高考英语漫画类作文指导

Attentionplease 2011江苏高考说明 高考英语书面表达示例2 看图作文 看图作文的 图 不局限于某一类型的图 如漫画 广告 也包括其他图片 照片 图表等情景材料 考生们可根据图示的寓意 内容或情节线索 自己组织文字 进行描述 叙述 比较或表达思想观 作文应覆盖提示的要点 但应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻译 高考书面表达专题写作指导 漫画作文 Writingbasedoncartoons Areyoufamiliarwiththiscartoon Whatabilitiesshouldwehave 1 读图 3 谋篇 2 解意 读图 Topicsofcartoons Topicsofcartoons Environmental Naturalproblems Socialphenomenon Attitudestowardslife 解意 theme tothepoint 注意 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息 clues 切记要认真阅读 1 辨明褒贬 找准角度 angle 联系生活 明晰主旨 theme 下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象 请你根据对这幅漫画的理解 用英语写一篇短文 描述一下他们的不同境遇 并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法 Example1 角度comparison主旨educationinequality ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina 角度criticize 主旨 Thestudentsaswellastheirparentsonlyfocusontheiracademicachievements neglectingpsychologicalqualityandmoralstandards Example2 Judgethethemesofthefollowingcartoonsasquicklyaspossible Let shaveacompetition Comeon Chooseme 2 1 3 4 5 6 Peoplelackcommunication Picture1 Protectanimals Nobuying nokilling Picture2 Peoplecan taffordheavymedicalfees Picture3 Picture4 Onefalsemovemaylosethegame Lookbeforeyouleap Moneycan tbuyeverything Healthisthebestwealth Picutre5 下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告招画 这则广告想要告诉我们什么 ifunexpectedcan tforeseeprotectourselvesbuyinsurance Picture6 Theadvertisementaboveshowsusthattherearealwayssomeunexpected ifs inourlife butnotallofuscanforeseethemclearly Sobuyinginsuranceforlifeislikelythebestwaytoprotectourselvesfromadeadly if Conclusion Whenitcomestoattitudestowardslife usingpropersayingsmakessense 谋篇 organizationStep1 Descriptionstep2 AnalysisStep3 Solutions 发现问题 解决问题 分析问题 Step1Description 人称 时态 Towhatdegreeshouldwedescribethecartoon Organization Example acountryboycryinglongforeducationacityboyenjoyallthebenefitsofeducation Asisvividlyshowninthepicture Ascanbeseeninthepicture Inthepicture thereare Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon Sentencestructures acountryboyiscryinghelplessinthedarkness longingeagerlyforschooleducation incontrast thecityboyontherightisenjoyingallthebenefits Asisvividlyshowninthepicture Step2Analysis 联系实际分析 facts reasons results Sentencestructures 1 Whatarethereasonsforthisphenomenon 2 Itseemsveryridiculousthat However thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere 3 Thepictureshowsthat Itistheexactreflectionof 4 Thepictureindicatesthatwe Nowadays itisacommonphenomenonthat 5 Thisisaironic 讽刺的 cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong Clues 描述一下他们的不同境遇 并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法 Indicate educationinequalityFacts dropoutofschoolsufferfromlowstandardsof comparativelybetteropportunitiesResults lowerenrollmentratesworsentheproblem Example ThecomparisonindicatesthephenomenonofeducationinequalityinmodernChina facts School agecountrychildrenareoftendroppingoutofschoolduetopoverty Eventhosewhomanagedtostayinschoolarestillsufferingfromthelowstandardsofeducationalfacilitiesandacademicquantities Comparatively citychildrenhavemuchbetteropportunitiestoreceivegoodeducation results Thus schoolinthecountrysidegenerallyhavemuchlowerenrollmentratesthanthoseinthecity whichinturnworsenstheproblemofeducationalinequality AsfarasI mconcerned Inmyopinion Frommypointofview Onlyinthiswaycan Onlyif canwe Step3Solutions opinions suggestions Itishightimewetooksomemeasurestoputanendtothisphenomenon Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakento Thegovernmentshouldmakelawsto Themediashouldappealfor Weshouldraisepeople sawarenessof Everyoneshouldmakegreateffortsto 从大到小从意识到行动 ThegovernmentThemediabeawareofOnlyif socialjusticeharmonioussociety Example Tosolvethisproblem thegovernmentshouldspendmoremoneyontheimprovementofeducationinruralareas Meanwhile themediacanappealforthepublicdonationsforruraleducation Moreover allpeopleinthecommunityshouldbeawareoftheseriousnessoftheproblemanddowhatevertohelp Onlyifwedothesecanwehavemoresocialjusticeandthusmakeoursocietymoreharmonious Practice目前医疗费不断攀升 有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨 人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制 请根据下面图画 以 HealthCare 为题写一篇短文 简要说明图画中所表达的内容 重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点 Clues 简要说明图画中所表达的内容 重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点 Steps Contents Description Analysis Solutions anoldmansufferfromgotohospitalmedicalbillcan taffordanotherattach Results 1 indebt2 bearthepain3 waitfordeath 1 reducemedicalexpenses2 buildupmedicalinsurance caresystem HealthCare Description Fromthepicture wecanseethattheoldmanwassufferingfromhearttrouble attack Hehadtogotohospitalformedicalcare Whenhesawthemedicalbillwith 5 0000fromthehospital hewassoshockedthathecouldn tstandonhisfeet Itwasbeyondwhathecouldafford It sreallyanotherheartattackforhim Sample Analysis Atpresent manypeoplecan taffordheavymedicalfees Results Becauseofthis theymaygetintodeepdebtinordertogetpropermedicalcare Worsestill somecannotborrowanymoneysotheyhavetobearthepainofdiseasesorwaitforthelastdayoftheirlife Whatapity SolutionsTosolvetheproblem westronglycallforthemedicalexpensestobereduced Thegovernmentshouldbuildupmedicalinsurancesystem andtryitsbesttoexploreanddevelopanewhealthcaresothateveryonewillbeabletoenjoytheirlifeaslongaspossible Onlyinthisway canweenjoyourlifeaslongaspossible Whateverthepictureis justremember ProperdescriptionAccurateanalysisReasonablesolutions Onlyifyoukeeptheserulesinmind canyoumakeit Let sdrawconclusion Consolidation chenjuan73 Thankyou 第五部分书面表达 满分25分 下图描述的是全球环境问题 请仔细观察这幅漫画 用英语写一篇短文 阐明漫画中所反映的问题 并提出解决此问题的方法 至少三点 Consolidation DescriptionAnalysisSolution Fromthepicture wecanseethatpollutionisposingathreattoourearth whichcomesinmanyways Millionsofchimneysofthefactoriesarepouringheavysomokintoair whichcausesseriousairpollution Alargeamountofwastewaterfromthefactoriespolluteswater makingourriversfishlessandourwaterunfittodrinkandswimin Furthermore alotoftreeshavebeencutdownwithoutproperplans whichcontributestothesoilbeingwashedaway Itseemsthatwereallyhavenocleanplacetolive Description Analysis Thepollutionissoseriousthatwehavetofindeffectivesolutionstoit AsfarasIamconcerned thegovernmentshouldpasslawstoreducepollutedair Somemeasuresshouldbetakentopurifythewaterbeforeitispouredintotheriversoftheseas Weshouldplantmoretreestokeepthesoilinplace What smore peopleshouldbefurthereducatedtorealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection Onlyinthisway wewillhaveacleanandtidyenvironment Solutions Itiswellknownthatdrun