the subject very well and may have more difficult with your career.虹口区ii. guided writingdirections: write an english composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese 学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞选。写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：1、 简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）。2、 如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么？ 注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字。dear sir/madam,i am a student named li qing from grade 3 class 1,writing this letter to campaign for the president of the student union.from my point of view, i am the right one you want. i ve been in the student union for two years, serving as a key member in the publicity department.moreover, i am outgoing and capable of having effective talks with others. when in charge of the publicity department, i always helped the former president to organize large-scale activities. in addition, i am fond of making friends and taking new challenges, which will facilitate my future role as a president.if given this position, i will do my utmost.on one hand, i will hold moreinteresting and meaningful activities, such as culture festivals, singing competitions, debates and so forth, so as to enrich campus life. on the other hand,what i will do is to call for students to protect our campus environment,for i firmly believe that a pleasant environment is of vital importance to every student and teacher.i will appreciate your kindness if you choose me as the new president. and your prompt reply is warmly welcomed.字数： 202best regards li qing内容分析：此作文题对考生来说并不陌生，因为2014 年虹口区的二模作文“图书馆招聘一名图书管理员助理 (the assistant librarian)，请以 simon johnson为名写一封求职信”。也采用了该形式。除此之外，该作文与2014 年普陀区二模作文“竞选学校的好班长称号 (mr./mrs. monitor) ”与 2015 年静安区一模作文“写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，自荐做课余学生图书馆员”也类似。在审题中需思考以下问题：作为学生会主席候选人需要具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）；以及如果当选，如何为本校学生做贡献。尤其是如何为本校学生做贡献是需要考生好好考虑的问题。精彩亮点分析：亮点一：首句使用非谓语做状语: writing this letter to campaign for the president of the student union.；亮点二：短语 :from my point of view ；亮点三：定语从句： i am the right one (that/who) you want；亮点四：现在分词做伴随状语：serving as a key member in the publicity department.；亮点五：非限制性定语从句：which will facilitate my future role as a president. 表明我爱好交朋友以及挑战自我，这有助于我未来当好学生会主席；亮点六：过去分词做条件状语：if given this position 。亮点七：连接词： on one hand, on the other han，d 使文章更有逻辑性；亮点八：主语从句： what i will do is 表明自己想法；亮点九：原因状语从句 +宾语从句： for i firmly believe that a pleasant environment is of vital importance to every student and teacher；.亮点十：条件状语从句：if you choose me as the new presiden。t写作小贴士：书信类作文是近年来高考以及一模二模常考的题型。考生需要注意格式， 并积累一些好的词组与句型来抓阅卷老师的眼球，从而脱颖而出。崇明县ii. guided writingdirections: write an english composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.高三学生在高考结束后将迎来很长的一个暑假，很多学生已在为这个假期制定计划。假设你是林敏， 你的网友王华今年也将高中毕业，前几天他通过邮件跟你讲述了他的三个暑假计划，分别是：参加一些学习班；做一份兼职工作；外出旅游。但由于时间安排的问题，只能做其中的两件事情，至于如何选择， 王华犹豫不决。 请你给王华回一封电子邮件， 内容需包括：比较分析王华的三个计划； 谈谈你的建议，并陈述理由。（注：邮件中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。）dear tom，i am so glad to receive your email. i knew you had made three plans for the ho liday, but you only have time to choose two from them. now i am writing to giv e you some suggestions.you plan to take a course after the exam and you want to find a part-time job.more importantly, you would like to travel to some places of interest. i think it is a good idea to take a course, because you can learn more knowledge thr ough it. what s more, i hope you can pay a visit to some scenic spots. the re ason is that you can broaden your horizon and relax yourself after the tough e xam. as for finding a part-time job, it is not necessary, for you can have more chances to take a job.are you satisfied with it? i wish you could agree with my suggestions.【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲式作文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示， 弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围 内进行分析、构思和想象。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4. 注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如i wish you c ould agree with my suggestions.是虚拟语气。 the reason is that you can broadenyour horizon and relax yourself after the tough exam.这句话是表语从句。此外， 文章还使用了大量短语plan to, would like to do ,be satisfied with, as for等。插入语 what s more ，以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。静安、青浦、宝山区ii. guided writingdirections:write an english composition in 120-150 words according to the instructionsgiven below in chinese.87. 下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境。请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括： 具体描述两幅图； 简要分析造成这两种现象的原因； 提出解决问题的建议。（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）闵行区ii. guided writingdirections: write an english composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.假设你校将为学生开设以下课程：野外拓展(outward bound training) ；口才训练(eloquence training) ； 礼仪培训(etiquette training) ；职业培训(vocational training) 。请根据你的自身特点和需求选择其中的一个课程，并简要谈谈你选择这个课程的理由。i am so excited to learn that there will be four new training courses available for students this semester. concerning outward bound, eloquence, etiquette a nd vocation, i won t hesitate to choose outward bound training. not only is i t because i am active and lively, but also that it can effectively improve physical ability, perseverance, wisdom, communication and other aspects of the qu ality.first and foremost, students psychological quality education is more and mor e highly valued by the community, because this issue has become a prominent factor affecting health and stability of talent. most projects of outward boundare designed to improve the quality of people s psychology, to improve self-c ontrol ability of students to continually overcome the psychological fear, tochallenge themselves, overcome themselves and shape the good will quality of c alm, resolute, indomitable.in addition, outward bound can cultivate students sense of team work. in mod ern society, the era of relying on one person to conquer the world has passed.success requires cooperation, needs every member of the team in a positive un derstanding of each other. outward bound has a lot of teamwork needed to complete the project, such as“ survival” ,“canned shoes ” . a person s power islimited, but when integrated into the team, if everyone can play their strengt hs, them the whole team can complete the task that individual cant complete.obviously, outward bound can achieve educational goals of psychological and so cial adaptation, which , for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term.徐汇区、松江区、金山区ii. guided writingdirections: writean english compositionin 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in chinese.假设今年暑假，你准备去某地做一次故地重游的旅行，并准备带上你的朋友们一起去。请写一篇文章介绍你的旅行计划，主要包括以下内容：准备去什么地方 故地重游的原因 本次计划如何开展希望做些什么准备i m going to take advantage of my summer holiday to revisit beijing with my friends,for the普陀区ii. guided writingdirections:writeanenglishcompositionin120 150wordsaccordingtothe instructions given below in chinese.假设你学校两种学习安排：一是学校为学生安排解答困惑或补习知识遗漏点，二是鼓励学生自己学习解决困难。你会选择哪一种学习方式？请结合实际情况，举例并说明你选择的理由。one problem emerges as we delve into the function of lessons: which is a more important goal of lessons, helping students gain self-confidence or teaching them specific knowledge? from my perspective, lessons or teachers do both, but the lessons which help students gain the ability of sustainable development is much more important.it is undeniable that teachers top priority is to impart knowledge to students. that is, as a matter of fact, how we define teachers: the person who imparts certain knowledgeto others. take history teacher as an example. some history teachers are able to make their classes as lively as possible by illustrating their points through interestinghistoric events and stories. through this way, they not only attain the purpose ofknowledge impartmen（t 传授） but also make students love their classes, in turn, lovehistory. on the contrary, other history teachers are simply teaching knowledge for its own sake, without further elaboration of classes. therefore, due to the nature of teachers, it is undeniably significant for teachers to impart knowledge to students.on the other hand, with the increasing pace and complexity of modern society, the twentieth-first century is calling for multiple talents, talents who are not only physically and academically capable, but also psychologically capable. outstanding students with weak psychological state or lack of confidence are surely not the employers wanted. therefore, people have attained a common consensus as time passes by that students mentality is of equal importance with the academicknowledge they acquire. therefore, i