2011年北京中考英语作文答题解析及范文.doc

2011年北京中考英语作文答题解析及范文题目：成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生爱丽丝的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。（一定要仔细看这里，这个是写作的基本内容要求！）Hi! LiuMing,Im so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I am afraid she wont pay me back. I dont know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice命题形式：2011的中考作文题目以书信形式，即“假如你是XXX，你的美国朋友XXX给你写了一封信，请你根据来信内容，写一封回信”内容要点：1. 回答她的问题2. 提出建议3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法来信内容简要说明：Alice表示自己的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给她，担心对方可能不能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题？请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。解题思路（如何写这封信）：首先，大家一定要看清楚信的内容。然后看清楚题干要求你答哪几点，务必把三个内容要点都答上去，才能不丢分哦。其次，安排文章结构，分为三部分。文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句” Do you have the same problem?” ，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have met things like this. / I have never met things like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为” Im so sad。”， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 “ Dont worry” 或者表示理解对方的感受 “I can understand you。”文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：lIf its not a lot of money, you can lend it to her。（如果钱不多的话，可以借给她）2If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you， youd better suggest herask her parents for help. （如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助）3If you decide to help her， then trust her， because she is your close friend。（如果你决定把钱借给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。）文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答“why”，即：为什么要给出如上建议的原因。如：lFriendship is more important than money， if your close friend needs help， you are supposed to give him / her a hand and trust him / her. （友谊和信任比金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮助，你应该帮助他/她，并且给予信任。）2We students dont have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents. When we need some money, its always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turning to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. （我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母要总比问同学借要好。同时，我们应该对父母保持诚实。）得分要点：1，首先要把题干要求的内容都写上。2，努力确保句子正确，单词拼写正确。3，文章话题属于生活化细节问题，文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子。句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，或者出现一两个从句，会为文章加分哦。One possible version：(范例)Hi！Alice ,Im glad to hear from youYes，I sometimes face the same problemI think if she really needs the money，youd better lend it to herYou dont need to worry too muchShell probably pay you back when she has moneyIf you dont lend her the money，Im afraid you may lose the friendI think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each otherSo when my friends need money，I will try my best to help themMaybe Ill get it back，or maybe I wontI hope what I said can help youYours，2009年北京市中考英语写作（5月16号最新更新）某英文报纸就家务劳动（Housework）话题征文，请你投稿。每个家庭都有许多家务，人人都应该学做一些。谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务，有什么体会，并打算在暑假为家里做什么。提示词语：every family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, be/feel proud of内容要点：1，谈谈你经常帮父母做哪些家务2，有什么体会3，并打算在暑假为家里做什么解题思路：第一部分：用一两句话引入话题，并进入第一个内容要点的阐述。Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it. 开始谈谈我在家都干什么家务：I often help my parents do some housework such as washing dishes(洗碗), mopping the floor(擦地板), and cleaning the bathroom(清洗卫生间).第二部分：有什么体会By doing housework, Ive learned how to take care of myself and be helpful to my parents. (通过做家务我学会如何照顾自己以及如何对父母有帮助。) Doing housework gives me pleasure. I feel very happy when the house is clean and tidy. (做家务给我乐趣。当我看到家里干净又整洁感到非常开心。) I feel proud of myself because I am helpful to my parents. （我感到非常自豪，因为我可以帮助父母。）第三部分：并打算在暑假为家里做什么The summer holiday is coming. I will try to learn cooking. My parents can enjoy the dishes after a long days work. (暑假马上就要来了，我打算学习做饭。父母上了一天班之后可以品尝到我做的菜。)参考范文： Every family has lots of housework. Everyone should learn to do some of it. I often help my parents do housework such as washing clothes, cleaning the room and watering flowers. I think Ive learned how to take good care of myself and my family by doing housework. Sometimes cleaning all the windows is an enjoyable experience. I really feel proud of myself. And doing housework is also a kind of exercise. The summer vacation is coming. Im going to learn how to cook some dishes. My parents will be happy to enjoy them. 2010年北京中考英语作文解析及范文十、文段表达（15分） 根据中外提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于词的回信，信的开头结尾已给出，其词数不计入完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。75. 假设你叫刘京，是美国中学生托尼的笔友，你收到了他的来信。请给托尼写一封回信，回答他的问题，介绍北京良好的公交服务，并谈谈你的感受。Hi! Liu Jing,My grandpa is going to Beijing next month because he has heard a lot about the city and he would like to see it himself. He says the bus service in Beijing is very good now, and people can go anywhere by bus. Is he right? Can you tell me something more about it?Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Tony Hi! Tony,Im glad to know your grandpa is coming to Beijing. _ If you have more questions, please ask me.Yours,Liu Jing来信内容简要说明：托尼的爷爷要来北京玩，他听说北京的公交服务很好，人们可以坐公交到任何想去的地方。他问刘京是不是这样的，希望刘京告诉他更多北京公交服务的情况。内容基本要点：1回答他的问题2介绍北京良好的公交服务3并谈谈自己的感受解题思路：文章第一部分：回答问题： 可以说 Yes. Your grandpa is right.(你的爷爷是对的。) 或者说：What your grandpa said was true. (你爷爷所说的是事实。)文章第二部分（紧接上一句写，无需分段。）介绍北京良好的公交服务：The bus service in Beijing is really good now.（北京现在的公交服务确实很好。）或者：The bus service in Beijing has really been improved a lot these days. (北京公交服务现在确实大大改善了。) 然后在这一段补充介绍北京公交情况，比如线路（bus lines），时刻(time)，价格(cost)等。例如：There are bus lines all over Beijing from 5 oclock in the morning to 23 oclock at night. The ticket costs only 1 Yuan. If you use a public transport card, it will be much cheaper. （关键词汇用桔色标出）文章第三部分：谈谈自己的感受：可以说公交车方便，又环保。Buses are very convenient and environmental friendly. 或者说：虽然有时候车上人多拥挤，但还是应该大力提倡人们多多使用公共交通来节约能源。Though sometimes it is a little crowded on the bus, we still need to support public transp