英语二30分作文 写作具体要求及详解ppt课件

强化实践能力培养的考核方式 方法 要求考生在期末递交三片小作文 作文的长度约为10 15句 约100字 可选作文题目包括 1 WhyDoILearnEnglish2 TheBookILikeMost3 MyFavouriteCity4 MyBestFriend5 AChineseFestival6 ANervousExperience7 WhyILikeComputer IDon tLikeComputer8 MyOldSchool9 IWanttoSaySomethingaboutScience10 MyFamily11 IWanttoBeaTeacher Lawyer Millionaire12 MyFavouriteSeason 总分为30分 按5个档次给分 评分时 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次 然后以该档次的要求来衡量 确定或调整档次 最后给分 词数少于75和多于120的 从总分中减去2分 评分时 应注意的主要内容为 内容要点 应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性 上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面 评分时 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑 英 美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受 如书写较差 以至影响交际 将分数降低一个档次 内容要点可用不同方式表达 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分 作文要求 1 整体格式 按要求编辑完三篇作文后要统一格式 标题为小三粗体并居中 内容为四号字 2 检查语法和词汇错误 对有划波浪线和红线的部分要检查错误直至曲线消失 3 注意字数要求 不要太多也不要太少 控制在80 120 4 尽量不要自己些 可以去搜相关的语句 最后加工成自己的作品 如何选题见各篇讲解 题材丰富 不用担心会有雷同 除非你是直接拷的别人的 1 WhyDoILearnEnglish搜相关学习英语的好处和作用的文章 一定要该用第一人称 如以下的句子可以放在作文里 1 Englishisanimportanttoolforcommunicationsbetweenpeopleofdifferentcountriesasthemostwidelyusedlanguage Forexamples informationseek exchangeandacademicstudy 2 TohaveabetterunderstandingofthewesterncountriesandtheirhistoryandculturetoaidthedevelopmentofChina youmustexploitbyyourselfwiththeirlanguageandusetheiroriginalbooks 3 BylearningEnglish youmaythinkbothinEnglishandChinese whichwillopenyoureyesandhelptoenlargeyourviews 4 WithgoodEnglish youmaydevoteyourselftointroductionofChinesecultureandup to datetechnologiesintothewesterncountriestopromotetheexchangebetweenwesterncountriesandChina 2 TheBookILikeMost自己喜欢任一本书均可作文材料 搜相关的英文介绍即可 比如 钢铁是怎么炼成的 的英文介绍等等 ThebookthatIlikemostisnotastorybookbutabookthatinspiresmetostrengthenmyFaithwithGodandthatisTHEPURPOSEDRIVENLIFE Thatbookreallytouchesyourheartandsoul IttalksabouthowtohaveacloserelationshipwithGodanditalsotellsthepersonthatweallhaveapurposewhywearehereinthisworld SomeofusmaybebornbecauseofaccidentorunwantedpregnancybutGodplannedusaheadoftimeandweallhavearoleinthisworld ItalsotalksabouttrialsandthesethingsarejustforstrengtheningourrelationshipwithGod Hegaveusthatsothatwecanallbecomestrongandineachtimethatwefall Heisalwaystheretocarryus WemaynotalwaysappreciatethesethingsbutitisallaboutGod splan SometimesloosingsomethingmakesusdepressedbutwhoknowsmaybeGodhasanotherplanforusandwearejustpushingsomethingthatisnotreallyforus Ireallyrecommendforeveryonetoreadthatbook itwillreallytouchallofyouanditcanevenchangeourlives Itisoneofakindandreallyagreattreasure 3 MyFavoriteCity任何知道不知道的城市均可 搜相关英文介绍 HongKongisayoung pulsatingcityfullofenergy ThisisevidenttoanyonestandingonthequayinTsimShaTsuiandlookingatIsland simpressingskyscraperhorizon Furthermore thisisacitywhichhassucceededinmakinganartoutofsqueezingsevenmillionpeopleintoanareaof1000squarekilometers Youcanfindeverythinghere someoftheworld smostexcitingskyscraperarchitecture fashionableshoppingmalls amazingnightviewoftheVictoriaBayandoneoftheworld shottestfinancialdistricts Forthosepreferfashion avisittoCausewayBayisrecommended hereitischieflyforyoungpeoplewhoenjoycombingthefashionboutiquesuntillateintotheevening AnyonewholosestheirwayinthealleysofthetechnologyparadiseofKowloonwillfindtheirwaytoaninterestingrestaurantintheChinesequarterofCentralofdecidetotakeaswiminStanley Andsoitcontinues AtriptoHongKongisanadventure 4 MyBestFriend写人的 可以搜相关人物性格 事情等等 例如以下的范文 Everybodyhasabestfriendthattheycanshareeverythingwith Ialsohaveabestfriend Wemetinschool andwe reinthesamegrade Mybestfriendisagoodstudentbecauseheisveryhardworking Ilearnalotfromhim Hehelpsmewithmath IhelphimwithEnglish Wealwayshelpeachother Besidesthat he shonestandreliable Itrusthimcompletelyandwesharesecretsallthetime Mybestfriendisaloyalandbraveboy Whenabullyteasedme hecametomyrescuerightaway Healwaysremembersmybirthdayandheisfuntobewith Hetellsfunnyjokesandstories Healwaysmakesmelaugh Finally heisaverygoodlistenerandheknowshowtocheermeupwhenI mdown Ihopewe llstayfriendsforever 5 AChineseFestival题目也挺宽的 可以搜中国具体某个节日的英文介绍 具体的节日见下页 ChineseNewYearstartswiththeNewMoon 新月 onthefirstdayofthenewyearandendsonthefullmoon 满月 15dayslater The15thdayofthenewyeariscalledtheLanternFestival 元宵节 whichiscelebratedatnightwithlanterndisplaysandchildrencarryinglanternsinaparade NewYear sEveandNewYear sDayarecelebratedasafamilyaffair atimeofreunionandthanksgiving ThecelebrationwastraditionallyhighlightedwithareligiousceremonygiveninhonorofHeavenandEarth 万物 thegodsofthehouseholdandthefamilyancestors 6 ANervousExperience自己的某种经历 激动的 紧张的 面试的 考试的 冒险的 均可Theideaofmovingtoafarawayplacecanbefrighteningforyoungerchildrenandparents butfordifferentreasons Whilechildrenareconcernedfortheunknown parentsmaybeconcernedaboutthechild shealthandsafety Shotsandimmunizationscankeepchildrenfromcontractingillnessesanddiseasesthathavebeenallbutforgottenasathreatforyearsinsomecountries butareatruethreateverydayinothers Internationalhealthinsuranceplanswilllikelycoverthecostofimmunizationsandphysicals andparentsshouldexplaintochildrenoldenoughtounderstandthattheyneedtogotothedoctor sofficebeforethetrip Adiscussionabouthowthatmightbedifferentfromthedoctor sofficetheygotooncethey vemovedcanalsobehelpfultopreparechildrenfordifferences 7 WhyILikeComputer IDon tLikeComputer搜电脑的好处 坏处的英文文章 在改成第一人称即可 Thereisnodoubtthatcomputersareveryusefulintechnologyandbusiness Inspace computershelpastronautsandpilotscontrolthespeedanddirectionofaspaceship sflight Withthehelpofcomputers doctorscanfinddiseaseseasilyandsolveotherproblems Forexample tinycomputersinsidepeople sbodieskeeptheirheartsbeatingwell Infactories robotscontrolledbycomputerscandoworkthatisdangeroustohumans SincetheInternetcameintobeing people slivesathomehavechanged too Moreandmorepeoplehavepersonalcomputers andtheyusethemtoplaygamesandwatchmovies ThankstotheInternet peoplecandoshoppinganddobusinessathome Insteadofwritinglettersonpaper peoplecommunicatebysendinge mailsandchattingonline Thewholeworldisconnected Computershavemadetheworldsmaller likea village Computershaveimprovedourlives buttheyhavebroughtproblems too 8 Myschoollife学校生活的事情 小学初中高中大学里发生的事情 学习 感情 爱情的都可 不要写成小说那么长的 Thereisnodoubtthatalmostallstudentsdislikeschoollife buteveryonehastheresponsibilitytoendthetheexamination orientededucation IamastudentwhostudyinaschoolwhichislocatedinYongchang Iwasadmittedintothisbeautifulschool IstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstwenttoschool Inmyeyes everythingwaspretty Igetonwellwithmyclassmatesandteachers SinceIwenttothisschool Ithinkofmyteachersasmybestfriendslikeleavesandflowers Ineverlookuponthemasothers ItisreasonwhyIoftenquestionmyteachersonsomeproblemsisthatIlovethem WhenIamtroubleandloseheart theyalwayshelpmesettletheseproblems Ofcourse Iamalsosatisfiedwiththeireducation Ihavealotoffriendswhocanmakemetrytoformthemgoodstudyhabits Becauseofthat Ioftengetupearlyandtrymybesttostudywell 9 IWanttoSaySomethingaboutScience与电脑的作文相似 就是科学的优缺点 及给人类带来的影响等Sciencemakesourlifemoreconvenient Ifnoscience wemayusecandlestolightinginsteadofelectriclights wemaygoover5mountainsand7riverstomakesurethatthepeopleyoulovearewellinsteadofmakingaphonecall wemayoutofdatebylackingTVs 10 MyFamily写家庭人和事均可 要用第一人称11 IWanttoBeaTeacher Lawyer Millionaire谈理想的文章 就是写些选择这一职业的原因和职业特点等Toeveryonewhowanttobeateacher here saquestion whatmakesagoodteacher howtobeagoodteacher Inthepast19years Ihavebeenstudyinginprimaryschoolinasmalldistantvillage keysecondaryschoolinacounty topuniversityofChinainthecapitalofChina Beijing Therearemanypeoplewhoplaytheroleof teacher inmylife butonlyfewofthemwhoreallyimpressedme Whattheyimpressedmemostisnothowgoodthelessontheygave howgoodtheyarelookingorhownicetheyare wel