2015高三英语书面表达集锦.doc

1. 留言条假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1外出购物2替房东还书3Tracy 来电话留言：1) 咖啡屋 ( Bolton Coffee ) 见面取消2) 此事已告知 Susan3) 尽快回电注意：1.词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mrs Wilson, With best wishes, Li Hua【答案】Mrs. Wilson,Im going out shopping, and wont be back until about 5：00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 oclock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.解析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据所给内容写一个留言。我们可以看出书面表达应该包括三个大的方面：购物、还书、留言。而留言又包括三个方面：取消见面、已告知Suan、回电。增加适当的细节以及运用恰当的连词把每个语法正确，句型丰富的句子连接在一起就会得到好的文章。亮点：运用了高级词汇，如return to , attend to 同时，not until, want to do sth. 等句式和定语从句等结构的运用也为文章增添了亮色。2. 申请信满分模板Dear.I am extremely pleased to see(报纸、广告） for the position（职位） .And Im writing to apply for（职位）.I am confident that Iam suitable for（职位）. On one hand,（原因） .On the other hand,（原因） .I shall be much honored if you will offer me the opportunity to（尝试）. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Yours Sincerely假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广引起了你的注意，请根据要点（箭头所指内容）写一封申请信。Winter JobsCould you be an ASSISTANT TEACHER for childrens winter camp Excellent pay for working with children Work with native teachers from England English-only classes work evenings and weekends for 2 weeks For more information, write to Mr. SmithI can start working from. Yes. Im interested self-introduction (personality, fluency in English,.)注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Smith,Ive read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a childrens winter camp._【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,Ive read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a childrens winter camp. Im very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job.To begin with, I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter. Besides, I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates. More importantly,（条理清楚） I can speak English fluently, which will help me work with native teachers from England.（定语从句） I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term. I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity.（固定句型） Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua解析: 题目要求根据所给材料写一封申请信，表达自己想得到这份工作的意愿。写作要点包括: 自我介绍；工作时间等几个方面。词数100左右。亮点：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展。使用了定语从句、固定句型，高级词汇，具备较强的语言运用能力。练笔：假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构MidSenior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。ASSISI ANTS WANTEDValuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at EnglishTheir work is to tend the senior students during the breakRequirements attached：1Good at English2Experienced priorityContact us by e-mail：midesch163com注意： 1短文词数100字左右； 2不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；Dear SirMadam，_ Yours sincerely,3. 投诉信假如你是耀华中学的李华，于2014年12月26日在Amazon图书网站购买了外文小说Twilight。在阅读过程中，发现小说缺页严重，你想通过网站客服解决该决问题，特写了一封邮件，内容如下：1. 购书时间及书名；2.书籍的问题；3. 希望有合理的解决方法；4. 期待尽快得到回复并表示感谢。 要求：(1)包括所有内容；(2)信的开头已写好(不计入总词数)；(3)词数：100左右； Dear Sir/ Madam, I am a student from Yao Hua Middle School.Im Li Hua, a student of Yaohua Middle School. _Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,I am a student from Yao Hua Middle School. As a faithful supporter of your website, I have enjoyed your convenient and timely service. But this time, I am writing for your help.On December 26th, I ordered a best-seller Twilight through your website. Unfortunately, quite a few pages were found missing when I read it afterwards, greatly affecting my understanding of the book.I was wondering whether you could solve this problem in a proper way, for instance, sending me a new book, for I really love the book.Your earliest replay will be highly appreciated. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua【解析】本题