(公开课)Book 1U2_Task 1Writing A Letter of Giving Advice.ppt

writingaletterofgivingadvice高一 3 task writingaletterofadvice conclusion whenaskingforadvice youshould 1 stateyourproblem 2 askforhelp usingwhatcan shouldido howcan shouldi shouldi task writingaletterofadvice whengivingadvice youshould 1 askquestionstomakesureyoufullyunderstandtheproblem 2 showsympathytothepersonyouaretalkingwithi msorrytohearthat ihateitwhenthathappens iknowjustwhatyoumean 3 giveadvice usingyoushould oughtto must youmustmakesuretodo do don t task writingaletterofadvice canyouthinkofmoreusefulexpressionswhenaskingforadvice whatdoyouthinkofit whatwouldyousuggestidoforit what syouropiniononit mayihaveyourcommentonthismatter woulditbeagoodideatodoso task writingaletterofadvice moreusefulexpressions givingadvice what howabouttryinganewmethod whynotfindanewway you dbetterchangeyourformerplan itisbettertogiveupyourformerplan i dliketosuggestyoumakeanewplan istronglyrecommendthatyoutrythisone youmightaswelltakethisway ifiwereyou iwouldthinkoverit task writingaletterofadvice tips askingforadvice whatcan shouldido howcan shouldi shouldi whatdoyouthinkof whatwouldyousuggest what syouropinionon mayihaveyourcommenton woulditbeagoodideato givingadvice youshould must youmustmakesure do don t what howabout whynot you dbetter itisbetterto i dliketosuggest istronglyrecommend youmightaswell ifiwereyou iwould task writingaletterofadvice howtoplanyourletterofadvice tips whenplanningyourletterofadvice youshould 1 findthemainpoints 2 answereachofthepoints 3 offercomfortandsupport 4 giveyouradvice 建议信格式 1 称呼 salutation 收信人的称呼 第一行左边顶格写 在称呼后面一般用逗号 2 正文 body 正文在称呼语下面隔一行开始写 是信的核心部分 正文有缩进式和齐头式两种 每段书信第一行的第一个字母稍微向右缩进些 通常以五个字母为宜 每段第二行从左面顶格写起 这就是缩进式 但美国人写信各段落往往不用缩进式 用齐头式 即每一行都从左面顶格写起 齐头式 称呼多不用逗号 3 结束词 conclusion 在正文下面一两行处 是对收信人有礼貌的问候或良好的祝愿 4 签名 signature 黄金表达 建议信开头常用句式 iamwritingtoexpressmyviews ideasabout youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon andiwilltrytomakesomesuggestions thanksfortrustingme it smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions advice tips iamsorry surprisedtohear learnthat body givingadvice wecanuseconjunctionsorphrasestomaketheletterbetter 平行 aswellas notonly butalso 转折 however nevertheless inspiteof otherwise因果 therefore asaresult owingto 递进 besides what smore furthermore inaddition what sworse对比 onthecontrary insteadof ontheotherhand unlike sentencepatterns 建议信结尾常用句式 theseareonlymypersonalsuggestions advice tips ihopeyouwillfindthemuseful helpful iamwritingtodiscussthismatterwithyouwheneveryouneedhelp iamlookingforwardtoyourreply sample佳作观摩 dearlihua mymomanddadhavearulefortheirkids yougetalla sinyourexamsoryouareout iamonly18 idomyhomeworkandtrymybest butifeelthepressurefromthemandiamworriedaboutwhatisdoingtome iwonderwhatitislikeinyourfamily whatshouldido yours peter 假定你是李华 你的笔友peter给你发来e mail寻求帮助 请根据e mail的内容写一封回信 告诉peter你的情况 给peter提出解决问题的具体建议 askforadvice dearpeter i msurprisedthatthiskindofthingshouldhappeninyourcountry hereinchinaparentsusuallytaketheirchildrentoallkindsofcoursesafterclass whicharesupposedtohelpthemgettopgradesinallexams butinmyfamilymyparentstreatmeastheirfriendandwon tputtoomuchpressureonmeandallowmetodevelopmyowninterestinart musicandsports soi mprettyluckyinthisaspect 第一段 介绍自己的情况 以引起对方的共鸣 非限制性定语从句 isuggestthatyoushouldhaveaheart tohearttalkwithyourparentsandtellthemtheyshouldsethighstandards rewardachievementsbutnotpunishyouforpoorperformance iamsuretheywillunderstandyousoonerorlater hopeeverythingwillgoonwellwithyou yours lihua 第二段 给对方提出具体的建议 第三段 提出自己的希望 宾语从句 第一段 介绍自己的情况 一引起对方的共鸣 第二段 给对方提出具体的建议 第三段 提出自己的希望 结构分析 1 使用了划线的高级词汇besupposedto treat as putpressureon developone sinterestin pretty inthisaspect rewardachievements sethighstandards soonerorlater 体现了扎实的英语语言功底和运用能力 2 连词but和so的使用使文章内容衔接更加自然流畅 3 非限制性定语从句和宾语从句的使用使文章句式富有变化 显示了英语语言的驾驭功力 亮点点击 建议信注意事项 理由要合情合理 语气一定要礼貌 慎用must等命令口气 建议信要写得简明扼要 目的明确 具有合理性和说服力 建议信一般采取 三段式结构 如何算是一篇好文章 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分 使全文结构紧凑 行文连贯 条理清楚 要点全 词汇 句型 高级 和语法多样化 较复杂 语言地道 连接词 dearbob i mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto 引出主题 hereareafewsuggestions first itisimportantto then italsohelpsto besides itshouldbeagoodideato youcanalso 此三句不同的句式提出建议 asto isuggest 有时根据需要具体到某一反面 inaddition 其他建议 i msure 预测可能的结果 给对方以行动的信心和决心 i mlookingforwardto 表达愿望 sincerelyyours lihua 反面范例 反面范例 不推荐字体 优秀作文范例2 优点 考生的书面整洁 字体美观 运用therebe句型 介词短语 从句 非谓语 套用句式等来提亮句子 使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底 practice 书面表达根据刘伟给杂志编辑dr wang的信 以及要点提示 为dr wang写一封回信 要求 1 内容要覆盖所有要点并适当发挥 2 字数150字左右 deardr wang iama16 year oldteenager andihavesomeproblemisthatican tgetalongwithmyparents wheneveriwanttodosomethingorsuggestanidea theydon tlistentome theyalwaysmakemedothingsidon tlike eachtimeiwatchadvdorplayforeignmusic hesendsmetobedorasksmetoplaythepiano heevenforbidsmefromchattin